Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX3GR6RQ2G2YA5C6EWDB5D

Run Details

Duration:
29.9s
Cost:
$0.005801
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed like broken teeth against a sky that possessed no stars. Aurora Carter stepped across the boundary, her boots sinking into soil that felt too soft, too yielding, as if the ground breathed beneath her weight. She had come to the Fae Grove because the Heartstone Pendant around her neck had begun to burn. Not the gentle warmth it offered near a Hel portal, but a searing heat that smelled of ozone and old blood. Silence hit her first. Not the quiet of a late-night park in Richmond, where distant traffic hummed or owls called to one another. This was a vacuum. The air stood still, heavy and thick, pressing against her eardrums until they popped. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, though she carried no food tonight. The Golden Empress restaurant felt a lifetime away, separated by more than just miles. Aurora moved toward the center of the clearing where wildflowers bloomed in unnatural profusion. Petals of electric blue and violent violet opened wide, facing a moon that hung too low and too large. The colors hurt her eyes. They seemed to vibrate, buzzing with a frequency that made her teeth ache. She checked her watch. The second hand ticked backward. Then it stopped. Then it spun wildly clockwise before freezing again. "Right," she whispered, her voice sounding thin, stripped of resonance. "Time behaves itself here." The pendant throbbed against her collarbone, a rhythmic pulse that matched the sudden, erratic beating of her own heart. The deep crimson gemstone cast a faint inner glow, illuminating the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The light didn't spread; it pooled, refusing to touch the darkness beyond a foot from her body. Something rustled in the tall grass to her left. Aurora froze. She turned her head slowly, keeping her shoulders square. The wildflowers swayed, though no wind touched her face. The movement rippled outward from a single point, a circle of flattening stems expanding like a stone dropped in water. But nothing stood there. "Who's there?" she called out. The question hung in the air, unanswered. The silence rushed back in, heavier than before. She took a step forward, her sensible shoes crunching on twigs that sounded like snapping bone. The noise seemed too loud, amplified to an uncomfortable degree. Every footfall echoed, not once, but twice, with the second echo arriving a fraction of a second too late and from the wrong direction. A twig snapped behind her. Aurora spun around. The space behind her remained empty, save for the towering oaks that marked the grove's edge. Their bark looked wet, glistening with a sap that resembled black tar. Branches twisted in shapes that suggested grasping fingers, contorted in eternal agony. She blinked, and for a heartbeat, the branches seemed closer than they had been moments ago. She rubbed her left wrist, the skin tingling where the scar lay. The pendant grew hotter. The silver chain bit into her neck. "You're not alone," a voice whispered. It came from directly inside her right ear. Aurora slapped a hand to her head, stumbling back. Her breath hitched in her throat. She scanned the perimeter, her bright blue eyes darting between the shadows. The darkness between the trees had deepened, becoming a solid wall of obsidian that swallowed the moonlight. "I know you're there," she said, her voice steadier this time. "Show yourself." The wildflowers turned their heads. Every single bloom rotated on its stem to face her. The petals curled inward, hiding their vibrant centers, forming tight, fist-like buds. A low hum began to rise from the ground, vibrating up through the soles of her shoes and into her shins. It sounded like chanting, but the words were garbled, spoken backwards by a hundred mouths at once. Shadows detached themselves from the base of the oak trees. They did not stretch toward the light; they crawled away from it, slithering across the grass like oil spills. They moved with a fluid intelligence, pooling together in the periphery of her vision. Whenever she looked directly at them, they froze, mimicking the shape of ordinary shrubbery or rocks. But the moment her gaze shifted, they lengthened, stretching tall and thin, reaching for her ankles. Aurora backed away from the encroaching dark, her heel catching on a root. She fell hard, the impact knocking the wind from her lungs. The earth felt cold now, leaching the warmth from her body. The pendant burned so intensely she could smell her own skin singeing. She scrambled to her feet, ignoring the pain in her knee. The humming grew louder, resolving into a distinct rhythm. *Thump-thump. Thump-thump.* It matched the pulse of the stone, but it also matched the sound of footsteps approaching from all sides. She heard breathing. Not her own. Shallow, wet inhalations came from the darkness to her left, synchronized with dry, rasping exhales from her right. The sounds circled her, tightening the noose. "Come out," she demanded, though her voice trembled. "I'm not afraid of parlor tricks." The moon above shifted. It didn't cloud over; it changed shape. The cratered surface rearranged itself, forming a crude approximation of a human face. The eyes of the moon opened, wide and unblinking, staring down at her with an expression of hungry curiosity. The light it cast turned sickly green, bathing the grove in a pallor that made the wildflowers look like rotting flesh. The shadows lunged. Aurora ducked, swinging her arm blindly. Her hand passed through the darkness, meeting no resistance, yet the air where the shadow had been felt icy cold, numbing her fingers instantly. The numbness spread up her arm, creeping toward her shoulder. She ran. There was no direction, no path. She simply fled the center of the clearing, aiming for the gap between two standing stones. The distance seemed to stretch with every stride. The oaks rushed toward her, their branches lowering like portcullises. She had to duck under a limb that felt like dried leather, rough and hot to the touch. Behind her, the grass parted. Something large moved through the flowers, crushing them flat without a sound. The sheer size of the disturbance suggested a beast, yet the silence of its approach suggested a ghost. Aurora's lungs burned. The air tasted metallic, like copper pennies held under the tongue. She glanced back. Nothing stood there. Just the green moonlight and the swaying grass. But the sense of presence intensified, a physical pressure against her spine, pushing her forward. She could feel eyes on the back of her neck, dozens of them, blinking in unison. She reached the boundary stones. The ancient oak bark felt real under her palms, rough and solid. She pushed against it, trying to force her way through the gap. The space between the stones had narrowed. What had been a wide archway now stood barely wide enough for a child to squeeze through. The pendant screamed against her chest, a high-pitched whine that drilled into her skull. The crimson light flared, blinding her for a second. When her vision cleared, the gap had vanished. The two stones stood fused together, a seamless wall of wood and stone. The breathing stopped. The humming ceased. Absolute silence returned, more terrifying than the noise. Aurora pressed her ear against the fused stones. On the other side, she heard the faint, distant sound of London traffic. A car horn honked. A dog barked. The normalcy of it taunted her. Something tapped on her shoulder. Light, delicate, like a finger made of air. She spun around, fists raised. The clearing stood empty. The wildflowers had bloomed again, their petals wide open, vibrating with that same sickening hum. The moon watched, its face unchanged. Then she saw them. Footprints. They appeared in the soft soil around her, materializing one by one. Small, bare feet. They circled her, growing closer with each new impression. The mud in the prints bubbled, dark and oily. The circle tightened until the toes of the invisible walker brushed against her own boots. Aurora held her breath. The air grew frigid. Frost spiderwebbed across the grass, creeping up her legs. The pendant went cold, dead weight against her skin. From the corner of her eye, a figure formed. It lacked definition, a blur of darker shadow against the night. It stood inches from her face. She could smell it now—damp earth, decaying leaves, and something sweet, like rotting fruit. The blur tilted its head. Aurora refused to look directly at it. She kept her eyes fixed on the moon, on the grotesque face staring down. Her hand drifted to her pocket, searching for anything sharp, anything solid. Her fingers closed around a set of keys, the metal cold and reassuring. The whisper came again, this time from everywhere at once, vibrating in her bones. *"Found you."* The wildflowers erupted. Not in growth, but in motion. They tore themselves from the earth, roots dangling like entrails, and floated into the air, surrounding her in a swirling vortex of color and decay. The petals fell away, revealing writhing centers that looked suspiciously like tiny, screaming mouths. Aurora backed up until her spine hit the fused stones. There was nowhere left to go. The circle of floating flowers closed in, blocking out the green moonlight, plunging her into a twilight of their own making. The shadows in the corners of the grove began to detach fully, rising up to take form, tall and spindly, with limbs that bent at too many joints. She gripped her keys tighter, the metal digging into her palm. The lead figure, the blur of shadow, stepped forward. It gained definition with every second. Long hair, matted and wet. Eyes that reflected no light. A mouth that stretched too wide across a face that seemed to slide off the skull. It raised a hand. The fingers were long, too long, ending in points that gleamed like obsidian. Aurora opened her mouth to scream, but no sound came out. The silence of the Fae Grove had finally claimed her voice. The creature leaned in, its breath washing over her face, smelling of graves and forgotten things. The pendant gave one final, weak pulse, then went dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1712
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"intensely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"intensely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1712
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"searing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count5
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count3
10
word"footfall"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"glistening"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"resolving"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
17
word"synchronized"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
19
word"sense of"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
21
word"normalcy"
count1
22
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"searing"
4"silence"
5"electric"
6"resonance"
7"throbbed"
8"rhythmic"
9"pulse"
10"footfall"
11"echoed"
12"echo"
13"glistening"
14"scanned"
15"resolving"
16"footsteps"
17"synchronized"
18"trembled"
19"sense of"
20"could feel"
21"normalcy"
22"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences162
matches(empty)
72.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences162
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1707
ratio0.002
matches
0"Thump-thump. Thump-thump."
1"\"Found you.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1681
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae2
Grove2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Richmond1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Aurora13
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Hel"
3"Richmond"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences120
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"sounded like snapping bone"
1"seemed closer than they had been moments ago"
2"sounded like chanting, but the words were"
3"felt like dried leather, rough and hot"
4"face that seemed to slide off the skull"
24.25% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.757
wordCount1707
matches
0"Not the gentle warmth it offered near a Hel portal, but a searing heat"
1"not once, but twice, with the second echo arriving a fraction of a second"
2"Not in growth, but in motion"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean31.61
std22.18
cv0.702
sampleLengths
080
169
251
320
414
554
69
744
85
915
1050
115
1259
1323
146
158
1644
1713
1865
1975
2047
2141
2231
2314
2464
253
2640
272
2858
2935
3017
3142
3253
3344
346
358
3634
375
388
3930
405
4148
4226
4340
445
4546
4614
472
4848
4965
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences162
matches
0"were garbled"
1"been felt"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs293
matches(empty)
74.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences166
ratio0.024
matches
0"The light didn't spread; it pooled, refusing to touch the darkness beyond a foot from her body."
1"They did not stretch toward the light; they crawled away from it, slithering across the grass like oil spills."
2"It didn't cloud over; it changed shape."
3"She could smell it now—damp earth, decaying leaves, and something sweet, like rotting fruit."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1686
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"thick, pressing against her"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"turned sickly green, bathing"
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.036773428232502965
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.009489916963226572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean10.28
std5.79
cv0.563
sampleLengths
016
125
218
321
44
519
64
714
814
914
1014
1119
125
1313
144
155
163
178
1810
194
2019
2118
2217
239
242
259
269
2720
284
295
307
318
3216
3310
3424
355
363
3716
3812
3912
4016
4112
424
437
446
458
469
476
4812
4917
33.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.26506024096385544
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences158
matches
0"Then it stopped."
1"Then it spun wildly clockwise"
2"Just the green moonlight and"
3"Light, delicate, like a finger"
4"Then she saw them."
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences158
matches
0"She had come to the"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"They seemed to vibrate, buzzing"
3"She checked her watch."
4"she whispered, her voice sounding"
5"She turned her head slowly,"
6"she called out"
7"She took a step forward,"
8"Their bark looked wet, glistening"
9"She blinked, and for a"
10"She rubbed her left wrist,"
11"It came from directly inside"
12"Her breath hitched in her"
13"She scanned the perimeter, her"
14"she said, her voice steadier"
15"It sounded like chanting, but"
16"They did not stretch toward"
17"They moved with a fluid"
18"She fell hard, the impact"
19"She scrambled to her feet,"
ratio0.272
35.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount134
totalSentences158
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter stepped across the"
2"She had come to the"
3"Silence hit her first."
4"This was a vacuum."
5"The air stood still, heavy"
6"She adjusted the strap of"
7"The Golden Empress restaurant felt"
8"Aurora moved toward the center"
9"Petals of electric blue and"
10"The colors hurt her eyes."
11"They seemed to vibrate, buzzing"
12"She checked her watch."
13"The second hand ticked backward."
14"she whispered, her voice sounding"
15"The pendant throbbed against her"
16"The deep crimson gemstone cast"
17"The light didn't spread; it"
18"Something rustled in the tall"
19"She turned her head slowly,"
ratio0.848
31.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"Whenever she looked directly at"
ratio0.006
45.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences81
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones loomed like broken teeth against a sky that possessed no stars."
1"Aurora Carter stepped across the boundary, her boots sinking into soil that felt too soft, too yielding, as if the ground breathed beneath her weight."
2"Not the gentle warmth it offered near a Hel portal, but a searing heat that smelled of ozone and old blood."
3"Petals of electric blue and violent violet opened wide, facing a moon that hung too low and too large."
4"The pendant throbbed against her collarbone, a rhythmic pulse that matched the sudden, erratic beating of her own heart."
5"Their bark looked wet, glistening with a sap that resembled black tar."
6"The darkness between the trees had deepened, becoming a solid wall of obsidian that swallowed the moonlight."
7"The light it cast turned sickly green, bathing the grove in a pallor that made the wildflowers look like rotting flesh."
8"She had to duck under a limb that felt like dried leather, rough and hot to the touch."
9"The pendant screamed against her chest, a high-pitched whine that drilled into her skull."
10"The petals fell away, revealing writhing centers that looked suspiciously like tiny, screaming mouths."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she whispered, her voice sounding thin, stripped of resonance"
1"she said, her voice steadier this time"
2"she demanded, though her voice trembled"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"a voice whispered (whisper)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.667
74.9738%