Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX398NQZS5D88DX5R879DQ

Run Details

Duration:
9.4s
Cost:
$0.002189

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Fae Grove loomed before Aurora, a stark silhouette against the moonless night. Ancient oak standing stones cast jagged shadows across the wildflower-strewn ground, their edges blurred and uncertain. She clutched the Heartstone pendant around her neck, its deep crimson surface barely visible beneath her jacket. Something felt wrong. Instantly wrong. The park should have been silent, but it wasn't. Whispers skittered just beyond hearing—soft rustlings that weren't wind, breath-like sounds that couldn't be explained by any natural source. Her delivery shift at Golden Empress had ended hours ago, and Eva's cryptic message about meeting here still echoed in her mind. Aurora stepped forward. The ground seemed to shift beneath her boots, wildflowers bending away from her path in unnatural waves. Her small crescent-shaped scar tingled on her left wrist—a childhood reminder that often preceded something strange. The standing stones grew closer. Each step took longer, as if the space between them stretched and contracted like breathing muscle. Her bright blue eyes darted constantly, tracking movement at the periphery. Something was watching. Not just watching—studying her. A branch snapped behind her. Closer than it should have been. She didn't turn. Didn't react. Cool-headed. Controlled. But her hand drifted toward the Heartstone, fingers brushing its silver chain. The pendant pulsed with a faint inner warmth, almost like a heartbeat. Not her heartbeat.
total_cost0.0021888000000000003

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount227
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount227
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"stark"
2"echoed"
3"reminder"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences25
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences25
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences25
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords221
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount221
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Aurora2
Heartstone2
Golden1
Empress1
Eva1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Empress"
2"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences13
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount221
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean24.56
std17.59
cv0.717
sampleLengths
046
15
250
336
439
511
67
724
83
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
29.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs39
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences25
ratio0.12
matches
0"Whispers skittered just beyond hearing—soft rustlings that weren't wind, breath-like sounds that couldn't be explained by any natural source."
1"Her small crescent-shaped scar tingled on her left wrist—a childhood reminder that often preceded something strange."
2"Not just watching—studying her."
86.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount227
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.048458149779735685
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.013215859030837005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences25
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences25
mean8.84
std6.49
cv0.734
sampleLengths
013
116
217
33
42
59
619
722
83
917
1016
115
1216
1311
143
154
165
176
183
192
201
211
2212
2312
243
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.64
totalSentences25
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences21
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences21
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone pendant"
1"Her delivery shift at Golden"
2"Her small crescent-shaped scar tingled"
3"Her bright blue eyes darted"
4"She didn't turn."
ratio0.238
79.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount16
totalSentences21
matches
0"The Fae Grove loomed before"
1"She clutched the Heartstone pendant"
2"Something felt wrong."
3"The park should have been"
4"Whispers skittered just beyond hearing—soft"
5"Her delivery shift at Golden"
6"Aurora stepped forward."
7"The ground seemed to shift"
8"Her small crescent-shaped scar tingled"
9"The standing stones grew closer."
10"Each step took longer, as"
11"Her bright blue eyes darted"
12"Something was watching."
13"A branch snapped behind her."
14"She didn't turn."
15"The pendant pulsed with a"
ratio0.762
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences21
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Whispers skittered just beyond hearing—soft rustlings that weren't wind, breath-like sounds that couldn't be explained by any natural source."
1"Each step took longer, as if the space between them stretched and contracted like breathing muscle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.1410%