Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX39KV6TFXHAM0XSBAKDY7

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Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.001166
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park was crisp with the promise of autumn, but the Heartstone pendant around Aurora Carter’s neck pulsed with a persistent, low-grade heat. Nyx moved beside her, a humanoid silhouette of shifting shadow that drank the late afternoon light. They had followed the pendant’s pull to a ring of ancient, gnarled oaks at the park’s northern edge. “The standing stones,” Rory whispered. The stones weren’t stone at all, but living trees, bent and twisted into perfect arches. Their bark was silvered, smooth as worn bone. “A boundary,” Nyx’s voice was a whisper that seemed to come from the rustling leaves overhead. “The air tastes different here. Thinner, and older.” Rory reached out, her fingers hovering an inch from the nearest trunk. A faint shimmer passed through the air, a heat-haze distortion that made the world beyond the ring waver. She took a step forward. The transition wasn’t a step so much as a slide. One moment, the chill of an English park. The next, a breath of warm, perfumed air that carried the scent of night-blooming jasmine and damp earth. The light had changed, softening to the perpetual gold of a summer twilight. Behind her, the oak archway remained, but through it, she saw not Richmond Park, but a reflection of this same grove from a slightly different angle. Nyx solidified fully beside her, their violet eyes scanning the clearing. “We are between. This place is a stitch in the Veil.” The grove was a perfect circle, carpeted in moss so green it seemed to glow. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—deep blue blossoms next to crimson spikes, silver fronds that chimed softly in a non-existent breeze. Time felt thick, syrupy. Rory’s watch had stopped. “She leaves no footprints,” Nyx observed, pointing to the moss. Ahead, the path was marked by smooth, pale stones that seemed to guide them toward the grove’s heart. The sound of falling water grew louder, a gentle, constant patter. They followed it. A small spring bubbled up from between the roots of a colossal, weeping willow whose leaves were not green, but a cascade of liquid silver. Sitting beside the spring on a low, flat rock was a woman. Her hair was a waterfall of moonlight, streaming over her shoulders to pool on the moss. She wore simple robes the color of dusk. When she looked up, her eyes were the pale lavender of a fading bruise. “You followed the red thread,” the woman said. Her voice was melodic, each word precise and clear. “The stone called, and you answered. That is the way of gifts from Dymas. They are never given, only… returned.” Rory’s hand went to the pendant. It was warm against her skin. “Are you Isolde?” The woman inclined her head. “I am what remains of that name. And you are Aurora, who runs from a shadow that is not her own. And you,” her lavender eyes shifted to Nyx, “are a question that was never answered. A soul between realms. You are both far from your proper places.” Nyx took a step forward, their form flickering at the edges. “We seek knowledge. The nature of the pendant. The nature of the door that opened in Soho.” Isolde’s gaze was unsettlingly direct. “A door was opened. A debt was incurred. The stone is a key, and a compass, and a beacon. It points to the door that was opened, and it calls to the one who opened it. Such is the law of transaction in the amber realms.” She turned her palm upward. On it rested a dewdrop, perfectly spherical. Inside the droplet, Rory saw a miniature, shifting landscape of vineyards under an amber sky. “Gluttony is not merely for food. It is for experience. For sensation. For possession. Someone has developed a taste for something on this side of the Veil, and they have left a token to find their way back for another helping.” The droplet vanished, absorbed into Isolde’s skin. “The winter solstice approaches. The Veil thins. The door will open wider. The key will turn more easily.” A cold knot tightened in Rory’s stomach. “How do we stop it?” “A door can be closed,” Isolde said, her eyes drifting to the silver-leaved willow. “Or it can be removed from its hinges. One requires a lock. The other requires a blade.” She reached into the folds of her robe and withdrew a long, slender object wrapped in grey silk. She let the silk fall away. The blade was maybe ten inches long, wrought from a metal that looked like quicksilver frozen mid-drip. It was leaf-shaped, with veins of a darker silver running along its length. The air around it grew several degrees colder. Rory could see her own breath fog. “Moonsilver,” Nyx breathed, their voice holding a note of reverence Rory had never heard. “Fae-forged. That is a relic of the Courts.” “It was,” Isolde corrected gently. “Now it is a gift. A gift for the one who carries a key she did not ask for.” She held the dagger out to Rory, hilt first. “It can cut what other blades cannot. Wards. Bindings. Certain doors.” Rory hesitated. The cold emanating from the weapon was intense, a dry, ancient chill that seeped into her bones. She glanced at Nyx, who gave a slow, almost imperceptible nod. She reached out and took the hilt. The cold was a shock, but not painful. It was the clean, sharp cold of a winter star. The blade was lighter than it looked, perfectly balanced. As her fingers closed around the grip, a faint, milky luminescence awakened along the darker veins, pulsing once before settling into a steady, soft glow. “It will serve you,” Isolde said. “While your path and its purpose are aligned. Remember, it is a blade of severance. It makes distinctions. It separates one thing from another. Use that quality wisely.” Rory carefully slid the blade into the inner pocket of her jacket. The cold was muted through the leather, a constant, reassuring presence against her ribs. “The door in Soho,” Rory pressed. “Who opened it?” Isolde’s expression grew distant, her lavender eyes clouding as if viewing something far away. “I see a hunger wrapped in mortal skin. A palate jaded by earthly delights, seeking a sharper spice. I see a hand that accepted a gift in a place of amber skies and honeyed wines. The connection is made. The invitation is given. More than that…” She blinked, and her gaze focused again, sharp and clear. “More than that is a path you must walk. Visions are like maps drawn in fog. They show you the shape of the land, not the stones on the path.” She stood, and Rory realized Isolde’s feet did not press into the soft moss. She left no impression at all. “Our time here ends. An hour in this grove is a minute in your world, or a day. The balance is never certain. You should not stay longer.” She gestured toward the way they had come. The path of pale stones gleamed faintly. Nyx bowed their head, a gesture of deep respect. “Our thanks, Seer.” Isolde’s lips curved in a smile that held centuries of sadness. “Do not thank me. I have given you a blade and a direction. Both will cut you before this is done.” She turned and walked toward the silver willow, her form dissolving into the shimmering curtain of leaves as if she had never been there. The grove was silent save for the endless trickle of the spring. The floral perfume seemed cloying now. The wondrous, alien beauty of the place carried an edge of claustrophobia. Time moved wrong here. “We should go,” Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper. They retraced their steps along the pale stones. The Heartstone pendant had cooled against her chest, dormant once more. The Fae blade was a line of cold fire in her pocket. As they passed back through the arch of living oak, the world snapped back into focus with a visceral jolt. The air was cold and damp with London’s evening chill. The light was the murky grey of impending dusk. Behind them, the ring of trees was just trees again, ancient and quiet. Rory checked her watch. The digital display blinked, then settled. Only fifteen minutes had passed. She looked at Nyx, whose form was once again insubstantial, blending with the growing shadows of the park. “An hour inside can be a minute or a day,” she repeated. “We were fortunate,” Nyx whispered. “This time.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde corrected gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.056
75.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count2
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"perfectly"
3"gently"
4"carefully"
5"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"chill"
count3
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"streaming"
count1
6
word"beacon"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"silk"
count2
9
word"aligned"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"perfect"
2"whisper"
3"chill"
4"scanning"
5"streaming"
6"beacon"
7"stomach"
8"silk"
9"aligned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
64.36% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1428
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount955
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Aurora1
Carter1
Rory15
English1
Ahead1
Nyx11
Isolde8
Fae1
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"English"
3"London"
globalScore0.715
windowScore0.5
13.01% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"whisper that seemed to come from the rustling leaves overhead"
1"stones that seemed to guide them toward the grove’s heart"
2"looked like quicksilver frozen mid-drip"
3"as if viewing something far away"
59.94% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.401
wordCount1428
matches
0"not Richmond Park, but a reflection of this same grove from a slightly different an"
1"not green, but a cascade of liquid silver"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean39.67
std24.17
cv0.609
sampleLengths
060
128
224
335
475
522
643
710
832
975
1037
1115
1253
1328
14119
1525
1612
1755
1845
1922
2044
2137
2252
2334
2426
259
26100
2748
2827
2956
3034
3111
3251
3347
3430
357
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"was silvered"
1"was marked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences107
ratio0.009
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—deep blue blossoms next to crimson spikes, silver fronds that chimed softly in a non-existent breeze."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount963
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.033229491173416406
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01142263759086189
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean13.35
std10.26
cv0.769
sampleLengths
026
116
218
35
415
58
616
78
812
918
105
1110
128
1318
1413
1526
1611
1711
1815
1920
204
214
2210
2318
2411
253
2625
2712
2816
298
3014
318
329
3320
346
356
363
375
3848
3911
4017
415
4251
437
4415
4541
467
4718
487
495
49.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.35514018691588783
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners38
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Only fifteen minutes had passed."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences85
matches
0"They had followed the pendant’s"
1"Their bark was silvered, smooth"
2"She took a step forward."
3"They followed it."
4"Her hair was a waterfall"
5"She wore simple robes the"
6"Her voice was melodic, each"
7"It was warm against her"
8"her lavender eyes shifted to"
9"She turned her palm upward"
10"She reached into the folds"
11"She let the silk fall"
12"It was leaf-shaped, with veins"
13"She held the dagger out"
14"She glanced at Nyx, who"
15"She reached out and took"
16"It was the clean, sharp"
17"She blinked, and her gaze"
18"She stood, and Rory realized"
19"She left no impression at"
ratio0.282
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Nyx moved beside her, a"
2"They had followed the pendant’s"
3"The stones weren’t stone at"
4"Their bark was silvered, smooth"
5"Nyx’s voice was a whisper"
6"Rory reached out, her fingers"
7"A faint shimmer passed through"
8"She took a step forward."
9"The transition wasn’t a step"
10"The next, a breath of"
11"The light had changed, softening"
12"Nyx solidified fully beside her,"
13"The grove was a perfect"
14"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—deep"
15"Time felt thick, syrupy."
16"Rory’s watch had stopped."
17"Nyx observed, pointing to the"
18"The sound of falling water"
19"They followed it."
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Nyx moved beside her, a humanoid silhouette of shifting shadow that drank the late afternoon light."
1"A faint shimmer passed through the air, a heat-haze distortion that made the world beyond the ring waver."
2"The next, a breath of warm, perfumed air that carried the scent of night-blooming jasmine and damp earth."
3"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—deep blue blossoms next to crimson spikes, silver fronds that chimed softly in a non-existent breeze."
4"The blade was maybe ten inches long, wrought from a metal that looked like quicksilver frozen mid-drip."
5"The cold emanating from the weapon was intense, a dry, ancient chill that seeped into her bones."
6"Isolde’s expression grew distant, her lavender eyes clouding as if viewing something far away."
7"Isolde’s lips curved in a smile that held centuries of sadness."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde said, her eyes drifting to the silver-leaved willow"
1"Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx observed (observe)"
2"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
3"Isolde corrected gently (correct)"
4"Rory pressed (press)"
5"she repeated (repeat)"
6"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.647
rawRatio0.636
effectiveRatio0.412
73.0494%