Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX35NG2P61JVCJGPZQ9KS6

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Duration:
40.1s
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$0.006515
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon glow of the raven sign flickered across Aurora's face as she slid onto a stool at the bar. Silas moved along the polished mahogany without a word, placing a short glass in front of her. The amber liquid caught the light as he poured. "Rough day?" "Same as any other." Aurora swirled the whisky. "Just deliveries and rain." "Rory? Aurora Carter?" The voice sliced through the dim bar atmosphere. Familiar yet foreign. Aurora turned slowly, her black hair shifting across her shoulders. The woman standing behind her wore designer clothes that had probably cost more than Aurora's monthly rent, but beneath the expensive fabric and perfect makeup, Aurora recognized Eva. "Eva." The name felt strange on her tongue after all these years. "Long time." "Three years, seven months." Eva slid onto the stool beside her, her fingers tracing the condensation on the bar. "You just disappeared." "London's a big city." Aurora took another sip of whisky. "People get lost." "Not like you." Eva's bright green eyes—once so full of laughter—now carried a hardness that hadn't been there before. "You used to call every Sunday. Then nothing." Aurora signaled to Silas for another glass. "Want one?" "Single malt. Neat." Eva turned fully toward her, studying Aurora's face. "You haven't changed." "You have." Aurora nodded at the diamond bracelet on Eva's wrist. "New boyfriend?" "Husband, actually." Eva's lips tightened. "James. He works in finance." "Congratulations." Aurora meant it. Mostly. Eva accepted the glass Silas placed before her. "Remember when we swore we'd never marry boring men in suits?" "People change." Eva's eyes dropped to Aurora's left wrist, where the small crescent scar was visible. "Some more than others." Aurora instinctively pulled her sleeve down. "How's Cardiff?" "Same as ever. Mum asks about you." Eva swirled the whisky in her glass. "Dad too." "I bet they do." Aurora's voice grew colder. "After what happened with Evan—" "I told you not to get involved with him." Eva cut her off. "I warned you." "You also told me to come to London." Aurora met her gaze directly. "You said you'd help me get settled in." "I did!" Eva's voice rose slightly before she caught herself, lowering it again. "I found you that flat. Introduced you to Yu-Fei." "And then vanished." Aurora finished her drink in one gulp. "Until tonight." The silence stretched between them, filled with years of unspoken words. The bar's background noise—clinking glasses, murmured conversations—suddenly seemed too loud. "I saw him last month," Eva said quietly. "Evan." Aurora's knuckles whitened around her empty glass. "Is he here?" "No. Still in Cardiff." Eva hesitated. "He asked about you." "I don't care." "He's different, Rory. Sober. Going to meetings." Eva reached out as if to touch Aurora's arm, then thought better of it. "He's sorry." "Sorry doesn't fix broken bones." Aurora's voice was barely above a whisper. "Or broken trust." "I know that." Eva's fingers tightened around her glass. "But people can change." "Like you?" Aurora gestured at Eva's expensive clothes, her perfectly styled hair. "The Eva I knew wouldn't be caught dead in a place like this, drinking whisky with her former best friend." The words hung in the air between them, sharp and unforgiving. "I'm still me," Eva said finally. "Just... different." "Aren't we all?" Aurora signaled Silas for another round. "Remember our plan? That trip around the world? The notebook we filled with places we'd visit?" Eva's expression softened for the first time since she'd arrived. "Athens first. Then Cairo. Tokyo by spring." "Instead I'm delivering Chinese food and you're married to a banker." Aurora managed a small smile. "Life doesn't always go according to plan." "No, it doesn't." Eva studied her face. "You could come back. To Cardiff. I mean, not to Cardiff necessarily, but... we could try again. Like before." "Before Evan? Before I had to flee in the middle of the night with nothing but a backpack?" Aurora shook her head. "There's no going back, Eva. You know that as well as I do." "You didn't have to disappear completely." Eva's voice caught. "You didn't even say goodbye properly." "What was I supposed to say?" Aurora leaned closer, her bright blue eyes intense. "That I was leaving everything behind because I was too scared to stay? That the person who promised to protect me from him was... well, wasn't?" Eva flinched as if Aurora had struck her. "That's not fair." "Isn't it?" Aurora pulled out her phone, checking the time. "I should go. Early delivery tomorrow." "Wait." Eva reached into her designer handbag and pulled out a small business card. "Take this. My number. If you ever need anything..." Aurora took the card reluctantly. The heavy paper stock felt foreign in her hand. "Thanks." "Rory..." Eva's voice softened. "I really did miss you." For a moment, Aurora saw her old friend—the girl she'd grown up with, shared secrets with, made plans with. The girl who had convinced her to leave Evan, who had helped her escape. "I missed you too," she admitted, the words feeling both true and inadequate. Eva's phone buzzed. She glanced at it, her expression shifting. "I have to go. James is waiting." "Of course he is." Aurora slid off the stool, her legs slightly unsteady from the whisky. "It was good seeing you, Eva." "You too." Eva hesitated, then pulled Aurora into a brief, awkward hug. "Don't be a stranger this time." Aurora watched her walk away, the expensive heels clicking against the bar's wooden floor. The green neon sign reflected in the glass doors as Eva pushed through them, stepping back out into the London night. Aurora sat back down, turning the business card over in her hands. Eva's elegant handwriting stared back at her, a bridge to a past she'd tried to leave behind. Silas appeared beside her, refilling her glass without asking. "Old friend?" he asked, his voice gentle. "Something like that." Aurora slipped the card into her pocket. "Someone I used to know." The whisky burned as she drank, but not enough to drown out the familiar ache of regret. Three years, seven months. Some distances couldn't be measured in time or miles. Some were carved into the heart, deeper than any childhood scar. She was still staring at the door when Silas spoke again, his voice low and serious. "That husband of hers," he said, polishing a glass with methodical care. "James. What line of work did you say he was in?" "Finance." Aurora turned to face him, a knot forming in her stomach. "Why?" Silas placed the polished glass on the bar, his hazel eyes meeting hers. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light as he set the glass down with deliberate care. "Because that's not what our records show." He leaned forward slightly, his voice dropping to a near whisper. "And according to my contacts, James Evans has been asking questions about someone matching your description." Aurora's blood ran cold. The name hit her like a physical blow. Evans. Evan. The same surname that had haunted her nightmares, that had sent her fleeing Cardiff in the first place. "Eva married Evan?" The words tasted like poison. "Not quite." Silas slid a folded piece of paper across the bar. "But close enough to matter." Aurora unfolded the paper. A grainy surveillance photograph showed Eva and a man entering a restaurant. The man's face was partially obscured, but Aurora would recognize those features anywhere. The same eyes that had looked at her with hatred, the same hands that had left bruises on her skin. "Evan's brother," Silas said quietly. "And they've been looking for you, Rory. For quite some time now." The world tilted. The whisky glass in Aurora's hand slipped, shattering against the bar. Amber liquid and sharp glass exploded across the polished surface. "Three years," she whispered, the pieces clicking into place with horrifying clarity. "Seven months." Eva hadn't just found her by accident. Eva had led them straight to her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
52.63% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags42
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"Eva turned fully [fully]"
1"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
2"Eva's fingers tightened around [around]"
3"Eva said finally [finally]"
4"Eva hesitated then [then]"
5"The words tasted like [like]"
6"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.442
leniency0.884
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.147
62.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
6
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
7
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"perfectly"
5"completely"
6"reluctantly"
7"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"methodical"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"perfect"
3"tracing"
4"silence"
5"unspoken"
6"whisper"
7"measured"
8"methodical"
9"stomach"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1330
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount841
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity4.4
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity8.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora37
Eva30
Silas9
Mostly1
Evan2
London1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beside her, refilling her glass without asking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.752
wordCount1330
matches
0"not to Cardiff necessarily, but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean19.28
std10.98
cv0.569
sampleLengths
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449
514
622
713
827
99
1014
1113
1210
135
1419
1520
168
1716
1813
1916
2021
2122
2212
2321
249
2510
2610
273
2823
2915
3013
3132
3211
338
3425
3517
3623
3726
3835
3915
4040
4111
4216
4323
4415
459
4633
4713
4817
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"were carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
83.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences144
ratio0.021
matches
0"\"Not like you.\" Eva's bright green eyes—once so full of laughter—now carried a hardness that hadn't been there before."
1"The bar's background noise—clinking glasses, murmured conversations—suddenly seemed too loud."
2"For a moment, Aurora saw her old friend—the girl she'd grown up with, shared secrets with, made plans with."
98.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount846
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04018912529550828
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.02127659574468085
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean9.24
std5.77
cv0.625
sampleLengths
021
117
29
32
48
54
63
78
83
910
1028
1112
122
1319
143
1510
163
1719
188
197
202
2111
223
2311
242
255
265
274
281
298
3011
3116
324
336
342
3514
362
378
385
3913
403
4113
428
4313
449
4510
462
4711
4810
498
66.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4513888888888889
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners65
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences89
matches
0"she admitted, the words feeling"
1"She glanced at it, her"
2"he asked, his voice gentle"
3"She was still staring at"
4"he said, polishing a glass"
5"He leaned forward slightly, his"
6"she whispered, the pieces clicking"
ratio0.079
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences89
matches
0"The green neon glow of"
1"Silas moved along the polished"
2"The amber liquid caught the"
3"Aurora swirled the whisky"
4"The voice sliced through the"
5"Aurora turned slowly, her black"
6"The woman standing behind her"
7"The name felt strange on"
8"Eva slid onto the stool"
9"Aurora took another sip of"
10"Eva's bright green eyes—once so"
11"Aurora signaled to Silas for"
12"Eva turned fully toward her,"
13"Aurora nodded at the diamond"
14"Eva's lips tightened"
15"Aurora meant it"
16"Eva accepted the glass Silas"
17"Eva's eyes dropped to Aurora's"
18"Aurora instinctively pulled her sleeve"
19"Eva swirled the whisky in"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The woman standing behind her wore designer clothes that had probably cost more than Aurora's monthly rent, but beneath the expensive fabric and perfect makeup,…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags42
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Eva slid, her fingers tracing the condensation on the bar"
1"Aurora slid, her legs slightly unsteady from the whisky"
2"he asked, his voice gentle"
3"Aurora turned, a knot forming in her stomach"
4"He leaned, his voice dropping to a near whisper"
5"she whispered, the pieces clicking into place with horrifying clarity"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.147
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.042
77.3179%