Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX3AM4FBGZGB5MR2HP3WR9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.074050
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token felt cold against Quinn's palm as she descended the service ladder into darkness. Above her, the maintenance hatch clanged shut, cutting off the distant rumble of Camden High Street traffic. Eighteen years on the force, and she'd never known this place existed. An entire Tube station, swallowed by London's appetite for forgetting. Her torch beam swept across the platform. Victorian tile work, cracked and water-stained, stretched toward a vaulted ceiling where copper fixtures hung like skeletal fingers. The air tasted of rust and something else—something that reminded her of the ozone tang before a lightning strike. "Detective Quinn?" Eva Kowalski emerged from the shadows near what had once been a ticket booth. The young woman's round glasses caught the torchlight, turning her eyes into twin mirrors. She clutched her worn leather satchel against her chest, knuckles white around the strap. "You're the museum contact." Quinn kept her voice flat. "DS Chen said you'd be here." "Research assistant. I specialize in—" Eva tucked a curl of red hair behind her left ear. "—unusual artifacts. The responding officers found something they couldn't identify." Quinn swept past her toward the cluster of forensic lights at the platform's far end. Three uniformed constables stood in a loose semicircle, their faces pale in the harsh illumination. None of them spoke. None of them looked at what lay on the tiles. The body was wrong. Quinn had seen hundreds of corpses. Stabbings, shootings, the occasional jumper who'd chosen the wrong bridge. She'd learned to read death like other people read newspapers—quickly, efficiently, without letting the headlines settle into her bones. But this body resisted reading. A man in his sixties, well-dressed, grey suit now stained dark with blood that had pooled beneath him in an impossible pattern. The liquid spread in perfect concentric circles, each ring precisely two inches from the last, as if something had measured the distance with architectural care. His eyes were open. His mouth was frozen in what might have been surprise or might have been recognition. "Who found him?" The nearest constable—young, barely out of training—swallowed hard. "Anonymous tip. Came in at half three this morning. Caller knew the access point, gave the bone token number for entry." He gestured toward the ceiling. "We didn't even know you needed one until we tried the door." Quinn crouched beside the body, her knees protesting against the cold tile. The wound was center mass, a single puncture through the sternum. Clean. Too clean. No defensive marks on his hands, no torn fingernails, no bruising that suggested struggle. He'd stood here and let someone drive something through his heart. "The blood pattern." Eva had drifted closer, her satchel now hanging forgotten at her hip. "It's not right." "I'm aware." "No, I mean—" The researcher knelt opposite Quinn, her freckled face intent. "Blood doesn't pool like this. It follows gravity, spreads according to surface tension and viscosity. This is deliberate. This is a formation." Quinn's torch beam traveled across the concentric rings. Now that Eva had named it, she couldn't unsee the pattern. The blood had been arranged. Someone had taken the time to create this design while the victim's heart was still pumping. "Formation for what?" Eva pulled a leather-bound notebook from her satchel, flipping through pages covered in dense handwriting. "I've seen references to something similar in the restricted archives. Binding circles. They're supposed to contain..." She trailed off, her green eyes flicking to the constables still maintaining their careful distance. "Contain what, Ms. Kowalski?" "Energy. Entities. The translations vary." Eva's voice dropped to barely a whisper. "The texts describe them as cages made of sacrifice." Quinn stood, her worn leather watch catching on her sleeve. The timepiece had been Morris's—the last thing she'd taken from his desk after they'd closed the case file on his death three years ago. Unexplained circumstances. Insufficient evidence. She'd never believed those words, and standing in this forgotten station with blood arranged in impossible geometry, she believed them even less. "There's something else." Quinn moved toward the victim's right hand, which lay palm-up on the tile. His fingers were curled around a small object that glinted brass in the forensic light. "What is he holding?" One of the forensic techs stepped forward with gloved hands and gently pried the dead man's grip open. A compass rolled into his palm—small, tarnished green around the edges, its face etched with symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn looked at them directly. "Veil Compass," Eva breathed. "They sell them here. At the market." "The market." "The Veil Market. This place—" Eva gestured at the abandoned station. "—it hosts a kind of exchange. Goods and services that don't appear in any catalog." Quinn took the compass from the tech's hand, ignoring his protest about chain of custody. The brass was cold, colder than it should have been, and the needle didn't point north. It pointed toward the far end of the platform, toward the tunnel mouth where the old tracks disappeared into darkness. "The market moves every full moon," Eva continued, words tumbling faster now. "Different locations, different access points. But it was here three nights ago. The victim might have been a buyer. Or a seller." "Or neither." Quinn turned the compass over. The back was engraved with initials—S.M.