Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX3JTKKCE3MVZ7C40QB57N

Run Details

Duration:
20.4s
Cost:
$0.002810
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks stood sentinel in the gloom, their gnarled branches forming a skeletal canopy against the bruised purple of the twilight sky. Rory’s breath misted in the cold air as she stepped between two moss-eaten standing stones. She felt the subtle shift in pressure the moment she crossed the threshold, a quiet pop in her ears. The air in the grove tasted different—sweet and metallic, thick with the scent of damp earth and blooming nightshade, despite the late autumn chill that had gripped London for weeks. Richmond Park was miles behind her. Here, in the Fae Grove, wildflowers she couldn’t name pushed through the leaf litter, their petals luminous in the fading light. She was here for the silence, for the disconnect. Eva had sworn this place could reset a shattered mind, a quiet pocket of the world where time itself went crooked. An hour here could be a minute out there. It was the perfect place to stop thinking about Evan’s voice, the perfect hideaway where he could never find her. She walked to the center of the clearing, her trainers soundless on the soft turf. The instructions had been simple: find the stones, enter at dusk, wait. For what, Eva hadn’t said. Just that it would be obvious. A faint warmth bloomed against her sternum. Rory’s hand flew to her chest, her fingers closing around the Heartstone pendant. It was warm, a gentle, living heat that pulsed in a slow, rhythmic beat. Dymas had given it to her with no explanation, his expression grim, his eyes avoiding hers. *For when the walls get thin,* he’d muttered before vanishing back into the crowd at Silas’s bar. Now, it felt like a second heart beating against her own. She let the pendant go. The silence of the grove was absolute. No distant hum of London traffic, no wind rustling the branches overhead. It was a vacuum. Her own breathing sounded obscenely loud. Then, a crack. It was a dry, snapping sound, like a twig underfoot. It came from her left. She spun, peering into the deep shadows between the thick oaks. Nothing moved. The flowers swayed gently, though there was no breeze. *An animal,* she told herself. A fox. A badger. Richmond was full of them. The warmth of the pendant intensified, the pulses coming faster now, a low thrum of energy that made her skin prickle. She took a step back toward the stone entrance. The plan was feeling less like solace and more like a trap. Another sound. This one was wetter, a soft squelching tread, like something heavy stepping on rotten fruit. It was closer. Directly ahead of her, in the deepest part of the wood where the darkness was a solid wall. The flowers nearest the edge of the clearing began to wilt. She watched, her blood freezing in her veins, as their glowing petals blackened and curled inwards, disintegrating into a fine, grey ash. The blight spread outwards in a slow, deliberate circle, a stain of death on the vibrant grove floor. She was not alone. The thing in the woods took another step. She still couldn’t see it, but she could feel its regard, a cold, heavy weight that pressed down on her, threatening to buckle her knees. The air grew colder, leaching the warmth from her skin. The sweet metallic scent soured into the smell of rust and old meat. The Heartstone was burning hot now, a brand against her skin. Its crimson gem shone with a faint, desperate inner light, casting a bloody gleam on her throat. A shape detached itself from the shadows. It was all wrong. It didn’t walk so much as *lurch*, its form seeming to flicker at the edges, never quite solid. It was tall, too tall, its limbs elongated and jointed at impossible angles. It was the colour of a week-old bruise, and where a face should have been there was only a smooth, blank stretch of flesh, devoid of features. It made no sound, but the feeling of wrongness it radiated was a physical force. It was hunger. It was absence. It was a door into a place that should never be opened. Rory’s mind, usually so sharp, scrambled for purchase. Pre-Law lectures on tort reform evaporated. Evan’s sneering face was a distant, petty memory. There was only this. Only the thing and the burning stone and the certain, cold knowledge that the grove’s time-warping magic meant no one would hear her scream for a very, very long time. It took another lurching step into the clearing. The grass beneath its feet died instantly. Her feet were rooted to the spot, her body refusing the command to run. The pendant’s pulse was a frantic drumbeat against her ribs, a silent alarm. The featureless head tilted. It was listening. Or smelling. Or something else entirely. A whisper brushed against her ear, not a sound in the air but a thought forced directly into her mind. It was a dry, rasping sensation, the mental equivalent of insect legs skittering across her brain. *…little gate…little key…* It was looking at the pendant. Its arm—a long, thin limb that ended in talons of cracked bone—began to rise, reaching for her across the clearing. The space between them seemed to warp and shrink. The spell of terror broke. Rory stumbled backward, her heel catching on a root. She landed hard on her elbows, the impact jarring up her spine. The thing took another step, its silence more menacing than any roar. She scrambled backwards like a crab, her eyes locked on the advancing horror. Her hand scraped against cold, rough stone. One of the boundary markers. The exit. She threw herself backwards, tumbling through the gap between the stones. The world snapped back into focus with a deafening roar. The hum of the A316. The chill wind of a normal autumn night. The distant lights of houses. She was on her back in Richmond Park, the familiar landscape a jarring contrast to the nightmare she’d just escaped. She gasped, sucking in great lungfuls of cold, clean air. Her hands were shaking. The Heartstone at her chest was cool and inert once more. She pushed herself up on trembling arms and looked back at the standing stones. They were just stones now, half-hidden by a thicket of brambles, looking ancient and utterly ordinary. But in the dirt between them, clearly visible in the moonlight, was a single, wilted black flower.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
81.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1085
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
2"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1085
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"sentinel"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count3
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"solace"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"lurch"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"lurching"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"sentinel"
1"gloom"
2"chill"
3"silence"
4"shattered"
5"perfect"
6"warmth"
7"pulsed"
8"rhythmic"
9"solace"
10"could feel"
11"weight"
12"lurch"
13"flicker"
14"lurching"
15"pulse"
16"whisper"
17"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords12
totalWords1078
ratio0.011
matches
0"For when the walls get thin,"
1"An animal,"
2"lurch"
3"…little gate…little key…"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1078
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
London2
Park2
Fae1
Grove1
Evan2
Eva2
Heartstone3
Silas1
Richmond3
Rory4
persons
0"Evan"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a second heart beating agains"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.928
wordCount1078
matches
0"not a sound in the air but a thought forced directly into her mind"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean33.69
std22.49
cv0.668
sampleLengths
086
186
238
37
471
534
63
737
814
942
1038
1151
124
1356
1428
1569
1633
1756
1815
1927
2013
2136
223
236
2429
2538
2627
2711
2848
2925
3030
3117
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"were rooted"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs161
matches
0"was feeling"
1"was burning"
2"was listening"
3"was looking"
4"were shaking"
85.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences100
ratio0.02
matches
0"The air in the grove tasted different—sweet and metallic, thick with the scent of damp earth and blooming nightshade, despite the late autumn chill that had gripped London for weeks."
1"Its arm—a long, thin limb that ended in talons of cracked bone—began to rise, reaching for her across the clearing."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1086
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"faint, desperate inner light,"
1"against cold, rough stone."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03222836095764273
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011049723756906077
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean10.78
std6.6
cv0.613
sampleLengths
022
115
219
330
46
521
69
721
89
920
1015
1112
125
136
147
1513
1614
1716
1817
1911
205
217
2212
234
246
253
2610
275
2811
292
309
315
322
332
345
3521
369
3712
382
3915
403
4118
4211
4322
4418
454
468
4725
4810
4913
32.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just that it would be"
1"Then, a crack."
2"Directly ahead of her, in"
3"Only the thing and the"
ratio0.043
49.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences94
matches
0"She felt the subtle shift"
1"She was here for the"
2"It was the perfect place"
3"She walked to the center"
4"It was warm, a gentle,"
5"She let the pendant go."
6"It was a vacuum."
7"Her own breathing sounded obscenely"
8"It was a dry, snapping"
9"It came from her left."
10"She spun, peering into the"
11"She took a step back"
12"It was closer."
13"She watched, her blood freezing"
14"She was not alone."
15"She still couldn’t see it,"
16"Its crimson gem shone with"
17"It was all wrong."
18"It didn’t walk so much"
19"It was tall, too tall,"
ratio0.426
29.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences94
matches
0"The oaks stood sentinel in"
1"Rory’s breath misted in the"
2"She felt the subtle shift"
3"The air in the grove"
4"Richmond Park was miles behind"
5"Here, in the Fae Grove,"
6"She was here for the"
7"Eva had sworn this place"
8"An hour here could be"
9"It was the perfect place"
10"She walked to the center"
11"The instructions had been simple:"
12"A faint warmth bloomed against"
13"Rory’s hand flew to her"
14"It was warm, a gentle,"
15"Dymas had given it to"
16"She let the pendant go."
17"The silence of the grove"
18"It was a vacuum."
19"Her own breathing sounded obscenely"
ratio0.862
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Now, it felt like a"
ratio0.011
86.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The warmth of the pendant intensified, the pulses coming faster now, a low thrum of energy that made her skin prickle."
1"She watched, her blood freezing in her veins, as their glowing petals blackened and curled inwards, disintegrating into a fine, grey ash."
2"She still couldn’t see it, but she could feel its regard, a cold, heavy weight that pressed down on her, threatening to buckle her knees."
3"Its arm—a long, thin limb that ended in talons of cracked bone—began to rise, reaching for her across the clearing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.5414%