| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said firmly [firmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 84.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1281 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1281 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "firmly" | | 2 | "furrowed" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "down her spine" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "couldn't help but wonder" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "e with panic" | | 1 | "felt a chill" |
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| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1265 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 941 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 17 | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Tomás | 5 | | Morris | 1 | | Detective | 2 | | Harlow | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Harlow" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.597 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "eyes that seemed to see right through her" | | 1 | "not quite human" | | 2 | "felt like a trap, but she had no choice" | | 3 | "voices that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 4 | "looked like an abandoned Tube station" | | 5 | "surface that seemed to hold a thousand secrets in its depths" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1265 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.65% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 33.29 | | std | 16.37 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 56 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 64 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was talking" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "Her quarry—a man in a dark hoodie—glanced back over his shoulder, his eyes wide with panic." | | 1 | "This wasn't just any bar—she'd been tracking leads here for weeks." | | 2 | "The air was thick with the smell of stale beer and something else—something ancient and earthy that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up." | | 3 | "There was something about him that set off alarm bells in her mind—something not quite human." | | 4 | "She'd heard rumors of the Veil Market—a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon." | | 5 | "He was talking animatedly with a man who could only be described as a walking corpse—gray skin stretched tight over bones, eyes milky and unseeing." | | 6 | "But something in Tomás's eyes—a desperate sincerity—made her pause." | | 7 | "She'd seen things in her years on the force—things that couldn't be explained by logic or science." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 954 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.031446540880503145 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013626834381551363 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 13.46 | | std | 7.94 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 65.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4148936170212766 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 87.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he veered sharply into" | | 1 | "Then he nodded towards a" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 83.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Her quarry—a man in a" | | 1 | "She skidded around the corner," | | 2 | "She paused, catching her breath." | | 3 | "Her radio crackled to life." | | 4 | "She pressed the transmit button." | | 5 | "She'd been a detective for" | | 6 | "She knew how to handle" | | 7 | "He was tall and lean," | | 8 | "she said, flashing her badge" | | 9 | "She needed to catch this" | | 10 | "she said firmly" | | 11 | "He moved to the bookshelf" | | 12 | "She'd heard rumors of the" | | 13 | "It seemed she'd stumbled right" | | 14 | "He was talking animatedly with" | | 15 | "She spun, ready to strike," | | 16 | "he said, his voice low" | | 17 | "He gestured to the creatures" | | 18 | "she asked, lowering her weapon" | | 19 | "She'd seen things in her" |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 58.68% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Quinn's footsteps pounded against" | | 1 | "Her quarry—a man in a" | | 2 | "Quinn shouted, her voice barely" | | 3 | "The man didn't slow." | | 4 | "Quinn followed, her own boots" | | 5 | "She skidded around the corner," | | 6 | "Quinn's hand instinctively went to" | | 7 | "The faded sign above read" | | 8 | "She paused, catching her breath." | | 9 | "This wasn't just any bar—she'd" | | 10 | "The Raven's Nest was rumored" | | 11 | "Her radio crackled to life." | | 12 | "She pressed the transmit button." | | 13 | "She'd been a detective for" | | 14 | "She knew how to handle" | | 15 | "The air was thick with" | | 16 | "The bar was nearly empty" | | 17 | "a voice drawled from behind" | | 18 | "Quinn turned to see a" | | 19 | "He was tall and lean," |
| | ratio | 0.803 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "At the bottom of the stairs, she found herself in a cavernous space that looked like an abandoned Tube station." | | 1 | "She'd heard rumors of the Veil Market—a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon." | | 2 | "Creatures that could only exist in nightmares haggled with cloaked figures over strange artifacts." | | 3 | "He was talking animatedly with a man who could only be described as a walking corpse—gray skin stretched tight over bones, eyes milky and unseeing." | | 4 | "She'd seen things in her years on the force—things that couldn't be explained by logic or science." | | 5 | "The rain had stopped by the time she emerged onto the street, leaving behind a glistening, reflective surface that seemed to hold a thousand secrets in its dept…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn shouted, her voice barely audible over the downpour" | | 1 | "he said, his voice low and urgent" | | 2 | "Quinn growled, trying to shake off his grip" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "she said, her voice rough" |
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| 42.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "a voice drawled (drawl)" | | 2 | "Quinn growled (growl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.321 | | leniency | 0.643 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.214 | |