—and a date from eight years ago. "This belonged to someone. Someone who kept it for a long time before our victim ended up with it." She walked the perimeter of the blood circles, counting. Seven rings. The innermost touched the victim's body at exactly the wound site. The outermost extended three feet in every direction, its edge perfectly round despite the irregular surface of the tile. "The responding officers said the tip came with a token number." Quinn didn't look up from the pattern. "The tokens are personalized, aren't they? Individual to each holder?" Eva nodded. "They're bound to the person who receives them. You can't use someone else's token." "Then either our anonymous caller was already authorized to access this place, or they had help from someone who was." Quinn's torch beam found something in the grout between tiles—a smear of chalk, white against grey, forming the edge of a symbol that continued beneath the blood. "Someone drew on the floor before the killing. The blood covered it, but not completely." She dropped to one knee, ignoring the way the cold seeped through her trousers. The chalk marks extended under the first ring of blood, looping into curves and angles that matched the sigils on the compass face. A prepared space. A ritual stage. "Ms. Kowalski. In your research, these binding circles—do they require the victim to be willing?" Eva's face went pale beneath her freckles. "The texts suggest the sacrifice must be offered, not taken. The blood has to flow voluntarily for the binding to hold." Quinn looked at the body again. No defensive wounds. No sign of struggle. No evidence of restraint or coercion. A man in his sixties had walked into an abandoned station, allowed someone to draw symbols on the floor around him, and then stood perfectly still while a blade pierced his heart. "He came here to die." "That's quite a leap, Detective." Eva's voice carried an edge of something that might have been fear or might have been warning. "The evidence could support other interpretations." "Such as?" "He could have been drugged. Hypnotized. Threatened with harm to someone he loved." Eva clutched her satchel again, her nervous habit returning in force. "There are compounds sold at the market that can make a person compliant. Substances that don't show up in standard toxicology." "You seem very familiar with what's sold here." The silence stretched between them. Eva's green eyes held Quinn's gaze, and something passed across her freckled face—a calculation, a decision. "I study these things, Detective. It's my job to know what exists in the spaces between what's normal and what's not." She took a breath. "The museum doesn't just archive old scrolls and broken pottery. We track artifacts that move through channels like this market. We try to keep the dangerous ones out of circulation." "And this compass? Is it dangerous?" Eva reached toward the brass device in Quinn's hand, then stopped herself. "It finds things. Rifts. Openings between one place and another. In the wrong hands, it could lead someone to weak points in the fabric of—" She stopped, tucking her hair behind her ear. "In the structure of things." Quinn turned the compass over again. The needle still pointed toward the tunnel, unwavering despite her movement. Whatever it had locked onto, the bearing remained constant. "The victim knew what this was. He was holding it when he died—not dropped it, not had it placed in his hand afterward. He gripped it." She held up the dead man's fingers, showing Eva the indentations in his palm. "He was using it for something when he was killed. Or perhaps because he was killed." "You think the murderer wanted the compass?" "I think the murderer wanted what the compass could find." Quinn stood, her sharp jaw set in a line that her former partner would have recognized. The expression that meant she'd caught a scent and wouldn't let go until she'd tracked it to ground. "The blood circles are a cage. The victim is the lock. And this—" She held up the compass. "—this is the key that opens whatever they were trying to contain." Eva's face went very still. "Detective Quinn, if you're right, then whoever did this isn't finished. The binding would only hold until—" "Until what?" "Until someone breaks the circle. Until the blood dries and loses its potency. Until—" Eva looked at the forensic lights, at the