Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX3HZRW2JSV1H42NZFT62B

Run Details

Duration:
6.0s
Cost:
$0.000468
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly as Rory Carter pushed through the door, the weight of her delivery bag digging into her shoulder. The scent of stale beer and old wood hit her first—familiar, comforting in the way only places that had seen too much could be. She’d been avoiding this bar for months, but the rain had turned the streets into a slick mess, and the Nest was the closest dry spot between deliveries. She shook the water from her jacket, scanning the room. The usual crowd—regulars hunched over their drinks, a few tourists mistaking the place for something quaint. Then her gaze snagged on the man at the far end of the bar, his back to her, the slope of his shoulders unmistakable even after all these years. Silas. Her fingers twitched. The last time she’d seen him, he’d been whole—no limp, no silver threading his auburn hair, no quiet weight in the way he held himself. She’d been twenty, reckless, still believing the world owed her something. Now she was just another courier with a bruised past and a flat above a bar she couldn’t afford. She should’ve turned around. Should’ve slipped out before he noticed. But her feet carried her forward, the old pull of him too strong to ignore. The stool beside him creaked as she slid onto it. “You let this place go to hell, Si.” His head turned slowly, like he’d been expecting her. Hazel eyes, sharp as ever, locked onto hers. A beat of silence. Then, “Rory.” No surprise. No warmth. Just her name, flat and final, like a door closing. She flagged down the bartender—some new kid, all nervous energy—and ordered a whisky, neat. “Still running this dump, I see.” Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that might’ve been a laugh if he’d let it. “Still delivering takeaway, I see.” The bartender slid her drink across the counter. She took it, the glass cold against her palm. “Someone’s got to keep the city fed.” “And someone’s got to keep it drunk.” He tapped his signet ring against the rim of his own glass, a habit she remembered from years ago. “You look like shit.” She grinned, sharp and humourless. “You look like a man who’s been hit by a bus.” A muscle twitched in his jaw. “Close enough.” The silence between them stretched, thick with all the things they weren’t saying. The years. The distance. The way she’d left without a word, like a thief in the night. She swirled her whisky, the amber liquid catching the dim light. “Heard you got out.” “Heard you got in.” His voice was low, rough. “London suits you.” “Like a noose.” He didn’t smile. Didn’t react. Just watched her, like he was trying to match the girl he’d known with the woman in front of him. She wondered if he could see the cracks. “You ever think about going back?” he asked. “Cardiff?” She scoffed. “Not a chance.” “Not the city.” His fingers tightened around his glass. “The life.” The question hung between them, heavy as a blade. She knew what he meant. The old days. The thrill. The way they’d moved through the world like ghosts, untouchable. Before Evan. Before the flat above the bar. Before she’d learned the cost of playing with fire. She took a slow sip, the whisky burning its way down. “I’m not that girl anymore, Si.” “No.” His gaze dropped to her wrist, to the crescent scar peeking out from under her sleeve. “You’re not.” The air between them shifted, charged with something older than regret. She remembered the last time she’d seen him—his hands steady on her shoulders, his voice low in her ear. *You don’t have to do this.* But she had. And look where it got her. “You ever miss it?” she asked. He didn’t answer right away. Just stared into his drink like it held the answers. “Miss what?” “The rush. The lies. The way it made you feel alive.” His laugh was a dry, brittle thing. “I’m alive enough.” She wanted to press. Wanted to dig her fingers into the wound and see if it still bled. But the bartender chose that moment to slide a bowl of peanuts between them, breaking the tension. Silas reached for one, his movements deliberate, controlled. “You still see Eva?” The name hit her like a punch to the gut. “No.” “She asks about you.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “She shouldn’t.” “She’s your friend.” “Friends don’t drag you into their messes and then walk away.” Silas’s eyes flickered, something dark passing through them. “No. They don’t.” The weight of the unspoken pressed down on her. She could’ve asked. Could’ve demanded to know what he wasn’t saying. But some doors were better left closed. She finished her whisky in one swallow, the burn grounding her. “I should go.” He didn’t stop her. Didn’t reach out. Just watched as she slid off the stool, her boots thudding against the worn floorboards. “Rory.” She paused, her hand on the door. “You ever need anything—” “I won’t.” The rain had eased to a drizzle by the time she stepped outside, the neon sign casting a sickly glow over the pavement. She didn’t look back. Didn’t let herself wonder what might’ve been. Some ghosts were better left buried.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His fingers tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.056
94.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount902
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount902
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"comforting"
4"scanning"
5"silence"
6"warmth"
7"charged"
8"tension"
9"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords896
ratio0.01
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"You don’t have to do this."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount749
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Nest"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory2
Carter1
Nest2
Evan1
Silas4
Didn3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Nest"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount896
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean19.06
std16.48
cv0.864
sampleLengths
082
155
21
358
425
518
623
714
820
921
1024
1130
1216
138
1430
1515
1612
173
1833
198
206
2111
2246
2317
2419
2545
266
2717
2811
2910
3035
3112
3211
334
348
353
3611
3711
3827
3914
4022
411
427
434
442
4534
466
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
36.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs122
matches
0"weren’t saying"
1"was trying"
2"wasn’t saying"
10.58% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences108
ratio0.046
matches
0"The scent of stale beer and old wood hit her first—familiar, comforting in the way only places that had seen too much could be."
1"The usual crowd—regulars hunched over their drinks, a few tourists mistaking the place for something quaint."
2"The last time she’d seen him, he’d been whole—no limp, no silver threading his auburn hair, no quiet weight in the way he held himself."
3"She flagged down the bartender—some new kid, all nervous energy—and ordered a whisky, neat."
4"She remembered the last time she’d seen him—his hands steady on her shoulders, his voice low in her ear."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount755
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.030463576158940398
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005298013245033113
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean8.3
std6.54
cv0.789
sampleLengths
030
124
228
310
416
529
61
73
825
911
1019
114
126
1315
1410
158
169
178
184
192
202
212
2210
2314
246
2516
265
278
289
297
3026
314
325
3311
346
352
3613
372
382
3913
4011
414
429
433
443
453
462
4720
488
498
37.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3055555555555556
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences68
matches
0"Then her gaze snagged on"
1"Just her name, flat and"
2"Just watched her, like he"
3"Just stared into his drink"
4"Just watched as she slid"
ratio0.074
55.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences68
matches
0"She’d been avoiding this bar"
1"She shook the water from"
2"Her fingers twitched."
3"She’d been twenty, reckless, still"
4"She should’ve turned around."
5"His head turned slowly, like"
6"She flagged down the bartender—some"
7"She took it, the glass"
8"He tapped his signet ring"
9"She grinned, sharp and humourless."
10"She swirled her whisky, the"
11"His voice was low, rough"
12"He didn’t smile."
13"She wondered if he could"
14"His fingers tightened around his"
15"She knew what he meant."
16"She took a slow sip,"
17"His gaze dropped to her"
18"She remembered the last time"
19"*You don’t have to do"
ratio0.412
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences68
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The scent of stale beer"
2"She’d been avoiding this bar"
3"She shook the water from"
4"The usual crowd—regulars hunched over"
5"Her fingers twitched."
6"The last time she’d seen"
7"She’d been twenty, reckless, still"
8"She should’ve turned around."
9"The stool beside him creaked"
10"His head turned slowly, like"
11"Hazel eyes, sharp as ever,"
12"A beat of silence."
13"She flagged down the bartender—some"
14"Silas exhaled through his nose,"
15"The bartender slid her drink"
16"She took it, the glass"
17"He tapped his signet ring"
18"She grinned, sharp and humourless."
19"A muscle twitched in his"
ratio0.75
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Now she was just another"
1"Before the flat above the"
2"Before she’d learned the cost"
ratio0.044
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that might’ve been a laugh if he’d let it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.0585%