Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX38ATPJWVWBYCHKZ2JYMD

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Duration:
4.9s
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$0.002577
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign flickered outside, casting green shadows across the wet pavement. Inside, The Raven's Nest breathed its familiar mix of old wood and cheaper spirits. Aurora wiped down the bar counter, her black hair falling across her face as she worked through the last of the evening crowd. The maps on the walls seemed to watch her in the low light, their edges curling with age. She didn't hear the door open over the low murmur of the television showing a football match. Didn't look up until the figure settled onto a stool three places down from where she stood. "Rory?" The voice was familiar in a way that made her chest tight. She raised her head. Eva Whitmore looked different. Of course she did—five years was enough time to reshape anyone. Her blonde hair had darkened to a warm brown, cropped short in a way that sharpened her jaw. She wore a cream coat that probably cost more than Rory made in a week, and her eyes, still that same pale grey, held something cautious behind their recognition. Aurora's hands stilled on the cloth. "Eva." The name hung between them like smoke. "I didn't—" Eva started, then stopped. She glanced around the bar, at the maps, the photographs, the dim corners where regulars sat with their quiet pints. "Silas's place, right? He mentioned you lived above somewhere." "He talks about you?" The words came out sharper than Rory intended. "Occasionally." Eva's mouth thinned. "We bump into each other. Conferences, that sort of thing." Of course. Eva had always moved in different circles. Still did, apparently. The bar suddenly felt smaller, the air heavier. Rory set down her cloth. "What can I get you?" "Just a gin and tonic. Please." Rory turned to the bottles, grateful for the moment to collect herself. Her reflection swam in the mirrored back wall—same bright blue eyes, same straight black hair, same small crescent scar visible above her wrist where her sleeve had ridden up. But she felt older than thirty-five, older than the twenty-five she'd been when she'd fled Cardiff with nothing but a suitcase and a borrowed phone number. She poured the drink and slid it across the bar. Eva's fingers brushed hers briefly as she took it. "Thank you." Eva took a long sip, then set the glass down. "You look—" "Don't." "Fair enough." Eva's laugh was quieter than Rory remembered. Softer around the edges. "You look good, is what I was going to say. Different, but good." Rory leaned against the counter, arms crossed. "How's Richard?" Something flickered across Eva's face. "Richard and I divorced two years ago." "Oh." The word sat awkward between them. "I'm sorry." "Don't be. It was—" Eva shook her head. "It was for the best. We wanted different things. He wanted a wife who attended his firm's dinners and smiled at his clients. I wanted—" She stopped, looked down at her drink. "It doesn't matter now." Rory remembered the wedding. She'd attended as a bridesmaid, back when they were still speaking, back before everything had curdled between them. Eva in white lace, radiant and certain. Rory in sage green, smiling through the reception while her own marriage crumbled quietly in the background. "It was a nice wedding," Rory said, because she couldn't think of anything else to say. "It was a beautiful funeral," Eva replied, and her voice cracked just slightly on the last word. "The marriage, I mean. Not the—obviously not the—" "I know what you mean." They were quiet for a moment. The football match droned on, irrelevant. Someone at the far end of the bar laughed at something on their phone. "I should have called," Eva said finally. "After you left. I kept meaning to, and then months would pass, and it got harder." "I didn't call either." "No. I suppose you didn't." Rory thought about those first months in London, sleeping on Eva's couch, eating takeout containers on the floor while they watched films and didn't talk about why Rory was there. The bruise on her arm that had faded from purple to yellow. The way she'd wake up some nights gasping, reaching for a body that wasn't there anymore. "You were busy," Rory said. "With the wedding. With Richard." "That was never an excuse." "No," Rory agreed. "It wasn't." Eva turned her glass slowly on the bar, leaving a ring of condensation on the wood. "I looked for you, you know. After. When things started going wrong with Richard. I thought maybe—" She laughed bitterly. "I thought maybe you'd have some insight. You always saw through him faster than I did." "I thought you didn't want to hear it." "Because you said he was wrong for me?" "I said he made you smaller. You didn't want to hear that." Eva's jaw tightened. "You could have been there anyway. Even if I didn't want to hear it." "And you could have come with me when I left." The words were out before Rory could stop them, sharp and old and still bleeding. "When I called you at two in the morning, crying in a service station car park, you could have said yes." The silence that followed was thick enough to choke on. "I was getting married in six months," Eva said quietly. "I couldn't just—" "No. You couldn't." "I'm sorry, Rory." Rory looked at her old friend—at the woman she'd shared bedrooms with as teenagers, whose shoulder she'd cried on when her father left, who had held her hair back in Cardiff's dingiest pub when she was seventeen and thought she knew everything about heartbreak. That woman was still in there somewhere, behind the careful makeup and the expensive coat. "I know," Rory said. "I am too." Eva's eyes glistened. She reached across the space between them and touched Rory's hand, just briefly. "Are we too late? To be—whatever we were?" Rory thought about the hidden room behind the bookshelf, the contacts Silas still kept, the life she'd built in the margins of this city. The part-time deliveries and the law books she still couldn't bring herself to open. The way she still jumped at loud voices and checked over her shoulder on empty streets. "I don't know," she said honestly. "But I'd like to find out." Eva smiled—tentative, fragile, the same smile she'd given Rory the night before her wedding when she'd admitted she was terrified. "I'd like that too." The bar settled around them, its old maps and photographs keeping their quiet vigil. Outside, the green neon sign continued to flicker, casting its uncertain glow through the darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
7.69% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Eva started then [then]"
1"Eva said finally [finally]"
2"She laughed bitterly [bitterly]"
3"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
4"she said honestly [honestly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.278
effectiveRatio0.192
86.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1110
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1110
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"radiant"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"radiant"
3"silence"
4"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences69
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1101
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount781
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Whitmore1
Rory19
Eva18
Cardiff2
Softer1
London1
Silas1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Whitmore"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.284
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1101
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean21.17
std18.85
cv0.89
sampleLengths
067
134
21
316
462
57
67
735
812
914
1020
1110
126
1367
1419
1514
161
1726
189
1912
209
2144
2246
2316
2425
255
2626
2723
284
295
3058
3110
325
335
3452
358
368
3712
3817
3946
4010
4113
423
433
4459
457
4624
4754
4812
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs131
matches(empty)
31.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences103
ratio0.039
matches
0"Of course she did—five years was enough time to reshape anyone."
1"Her reflection swam in the mirrored back wall—same bright blue eyes, same straight black hair, same small crescent scar visible above her wrist where her sleeve had ridden up."
2"Rory looked at her old friend—at the woman she'd shared bedrooms with as teenagers, whose shoulder she'd cried on when her father left, who had held her hair back in Cardiff's dingiest pub when she was seventeen and thought she knew everything about heartbreak."
3"Eva smiled—tentative, fragile, the same smile she'd given Rory the night before her wedding when she'd admitted she was terrified."
87.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount788
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same straight black hair,"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.046954314720812185
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.015228426395939087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean10.69
std7.91
cv0.74
sampleLengths
012
114
223
318
417
517
61
712
84
94
1011
1118
1229
136
141
157
166
1720
189
1912
204
2110
222
237
243
258
265
275
286
2912
3029
3126
3210
339
3412
352
361
379
384
3913
407
412
425
437
447
452
468
4732
484
494
55.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3786407766990291
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Of course she did—five years"
1"Still did, apparently."
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences65
matches
0"She didn't hear the door"
1"She raised her head."
2"Her blonde hair had darkened"
3"She wore a cream coat"
4"She glanced around the bar,"
5"Her reflection swam in the"
6"She poured the drink and"
7"She stopped, looked down at"
8"She'd attended as a bridesmaid,"
9"They were quiet for a"
10"She laughed bitterly"
11"She reached across the space"
12"she said honestly"
ratio0.2
13.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences65
matches
0"The neon sign flickered outside,"
1"Aurora wiped down the bar"
2"The maps on the walls"
3"She didn't hear the door"
4"The voice was familiar in"
5"She raised her head."
6"Eva Whitmore looked different."
7"Her blonde hair had darkened"
8"She wore a cream coat"
9"Aurora's hands stilled on the"
10"The name hung between them"
11"Eva started, then stopped"
12"She glanced around the bar,"
13"The words came out sharper"
14"Eva's mouth thinned"
15"Eva had always moved in"
16"The bar suddenly felt smaller,"
17"Rory set down her cloth."
18"Rory turned to the bottles,"
19"Her reflection swam in the"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory thought about those first months in London, sleeping on Eva's couch, eating takeout containers on the floor while they watched films and didn't talk about …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory agreed (agree)"
1"She laughed bitterly (laugh)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.173
leniency0.346
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.077
82.2772%