officers who had been walking back and forth across the platform for hours. "Until someone disturbs the pattern." Quinn's gaze dropped to the blood rings. The outermost circle was smeared near the victim's feet. Boot prints tracked through the red—constables, techs, herself. They'd been contaminating the scene since the moment they arrived. "How long does the binding hold with a broken circle?" Eva's voice was barely audible. "It doesn't." The compass needle swung wildly in Quinn's palm. The brass grew warm, then hot, then burning against her skin. She dropped it with a curse, and it clattered to the tiles still spinning, its etched face catching the light in ways that made the sigils seem to writhe. In the tunnel mouth at the platform's end, something moved in the darkness. Something that didn't quite have a shape but definitely had a presence—a pressure against Quinn's ears, a thickness in the air that made breathing feel like swallowing stone. "Everyone out." Quinn's voice cracked across the station like a whip. "Now. Move." The constables didn't argue. They ran for the service ladder, their boots pounding against tile, their torches swinging wild arcs of light across the walls. Eva grabbed her satchel and sprinted after them, her red curls streaming behind her. Quinn stayed. Her hand found her weapon, though some instinct told her it would be useless against whatever was gathering in that tunnel. The compass lay at her feet, its needle now pointed directly at her chest. The darkness at the platform's end began to take form. Edges emerged from shadow—angles that didn't follow geometry as she understood it, surfaces that seemed to fold in on themselves without ever reaching a center. And in what might have been its core, Quinn saw something that looked almost like eyes. Almost like recognition. Almost like hunger. She backed toward the ladder, one step at a time, her torch beam trembling against the advancing shape. Whatever her victim had helped cage, it was free now. And it remembered the taste of sacrifice.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.774
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1981
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count2
4
adverb"completely"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"quickly"
1"precisely"
2"gently"
3"perfectly"
4"completely"
5"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1981
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"pumping"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"the last thing"
count1
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"structure"
count1
11
word"unwavering"
count1
12
word"pounding"
count1
13
word"streaming"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"measured"
2"tension"
3"pumping"
4"whisper"
5"the last thing"
6"etched"
7"standard"
8"familiar"
9"silence"
10"structure"
11"unwavering"
12"pounding"
13"streaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1959
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1382
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Quinn25
Camden1
High1
Street1
Tube1
London1
Kowalski1
Eva20
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Kowalski"
2"Eva"
3"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"London"
globalScore0.596
windowScore0.5
68.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn looked at them directly"
1"quite have a shape but definitely had a presence—a pressure against Quinn's ears, a thickness in the air that made breathing feel like swallowing stone"
2"surfaces that seemed to fold in on themselves without ever reaching a center"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1959
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean29.68
std19.5
cv0.657
sampleLengths
055
144
22
342
415
526
644
74
840
966
103
1146
1251
1318
142
1534
1640
173
1846
194
2021
2160
2235
2344
2411
252
2626
2751
2834
2938
3041
3128
3216
3362
3443
3515
3628
3751
385
3928
402
4145
428
4321
4455
456
4650
4726
4856
497
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences120
matches
0"was frozen"
1"been arranged"
2"were curled"
3"was engraved"
4"was smeared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs227
matches
0"were trying"
1"was gathering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences156
ratio0.09
matches
0"The air tasted of rust and something else—something that reminded her of the ozone tang before a lightning strike."
1"\"—unusual artifacts. The responding officers found something they couldn't identify.\""
2"She'd learned to read death like other people read newspapers—quickly, efficiently, without letting the headlines settle into her bones."
3"The nearest constable—young, barely out of training—swallowed hard."
4"The timepiece had been Morris's—the last thing she'd taken from his desk after they'd closed the case file on his death three years ago."
5"A compass rolled into his palm—small, tarnished green around the edges, its face etched with symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn looked at them directly."
6"\"—it hosts a kind of exchange. Goods and services that don't appear in any catalog.\""
7"The back was engraved with initials—S.M.—and a date from eight years ago."
8"\"Then either our anonymous caller was already authorized to access this place, or they had help from someone who was.\" Quinn's torch beam found something in the grout between tiles—a smear of chalk, white against grey, forming the edge of a symbol that continued beneath the blood."
9"Eva's green eyes held Quinn's gaze, and something passed across her freckled face—a calculation, a decision."
10"\"—this is the key that opens whatever they were trying to contain.\""
11"Boot prints tracked through the red—constables, techs, herself."
12"Something that didn't quite have a shape but definitely had a presence—a pressure against Quinn's ears, a thickness in the air that made breathing feel like swallowing stone."
13"Edges emerged from shadow—angles that didn't follow geometry as she understood it, surfaces that seemed to fold in on themselves without ever reaching a center."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount719
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white against grey, forming"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.022253129346314324
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005563282336578581
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean12.56
std8.49
cv0.676
sampleLengths
016
117
212
310
47
518
619
72
814
914
1014
119
126
1316
1410
1515
1615
174
1810
194
206
2110
2219
235
2422
2525
264
2715
283
298
3026
3112
3212
3311
341
352
3614
3711
3815
393
402
4112
4222
438
4411
455
4616
473
4815
4931
54.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners60
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"Almost like recognition."
1"Almost like hunger."
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences112
matches
0"Her torch beam swept across"
1"She clutched her worn leather"
2"She'd learned to read death"
3"His eyes were open."
4"His mouth was frozen in"
5"He gestured toward the ceiling"
6"He'd stood here and let"
7"She trailed off, her green"
8"She'd never believed those words,"
9"His fingers were curled around"
10"It pointed toward the far"
11"She walked the perimeter of"
12"She dropped to one knee,"
13"She took a breath"
14"She stopped, tucking her hair"
15"She held up the dead"
16"She held up the compass"
17"They'd been contaminating the scene"
18"She dropped it with a"
19"They ran for the service"
ratio0.196
35.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences112
matches
0"The bone token felt cold"
1"An entire Tube station, swallowed"
2"Her torch beam swept across"
3"Victorian tile work, cracked and"
4"The air tasted of rust"
5"Eva Kowalski emerged from the"
6"The young woman's round glasses"
7"She clutched her worn leather"
8"Quinn kept her voice flat"
9"Eva tucked a curl of"
10"\"—unusual artifacts. The responding officers"
11"Quinn swept past her toward"
12"None of them spoke."
13"None of them looked at"
14"The body was wrong."
15"Quinn had seen hundreds of"
16"Stabbings, shootings, the occasional jumper"
17"She'd learned to read death"
18"A man in his sixties,"
19"The liquid spread in perfect"
ratio0.848
44.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Now that Eva had named"
ratio0.009
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The air tasted of rust and something else—something that reminded her of the ozone tang before a lightning strike."
1"Stabbings, shootings, the occasional jumper who'd chosen the wrong bridge."
2"A man in his sixties, well-dressed, grey suit now stained dark with blood that had pooled beneath him in an impossible pattern."
3"The liquid spread in perfect concentric circles, each ring precisely two inches from the last, as if something had measured the distance with architectural care…"
4"A compass rolled into his palm—small, tarnished green around the edges, its face etched with symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn looked at them directly."
5"She dropped it with a curse, and it clattered to the tiles still spinning, its etched face catching the light in ways that made the sigils seem to writhe."
6"Something that didn't quite have a shape but definitely had a presence—a pressure against Quinn's ears, a thickness in the air that made breathing feel like swa…"
7"They ran for the service ladder, their boots pounding against tile, their torches swinging wild arcs of light across the walls."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva continued, words tumbling faster now"
1"Eva clutched, her nervous habit returning in force"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva breathed (breathe)"
1"Eva continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.065
80.6238%