| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The voice curled around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 91.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1112 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1112 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "fractured" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 182 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1085 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "He" | | 2 | "Evan." | | 3 | "heard" | | 4 | "answered" | | 5 | "moved" | | 6 | "burst" | | 7 | "breathe" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 984 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Evan | 3 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.922 | | wordCount | 1085 | | matches | | 0 | "not a pulse, but a *burst* of light, like a dying star" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 96 | | mean | 11.3 | | std | 11.13 | | cv | 0.985 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | |
| 80.95% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t listening" | | 1 | "were watching" | | 2 | "was waking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 182 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the threshold, backpack slung low, delivery bag still slung across her chest—force of habit." | | 1 | "A dog’s bark echoed—sharp, panicked—then cut off mid-yelp." | | 2 | "But the air tasted wrong—coppery, sweet at the back of the throat, like old flowers left to rot in a vase." | | 3 | "She counted them—seventy-three, seventy-four—because counting meant she wasn’t listening." | | 4 | "For a heartbeat, she saw a figure—tall, impossibly thin, shoulders hunched like a rook’s wings." | | 5 | "A wildflower bloomed at her feet—purple, with petals like curled fingers." | | 6 | "Fifty yards ahead, the standing stones rose from the mist—seven oaks, petrified, bark blackened as if burned long ago." | | 7 | "Flowers spilled across the clearing—crocus, foxglove, nightshade—blossoming in reckless abundance." | | 8 | "Every bloom, every stem—it bent toward her, like sunflowers tracking a dying sun." | | 9 | "It was something older—something that had existed before language, before names." | | 10 | "The gem flared crimson—a heartbeat of light in the dark." | | 11 | "And then—" | | 12 | "Then—a rustle." | | 13 | "Its face—" | | 14 | "—wasn’t." | | 15 | "It held something in its hand—a silver pocket knife, open." | | 16 | "The pendant flared again—hot now, almost scalding." | | 17 | "One reached out—a small, grey hand—and touched the scar on her wrist." | | 18 | "The flowers shrieked—a chorus of voices, high and broken, torn from petals and stems." | | 19 | "Blood welled—dark, slow." | | 20 | "And the Heartstone pendant flared—not a pulse, but a *burst* of light, like a dying star." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1011 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "over frost-laced leaves," |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03956478733926805 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003956478733926805 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 182 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 182 | | mean | 5.96 | | std | 4.93 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 45.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.3425414364640884 | | totalSentences | 181 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a faint pulse, like" | | 1 | "Just the thick, syrupy quiet" | | 2 | "Then came the whisper of" | | 3 | "Then it was gone." | | 4 | "Then came the voice." | | 5 | "Then, from the shadows:" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 98.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "It resisted, warped by damp" | | 1 | "She stepped over the threshold," | | 2 | "She knew the way." | | 3 | "She touched it through her" | | 4 | "It hadn’t lied yet." | | 5 | "She turned her head slowly." | | 6 | "Her boots crunched over frost-laced" | | 7 | "She counted them—seventy—three, seventy-four-because counting" | | 8 | "She swallowed, throat dry as" | | 9 | "She didn’t touch it." | | 10 | "Their branches twisted skyward, fused" | | 11 | "She crossed it." | | 12 | "Her watch had stopped." | | 13 | "Her breath came slow, deliberate," | | 14 | "She stepped forward." | | 15 | "Her stomach knotted." | | 16 | "She pulled off her glove" | | 17 | "She felt a pulse in" | | 18 | "It wasn’t sung." | | 19 | "It wasn’t spoken." |
| | ratio | 0.303 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The key turned in the" | | 1 | "Aurora yanked the chain free" | | 2 | "It resisted, warped by damp" | | 3 | "She stepped over the threshold," | | 4 | "The Grove was deeper in," | | 5 | "She knew the way." | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed against" | | 7 | "She touched it through her" | | 8 | "It hadn’t lied yet." | | 9 | "A dog’s bark echoed—sharp, panicked—then" | | 10 | "She turned her head slowly." | | 11 | "Nothing in the undergrowth." | | 12 | "*Rory*, a voice seemed to" | | 13 | "The path twisted, roots snaking" | | 14 | "Moonlight bled through the canopy" | | 15 | "Her boots crunched over frost-laced" | | 16 | "She counted them—seventy—three, seventy-four-because counting" | | 17 | "She swallowed, throat dry as" | | 18 | "A wildflower bloomed at her" | | 19 | "December had frost in its" |
| | ratio | 0.705 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the thick, syrupy quiet of the woods at midnight, broken only by the distant hum of the city, muffled as though beneath water." | | 1 | "Fifty yards ahead, the standing stones rose from the mist—seven oaks, petrified, bark blackened as if burned long ago." | | 2 | "Her breath came slow, deliberate, as if even her lungs remembered to be careful." | | 3 | "It came from the far side of the grove, near the ring of toadstools that grew in a perfect spiral." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "the thing said, its voice suddenly sweet" | | 1 | "she said, voice low, steady" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |