| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "wavering" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "roaring" | | 10 | "lurch" | | 11 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 1158 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest" | | 1 | "boy" | | 2 | "running" | | 3 | "No. Not down there." | | 4 | "wrong" | | 5 | "think" | | 6 | "cop" | | 7 | "were" | | 8 | "detective" | | 9 | "grief" | | 10 | "unexplained circumstances" | | 11 | "them" | | 12 | "mine" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1049 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 14 | | Silas | 1 | | Morris | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.833 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like ozone and old blood" | | 1 | "smelled like burnt sugar, knives with blad" | | 2 | "looked like it had been stitched together" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 31.3 | | std | 24.22 | | cv | 0.774 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 76 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 80 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 52 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 11 |
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| 91.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "was involved" | | 1 | "were covered" | | 2 | "been carved" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "been stitched" |
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| 19.82% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was shifting" | | 2 | "was running" | | 3 | "was trying" | | 4 | "was running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "A man—no, a *boy*, really—wearing a hoodie two sizes too big, his shoulders hunched like he was trying to disappear into the fabric." | | 1 | "No ID, no name, just a face she’d seen in the files—one of Silas’ runners, the kind who moved things that didn’t belong in the light." | | 2 | "Eighteen years on the force, and she still hadn’t lost the thrill of the chase—the way her body moved on instinct, muscles remembering drills from basic training." | | 3 | "The alley opened into a dead end—a rusted fire escape, a dumpster overflowing with sodden cardboard, and a manhole cover, its edges corroded but the bolts fresh, gleaming under the dim glow of a flickering streetlamp." | | 4 | "The boy’s footsteps echoed ahead, quick and light, but she could hear the tremor in them now—the fear." | | 5 | "The walls were covered in graffiti, but not the usual tags—these were symbols, twisted and unfamiliar, etched into the brick like they’d been carved by something with too many fingers." | | 6 | "She could almost taste the end of this—almost." | | 7 | "People—if they *were* people—moved between the stalls, their faces half-hidden in the dim light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 184 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.03804347826086957 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010869565217391304 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 10.43 | | std | 8.03 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 42.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.32432432432432434 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 73.26% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course there wasn’t." | | 1 | "Then the tunnel opened into" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots splashed through puddles," | | 1 | "She’d been tailing him for" | | 2 | "She lunged, fingers brushing the" | | 3 | "She cursed under her breath," | | 4 | "He dropped to his knees," | | 5 | "she called, her voice cutting" | | 6 | "He didn’t look up." | | 7 | "His legs disappeared into the" | | 8 | "She holstered her baton, crouched," | | 9 | "She moved forward, her senses" | | 10 | "he spat, his voice cracking" | | 11 | "She kept walking." | | 12 | "He was tiring." | | 13 | "She could almost taste the" | | 14 | "She scanned the crowd, her" | | 15 | "She started forward, but a" | | 16 | "He wore a long coat" | | 17 | "he said, his voice like" | | 18 | "She bared her teeth." | | 19 | "His gaze flicked over her," |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 20.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t slow." | | 2 | "Her boots splashed through puddles," | | 3 | "A man—no, a *boy*, really—wearing" | | 4 | "She’d been tailing him for" | | 5 | "The ones who’d cost her" | | 6 | "The boy skidded around a" | | 7 | "Quinn didn’t hesitate." | | 8 | "She lunged, fingers brushing the" | | 9 | "She cursed under her breath," | | 10 | "This was something else." | | 11 | "Something that smelled like ozone" | | 12 | "The boy veered left, down" | | 13 | "Quinn followed, her shoulder scraping" | | 14 | "The alley opened into a" | | 15 | "The boy didn’t slow." | | 16 | "He dropped to his knees," | | 17 | "Quinn’s stomach twisted." | | 18 | "she called, her voice cutting" | | 19 | "He didn’t look up." |
| | ratio | 0.879 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in sheets, turning the Soho cobbles into a slick mirror that reflected the sickly glow of the green neon sign above *The Raven’s Nest*." | | 1 | "The boy veered left, down a narrow passage between two buildings, the kind of gap that shouldn’t have been there but was, like the city itself was shifting to l…" | | 2 | "The tunnel opened into a wider space, the walls lined with flickering gas lamps that cast long, wavering shadows." | | 3 | "Jars of swirling liquid, bundles of dried herbs that smelled like burnt sugar, knives with blades that shimmered like they weren’t quite solid." | | 4 | "He wore a long coat that looked like it had been stitched together from shadows, and his fingers were too long, the joints bending in ways that made her stomach…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice cutting through the rain" | | 1 | "he spat, his voice cracking" | | 2 | "He leaned in, his breath cold against her ear" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.188 | | leniency | 0.375 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |