Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX3JG6637RBXDEQ0W4S0JX

Run Details

Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.006512
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came again, insistent, rattling the old door frame. It was too late for a delivery, too early for Eva. I cursed under my breath, already pulling the chain on the door. No one ever used the knocker unless they meant business. "Rory, darling, so good to see you." He stood in the hallway, framed by the dim glow of the landing light, his platinum blond hair slicked back as always. One amber eye gleamed, the other a fathomless black. A tailored charcoal suit, naturally. And the cane, ivory-handled, a silent threat. Lucien Moreau. The Frenchman. Last person I expected, or wanted, to see. Dread coiled in my stomach. "Lucien." My voice stayed flat. "What a surprise." "A pleasant one, I trust?" A faint smirk played on his lips. He stepped past me before I could even fully register the movement, letting himself in. A trace of expensive cologne, something smoky and sharp, filled my small living room. "What are you doing here?" I closed the door, three deadbolts clicking into place with a series of satisfying thuds. Old habits died hard. Or rather, old fears. He ran a gloved finger along the spine of a book on my cluttered shelf, an ancient Welsh tome on herbal remedies. "Straight to business, my dear? No pleasantries?" "We're long past pleasantries, aren't we?" I folded my arms, the small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist hidden by my sleeve. "I thought we agreed our paths diverged." "A temporary divergence, it seems." He turned, his gaze sweeping over the cramped room, lingering on the overflowing bookshelves, the half-empty mug of tea on the coffee table. His eyes held a knowing glint when they landed on the sketchpad I’d left open, a charcoal rendering of a snarling demon I’d seen in a nightmare. "Get to the point, Lucien." He straightened, leaning lightly on his cane. "I require your unique talents, Rory." "My unique talents are delivering takeaway for Yu-Fei and avoiding men in expensive suits." "A formidable skill set, I'm sure." He took another step closer, and for a moment, the air thickened with unspoken history. The memory of his touch, the dangerous glint in his eyes when he’d looked at me, always felt too real despite my best efforts to bury it. "But I speak of your other gifts. The ones you so carefully conceal." "I don't know what you're talking about." A lie. A clumsy one. He always saw through them. "Don't you?" He tilted his head. "Malphora." The name hit me like a physical blow. The demon name. The one I never used, never acknowledged, hardly even thought. My breath hitched. He had no right. "How did you-" "My resources are, as ever, extensive." He moved to the small window, his back to me, gazing out at the flickering neon sign of Silas's bar below. "A mutual acquaintance requires assistance. Something... unusual has been stolen." "I told you, I'm out." My voice was firmer now, a desperate kind of resolve. "After... everything." "Everything?" He turned, his expression unreadable. "You speak of the incident with the succubus coven? Or perhaps the rather unfortunate run-in with that rogue incubus?" A faint smile touched his lips. "You handled yourself admirably, as always." "I handled myself by almost dying. Multiple times. I prefer a life where the biggest threat is a forgotten side order of chips." "A tranquil existence, I'm sure." He paused, his gaze fixed on mine, and for a fleeting second, the carefully constructed facade cracked. A flash of something raw, something almost possessive, flickered in his heterochromatic eyes. "But not one that truly suits you, Laila." He switched to my other old name, the one only a handful knew. It was a calculated move, designed to disarm, to strip away my defenses. And it worked. A shiver ran down my spine. "What's been stolen?" I asked, hating myself for giving in, for even considering it. But the curiosity, an insatiable beast, clawed its way to the surface. Old habits, indeed. "A rather potent artefact." He pushed off the window sill, the soft clink of his cane against the floor the only sound in the room. "One that could unravel quite a few delicate agreements if it falls into the wrong hands." "What kind of artefact?" "A minor trinket, to some. A major catastrophe, to others." He reached into the inner pocket of his jacket, pulling out a slim, polished wood box. No bigger than my palm. He held it out. "It was lost from my client's collection last night." I eyed the box. It was exquisite, clearly ancient, with intricate silver filigree depicting intertwining serpents. "And you want me to find it?" "Naturally." He opened the box. Inside, on a bed of dark velvet, lay a single, obsidian tear-shaped pendant, glinting with an internal, malevolent light. It radiated a cold, ancient power that prickled my skin, raising goosebumps on my arms. "That's no 'minor trinket'." My voice was tight. "That's a piece of raw corrupted essence." "Indeed. A rather exquisite one, wouldn't you agree?" He closed the box with a soft click. "The client is... impatient. And highly influential." "You want me to track something powered by concentrated dark magic." "Given your... inherent connection to such things, I thought you'd be uniquely qualified." His eyes held mine, challenging, daring. He knew my weaknesses, my past, the dangerous allure of the power that still thrummed beneath my cool exterior. "What's in it for me?" I knew it was a losing battle. The thrill, the defiance, the impossible challenge—it was a siren song I’d always struggled to resist. "Besides the satisfaction of preventing a supernatural incident of significant magnitude?" He offered a sly, knowing smile. "Name your price. Within reason, of course." My gaze hardened. "No games, Lucien. Not this time. Either you tell me everything, or you can take your bloody artefact and find another human conduit for your demon schemes." His smile faded, replaced by something more serious, almost regretful. "Very well." He began to describe the client, the nature of the theft, the potential ramifications. His voice, usually smooth and detached, held an undertone of urgency. The artefact, a fragment of a forgotten god's sorrow, had the power to amplify the darkest emotions, twisting them into volatile, uncontrollable forces. It could ignite riots, turn neighbours into enemies, shatter ancient treaties merely by its proximity. As he spoke, detailing the potential chaos, the reality of the situation solidified. This wasn’t just a job; it was a matter of preventing widespread disaster. And for all my attempts to escape it, the underworld still had its hooks in me. "Where do we start?" I asked, ignoring the rush of adrenaline already coursing through my veins. "I had a feeling you'd see reason." He retrieved a small, silver flask from his jacket. "A celebratory drink?" "I'd rather you tell me who the thief is." "They say it was a desperate fey, seeking to trade it for passage to another realm." He took a sip, his gaze still on me. "But I suspect a deeper game is at play." "A deeper game." I walked past him, heading towards the kitchen, my movements stiff, almost automatic. I needed a moment to process, to steel myself for the inevitable. The aroma of brewing coffee filled the small flat. "Of course, there is. There always is with you." "Indeed." His voice followed me. "Always." My hands trembled slightly as I poured water into the kettle. The familiar scent of coffee grounded me, if only for a second. The lure of the supernatural had pulled me back in, just as he knew it would. He had always been good at knowing. I turned, coffee mug in hand, just as he was examining a cracked teacup on the counter. His expression was one of mild distaste. "You're quite certain you're prepared for this, Rory?" His tone was almost gentle, a stark contrast to his usual sharpness. "It will not be a pleasant journey." "I don't have a choice, do I?" I looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the familiar flicker of concern behind his guarded eyes. He was playing a dangerous game, one I was now unwillingly a part of once more. "You're not leaving me much of one." "Perhaps." His gaze intensified. "Or perhaps you never stopped wanting it." "Tell me what you know about this fey." I ignored his insinuation, the way his words tangled with the inconvenient truth buried deep within me. "Every single detail." He reached into his jacket again, pulling out a slim, leather-bound notebook. "Of course. Let's begin with the incident location." He flipped it open, the pages filled with elegant, precise script. "An abandoned warehouse in Wapping. Quite quaint." I stared at the obsidian pendant box, still on the coffee table. The faint coldness it emanated seemed to draw every bit of heat from the room. My old life had just walked back in, holding a piece of a weeping god, and there was no turning away now.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:13:28.974Z" 2/19/2026, 12:13:28 PM
model"google/gemini-2.5-flash"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency330
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time12907
tokens_prompt4556
tokens_completion2300
native_tokens_prompt4440
native_tokens_completion2072
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"STOP"
usage0.006512
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"16c01e26-9b91-4d22-b487-ed35634b017d"
is_byokfalse
latency330
model_permaslug"google/gemini-2.5-flash"
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771503208-mgFv4jZ9n9Kqv8FWFj45"
upstream_id(null)
total_cost0.006512
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Google AI Studio"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.433
leniency0.866
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1516
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"carefully"
2"truly"
3"very"
4"slightly"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1516
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"glint"
count2
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"resolve"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"fleeting"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"facade"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"calculated"
count1
10
word"down my spine"
count1
11
word"unravel"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"velvet"
count1
14
word"glinting"
count1
15
word"potential"
count2
16
word"trembled"
count1
17
word"familiar"
count2
18
word"stark"
count1
19
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"glint"
2"unspoken"
3"resolve"
4"unreadable"
5"fleeting"
6"constructed"
7"facade"
8"flickered"
9"calculated"
10"down my spine"
11"unravel"
12"intricate"
13"velvet"
14"glinting"
15"potential"
16"trembled"
17"familiar"
18"stark"
19"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down my spine"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1508
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount1039
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.19
worstName"Old"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Old"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Old2
Welsh1
Silas1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1508
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean29
std16.38
cv0.565
sampleLengths
043
17
260
38
441
528
629
729
855
95
1013
1114
1261
1317
147
1528
163
1737
1817
1937
2023
2143
2235
2329
2441
254
2644
2723
2839
2915
3023
3111
3238
3328
3424
3530
3675
3742
3816
3919
409
4134
4246
436
4446
4524
4627
4749
4811
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was examining"
1"was playing"
98.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences130
ratio0.015
matches
0"The thrill, the defiance, the impossible challenge—it was a siren song I’d always struggled to resist."
1"This wasn’t just a job; it was a matter of preventing widespread disaster."
85.32% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1045
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"slim, leather-bound notebook."
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.0430622009569378
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.015311004784688996
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean11.6
std7.08
cv0.611
sampleLengths
010
111
212
310
47
522
69
75
87
92
102
118
125
135
143
1512
1615
1714
1820
194
204
2122
227
2322
247
2528
2627
275
287
296
3014
3121
3227
3313
349
353
365
376
381
398
403
4110
423
434
443
4527
4610
4715
482
496
53.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences93
matches
0"It was too late for"
1"I cursed under my breath,"
2"He stood in the hallway,"
3"My voice stayed flat"
4"He stepped past me before"
5"I closed the door, three"
6"He ran a gloved finger"
7"I folded my arms, the"
8"He turned, his gaze sweeping"
9"His eyes held a knowing"
10"He straightened, leaning lightly on"
11"He took another step closer,"
12"He always saw through them."
13"He tilted his head"
14"My breath hitched."
15"He had no right."
16"He moved to the small"
17"My voice was firmer now,"
18"He turned, his expression unreadable"
19"He paused, his gaze fixed"
ratio0.645
29.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences93
matches
0"The knock came again, insistent,"
1"It was too late for"
2"I cursed under my breath,"
3"He stood in the hallway,"
4"A tailored charcoal suit, naturally."
5"Dread coiled in my stomach."
6"My voice stayed flat"
7"A faint smirk played on"
8"He stepped past me before"
9"A trace of expensive cologne,"
10"I closed the door, three"
11"He ran a gloved finger"
12"I folded my arms, the"
13"He turned, his gaze sweeping"
14"His eyes held a knowing"
15"He straightened, leaning lightly on"
16"He took another step closer,"
17"The memory of his touch,"
18"A clumsy one."
19"He always saw through them."
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It radiated a cold, ancient power that prickled my skin, raising goosebumps on my arms."
56.03% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He turned, his expression unreadable"
1"He began, the nature of the theft, the potential ramifications"
2"He took, his gaze still on me"
3"He flipped, the pages filled with elegant, precise script"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He began (begin)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.09
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.03
80.8094%