| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She crouched again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.226 | | leniency | 0.452 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |
| 94.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 959 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 959 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "standard" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 19 | | markdownWords | 29 | | totalWords | 949 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "unusual activity reported beneath Camden" | | 1 | "proceed with caution" | | 2 | "absence" | | 3 | "still" | | 4 | "anywhere" | | 5 | "wrong" | | 6 | "resistant" | | 7 | "here" | | 8 | "pulled" | | 9 | "lighter" | | 10 | "alive" | | 11 | "clink" | | 12 | "no, not a man" | | 13 | "deep" | | 14 | "Morris" | | 15 | "not Morris" | | 16 | "waiting" | | 17 | "wrongness" | | 18 | "invitation" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 797 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.76 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Quinn | 14 | | London | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Morris | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.622 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing her presence" |
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| 94.63% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.054 | | wordCount | 949 | | matches | | 0 | "not with the usual London grumble of traffic and voices, but with a low, resonant thrum, like a plucked wire stretched to" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 21.57 | | std | 20.64 | | cv | 0.957 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 83 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 4 |
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| 93.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "been frozen" | | 1 | "been *pulled" | | 2 | "been carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the back of Quinn’s throat like rusted nails." | | 1 | "The call had come in at 3:17 AM—*unusual activity reported beneath Camden*." | | 2 | "The platform stretched ahead, littered with the detritus of decades—crushed cans, syringes, a single, waterlogged shoe." | | 3 | "The torchlight caught the glint of something metallic in his hand—a small brass compass, its face etched with strange, angular symbols." | | 4 | "But something else—something *wrong*." | | 5 | "The dust came away clean, undisturbed except for a single, narrow groove—like something had been *pulled* across it." | | 6 | "A noise echoed from the tunnel—a sharp, metallic *clink*, like a coin dropped onto stone." | | 7 | "Then she saw it—a door." | | 8 | "Behind him, a figure emerged from the shadows—tall, lean, moving with the kind of precision that set Quinn’s teeth on edge." | | 9 | "The man—*no, not a man*, something in her gut screamed—smiled." | | 10 | "Morris—*not Morris*—laughed, a sound like dry leaves skittering across pavement." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 807 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02973977695167286 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0024783147459727386 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 8.32 | | std | 6.45 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 45.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the address and a" | | 1 | "Then she saw him." | | 2 | "Just a man in a" | | 3 | "Instead, she stepped onto the" | | 4 | "Then she saw it—a door." |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch cut through the" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "He didn’t meet her eyes." | | 3 | "It was the *absence* of" | | 4 | "His skin had a waxy" | | 5 | "It didn’t point *anywhere* she" | | 6 | "It twitched, just slightly, as" | | 7 | "She reached for the man’s" | | 8 | "It was too firm, too" | | 9 | "She stood abruptly, her gaze" | | 10 | "She gestured to the tracks." | | 11 | "She crouched again, running a" | | 12 | "She didn’t answer." | | 13 | "His eyes were too dark," | | 14 | "He nodded toward the platform" | | 15 | "she said, low and sharp" | | 16 | "His boots pounded against the" | | 17 | "She kept her gaze locked" | | 18 | "She knew, with a certainty" | | 19 | "It was an *invitation*." |
| | ratio | 0.26 | |
| 57.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station reeked" | | 1 | "Her torch cut through the" | | 2 | "The air hummed, not with" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "The call had come in" | | 5 | "A uniformed officer stood at" | | 6 | "He didn’t meet her eyes." | | 7 | "Quinn stepped past him, her" | | 8 | "The platform stretched ahead, littered" | | 9 | "It was the *absence* of" | | 10 | "The body lay sprawled near" | | 11 | "His skin had a waxy" | | 12 | "Quinn crouched, pulling on a" | | 13 | "The torchlight caught the glint" | | 14 | "The needle didn’t point north." | | 15 | "It didn’t point *anywhere* she" | | 16 | "It twitched, just slightly, as" | | 17 | "The constable shifted behind her." | | 18 | "A beat of silence." | | 19 | "Quinn didn’t answer." |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 81.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the back of Quinn’s throat like rusted nails." | | 1 | "It was too firm, too *resistant*, as if the body had been frozen mid-motion." | | 2 | "She kept her gaze locked on the thing wearing Morris’s face, her pulse steady, her mind racing." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice steady" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.129 | | leniency | 0.258 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |