Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX2PDRHWKF6ERXNXQAEMCQ

Run Details

Duration:
32.2s
Cost:
$0.005635
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the Soho streets into slick mirrors that fractured the neon glow of shop signs. Harlow Quinn sprinted, her boots splashing through puddles that swallowed her reflection whole. The air smelled of wet asphalt and ozone, a sharp tang that coated the back of her throat. Ahead, a figure darted between parked cars, shoulders hunched against the downpour. Quinn checked her watch. The worn leather strap slapped against her wrist as she surged forward. Three years since Morris vanished. Three years of dead ends and cold files. She wasn't letting this one slip. The suspect, a lean man in a dark hoodie, vaulted over a low metal railing and plunged into the mouth of an alleyway. Quinn followed, her breath ragged but controlled. Military precision kept her stride even despite the uneven ground. Trash bins toppled in her wake. Glass crunched underfoot. "Stop!" she shouted, the command lost in the rumble of distant traffic and the hiss of rain. The man didn't look back. He reached a dead end marked by a chain-link fence topped with barbed wire. Instead of climbing, he dropped to his knees and shoved aside a heavy sheet of corrugated iron leaning against the brickwork. Darkness yawned beneath. A draft rose from the hole, carrying scents of sulfur, dried herbs, and something metallic, like old blood. Quinn skidded to a halt, water dripping from her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair onto her collar. She peered into the gap. Rough-hewn stone steps descended into the earth, lit by flickering blue flames that danced in wall sconces without consuming any fuel. The suspect paused at the bottom, glancing up. His face remained shadowed, but the glint of teeth suggested a smile. He gestured downward, then vanished around a bend. Quinn gripped the cold metal of her badge in her pocket. Underground markets existed in whispers and redacted reports. The Veil Market. A place where the rules of the Metropolitan Police held no weight. Where things she couldn't explain thrived in the shadows. She stepped onto the first stone. The air grew thicker, heavier. The sound of rain faded, replaced by a low hum of voices and the clinking of glass. As she descended, the architecture shifted from crumbling brick to smooth, obsidian-like stone that seemed to absorb the light. At the base of the stairs, a crowd milled about. Figures in tattered cloaks brushed past vendors selling jars of glowing liquid and bundles of dried roots that twitched in their bindings. A woman with skin like polished obsidian haggled over a cage containing a creature that looked like a bat made of smoke. Quinn moved through the throng, her hand resting near her holster. Eyes tracked her. Not human eyes. Some glowed amber, others shifted color like oil on water. She kept her chin high, her sharp jawline set in a grim line. Fear was a luxury she couldn't afford. Not after Morris. A vendor with three fingers on each hand blocked her path. He held up a small bone token, white and carved with intricate spirals. "Entry fee," he rasped, his voice sounding like grinding stones. "Or departure." Quinn flashed her badge. "Detective Harlow Quinn. Metropolitan Police. I'm in pursuit of a suspect." The vendor laughed, a dry, cracking sound. "Badges burn here, detective. Tokens open doors." He extended the bone again. "You stand in the Veil. You play by the Veil's rules." She scanned the crowd. The suspect had moved deeper into the market, pushing past a stall selling mirrors that showed reflections of people who weren't there. If she lost him now, the trail would go cold again. The thought tightened her chest. "I don't have a token," she said, her voice steady. "Then you leave," the vendor insisted, stepping closer. His breath smelled of rotting flowers. "Or you pay in flesh." Quinn's hand tightened on her holster. She could draw. She could clear a path. But violence here might bring down more than just street thugs. These weren't muggers. These were things that fed on fear. A hand touched her elbow. She spun, arm cocked back, ready to strike. A young man with warm brown eyes and curly dark hair stood there, hands raised in surrender. A Saint Christopher medallion swung against his olive skin. A scar ran along his left forearm, pale against the dim light. "Easy, Detective," he said, his accent thick but understandable. "Drawing steel in the Market gets you banned. Or worse." Quinn lowered her arm slightly but kept her stance wide. "Who are you?" "Tomás Herrera. Friends call me Tommy." He glanced at the vendor, then back to her. "You're chasing the runner in the grey hoodie?" "You see him?" "Headed for the alchemy sector. Bad place for someone without a token." Tomás reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, smooth bone disc. He pressed it into the vendor's palm. "She's with me. Guest of Silas." The vendor examined the token, nodded, and stepped aside. "Don't cause trouble, Herrera. Silas vouches for you, not her." Tomás grabbed Quinn's sleeve and pulled her through the gap before the vendor changed his mind. They wove through the narrow aisles, past stalls selling bottled memories and cages of singing shadows. "Why help me?" Quinn asked, keeping her voice low. "Because that runner stole something he shouldn't have," Tomás replied, dodging a floating lantern that drifted too close. "And because I owe Silas a favor. He doesn't like cops, but he hates thieves more." "What did the suspect take?" "A vial of Eclipse Dust. Rare. Dangerous. One drop can unravel a person's mind, leave them open to... possession." Quinn's stomach turned. Supernatural contraband. Just like the files on Morris's case. Unexplained circumstances. She pushed the memory down. Focus on the now. "Where is he going?" "Exit tunnel near Camden High Street. He thinks he can slip out before the market shifts." Tomás pointed ahead. "But the tunnel is guarded. You go in there alone, the guards will tear you apart. They don't like uninvited guests." "I'm not asking for permission," Quinn said. "I'm making an arrest." "Not here, you're not." Tomás stopped in front of a stall draped in black velvet. He turned to face her, his expression serious. "Here, you survive. That's the only goal. You want the suspect? You need a guide. You need someone who knows the shortcuts." Quinn studied him. The scar on his arm looked fresh, the skin still pink. He carried himself with the calm of someone who had seen too much death. A former paramedic, maybe. Or something else. "And why should I trust you?" "Because I lost my license trying to help people like you," Tomás said, tapping his medallion. "People who think they can fight the dark with a gun and a badge. I know what happens when you don't respect the rules." The market shifted around them. The stalls seemed to slide closer, the pathways twisting. The full moon cycle meant the market would move soon, relocating to a new underground station. If they didn't move fast, they'd be trapped until the next cycle. "Show me the way," Quinn said. Tomás nodded and led her toward a narrow archway covered in ivy that shimmered with silver dew. As they passed under it, the noise of the market faded. The air grew colder. "He's close," Tomás whispered. "I can smell the Eclipse Dust. It smells like burnt sugar and lightning." Quinn drew her weapon, the metal cold in her grip. She checked the chamber. Full. Ready. "Stay behind me," she ordered. Tomás shook his head. "Side by side. He knows I'm coming. He won't expect you." They moved into the tunnel. The walls here were rough brick, damp and weeping with condensation. Faint footsteps echoed ahead, faster now, panicked. "Police!" Quinn yelled, her voice booming in the confined space. "Stop or I fire!" The footsteps faltered. Then resumed, faster. A door slammed at the end of the tunnel. Quinn sprinted, Tomás right beside her. They burst through the door into a service corridor lined with pipes. At the far end, a ladder led up to a manhole cover. The suspect was already climbing, his feet slipping on the wet rungs. Quinn raised her gun. "Last chance!" The suspect looked down, eyes wide with terror. He held up a small vial, the liquid inside swirling with black smoke. "You don't understand!" he screamed. "They're coming! The Market isn't just moving, it's hunting!" The ground beneath them shuddered. Dust fell from the ceiling. The pipes groaned as if in pain. Tomás grabbed Quinn's shoulder. "He's right. The shift started early. We need to get out. Now." Quinn kept her aim fixed on the suspect. "Come down. Hand over the vial." "I can't!" The man scrambled higher. "If I give it back, they kill me. If I keep it, they kill me!" The shuddering intensified. A crack appeared in the wall, widening rapidly. Darkness poured out, not like shadow, but like a living fluid. "Decision time, Detective," Tomás urged, pulling at her arm. "Him or us." Quinn watched the darkness swell, heard the screech of something massive moving through the earth below. She lowered her gun an inch, then raised it again, aiming at the vial in the suspect's hand. "Drop it," she commanded. "Or I shoot it out of your hand." The suspect froze. The vial trembled. The darkness below surged upward, reaching for the ladder. "Do it!" Tomás shouted. Quinn squeezed the trigger.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.442
leniency0.885
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1587
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1587
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"unravel"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"glint"
2"weight"
3"intricate"
4"scanned"
5"unravel"
6"stomach"
7"velvet"
8"shimmered"
9"footsteps"
10"echoed"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences143
matches
0"e with terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences143
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1583
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1203
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn23
Morris3
Veil1
Market1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás13
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Market"
3"Police"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.544
windowScore0.5
92.53% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"stone that seemed to absorb the light"
1"looked like a bat made of smoke"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.632
wordCount1583
matches
0"not like shadow, but like a living fluid"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean24.35
std15.14
cv0.622
sampleLengths
062
135
249
317
461
542
628
743
847
954
1050
1124
1212
1315
1430
1542
1610
1719
1835
1913
2038
2119
2213
2323
243
2538
2619
2732
289
2934
305
3119
3223
334
3440
3511
3645
3735
386
3940
4042
416
4232
4317
4416
455
4615
4723
4814
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs233
matches
0"wasn't letting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1207
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02568351284175642
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0033140016570008283
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean9.2
std5.57
cv0.605
sampleLengths
019
113
218
312
44
512
65
78
86
923
107
1110
126
133
1417
155
1614
1721
183
1918
2016
215
2221
238
2412
258
2611
278
283
2912
309
316
325
3317
3419
3510
3622
3722
3811
393
403
4110
4213
437
443
4511
4613
4710
482
494
58.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3953488372093023
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners68
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences132
matches
0"Instead of climbing, he dropped"
1"Just like the files on"
2"Then resumed, faster."
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences132
matches
0"She wasn't letting this one"
1"she shouted, the command lost"
2"He reached a dead end"
3"She peered into the gap."
4"His face remained shadowed, but"
5"He gestured downward, then vanished"
6"She stepped onto the first"
7"She kept her chin high,"
8"He held up a small"
9"he rasped, his voice sounding"
10"He extended the bone again"
11"She scanned the crowd."
12"she said, her voice steady"
13"His breath smelled of rotting"
14"She could draw."
15"She could clear a path."
16"She spun, arm cocked back,"
17"he said, his accent thick"
18"He glanced at the vendor,"
19"He pressed it into the"
ratio0.22
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences132
matches
0"Harlow Quinn sprinted, her boots"
1"The air smelled of wet"
2"Quinn checked her watch."
3"The worn leather strap slapped"
4"She wasn't letting this one"
5"The suspect, a lean man"
6"Quinn followed, her breath ragged"
7"Military precision kept her stride"
8"Trash bins toppled in her"
9"Glass crunched underfoot."
10"she shouted, the command lost"
11"The man didn't look back."
12"He reached a dead end"
13"Darkness yawned beneath."
14"A draft rose from the"
15"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
16"She peered into the gap."
17"The suspect paused at the"
18"His face remained shadowed, but"
19"He gestured downward, then vanished"
ratio0.833
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences132
matches
0"If she lost him now,"
1"If they didn't move fast,"
ratio0.015
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Rain hammered the pavement, turning the Soho streets into slick mirrors that fractured the neon glow of shop signs."
1"Harlow Quinn sprinted, her boots splashing through puddles that swallowed her reflection whole."
2"Rough-hewn stone steps descended into the earth, lit by flickering blue flames that danced in wall sconces without consuming any fuel."
3"As she descended, the architecture shifted from crumbling brick to smooth, obsidian-like stone that seemed to absorb the light."
4"Figures in tattered cloaks brushed past vendors selling jars of glowing liquid and bundles of dried roots that twitched in their bindings."
5"A woman with skin like polished obsidian haggled over a cage containing a creature that looked like a bat made of smoke."
6"The suspect had moved deeper into the market, pushing past a stall selling mirrors that showed reflections of people who weren't there."
7"The suspect was already climbing, his feet slipping on the wet rungs."
38.04% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he rasped, his voice sounding like grinding stones"
1"she said, her voice steady"
2"he said, his accent thick but understandable"
3"Quinn yelled, her voice booming in the confined space"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"the vendor insisted (insist)"
2"Tomás whispered (whisper)"
3"she ordered (order)"
4"Quinn yelled (yell)"
5"he screamed (scream)"
6"Tomás urged (urge)"
7"Tomás shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.288
leniency0.577
rawRatio0.533
effectiveRatio0.308
83.8012%