| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 81.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1085 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1085 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "shattered" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "solace" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "lurch" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "lurching" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1078 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "For when the walls get thin," | | 1 | "An animal," | | 2 | "lurch" | | 3 | "…little gate…little key…" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1078 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Silas | 1 | | Richmond | 3 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Evan" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a second heart beating agains" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.928 | | wordCount | 1078 | | matches | | 0 | "not a sound in the air but a thought forced directly into her mind" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 33.69 | | std | 22.49 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "was feeling" | | 1 | "was burning" | | 2 | "was listening" | | 3 | "was looking" | | 4 | "were shaking" |
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| 85.71% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove tasted different—sweet and metallic, thick with the scent of damp earth and blooming nightshade, despite the late autumn chill that had gripped London for weeks." | | 1 | "Its arm—a long, thin limb that ended in talons of cracked bone—began to rise, reaching for her across the clearing." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1086 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint, desperate inner light," | | 1 | "against cold, rough stone." |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03222836095764273 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011049723756906077 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 10.78 | | std | 6.6 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 32.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that it would be" | | 1 | "Then, a crack." | | 2 | "Directly ahead of her, in" | | 3 | "Only the thing and the" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 49.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the subtle shift" | | 1 | "She was here for the" | | 2 | "It was the perfect place" | | 3 | "She walked to the center" | | 4 | "It was warm, a gentle," | | 5 | "She let the pendant go." | | 6 | "It was a vacuum." | | 7 | "Her own breathing sounded obscenely" | | 8 | "It was a dry, snapping" | | 9 | "It came from her left." | | 10 | "She spun, peering into the" | | 11 | "She took a step back" | | 12 | "It was closer." | | 13 | "She watched, her blood freezing" | | 14 | "She was not alone." | | 15 | "She still couldn’t see it," | | 16 | "Its crimson gem shone with" | | 17 | "It was all wrong." | | 18 | "It didn’t walk so much" | | 19 | "It was tall, too tall," |
| | ratio | 0.426 | |
| 29.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks stood sentinel in" | | 1 | "Rory’s breath misted in the" | | 2 | "She felt the subtle shift" | | 3 | "The air in the grove" | | 4 | "Richmond Park was miles behind" | | 5 | "Here, in the Fae Grove," | | 6 | "She was here for the" | | 7 | "Eva had sworn this place" | | 8 | "An hour here could be" | | 9 | "It was the perfect place" | | 10 | "She walked to the center" | | 11 | "The instructions had been simple:" | | 12 | "A faint warmth bloomed against" | | 13 | "Rory’s hand flew to her" | | 14 | "It was warm, a gentle," | | 15 | "Dymas had given it to" | | 16 | "She let the pendant go." | | 17 | "The silence of the grove" | | 18 | "It was a vacuum." | | 19 | "Her own breathing sounded obscenely" |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 53.19% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 86.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The warmth of the pendant intensified, the pulses coming faster now, a low thrum of energy that made her skin prickle." | | 1 | "She watched, her blood freezing in her veins, as their glowing petals blackened and curled inwards, disintegrating into a fine, grey ash." | | 2 | "She still couldn’t see it, but she could feel its regard, a cold, heavy weight that pressed down on her, threatening to buckle her knees." | | 3 | "Its arm—a long, thin limb that ended in talons of cracked bone—began to rise, reaching for her across the clearing." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |