| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde corrected gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.529 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 75.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1436 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "carefully" | | 5 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1436 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "streaming" | | 6 | "beacon" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "aligned" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.36% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1428 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 955 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | English | 1 | | Ahead | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "English" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.715 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 13.01% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from the rustling leaves overhead" | | 1 | "stones that seemed to guide them toward the grove’s heart" | | 2 | "looked like quicksilver frozen mid-drip" | | 3 | "as if viewing something far away" |
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| 59.94% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.401 | | wordCount | 1428 | | matches | | 0 | "not Richmond Park, but a reflection of this same grove from a slightly different an" | | 1 | "not green, but a cascade of liquid silver" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 39.67 | | std | 24.17 | | cv | 0.609 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 119 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 100 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 7 |
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| 97.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "was silvered" | | 1 | "was marked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—deep blue blossoms next to crimson spikes, silver fronds that chimed softly in a non-existent breeze." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 963 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.033229491173416406 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01142263759086189 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 13.35 | | std | 10.26 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 48 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 51 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 49.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.35514018691588783 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Only fifteen minutes had passed." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "They had followed the pendant’s" | | 1 | "Their bark was silvered, smooth" | | 2 | "She took a step forward." | | 3 | "They followed it." | | 4 | "Her hair was a waterfall" | | 5 | "She wore simple robes the" | | 6 | "Her voice was melodic, each" | | 7 | "It was warm against her" | | 8 | "her lavender eyes shifted to" | | 9 | "She turned her palm upward" | | 10 | "She reached into the folds" | | 11 | "She let the silk fall" | | 12 | "It was leaf-shaped, with veins" | | 13 | "She held the dagger out" | | 14 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 15 | "She reached out and took" | | 16 | "It was the clean, sharp" | | 17 | "She blinked, and her gaze" | | 18 | "She stood, and Rory realized" | | 19 | "She left no impression at" |
| | ratio | 0.282 | |
| 24.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Nyx moved beside her, a" | | 2 | "They had followed the pendant’s" | | 3 | "The stones weren’t stone at" | | 4 | "Their bark was silvered, smooth" | | 5 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper" | | 6 | "Rory reached out, her fingers" | | 7 | "A faint shimmer passed through" | | 8 | "She took a step forward." | | 9 | "The transition wasn’t a step" | | 10 | "The next, a breath of" | | 11 | "The light had changed, softening" | | 12 | "Nyx solidified fully beside her," | | 13 | "The grove was a perfect" | | 14 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—deep" | | 15 | "Time felt thick, syrupy." | | 16 | "Rory’s watch had stopped." | | 17 | "Nyx observed, pointing to the" | | 18 | "The sound of falling water" | | 19 | "They followed it." |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx moved beside her, a humanoid silhouette of shifting shadow that drank the late afternoon light." | | 1 | "A faint shimmer passed through the air, a heat-haze distortion that made the world beyond the ring waver." | | 2 | "The next, a breath of warm, perfumed air that carried the scent of night-blooming jasmine and damp earth." | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—deep blue blossoms next to crimson spikes, silver fronds that chimed softly in a non-existent breeze." | | 4 | "The blade was maybe ten inches long, wrought from a metal that looked like quicksilver frozen mid-drip." | | 5 | "The cold emanating from the weapon was intense, a dry, ancient chill that seeped into her bones." | | 6 | "Isolde’s expression grew distant, her lavender eyes clouding as if viewing something far away." | | 7 | "Isolde’s lips curved in a smile that held centuries of sadness." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her eyes drifting to the silver-leaved willow" | | 1 | "Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Isolde corrected gently (correct)" | | 4 | "Rory pressed (press)" | | 5 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.324 | | leniency | 0.647 | | rawRatio | 0.636 | | effectiveRatio | 0.412 | |