| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said instead [instead]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.619 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 95.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1120 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1120 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "effortless" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "implication" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "roaring" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach dropped" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 1106 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "permanent" | | 1 | "‘Come alone.’" | | 2 | "“Midnight. Brick Lane. Don’t be late.”" | | 3 | "need" | | 4 | "chérie" | | 5 | "nervous" | | 6 | "did" | | 7 | "You’ll never leave me." | | 8 | "promised" | | 9 | "suicide" | | 10 | "worth" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.19% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 874 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.72 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Lucien | 15 | | Moreau | 2 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.642 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 20.48 | | std | 15.33 | | cv | 0.748 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 62 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with the precision of a sniper’s scope." | | 1 | "The flat was exactly as she remembered—cluttered, dimly lit, the walls lined with shelves that groaned under the weight of leather-bound tomes and yellowed scrolls." | | 2 | "She stepped forward, close enough to see the faint scar along his jawline—the one she’d given him three years ago." | | 3 | "Should’ve known that Lucien Moreau didn’t do anything without a reason—and that reason was never simple." | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau was many things—dangerous, ruthless, infuriating—but he was never *nervous*." | | 5 | "Memories flashed behind her eyes—Evan’s hands around her throat, his voice a venomous whisper in her ear." | | 6 | "And yet—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 888 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.038288288288288286 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009009009009009009 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 9.07 | | std | 6.06 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 61.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.39344262295081966 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Just stood there, blocking the" | | 1 | "Then he stepped aside." | | 2 | "Just stared at it like" | | 3 | "Then, without warning, he reached" | | 4 | "Instead, he turned away." |
| | ratio | 0.059 | |
| 97.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked" | | 1 | "His voice was smooth, but" | | 2 | "She stepped forward, close enough" | | 3 | "His fingers twitched." | | 4 | "She’d seen the way his" | | 5 | "His eyes flicked to the" | | 6 | "He pushed off the door," | | 7 | "She didn’t flinch." | | 8 | "She should’ve known better than" | | 9 | "She reached into her jacket," | | 10 | "He didn’t take the note." | | 11 | "His voice dropped, low and" | | 12 | "She shoved it down, buried" | | 13 | "she said instead" | | 14 | "She refused to look away." | | 15 | "His fingers brushed the scar" | | 16 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 17 | "he said, voice carefully neutral" | | 18 | "He crossed to the small" | | 19 | "She watched him, the way" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 42.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "Lucien stood there, one hand" | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked" | | 3 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 4 | "A slow, dangerous smile curled" | | 5 | "The scent of bergamot and" | | 6 | "The flat was exactly as" | | 7 | "A tabby cat, Ptolemy, slinked" | | 8 | "Lucien didn’t move." | | 9 | "The cane tapped once against" | | 10 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 11 | "His voice was smooth, but" | | 12 | "She stepped forward, close enough" | | 13 | "The air between them crackled," | | 14 | "Lucien’s gaze dropped to her" | | 15 | "His fingers twitched." | | 16 | "The flat swallowed her whole." | | 17 | "The door clicked shut behind" | | 18 | "Rory’s boots sank into the" | | 19 | "Lucien leaned against the door," |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Because I couldn’t stay away." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The flat was exactly as she remembered—cluttered, dimly lit, the walls lined with shelves that groaned under the weight of leather-bound tomes and yellowed scro…" |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice carefully neutral" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |