Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX37YXFV18J695X929MGSY

Run Details

Duration:
8.2s
Cost:
$0.000581
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the Soho cobbles into a slick mirror that reflected the sickly glow of the green neon sign above *The Raven’s Nest*. Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t slow. Her boots splashed through puddles, the cold seeping through the leather, but she kept her eyes locked on the figure darting between the alleyways ahead. A man—no, a *boy*, really—wearing a hoodie two sizes too big, his shoulders hunched like he was trying to disappear into the fabric. She’d been tailing him for three blocks now, ever since he’d bolted from the bar’s back door like his arse was on fire. No ID, no name, just a face she’d seen in the files—one of Silas’ runners, the kind who moved things that didn’t belong in the light. And if Silas was involved, then so was the rest of them. The clique. The ones who’d cost her Morris. The boy skidded around a corner, his trainers slipping on the wet stone. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She lunged, fingers brushing the damp fabric of his hoodie, but he twisted away, breath coming in ragged gasps. “Oi! Police! Stop *running*!” He didn’t. She cursed under her breath, her pulse hammering in her throat. Eighteen years on the force, and she still hadn’t lost the thrill of the chase—the way her body moved on instinct, muscles remembering drills from basic training. But this wasn’t some drunken brawl outside a pub. This was something else. Something that smelled like ozone and old blood. The boy veered left, down a narrow passage between two buildings, the kind of gap that shouldn’t have been there but was, like the city itself was shifting to let him through. Quinn followed, her shoulder scraping against the brick. The alley opened into a dead end—a rusted fire escape, a dumpster overflowing with sodden cardboard, and a manhole cover, its edges corroded but the bolts fresh, gleaming under the dim glow of a flickering streetlamp. The boy didn’t slow. He dropped to his knees, fingers prying at the manhole cover. Quinn’s stomach twisted. *No. Not down there.* “Last chance,” she called, her voice cutting through the rain. “Walk away now, and I’ll forget I saw you.” He didn’t look up. The cover groaned as he lifted it, the stench of damp earth and something older, something *wrong*, rising from the darkness below. His legs disappeared into the hole, and Quinn’s instincts screamed at her to stop, to call for backup, to *think*. But she didn’t. She holstered her baton, crouched, and followed. The ladder was slick under her palms, the rungs cold and uneven. The drop was longer than she expected, the air thickening as she descended, pressing against her skin like a second layer. The boy’s footsteps echoed ahead, quick and light, but she could hear the tremor in them now—the fear. Good. Fear meant he knew what he was running from. The tunnel opened into a wider space, the walls lined with flickering gas lamps that cast long, wavering shadows. The boy was already halfway down the passage, his hoodie flapping behind him like a flag of surrender. Quinn’s boots hit the ground, and she straightened, her hand hovering over her radio. No signal. Of course there wasn’t. She moved forward, her senses sharpening. The air smelled of wet stone and something metallic, like old coins left in the rain. The walls were covered in graffiti, but not the usual tags—these were symbols, twisted and unfamiliar, etched into the brick like they’d been carved by something with too many fingers. The boy glanced back, his face pale under the hood. “You don’t wanna be here, *cop*,” he spat, his voice cracking. “This ain’t your world.” Quinn didn’t answer. She kept walking. The passage sloped downward, the ground uneven underfoot. The boy’s breath came in short, sharp bursts now, his steps faltering. He was tiring. Good. She could almost taste the end of this—almost. Then the tunnel opened into a cavern. Quinn stopped dead. The space was vast, the ceiling lost in darkness, supported by pillars of blackened stone. Stalls lined the walls, their awnings patched together from mismatched fabrics, their wares glowing with an eerie light. Jars of swirling liquid, bundles of dried herbs that smelled like burnt sugar, knives with blades that shimmered like they weren’t quite solid. People—if they *were* people—moved between the stalls, their faces half-hidden in the dim light. Some had too many eyes. Others had none at all. The boy was gone. Quinn’s fingers twitched toward her baton, but she didn’t draw it. Not yet. She scanned the crowd, her pulse roaring in her ears. There. A flash of dark fabric near the far wall. The boy, slipping between two stalls, his shoulders hunched like he was trying to make himself smaller. She started forward, but a hand clamped around her wrist. Quinn whipped around, her free hand already reaching for her cuffs, but the grip was iron. A man stood there, his skin the colour of old parchment, his eyes black and depthless. He wore a long coat that looked like it had been stitched together from shadows, and his fingers were too long, the joints bending in ways that made her stomach lurch. “You don’t belong here, *detective*,” he said, his voice like dry leaves skittering across pavement. Quinn yanked her arm free. “Let go of me.” The man didn’t move. “This is the Veil Market. The rules here are not yours.” She bared her teeth. “I don’t give a damn about your rules. I’m here for the boy.” A slow, humorless smile spread across his face. “The boy is already gone. But you…” His gaze flicked over her, lingering on the worn leather of her watch, the sharp angle of her jaw. “You smell like loss. Like *grief*.” Quinn’s breath hitched. Morris. The way his body had looked in the morgue, the way the coroner’s report had read *unexplained circumstances*. The way she’d woken up screaming for three months straight. She forced the memory down. “Where is he?” The man tilted his head, his smile widening. “Deeper. Where the light doesn’t reach.” Quinn’s fingers curled into fists. She could turn back. She could climb those ladder rungs, surface into the rain, call for backup, and pretend she’d never seen this place. But the boy was still down here. And if he was running, it meant he knew something. Something about Morris. Something about *them*. She met the man’s gaze, her voice low and steady. “Then I’m going deeper.” The man’s smile didn’t waver. “As you wish, detective. But remember—” He leaned in, his breath cold against her ear. “—down here, the rules are *mine*.” Quinn didn’t flinch. She stepped past him, her boots striking the stone as she moved toward the far wall. The crowd parted for her, their whispers following like a trail of smoke. The boy was ahead. And she was going to find him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"wavering"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"roaring"
count1
10
word"lurch"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"gleaming"
2"stomach"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"wavering"
6"etched"
7"shimmered"
8"scanned"
9"roaring"
10"lurch"
11"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans13
markdownWords19
totalWords1158
ratio0.016
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"boy"
2"running"
3"No. Not down there."
4"wrong"
5"think"
6"cop"
7"were"
8"detective"
9"grief"
10"unexplained circumstances"
11"them"
12"mine"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1049
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Silas1
Morris3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Silas"
4"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.833
windowScore1
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like ozone and old blood"
1"smelled like burnt sugar, knives with blad"
2"looked like it had been stitched together"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1158
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean31.3
std24.22
cv0.774
sampleLengths
081
169
239
32
459
576
622
719
846
93
107
1161
1257
1352
1425
156
1632
177
183
1980
204
2150
2210
2363
2415
259
2615
2717
2840
2932
308
3114
3252
3314
3426
3532
3611
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"was involved"
1"were covered"
2"been carved"
3"was gone"
4"been stitched"
19.82% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was trying"
1"was shifting"
2"was running"
3"was trying"
4"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences111
ratio0.072
matches
0"A man—no, a *boy*, really—wearing a hoodie two sizes too big, his shoulders hunched like he was trying to disappear into the fabric."
1"No ID, no name, just a face she’d seen in the files—one of Silas’ runners, the kind who moved things that didn’t belong in the light."
2"Eighteen years on the force, and she still hadn’t lost the thrill of the chase—the way her body moved on instinct, muscles remembering drills from basic training."
3"The alley opened into a dead end—a rusted fire escape, a dumpster overflowing with sodden cardboard, and a manhole cover, its edges corroded but the bolts fresh, gleaming under the dim glow of a flickering streetlamp."
4"The boy’s footsteps echoed ahead, quick and light, but she could hear the tremor in them now—the fear."
5"The walls were covered in graffiti, but not the usual tags—these were symbols, twisted and unfamiliar, etched into the brick like they’d been carved by something with too many fingers."
6"She could almost taste the end of this—almost."
7"People—if they *were* people—moved between the stalls, their faces half-hidden in the dim light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount184
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.03804347826086957
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.010869565217391304
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean10.43
std8.03
cv0.769
sampleLengths
028
15
225
323
423
526
612
72
86
913
103
1119
124
132
1411
1527
169
174
188
1932
208
2136
224
2311
243
251
263
2710
289
294
3022
3120
323
337
3412
3521
3618
371
389
3919
4018
4114
422
434
446
4516
4630
4710
4811
494
42.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.32432432432432434
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners36
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Of course there wasn’t."
1"Then the tunnel opened into"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences91
matches
0"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
1"She’d been tailing him for"
2"She lunged, fingers brushing the"
3"She cursed under her breath,"
4"He dropped to his knees,"
5"she called, her voice cutting"
6"He didn’t look up."
7"His legs disappeared into the"
8"She holstered her baton, crouched,"
9"She moved forward, her senses"
10"he spat, his voice cracking"
11"She kept walking."
12"He was tiring."
13"She could almost taste the"
14"She scanned the crowd, her"
15"She started forward, but a"
16"He wore a long coat"
17"he said, his voice like"
18"She bared her teeth."
19"His gaze flicked over her,"
ratio0.286
20.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences91
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t slow."
2"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
3"A man—no, a *boy*, really—wearing"
4"She’d been tailing him for"
5"The ones who’d cost her"
6"The boy skidded around a"
7"Quinn didn’t hesitate."
8"She lunged, fingers brushing the"
9"She cursed under her breath,"
10"This was something else."
11"Something that smelled like ozone"
12"The boy veered left, down"
13"Quinn followed, her shoulder scraping"
14"The alley opened into a"
15"The boy didn’t slow."
16"He dropped to his knees,"
17"Quinn’s stomach twisted."
18"she called, her voice cutting"
19"He didn’t look up."
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain came down in sheets, turning the Soho cobbles into a slick mirror that reflected the sickly glow of the green neon sign above *The Raven’s Nest*."
1"The boy veered left, down a narrow passage between two buildings, the kind of gap that shouldn’t have been there but was, like the city itself was shifting to l…"
2"The tunnel opened into a wider space, the walls lined with flickering gas lamps that cast long, wavering shadows."
3"Jars of swirling liquid, bundles of dried herbs that smelled like burnt sugar, knives with blades that shimmered like they weren’t quite solid."
4"He wore a long coat that looked like it had been stitched together from shadows, and his fingers were too long, the joints bending in ways that made her stomach…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called, her voice cutting through the rain"
1"he spat, his voice cracking"
2"He leaned in, his breath cold against her ear"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.125
74.6853%