Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX3575GT4E0GVW9SMGAYG9

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones, turning the alley into a river of slick stone. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted, boots splashing through puddles, her left wrist ticking against the worn leather watch. The city’s neon flickered, reflecting off the wet pavement like broken glass. A figure slipped around a corner, coat collar turned against the wind. The suspect’s breath misted in front of them, a ragged rhythm that matched Quinn’s own. She shouted over the storm, voice cutting through the roar. “Stop! Police!” The man glanced back, eyes narrowed, a flash of copper flashing under his hood. He turned his head, a half‑smile forming despite the rain. “What’s the matter, Detective? You look like you’ve stepped out of a noir poster.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. She didn’t wait for a reply; she surged forward, her shoulders leading, her arms pumping. The suspect darted into a narrow side street, the rain pooling around his feet. She followed, the sound of splashing water echoing off brick walls. A streetlight sputtered, casting a pale halo over a door marked with a green neon sign—The Raven’s Nest. The sign pulsed, a sickly glow that seemed to pulse in time with the rain. Quinn slipped inside, the door closing behind her with a soft thud that swallowed the storm’s roar. The bar was dim, the air thick with the scent of stale whiskey and old paper. Walls bore maps of forgotten routes, black‑and‑white photographs of faces half‑forgotten. The suspect slipped toward the back, his boots barely making a sound on the worn floorboards. Quinn’s eyes narrowed; she could see the outline of a bookshelf that hid a narrow passage. She moved, the crowd parting like water around a stone. The bartender glanced up, eyes flicking to her worn leather watch, then back to the door. He didn’t speak; his silence was a warning. The suspect pressed a hand against a row of spines, a hidden latch clicking. The bookshelf swung inward, revealing a narrow stairwell shrouded in darkness. A cold draft rose, smelling of damp earth and something metallic. “Going somewhere, Quinn?” the suspect called, voice echoing off the stone. “Do you have a map for the way out?” she replied, voice low, steady. He laughed, a short bark that seemed to vibrate the air. “Maps are for those who want to leave. This place… it’s a shortcut.” Quinn’s gaze flicked to the stairwell, then back to the suspect. The rain hammered the bar’s windows, each drop a percussion against the glass. She took a breath, the sound of her own breathing louder than the storm outside. “Fine.” She stepped into the darkness, the bookshelf closing behind her with a soft thud. The stairwell descended, each step echoing, the metal railing cold under her palms. The smell grew stronger—wet stone, rust, a hint of incense. At the bottom, a rusted iron door stood ajar, a faint green glow seeping through the cracks. The sign outside the bar was gone; in its place, an old tube station platform stretched into a vaulted tunnel. The rain’s rhythm faded, replaced by a low hum that vibrated through the floor. Shadows moved in the periphery, silhouettes of stalls draped in tattered cloth. A figure emerged from a doorway, a woman in a long coat, her eyes reflecting the neon sign above the entrance. “Lost, Detective?” the woman asked, voice smooth as silk. Quinn didn’t answer; she kept her eyes on the suspect, who slipped past a stall that sold jars of glowing liquid. The woman’s eyes narrowed, a slight tilt of the head. “Do you know what you’re walking into?” she said, the words hanging in the damp air. Quinn’s jaw tightened. “I’m chasing a murderer.” The woman chuckled softly, a sound that seemed to echo off the stone walls. “Everyone’s got a price here. You sure you want to pay yours?” The suspect stopped, turning to face Quinn, his hand hovering over a small box on the stall. “You know why I’m here, Quinn. They’re not looking for a cop. They’re looking for a pawn.” Quinn’s eyes flicked to the box, then back to the suspect. “What’s inside?” The suspect opened the lid, revealing a set of bone tokens, each etched with intricate symbols. “Entry. You want in, you need one.” Quinn’s stare hardened. She could feel the weight of the rain still on her coat, the slickness of the pavement behind her. The market buzzed with whispers—voices of people who dealt in things most would never see. A voice rose from a nearby stall, a man with a scar across his left forearm, his eyes scanning the crowd. He wore a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the neon glow. “Quinn?” he whispered, his tone urgent. She turned, eyes narrowing. “Tomás.” Tomás stepped forward, his hand resting on a satchel. “You shouldn’t be here. The market doesn’t take police.” Quinn’s gaze shifted to the suspect, who was already slipping away toward a darker tunnel. “I’m not here for the market. I’m after a man who killed my partner.” Tomás’s face hardened, the scar on his forearm catching the light. “The Veil Market moves with the moon. It’s not a place for a straight shooter. You’ll get caught in the currents.” Quinn’s fingers tightened around her watch strap. “I don’t have time for currents. I need that man.” Tomás glanced at the bone tokens on the stall’s counter, then at the suspect disappearing into the shadows. “If you take a token, you become part of the market. You’ll have to play by its rules.” Quinn’s eyes flicked to the ground, the rain still dripping off her coat, forming puddles that reflected the green neon sign above the entrance of the bar she’d left behind. “What if I don’t?” Tomás smiled, a thin line that seemed to hide something. “Then you’ll stay on the surface, watching the rain wash away the evidence, while the man you chase walks free.” The suspect turned back, a glint of something metallic in his hand. “You can stay out of this, Quinn. Or you can dive in and see what the darkness hides.” Quinn stared at the stone tokens, her mind racing. The rain outside had ceased, a brief lull in the storm, but the underground market seemed alive, breathing with a pulse of its own. She could hear the faint clink of glass, the rustle of parchment, the murmur of deals being struck in low tones. She took a step forward, the wooden floor creaking under her weight. “What do I need to do?” Tomás held out a small wooden box. Inside, a single bone token rested on a bed of black velvet. He placed it in her palm. “Take it. It will grant you passage. But remember, every entry has a price.” Quinn lifted the token, feeling its cold surface against her skin. The rain’s scent clung to her coat, the wetness of the city still evident on her boots. She could hear the suspect’s footsteps fading, his voice echoing in the tunnel. “Do you think he’ll be here after the moon moves?” she asked, voice low. Tomás’s eyes flicked to the green glow that seeped from the iron door. “The market moves. It’s a living thing. It will be here when you need it, and gone when you don’t.” Quinn pressed the token against her palm, feeling a faint vibration, like a heartbeat. She turned to the suspect’s direction, the tunnel narrowing, a low hum growing louder. Her breath formed clouds in the cool air, mingling with the mist that clung to the stone walls. She could feel the weight of her decision pressing against her ears, the echo of her partner’s last words—an unfinished sentence that lingered like a ghost. The rain outside had left the city glistening, reflecting neon signs that seemed to pulse in time with her own pulse. “Let’s go,” she said, voice steady, her eyes fixed on the darkness ahead. Tomás nodded, his hand on his satchel, the Saint Christopher medallion glinting. “Follow me. We’ll find the secret room before they close it for the night.” The two moved deeper into the underground, the market’s labyrinthine corridors winding like a living organism. Stalls flickered with strange wares—vials of liquid that glowed a soft amber, books bound in cracked leather, artifacts humming with unseen energy. The smell of incense mixed with the metallic tang of blood, a reminder of the market’s unsavory trade. A figure emerged from a shadowed alcove, a tall man in a trench coat, his eyes hidden behind mirrored lenses. He raised a hand, a small silver knife glinting in the low light. “Detective,” he said, voice smooth, “you’re far from your precinct.” Quinn’s gaze narrowed. “You know why I’m here.” The man chuckled, the sound echoing off the stone. “No one ever comes here for a simple chase. The Veil Market feeds on secrets.” The suspect’s voice drifted from deeper within the tunnel, a whisper that seemed to come from the walls themselves. “Find me, Quinn. Or stay above ground and watch the rain wash away the truth.” Quinn stepped forward, the rain’s memory still clinging to her coat, the token in her palm pulsing faintly. She could feel the market's eyes on her, the weight of unseen watchers hidden in the shadows. She turned to Tomás, his eyes steady, the scar on his forearm catching the neon glow. “We move together.” Tomás nodded, his hand tightening around his satchel. “Stay close. The market doesn’t like strangers.” The hallway narrowed, the walls closing in, the green neon sign above the entrance of the bar now a distant memory. The air grew colder, the hum of the market louder, as if the building itself were breathing. A low creak sounded behind them, a shelf shifting, dust falling like tiny snow. The suspect’s silhouette appeared at the end of the tunnel, his coat flapping in the faint draft. “Almost there,” Quinn muttered, voice barely above a whisper, her eyes scanning for the hidden door that led to the secret room ofThe suspect paused, turning his head, eyes glinting with a mixture of amusement and menace. “You think you can catch me in the darkness? You’re out of your depth.” Quinn’s lips curled into a thin line. “I’m not afraid of the dark.” The suspect chuckled, a sound that seemed to reverberate through the stone. “Then you’ll never understand what lives in it.” A sudden flash of light illuminated a doorway ahead—a hidden back room behind a bookshelf, the same one she’d seen in The Raven’s Nest. The door was ajar, a thin sliver of green neon spilling out, casting eerie shadows. Quinn sprinted, her boots splashing on wet stone, her breath forming clouds in the cool air. She reached the doorway, the wood rough under her fingertips, the smell of rain still clinging to her coat. She pushed the door open, the hidden room revealed a cramped space lined with crates, old maps, and a single wooden table. On the table lay a notebook, its pages filled with cryptic symbols and names. The suspect’s silhouette faded into the darkness beyond the room. Tomás entered behind her, his eyes scanning the room, his hand resting on his satchel. “We’ve got it. Now we need to find the next clue.” Quinn glanced at the notebook, her fingers brushing over the ink, feeling the weight of the secret that lay within. The rain outside had stopped, the city now silent, the neon sign above The Raven’s Nest a distant glow. She turned to Tomás, her eyes steady. “We keep moving.”
created_at"2026-02-19T12:13:15.37Z" 2/19/2026, 12:13:15 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsms47
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"pumping"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count5
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count4
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count4
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"echo"
count2
10
word"pawn"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count3
14
word"weight"
count5
15
word"scanning"
count3
16
word"glint"
count1
17
word"racing"
count1
18
word"velvet"
count1
19
word"footsteps"
count1
20
word"glistening"
count1
21
word"glinting"
count3
22
word"reminder"
count1
23
word"whisper"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pumping"
2"echoing"
3"pulsed"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"flicked"
7"vibrated"
8"silk"
9"echo"
10"pawn"
11"etched"
12"intricate"
13"could feel"
14"weight"
15"scanning"
16"glint"
17"racing"
18"velvet"
19"footsteps"
20"glistening"
21"glinting"
22"reminder"
23"whisper"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
16.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1929
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1559
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn23
Raven3
Nest3
Saint2
Christopher2
Tomás11
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
places(empty)
globalScore0.762
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"glow that seemed to pulse in time with the rain"
1"bark that seemed to vibrate the air"
2"sound that seemed to echo off the stone walls"
3"line that seemed to hide something"
4"seemed alive breathing with a pulse of its own"
5"whisper that seemed to come from the walls themselves"
6"sound that seemed to reverberate through the stone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1929
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean27.96
std14.6
cv0.522
sampleLengths
042
137
22
324
414
543
650
759
834
936
1011
1114
1211
1313
1439
1515
1660
1747
189
1931
2016
217
2214
2312
2434
2513
2623
2737
2832
296
305
3118
3229
3332
3417
3536
3634
3730
3830
3954
4018
4139
4241
4314
4433
4546
4647
4713
4826
4956
99.05% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"was gone"
1"being struck"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs262
matches
0"were breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences144
ratio0.076
matches
0"She didn’t wait for a reply; she surged forward, her shoulders leading, her arms pumping."
1"A streetlight sputtered, casting a pale halo over a door marked with a green neon sign—The Raven’s Nest."
2"Quinn’s eyes narrowed; she could see the outline of a bookshelf that hid a narrow passage."
3"He didn’t speak; his silence was a warning."
4"The smell grew stronger—wet stone, rust, a hint of incense."
5"The sign outside the bar was gone; in its place, an old tube station platform stretched into a vaulted tunnel."
6"Quinn didn’t answer; she kept her eyes on the suspect, who slipped past a stall that sold jars of glowing liquid."
7"The market buzzed with whispers—voices of people who dealt in things most would never see."
8"She could feel the weight of her decision pressing against her ears, the echo of her partner’s last words—an unfinished sentence that lingered like a ghost."
9"Stalls flickered with strange wares—vials of liquid that glowed a soft amber, books bound in cracked leather, artifacts humming with unseen energy."
10"A sudden flash of light illuminated a doorway ahead—a hidden back room behind a bookshelf, the same one she’d seen in The Raven’s Nest."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1565
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.01597444089456869
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0038338658146964857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean13.4
std5.72
cv0.427
sampleLengths
013
117
212
312
415
510
62
714
810
914
103
1115
1214
1311
1418
1515
1617
1716
1811
1916
2016
2110
2216
238
2414
2511
2611
2711
2814
2911
3013
3111
3213
3315
3415
3513
3610
3717
3820
3914
4012
4121
429
4321
4410
4516
463
474
4814
4912
44.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.25
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences113
matches
0"She shouted over the storm,"
1"He turned his head, a"
2"She didn’t wait for a"
3"She followed, the sound of"
4"She moved, the crowd parting"
5"He didn’t speak; his silence"
6"she replied, voice low, steady"
7"He laughed, a short bark"
8"She took a breath, the"
9"She stepped into the darkness,"
10"she said, the words hanging"
11"She could feel the weight"
12"He wore a Saint Christopher"
13"he whispered, his tone urgent"
14"She turned, eyes narrowing."
15"She could hear the faint"
16"She took a step forward,"
17"He placed it in her"
18"She could hear the suspect’s"
19"she asked, voice low"
ratio0.274
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences113
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted, boots"
1"The city’s neon flickered, reflecting"
2"A figure slipped around a"
3"The suspect’s breath misted in"
4"She shouted over the storm,"
5"The man glanced back, eyes"
6"He turned his head, a"
7"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
8"She didn’t wait for a"
9"The suspect darted into a"
10"She followed, the sound of"
11"A streetlight sputtered, casting a"
12"The sign pulsed, a sickly"
13"Quinn slipped inside, the door"
14"The bar was dim, the"
15"Walls bore maps of forgotten"
16"The suspect slipped toward the"
17"Quinn’s eyes narrowed; she could"
18"She moved, the crowd parting"
19"The bartender glanced up, eyes"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.34% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences88
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"She didn’t wait for a reply; she surged forward, her shoulders leading, her arms pumping."
1"Quinn slipped inside, the door closing behind her with a soft thud that swallowed the storm’s roar."
2"The suspect stopped, turning to face Quinn, his hand hovering over a small box on the stall."
3"He wore a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the neon glow."
4"Quinn’s eyes flicked to the ground, the rain still dripping off her coat, forming puddles that reflected the green neon sign above the entrance of the bar she’d…"
5"She could hear the suspect’s footsteps fading, his voice echoing in the tunnel."
6"She could feel the weight of her decision pressing against her ears, the echo of her partner’s last words—an unfinished sentence that lingered like a ghost."
7"Stalls flickered with strange wares—vials of liquid that glowed a soft amber, books bound in cracked leather, artifacts humming with unseen energy."
8"Quinn stepped forward, the rain’s memory still clinging to her coat, the token in her palm pulsing faintly."
9"The air grew colder, the hum of the market louder, as if the building itself were breathing."
10"Quinn sprinted, her boots splashing on wet stone, her breath forming clouds in the cool air."
11"Tomás entered behind her, his eyes scanning the room, his hand resting on his satchel."
12"Quinn glanced at the notebook, her fingers brushing over the ink, feeling the weight of the secret that lay within."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"the suspect called, voice echoing off the stone"
1"she replied, voice low, steady"
2"the woman asked, voice smooth as silk"
3"she said, the words hanging in the damp air"
4"he whispered, his tone urgent"
5"she asked, voice low"
6"she said, voice steady, her eyes fixed on the darkness ahead"
7"he said, voice smooth,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.098
65.8478%