| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1094 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1094 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "grave" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "marble" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "normalcy" | | 14 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1088 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "Something's watching." | | 1 | "Eliza Thorne, 1843-1889." | | 2 | "Come closer." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 5 | | wordCount | 1078 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.09 | | worstName | "Victorian" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0 | | worstWindowName | (null) | | discoveredNames | | Victorian | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | October | 1 | | Highgate | 1 | | Thorne | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 55.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed wrong" | | 1 | "sockets that seemed to drink the light" | | 2 | "pits that seemed to see everything and nothing" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.676 | | wordCount | 1088 | | matches | | 0 | "Not footsteps, but something worse" | | 1 | "Not folded hands, but a stone book, its pages etched with symbols" | | 2 | "not for the key, but for the pendant" | | 3 | "not teeth but writhing roots" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 34 | | std | 15.56 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 13 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "been worn" | | 1 | "being pulled" | | 2 | "being pulled" | | 3 | "been written" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain had tightened, biting into my neck as I stumbled forward, drawn toward a particular grave—an ornate angel statue with moss-eaten wings, its face turned toward the ground as if in eternal mourning." | | 1 | "Not a shadow—a figure, tall and thin, moving with deliberate slowness toward the angel." | | 2 | "The figure raised its hand, revealing what it held—a small, rusted key." | | 3 | "As I bent to retrieve it, I saw them—roots, thick and black, snaking through the soil like veins." | | 4 | "They carried tools—shovels, picks, something that glinted like surgical instruments in the moonlight." | | 5 | "I reached for the iron bars, my fingers closing around cold metal—" | | 6 | "—and felt something else." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1084 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.02952029520295203 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004612546125461255 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 11.22 | | std | 6.51 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 47.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.32989690721649484 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 73.26% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the present mattered now." | | 1 | "Then the roots closed around" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 57.36% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "I'd been here before, but" | | 1 | "My boots crunched on gravel" | | 2 | "It had led me here," | | 3 | "I stopped, scanning the darkness" | | 4 | "I hissed, fumbling with the" | | 5 | "It wouldn't come off." | | 6 | "I muttered, tugging at the" | | 7 | "Its hands, usually folded in" | | 8 | "I froze, heart hammering against" | | 9 | "My voice cracked" | | 10 | "I caught a glimpse of" | | 11 | "I cried out, stumbling backward." | | 12 | "I grabbed the nearest headstone," | | 13 | "My fingers brushed cold marble," | | 14 | "It pointed at the angel" | | 15 | "I shook my head, backing" | | 16 | "I clawed at it, desperate" | | 17 | "I whispered, but my feet" | | 18 | "My fingers closed around the" | | 19 | "It was cold, so cold" |
| | ratio | 0.407 | |
| 47.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate groaned as" | | 1 | "Moonlight sliced through the yew" | | 2 | "I'd been here before, but" | | 3 | "My boots crunched on gravel" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant hung heavy" | | 5 | "It had led me here," | | 6 | "I stopped, scanning the darkness" | | 7 | "Nothing should move." | | 8 | "The pendant flared suddenly, burning" | | 9 | "I hissed, fumbling with the" | | 10 | "It wouldn't come off." | | 11 | "The chain had tightened, biting" | | 12 | "I muttered, tugging at the" | | 13 | "The chain loosened, but the" | | 14 | "The name had been worn" | | 15 | "Its hands, usually folded in" | | 16 | "A shadow detached itself from" | | 17 | "I froze, heart hammering against" | | 18 | "Moonlight caught the glint of" | | 19 | "My voice cracked" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "—and felt something else." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against my chest, pulsing with a warmth that shouldn't exist in the October chill." | | 1 | "The chain had tightened, biting into my neck as I stumbled forward, drawn toward a particular grave—an ornate angel statue with moss-eaten wings, its face turne…" | | 2 | "They carried tools—shovels, picks, something that glinted like surgical instruments in the moonlight." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I whispered, but my feet moved of their own accord, carrying me toward the angel" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "I whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |