Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX36K242JFXQ6ANJT3E8YW

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.001427
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy oak door swung inward, yanking a sharp intake of air from the humid London evening. Outside, the neon green sign of The Raven’s Nest buzzed and strobed, casting long, glistening shadows across the varnished floorboards inside. Silas stopped polishing the pint glass in his hand. He set it down with a deliberate, rhythmic clink against the counter. The bell above the door chimed again, a cheerful, disruptive note against the smoky bass that filtered through the wall from the alleyway. He looked up from the glass. His eyes, the color of stormy amber, narrowed slightly behind the curl of a trimmed grey beard. Rory stood in the entrance, clutching a battered brown paper bag to her chest. The fluorescent light from the streetlamp outside caught the straight black hair falling over her eyes, but she didn't brush it away. She stared at the room with a familiarity that didn't quite match the hesitation in her posture. "Yu-Fei Cheung," she said. Her voice was deeper than he remembered, stripped of the youthful lilt that used to float around the flat above his head when she was thirteen or fourteen. "She's sending out an emergency batch of the sweet chili beef dumplings. Late." Silas adjusted his weight, favoring his right leg slightly as the ache in the old knee throbbed in time with the bass. "I didn't order any. There's a lot of noise tonight." "I know." Rory stepped inside, the damp chill of the street leaving her skin as she moved toward him. She stopped at the end of the bar. The distance between them had once been filled with jokes about football and fierce arguments over history homework, but now it felt like a canyon. She was five years older than he had last seen her. The baby fat was gone, replaced by sharp angles. She looked tired. Not the kind of tired that comes from a long shift, but the kind that settles in the shoulders, heavy and unrelenting. "You're back," Silas said. It wasn't a question. He’d seen the names in the paper when the warrants for her ex-boyfriend had gone quiet, but he’d ignored them. Silas knew better than to reach out when people were trying to bury the past. "I am." She lifted the paper bag, offering it to him like an offering at an altar. "She says they’ll sit on a hot plate until they’re cold, and nobody wants that." Silas looked at the bag, then back at her. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light. He remembered helping her pick out bandages for that one, a stupid bicycle accident where she’d skinned her knee on pavement as steep as this city’s ambition. Now, the scar was a faded map of survival. He took the bag and set it on the counter behind him. "Sit," Silas said, gesturing to the high stool. "I’ve got a bottle of Glenfiddich I’ve been meaning to open." Rory hesitated, her fingers twitching toward the pocket of her delivery courier vest. She wore the gear of a city grinder now—sturdy boots, practical cargo pants, a jacket that smelled of rain and diesel. It was a uniform of function, starkly different from the tweed blazers she used to wear to seminars at Cardiff University before she walked out mid-lecture three years ago. "No alcohol," she said, her voice flat. "I have to be up early. Another shift." "You're twenty-five." Silas leaned his elbows on the sticky wood. "You're old enough to drink whisky and old enough to know that running yourself into the ground doesn't fix anything." Rory laughed, but it was a brittle sound, like a branch snapping under frost. "It beats waiting around for a phone to ring. Besides, it’s cheaper." "The job doesn't suit you, Rory." The silence that followed was thick, heavy with the ghosts of the flat above. She had been a good kid. Headstrong, yes, but idealistic. She wanted to be a barrister, wanted to tear apart systems that hurt people. She had taken a law degree, worn the robes in her imagination, and walked away. "Things changed," she said softly. "Bad things?" She looked at him then, really looked at him. For a second, the cool, guarded mask she wore slipped, and he saw the girl who used to hide in the bookshelves of his flat, reading espionage thrillers and plotting revolutions. The eyes that had always sparkled with mischief were now dark, reflecting nothing but the harsh streetlamp outside. "I had to leave Cardiff," she said. "I had to leave London." Silas nodded. He knew the story. He knew about Evan. The name alone carried the weight of the weight he knew she carried, a physical burden on her soul. He had watched Evan from across the bar a few times, saw the way he looked at her—possessive, hungry, wrong. Silas had wanted to step in, to be the father figure who pulled the car over and made her get out. He hadn't. He’d just watched her get in, and for years, he’d wondered if he was responsible for her running away. "I heard through Eva," Silas said carefully, watching her face for a flicker of emotion. "I heard you were in Cardiff, then... elsewhere. Where?" "Off the map," she replied. "For a little while. Just moving, you know? Trying not to look back." "You can't stop time, Silas." "No, but you can decide when you stop running." She looked at him, a strange mix of defiance and sadness flickering in her bright blue gaze. "You haven't changed much, you know. You're still sitting in this bunker, drinking your scotch, pretending the outside world doesn't exist." "I am a bar owner. This is my world." "It's a tomb." She stood up, placing her hands on the counter. "And I’m not the girl you remember, Silas. I’m not the one who wanted to save the world from laws. I learned that laws don't save anyone. You just learn how to survive them." Silas felt a sting of pain, sharp and sudden, behind his sternum. It was the regret of knowing he could have done more, done something to stop her from falling so far. He had been too focused on his own ghosts—the Prague operation, the failure, the limp—to see the cracks forming in the friendship he fostered. The bell above the door chimed, signaling a new round of customers entering the fog. The conversation died instantly, replaced by the ambient noise of the bar. Waitresses walked by carrying trays of clinking glasses. Men laughed loudly, slapping high fives. Rory’s hand drifted to her wrist, tracing the old scar. "I should go," she said. "I assume this is the 'I should go' that means you're never coming back?" She paused, looking at the beer taps, then at the wall covered in black-and-white photographs of spies and smugglers—men she probably knew from her father’s work, though she’d claimed ignorance for so long. "Maybe," she said. "Or maybe I just need to pick up another order before they close." Silas reached under the counter and pulled out a small, used chipped ceramic mug. He didn't put the whisky in it. He just pushed it toward her. "For the road," he said. "Yu-Fei's food is cold, but this is warm." She looked at the mug, then up at him. The tension in her jaw loosened, just a fraction. A ghost of a smile touched her lips, sad and knowing. "Thanks, Silas." "Don't spend it all in one place," he muttered, returning to his glass. Rory took the mug. It was the mug she had broken when she was twelve and threw it in a tantrum because she’d lost the debate competition. It had been fixed with epoxy resin by her mother years ago. She gripped the handle, feeling the warmth seep into her cold fingers. She turned and walked back out into the neon night. The door swung shut behind her, and the silence of The Raven’s Nest rushed back in to fill the vacuum. Silas looked at the empty stool. He looked at the paper bag of cold dumplings. He poured himself a drink, the amber liquid burning a clean line down his throat. The kid he had known—the one with big dreams and even bigger heart—was gone. Replaced by a survivor who had learned to hide in plain sight. He raised his glass to the empty room, honoring the memory of the girl who had been, and the woman who remained.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Silas said carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.865
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.108
82.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"sturdy"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"carried the weight"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"rhythmic"
2"lilt"
3"weight"
4"throbbed"
5"chill"
6"sturdy"
7"silence"
8"carried the weight"
9"flicker"
10"tracing"
11"tension"
12"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences90
matches
0"felt a sting"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1422
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1139
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
London1
Raven2
Nest2
Silas13
Rory6
Cardiff1
University1
Evan2
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
globalScore0.929
windowScore0.833
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite match the hesitation in her posture"
1"felt like a canyon"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.703
wordCount1422
matches
0"Not the kind of tired that comes from a long shift, but the kind"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.6
std21.18
cv0.67
sampleLengths
038
144
223
353
445
532
652
745
843
932
1056
1112
1219
1363
1415
1530
1626
176
1853
195
202
2158
2212
2391
2424
2518
265
279
2838
299
3046
3156
3241
3310
345
3514
3649
3727
3813
3929
402
4113
4251
4330
4478
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"been filled"
1"was gone"
2"been fixed"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs197
matches
0"were trying"
14.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences111
ratio0.045
matches
0"She wore the gear of a city grinder now—sturdy boots, practical cargo pants, a jacket that smelled of rain and diesel."
1"He had watched Evan from across the bar a few times, saw the way he looked at her—possessive, hungry, wrong."
2"He had been too focused on his own ghosts—the Prague operation, the failure, the limp—to see the cracks forming in the friendship he fostered."
3"She paused, looking at the beer taps, then at the wall covered in black-and-white photographs of spies and smugglers—men she probably knew from her father’s work, though she’d claimed ignorance for so long."
4"The kid he had known—the one with big dreams and even bigger heart—was gone."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1150
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.028695652173913042
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00782608695652174
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean12.81
std7.21
cv0.563
sampleLengths
017
121
29
312
423
56
617
714
822
917
104
1128
1213
1322
1410
1519
168
1725
1811
199
203
2122
224
234
2420
2515
2617
2715
289
2911
3027
319
3212
338
3411
3513
3621
3729
387
398
4010
4120
4214
4312
446
4514
466
474
4814
4915
37.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2702702702702703
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences81
matches
0"He set it down with"
1"He looked up from the"
2"His eyes, the color of"
3"She stared at the room"
4"Her voice was deeper than"
5"She stopped at the end"
6"She was five years older"
7"She looked tired."
8"It wasn't a question."
9"He’d seen the names in"
10"She lifted the paper bag,"
11"He remembered helping her pick"
12"He took the bag and"
13"She wore the gear of"
14"It was a uniform of"
15"she said, her voice flat"
16"She had been a good"
17"She wanted to be a"
18"She had taken a law"
19"she said softly"
ratio0.506
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences81
matches
0"The heavy oak door swung"
1"Silas stopped polishing the pint"
2"He set it down with"
3"The bell above the door"
4"He looked up from the"
5"His eyes, the color of"
6"Rory stood in the entrance,"
7"The fluorescent light from the"
8"She stared at the room"
9"Her voice was deeper than"
10"Silas adjusted his weight, favoring"
11"Rory stepped inside, the damp"
12"She stopped at the end"
13"The distance between them had"
14"She was five years older"
15"The baby fat was gone,"
16"She looked tired."
17"It wasn't a question."
18"He’d seen the names in"
19"Silas knew better than to"
ratio0.938
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Now, the scar was a"
ratio0.012
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The bell above the door chimed again, a cheerful, disruptive note against the smoky bass that filtered through the wall from the alleyway."
1"Her voice was deeper than he remembered, stripped of the youthful lilt that used to float around the flat above his head when she was thirteen or fourteen."
2"Not the kind of tired that comes from a long shift, but the kind that settles in the shoulders, heavy and unrelenting."
3"She wore the gear of a city grinder now—sturdy boots, practical cargo pants, a jacket that smelled of rain and diesel."
4"For a second, the cool, guarded mask she wore slipped, and he saw the girl who used to hide in the bookshelves of his flat, reading espionage thrillers and plot…"
5"The eyes that had always sparkled with mischief were now dark, reflecting nothing but the harsh streetlamp outside."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.054
78.4153%