Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX2RKWEF9X4YY30NFEYXTD

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Duration:
23.5s
Cost:
$0.002723
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the pavement, turning London's streets into mirrors of fractured neon. Detective Harlow Quinn's feet splashed through puddles as her lungs burned with cold air. Thirty yards ahead, the suspect—Tomás Herrera—glanced back, his olive skin pale under the streetlights. His Saint Christopher medallion bounced against his chest with each desperate stride. She'd been following him for three blocks, ever since he'd spotted her surveillance outside The Raven's Nest. Herrera ducked into a narrow alley between two brick buildings. Quinn followed, her worn leather watch catching the dim light as she rounded the corner. The alley dead-ended at a rusted metal door with peeling paint. Herrera fumbled with something in his pocket—a bone token—and pressed it against the door. A faint blue light pulsed from the lock before the door creaked open. Quinn hesitated at the threshold. Her military training screamed against entering an unknown space alone, but three years of unanswered questions about DS Morris's death pushed her forward. She slipped through the door just as it began to close. The air changed instantly. The smell of wet pavement and exhaust fumes gave way to something ancient—incense, ozone, and something metallic. Concrete steps led downward into darkness. Quinn pulled her torch from her jacket, its beam cutting through the gloom. She could hear Herrera's footsteps echoing below. The stairs opened into a vast space—an abandoned Tube station, its platform stretched into shadows. Above her, the arched ceiling disappeared into darkness. This was the Veil Market. Quinn had heard whispers of it in her investigations—a supernatural black market that moved like a ghost through the city's underground veins. Stalls lined the platform, their awnings sagging. Some were empty, others covered with dust sheets. But deeper in the market, Quinn saw movement. Figures hunched over tables, their features obscured by hoods and poor lighting. The air hummed with low conversation and the occasional chime of something unseen. Herrera was heading toward the far end of the platform, where a group gathered around something glowing. Quinn kept to the shadows, her torch off now. Her eyes adjusted to the dim light provided by enchanted lanterns that flickered with blue flames. A woman with hair like spun moonlight turned as Quinn passed. Her eyes, solid black, tracked the detective's movement. Quinn's hand went to the weapon at her hip, but she kept it concealed. The woman smiled, revealing teeth too sharp to be human. "New blood?" The woman's voice was like gravel. "Just browsing," Quinn said, keeping her tone neutral. The woman's smile widened. "The Veil doesn't like liars." Quinn moved past quickly, her heart pounding. She spotted Herrera near a stall selling bottled liquids that seemed to contain captured lightning. He was speaking with a man whose face was covered in intricate tattoos that moved across his skin like living creatures. Herrera handed over a small pouch and received a vial of dark liquid in return. This was her chance. Quinn stepped forward, her badge held up. "Tomás Herrera. Metropolitan Police. You're under arrest." The market went silent. All eyes turned toward her. Herrera's warm brown eyes widened in panic. The tattooed man vanished into thin air. Herrera bolted, the vial clutched in his hand as he ducked between stalls. Quinn gave chase, weaving through startled vendors and patrons. A tentacle reached out from one stall, wrapping around her ankle. She stumbled but managed to pull free, her boot scraping against the concrete platform. Ahead, Herrera disappeared through a stone archway marked with symbols that hurt Quinn's eyes to look at directly. She paused at the archway, catching her breath. The space beyond pulsed with an unnatural light. Through the opening, she could see trees and stars—impossible things underground. Herrera was halfway across what appeared to be a bridge spanning a bottomless chasm. Quinn pulled her radio. "Control, this is Detective Quinn. I need backup at—" Static. The radio was dead. Of course. No normal electronics worked in places like this. She stood at the threshold, the decision heavy in her chest. Follow Herrera into whatever lay beyond that archway, or retreat and call for proper reinforcements? But reinforcements wouldn't understand what they were walking into. They wouldn't believe her report about a moving tattooed man or a woman with solid black eyes. Herrera paused on the bridge, looking back at her. For a moment, their eyes met across the impossible distance. He raised the vial, as if to show her what he'd risked everything to obtain. Quinn stepped through the archway.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount760
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount760
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"pulsed"
2"gloom"
3"footsteps"
4"echoing"
5"flickered"
6"pounding"
7"intricate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences69
matches
0"d in panic"
39.34% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"managed to"
3"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords751
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
39.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount726
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Tomás1
Herrera13
Saint1
Christopher1
Raven1
Nest1
Morris1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Raven"
globalScore0.398
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"liquids that seemed to contain captured lightning"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount751
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean34.14
std20.32
cv0.595
sampleLengths
070
163
239
347
450
548
642
743
88
98
109
1158
1211
137
1436
1552
1641
1713
1815
1952
2034
215
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was covered"
49.62% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs133
matches
0"was heading"
1"was speaking"
2"were walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences72
ratio0.083
matches
0"Thirty yards ahead, the suspect—Tomás Herrera—glanced back, his olive skin pale under the streetlights."
1"Herrera fumbled with something in his pocket—a bone token—and pressed it against the door."
2"The smell of wet pavement and exhaust fumes gave way to something ancient—incense, ozone, and something metallic."
3"The stairs opened into a vast space—an abandoned Tube station, its platform stretched into shadows."
4"Quinn had heard whispers of it in her investigations—a supernatural black market that moved like a ghost through the city's underground veins."
5"Through the opening, she could see trees and stars—impossible things underground."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount735
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint blue light pulsed"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02040816326530612
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004081632653061225
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean10.43
std4.75
cv0.456
sampleLengths
013
114
214
312
417
510
615
711
814
913
105
1123
1211
134
1417
156
1613
177
1815
198
205
2122
227
238
248
2512
2613
2717
289
2916
3011
318
3214
3310
348
358
364
375
387
3915
4021
4115
424
437
447
454
465
477
487
4913
68.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4305555555555556
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences67
matches
0"His Saint Christopher medallion bounced"
1"She'd been following him for"
2"Her military training screamed against"
3"She slipped through the door"
4"She could hear Herrera's footsteps"
5"Her eyes adjusted to the"
6"Her eyes, solid black, tracked"
7"She spotted Herrera near a"
8"He was speaking with a"
9"She stumbled but managed to"
10"She paused at the archway,"
11"She stood at the threshold,"
12"They wouldn't believe her report"
13"He raised the vial, as"
ratio0.209
42.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's feet splashed"
2"His Saint Christopher medallion bounced"
3"She'd been following him for"
4"Herrera ducked into a narrow"
5"Quinn followed, her worn leather"
6"The alley dead-ended at a"
7"Herrera fumbled with something in"
8"A faint blue light pulsed"
9"Quinn hesitated at the threshold."
10"Her military training screamed against"
11"She slipped through the door"
12"The air changed instantly."
13"The smell of wet pavement"
14"Quinn pulled her torch from"
15"She could hear Herrera's footsteps"
16"The stairs opened into a"
17"This was the Veil Market."
18"Quinn had heard whispers of"
19"Stalls lined the platform, their"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Quinn had heard whispers of it in her investigations—a supernatural black market that moved like a ghost through the city's underground veins."
1"Her eyes adjusted to the dim light provided by enchanted lanterns that flickered with blue flames."
2"She spotted Herrera near a stall selling bottled liquids that seemed to contain captured lightning."
3"He was speaking with a man whose face was covered in intricate tattoos that moved across his skin like living creatures."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.7896%