Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX31YM9TRTMHM9KPFV228Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.002588
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The flashlight beam cut through the darkness like a pale finger, illuminating the ancient oaks that marked the boundary of the Grove. Aurora—Rory to everyone who mattered—stepped between two of the massive trunks and felt the shift immediately. The air behind her had been damp, carrying the autumn chill of late October in Richmond Park. This air was different. Thinner. Sweet, almost, with an undercurrent of something floral she couldn't name. She checked her phone. No signal, of course. She'd expected that. What she hadn't expected was the time: 9:47 PM. She'd entered the tree line at 9:15, walked maybe ten minutes to find the standing stones. But the glowing face of her screen insisted only a few seconds had passed. The pendant at her chest pulsed once. Warmth spread through her sternum, faint but unmistakable. Rory had come because of that warmth. Three nights now, it had stirred while she worked her delivery route, pointing her north toward Richmond Park. The first night, she'd dismissed it. The second, she'd blamed the radiator in the delivery van. Tonight, she'd clocked out early, told Yu-Fei she was sick, and taken the Underground with a growing certainty she couldn't explain. The Grove spread before her in the flashlight's reach. Wildflowers she'd never seen before carpeted the ground—blossoms in colors that seemed to shift under the beam, blue to purple to something that wasn't quite any color at all. The standing stones rose around her in a rough circle, ancient oaks grown so thick they might as well have been carved by hand. "Hello?" Her voice fell flat, absorbed by the trees. No echo. That bothered her more than it should have. She walked forward, keeping the flashlight sweeping left and right. The ground was soft beneath her boots, almost spongy, and with each step she expected to hear the crunch of dead leaves or the rustle of forest floor debris. Nothing. Her footfalls made no sound at all. The realization came slowly, like a weight settling. She stopped. Listened. Nothing. Not the distant hum of traffic from the road half a mile away. Not the nocturnal chirping of insects. Not even wind in the branches above. Silence, but not the absence of sound. More like the presence of listening. Rory forced herself to breathe. In through the nose, out through the mouth. She'd left Evan because she'd learned to trust her instincts, and her instincts were screaming now. But she'd also learned not to panic. Panic made her weak. Panic made her small. She kept walking. The pendant pulsed again, stronger this time. It pulled at her chest like a compass needle seeking north, and she followed its guidance deeper into the clearing. The trees thinned. Ahead, something caught the light—a pool of water, still as glass, perhaps twenty feet across. As she approached, Rory realized it wasn't a pool. The surface was too dark, too reflective. It looked like obsidian, like the surface of a mirror laid flat in the earth. She could see the stars above reflected in it, more stars than should have been visible through the light pollution of London. Then she noticed she could only see the stars in the mirror. When she looked up, the sky was blank. Cloud-covered. Pitch black. Her breath caught. The pendant burned now, hot against her skin, and she grabbed it through her shirt, pressing it against her chest like a talisman. A sound behind her. Soft. Wet. Rory spun, flashlight beam swinging wildly across the trees. Nothing. The oaks stood in their ancient circle, bark dark and ridged, branches reaching toward the starless sky like clutching fingers. She waited. Counted ten heartbeats. Then twenty. When nothing happened, she turned back to the mirror-pool— And saw her own reflection standing at its edge. Not standing behind her. Standing at the edge, looking up at her from the glassy surface, wearing her face and her clothes and her expression of slowly mounting terror. But she was looking down at it. She was looking at herself looking up. The reflection smiled. She was not smiling. Rory stumbled backward, yanking the pendant free from her shirt. The crimson gemstone blazed now, bright as an eye, casting red light across the clearing. In that hellish glow, she saw the reflection still smiling, still standing at the pool's edge, even as her physical body backed away. The reflection raised one hand and pressed a finger to its lips. Behind her—behind the reflection, at the far side of the pool—a shape rose from the glass surface. Tall. Thin. Features that were almost human but arranged wrong, like a face drawn by someone who had only heard descriptions of what a face should be. It had no eyes. It had no mouth. It had a slit where both should have been, a horizontal crease in the pale-gray flesh of its face. Rory ran. She didn't scream. Screaming was for people who had time to waste. She ran, flashlight clutched in one hand, pendant clutched in the other, red light strobing across the ancient oaks as she sprinted for the boundary. The trees weren't moving. She told herself the trees weren't moving. The branches didn't reach for her. They only seemed to, in her peripheral vision, where she couldn't quite see them clearly enough to be sure. Something crashed through the undergrowth to her left. She didn't look. She ran harder. The boundary was ahead. The two great oaks that marked the entrance, their trunks wide enough to hide a car between them. She could see the darkness beyond them, ordinary darkness, the normal black of a London park at night. Her foot caught on something. Root, maybe. Rock. She pitched forward, flashlight skittering away into the dark, and hit the ground hard enough to drive the breath from her lungs. She rolled onto her back. The thing from the pool stood over her. It was taller than she'd thought. Eight feet, maybe nine. Its limbs were too long, jointed in too many places, and its skin—if you could call it skin—was the gray of old ash, cracked in places to show something redder underneath. The slit that served as its face was opening. Widening. Peeling back in layers, revealing wet pink tissue beneath, revealing— Rory screamed then. She couldn't help it. The sound tore out of her throat and vanished into the silent Grove, swallowed by the listening dark. The thing made no sound at all. Its hand—long-fingered, too many fingers—reached down toward her chest. Toward the pendant. The Heartstone blazed bright as a coal, brighter than she'd ever seen it, and the thing paused. Its head tilted, that lipless slit flexing in what might have been curiosity. In what might have been recognition. Then it closed its hand around the pendant's chain and pulled. The silver links snapped like thread. The crimson gemstone came away in its grip, and the thing held it up to the non-face, examining the light that pulsed from within. Rory scrambled backward on her hands and heels, leaves and dirt scattering beneath her, her throat raw from screaming, her heart slamming against her ribs. The thing tucked the pendant into the crack where its chest met its abdomen and looked down at her again. It took a step forward. And the scene ended there, in the red glow of the stolen Heartstone and the silent, starless dark of the Fae Grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"echo"
4"weight"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1238
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Grove4
Rory9
October1
Richmond2
Park2
Yu-Fei1
Underground1
Evan1
London2
Heartstone2
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
4"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite any color at all"
1"looked like obsidian, like the surface of"
2"quite see them clearly enough to be sure"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1239
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean26.36
std17.57
cv0.666
sampleLengths
071
150
215
362
462
519
647
738
813
944
103
1145
1253
1323
1426
156
1630
177
189
199
2029
2114
227
2348
2412
2544
2627
272
2837
2936
3014
3140
3230
335
348
3541
3620
3725
387
3912
4036
4111
4230
4325
4420
455
4622
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"been carved"
74.80% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs213
matches
0"were screaming"
1"was looking"
2"was looking"
3"was opening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences129
ratio0.054
matches
0"Aurora—Rory to everyone who mattered—stepped between two of the massive trunks and felt the shift immediately."
1"Wildflowers she'd never seen before carpeted the ground—blossoms in colors that seemed to shift under the beam, blue to purple to something that wasn't quite any color at all."
2"Ahead, something caught the light—a pool of water, still as glass, perhaps twenty feet across."
3"Behind her—behind the reflection, at the far side of the pool—a shape rose from the glass surface."
4"Its limbs were too long, jointed in too many places, and its skin—if you could call it skin—was the gray of old ash, cracked in places to show something redder underneath."
5"Peeling back in layers, revealing wet pink tissue beneath, revealing—"
6"Its hand—long-fingered, too many fingers—reached down toward her chest."
97.32% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1254
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.0430622009569378
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007974481658692184
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean9.6
std7.57
cv0.788
sampleLengths
022
116
217
34
41
511
64
74
83
99
1016
1114
127
138
147
1518
166
1710
1821
199
2029
2124
229
232
248
2510
2629
271
287
298
302
311
321
3313
346
357
367
376
385
398
4016
417
424
434
443
457
4620
473
4815
499
57.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3953488372093023
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners51
90.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences110
matches
0"More like the presence of"
1"Then she noticed she could"
2"Then it closed its hand"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences110
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"She'd expected that."
2"She'd entered the tree line"
3"Her voice fell flat, absorbed"
4"She walked forward, keeping the"
5"Her footfalls made no sound"
6"She'd left Evan because she'd"
7"She kept walking."
8"It pulled at her chest"
9"It looked like obsidian, like"
10"She could see the stars"
11"Her breath caught."
12"She was looking at herself"
13"She was not smiling."
14"It had no eyes."
15"It had no mouth."
16"It had a slit where"
17"She didn't scream."
18"She ran, flashlight clutched in"
19"She told herself the trees"
ratio0.3
96.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences110
matches
0"The flashlight beam cut through"
1"Aurora—Rory to everyone who mattered—stepped"
2"The air behind her had"
3"This air was different."
4"She checked her phone."
5"She'd expected that."
6"She'd entered the tree line"
7"The pendant at her chest"
8"Warmth spread through her sternum,"
9"Rory had come because of"
10"The first night, she'd dismissed"
11"The second, she'd blamed the"
12"Tonight, she'd clocked out early,"
13"The Grove spread before her"
14"Wildflowers she'd never seen before"
15"The standing stones rose around"
16"Her voice fell flat, absorbed"
17"That bothered her more than"
18"She walked forward, keeping the"
19"The ground was soft beneath"
ratio0.727
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The flashlight beam cut through the darkness like a pale finger, illuminating the ancient oaks that marked the boundary of the Grove."
1"Wildflowers she'd never seen before carpeted the ground—blossoms in colors that seemed to shift under the beam, blue to purple to something that wasn't quite an…"
2"Rory scrambled backward on her hands and heels, leaves and dirt scattering beneath her, her throat raw from screaming, her heart slamming against her ribs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.5870%