| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.387 | | leniency | 0.774 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1981 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "completely" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1981 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "pumping" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "the last thing" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "standard" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "structure" | | 11 | "unwavering" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "streaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 156 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1959 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1382 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 25 | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | London | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 20 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Kowalski" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.596 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 68.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn looked at them directly" | | 1 | "quite have a shape but definitely had a presence—a pressure against Quinn's ears, a thickness in the air that made breathing feel like swallowing stone" | | 2 | "surfaces that seemed to fold in on themselves without ever reaching a center" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1959 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 66 | | mean | 29.68 | | std | 19.5 | | cv | 0.657 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 62 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 51 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 55 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 50 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 56 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "was frozen" | | 1 | "been arranged" | | 2 | "were curled" | | 3 | "was engraved" | | 4 | "was smeared" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 227 | | matches | | 0 | "were trying" | | 1 | "was gathering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 156 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of rust and something else—something that reminded her of the ozone tang before a lightning strike." | | 1 | "\"—unusual artifacts. The responding officers found something they couldn't identify.\"" | | 2 | "She'd learned to read death like other people read newspapers—quickly, efficiently, without letting the headlines settle into her bones." | | 3 | "The nearest constable—young, barely out of training—swallowed hard." | | 4 | "The timepiece had been Morris's—the last thing she'd taken from his desk after they'd closed the case file on his death three years ago." | | 5 | "A compass rolled into his palm—small, tarnished green around the edges, its face etched with symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn looked at them directly." | | 6 | "\"—it hosts a kind of exchange. Goods and services that don't appear in any catalog.\"" | | 7 | "The back was engraved with initials—S.M.—and a date from eight years ago." | | 8 | "\"Then either our anonymous caller was already authorized to access this place, or they had help from someone who was.\" Quinn's torch beam found something in the grout between tiles—a smear of chalk, white against grey, forming the edge of a symbol that continued beneath the blood." | | 9 | "Eva's green eyes held Quinn's gaze, and something passed across her freckled face—a calculation, a decision." | | 10 | "\"—this is the key that opens whatever they were trying to contain.\"" | | 11 | "Boot prints tracked through the red—constables, techs, herself." | | 12 | "Something that didn't quite have a shape but definitely had a presence—a pressure against Quinn's ears, a thickness in the air that made breathing feel like swallowing stone." | | 13 | "Edges emerged from shadow—angles that didn't follow geometry as she understood it, surfaces that seemed to fold in on themselves without ever reaching a center." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 719 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "white against grey, forming" |
| | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.022253129346314324 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005563282336578581 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 156 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 156 | | mean | 12.56 | | std | 8.49 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 54.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.38461538461538464 | | totalSentences | 156 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost like recognition." | | 1 | "Almost like hunger." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch beam swept across" | | 1 | "She clutched her worn leather" | | 2 | "She'd learned to read death" | | 3 | "His eyes were open." | | 4 | "His mouth was frozen in" | | 5 | "He gestured toward the ceiling" | | 6 | "He'd stood here and let" | | 7 | "She trailed off, her green" | | 8 | "She'd never believed those words," | | 9 | "His fingers were curled around" | | 10 | "It pointed toward the far" | | 11 | "She walked the perimeter of" | | 12 | "She dropped to one knee," | | 13 | "She took a breath" | | 14 | "She stopped, tucking her hair" | | 15 | "She held up the dead" | | 16 | "She held up the compass" | | 17 | "They'd been contaminating the scene" | | 18 | "She dropped it with a" | | 19 | "They ran for the service" |
| | ratio | 0.196 | |
| 35.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The bone token felt cold" | | 1 | "An entire Tube station, swallowed" | | 2 | "Her torch beam swept across" | | 3 | "Victorian tile work, cracked and" | | 4 | "The air tasted of rust" | | 5 | "Eva Kowalski emerged from the" | | 6 | "The young woman's round glasses" | | 7 | "She clutched her worn leather" | | 8 | "Quinn kept her voice flat" | | 9 | "Eva tucked a curl of" | | 10 | "\"—unusual artifacts. The responding officers" | | 11 | "Quinn swept past her toward" | | 12 | "None of them spoke." | | 13 | "None of them looked at" | | 14 | "The body was wrong." | | 15 | "Quinn had seen hundreds of" | | 16 | "Stabbings, shootings, the occasional jumper" | | 17 | "She'd learned to read death" | | 18 | "A man in his sixties," | | 19 | "The liquid spread in perfect" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 44.64% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Now that Eva had named" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 44.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of rust and something else—something that reminded her of the ozone tang before a lightning strike." | | 1 | "Stabbings, shootings, the occasional jumper who'd chosen the wrong bridge." | | 2 | "A man in his sixties, well-dressed, grey suit now stained dark with blood that had pooled beneath him in an impossible pattern." | | 3 | "The liquid spread in perfect concentric circles, each ring precisely two inches from the last, as if something had measured the distance with architectural care…" | | 4 | "A compass rolled into his palm—small, tarnished green around the edges, its face etched with symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn looked at them directly." | | 5 | "She dropped it with a curse, and it clattered to the tiles still spinning, its etched face catching the light in ways that made the sigils seem to writhe." | | 6 | "Something that didn't quite have a shape but definitely had a presence—a pressure against Quinn's ears, a thickness in the air that made breathing feel like swa…" | | 7 | "They ran for the service ladder, their boots pounding against tile, their torches swinging wild arcs of light across the walls." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva continued, words tumbling faster now" | | 1 | "Eva clutched, her nervous habit returning in force" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Eva continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.032 | | leniency | 0.065 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |