Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX31SXSDH0Z0PE474HNF0P

Run Details

Duration:
6m 60s
Cost:
$0.017174
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stone burned. Rory snatched her hand back, the crescent scar on her left wrist throbbing in sudden sympathy. She pressed her palm against her jacket, but the heat lingered, branding invisible patterns against her skin. Standing stones shouldn't feel like living flesh. Shouldn't pulse with a rhythm that matched the gemstone now blazing against her collarbone. The Heartstone. Deep crimson, thumbnail-sized, bound in a silver chain. It had warmed near the Aldwych tube station. It had sung in Yu-Fei's basement freezer. Here, in this clearing between ancient oaks that shouldn't exist in Richmond Park, it screamed. She'd followed the address scrawled on water-damaged receipt paper to a gap watched by boundary markers older than the Crown. The insulated delivery bag slung across her shoulder smelled of iron and honey, a combination that had troubled her during the motorbike ride from Silas' flat, but rent was rent, and Evan's lawyers required retainers she couldn't afford. Now the wildflowers crushed beneath her boots bloomed in impossible colours. Crimson poppies. Purple loosestrife. Gold that hurt to look at, all flourishing in January frost. "You're being ridiculous," she said. The words died three feet from her lips. No echo. The grove swallowed them, digesting her voice into silence. Rory turned, five foot six of her suddenly aware that the entrance had vanished. The oaks stood shoulder-to-shoulder behind her, their bark shifting in patterns that suggested faces when glimpsed indirectly. Pre-Law had taught her to analyze, to find the loophole in any contract, but there were no precedents for spaces that rewrote their own geography while you watched. She checked her mobile. Three-seventeen AM. Three-fifteen when she'd crossed between the stones. The screen flickered. Three-fourteen. Then three-thirteen. Time moved differently here. The realization struck her stomach like a physical blow, sudden and sickening. An hour inside could be minutes outside. Or days. The handwritten notes she'd found in Yu-Fei's private codex mentioned Hel portals, thin places where the Fae realm brushed against London's grey reality. She hadn't believed it then, not with the scepticism of a barrister's daughter trained in Cardiff's rational courts. She believed it now. The pendant pulsed, hot enough to blister. A whistle cut through the stillness. High, fluted, like wet fingers dragged across crystal. It originated from everywhere simultaneously, vibrating in her molars. Rory backed against another stone, feeling it inhale. Yes. Inhale. The boundary marker rose and fell against her spine with the rhythm of lungs, stone skin expanding against her thin jacket. The wildflowers rustled. No wind stirred the clearing. The air lay preserved, clinical, like specimens in Cardiff University's biology lab where she'd once dreamed of witness stands before fleeing to London. The rustling circled her, deliberate, footfalls disguised as botanical movement. Something brushed her hair. She whirled, but nothing stood there. Only the wildflowers, bobbing their heavy heads in a breeze she couldn't feel. One touched her ankle, and she felt the wet slide of a tongue. They weren't flowers. They were mouths, opening and closing with soft, wet sounds. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, the childhood accident her mother had never properly explained. Crescent-shaped, like a gap between teeth, or a sickle moon waiting to cut. The bag on her shoulder grew heavy. The iron-honey scent intensified, becoming the smell of copper and rotting blackberries. Not food. She understood that now. The Golden Empress logo emblazoned on the fabric seemed to writhe, golden dragons winking with eyes that tracked her panic. The footsteps stopped being subtle. Bare feet against frost, soft pads that should have made no sound but instead cracked twigs that weren't there. Something tall moved at the edge of her vision, a shadow that the moon illuminated from beneath rather than above. Rory snapped her head toward it, bright blue eyes straining against the gloom. Nothing. But when she looked back at the stones, they had shifted six inches closer, forming a tighter circle. Penning her in. Evan had taught her to recognize traps disguised as affection, the careful construction of situations where escape meant injury. This felt similar, a geometry of threat where she was both bait and prize. The bag contained something that wanted out, or something that wanted her to open the way. Her hand found the zipper. Cool-headed analysis reasserted itself, the quick thinking that had earned scholarships and navigated abusive temper. She'd see what had been worth luring her here, worth the Heartstone's warning. Her fingers, trembling despite her training, brushed the cold metal. She slid the zipper down half an inch. The smell hit her, copper and honey and something older, like the earth after millennia of pressure turning bone to oil. The whistle sounded again, directly behind her. Rory spun. Between two oaks that hadn't stood in those positions moments ago, a shape unfolded. It had been crouched, camouflaged as root and rot, but now it extended upward, joints bending wrong, seven feet tall and still growing. Its features suggested a face only in the way that cracks suggest structure in ice. It wore no clothes because it wore no skin, just bark-wet tissue that gleamed in the moonlight, desiccated and ancient, with eyes like standing water. It spoke her name. Not Aurora, not Rory, but the third name, the one the pendant had burned into her dreams since childhood. Malphora. The word tasted of iron in her mouth, though she hadn't spoken. The standing stones groaned awake. They were not markers. They were not granite. They shed their mineral disguises like snakeskin, revealing bodies ancient and patient, limbs bifurcating into twigs and searching roots. The stone she had touched, that had bitten her palm, reached out with fingers made of dark oak and silver thread, and Rory realized with perfect, terrible clarity that she hadn't been the delivery person at all. She'd been the delivery. The Heartstone blazed white. The grove closed like a fist. The roots reached for her scarred wrist, fitting into the crescent shape perfectly, like a key into a lock that had been waiting twenty-five years to turn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1027
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1027
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"affection"
count1
11
word"navigated"
count1
12
word"structure"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"echo"
2"silence"
3"flickered"
4"stomach"
5"pulsed"
6"crystal"
7"traced"
8"footsteps"
9"gloom"
10"affection"
11"navigated"
12"structure"
13"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1012
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount995
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Aldwych1
Yu-Fei2
Richmond1
Park1
Crown1
January1
Hel1
Fae1
London2
Cardiff2
University1
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora1
Rory7
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"University"
2"Rory"
places
0"Aldwych"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"January"
5"London"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.964
wordCount1012
matches
0"no sound but"
1"Not Aurora, not Rory, but the third name, the one the pendant had burned into her drea"
2"not Rory, but the third name, the one the pendant had burned into her drea"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean30.67
std23.71
cv0.773
sampleLengths
03
154
240
358
426
55
619
759
813
94
102
1166
124
137
1454
153
1638
1749
1831
1945
205
2174
2249
2343
2429
257
2679
2736
285
298
3056
314
3237
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"been crouched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences96
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount145
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.006896551724137931
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean10.54
std7.97
cv0.756
sampleLengths
03
116
217
37
414
52
68
78
87
915
1020
1138
1211
132
142
1511
165
178
182
199
2014
2117
2228
234
242
257
263
271
282
294
3012
317
322
3323
3418
354
367
376
388
399
408
411
421
4321
443
455
4623
4710
484
496
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.4270833333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners41
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Only the wildflowers, bobbing their"
ratio0.012
96.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences81
matches
0"She pressed her palm against"
1"It had warmed near the"
2"It had sung in Yu-Fei's"
3"She'd followed the address scrawled"
4"She checked her mobile."
5"She hadn't believed it then,"
6"She believed it now."
7"It originated from everywhere simultaneously,"
8"She whirled, but nothing stood"
9"They weren't flowers."
10"They were mouths, opening and"
11"She traced the crescent scar"
12"She understood that now."
13"Her hand found the zipper."
14"She'd see what had been"
15"Her fingers, trembling despite her"
16"She slid the zipper down"
17"It had been crouched, camouflaged"
18"Its features suggested a face"
19"It wore no clothes because"
ratio0.309
58.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences81
matches
0"The stone burned."
1"Rory snatched her hand back,"
2"She pressed her palm against"
3"It had warmed near the"
4"It had sung in Yu-Fei's"
5"Here, in this clearing between"
6"She'd followed the address scrawled"
7"The insulated delivery bag slung"
8"The words died three feet"
9"The grove swallowed them, digesting"
10"Rory turned, five foot six"
11"The oaks stood shoulder-to-shoulder behind"
12"Pre-Law had taught her to"
13"She checked her mobile."
14"The screen flickered."
15"Time moved differently here."
16"The realization struck her stomach"
17"An hour inside could be"
18"The handwritten notes she'd found"
19"She hadn't believed it then,"
ratio0.802
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Now the wildflowers crushed beneath"
ratio0.012
43.19% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Shouldn't pulse with a rhythm that matched the gemstone now blazing against her collarbone."
1"Pre-Law had taught her to analyze, to find the loophole in any contract, but there were no precedents for spaces that rewrote their own geography while you watc…"
2"The Golden Empress logo emblazoned on the fabric seemed to writhe, golden dragons winking with eyes that tracked her panic."
3"Cool-headed analysis reasserted itself, the quick thinking that had earned scholarships and navigated abusive temper."
4"It wore no clothes because it wore no skin, just bark-wet tissue that gleamed in the moonlight, desiccated and ancient, with eyes like standing water."
5"The roots reached for her scarred wrist, fitting into the crescent shape perfectly, like a key into a lock that had been waiting twenty-five years to turn."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.9679%