Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX3QJRVH49SMKGPSXA5KFW

Run Details

Duration:
8.3s
Cost:
$0.000588
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign above The Raven’s Nest flickered like a dying firefly, casting a sickly green glow over the pavement. Rory Carter pushed through the door, the scent of stale beer and old wood hitting her like a memory. She hadn’t set foot in here since before London, before Evan, before the life she’d left behind like a shed skin. The place hadn’t changed—same dim lighting, same maps yellowing on the walls, same hum of quiet conversation that made it feel like a secret. She slid onto a stool at the bar, her fingers drumming against the worn mahogany. The bartender, a wiry man with a shaved head, nodded at her without a word. She didn’t recognise him. Good. That meant he didn’t recognise her either. “Whisky. Neat.” The glass appeared in front of her, amber liquid catching the light. She took a sip, let the burn settle in her chest. The door swung open again, a gust of cold air rushing in. She didn’t look up. Then a voice—deep, rough, familiar—cut through the murmur. “Well, if it isn’t the prodigal daughter.” Her fingers stilled. The glass hovered halfway to her lips. She turned her head slowly. Silas Blackwood stood there, taller than she remembered, his auburn hair streaked with grey now, his beard neatly trimmed. He wore a dark wool coat, the collar turned up against the evening chill. His hazel eyes locked onto hers, sharp as ever, but something in them had shifted. Wariness, maybe. Or recognition. “Silas,” she said, her voice steady. “You own this place now?” He didn’t answer right away. Just studied her, like he was matching the woman in front of him with the girl he’d known years ago. Then he slid onto the stool beside her, his left leg stiff as he moved. The old knee injury. She remembered that, too. “Bought it five years back,” he said. “After Prague.” She didn’t ask. Some things didn’t need explaining. The bartender set a glass in front of Silas without being asked. He took a slow sip, his gaze never leaving her. “You look different.” “So do you.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Older, you mean.” “Wiser, I was going to say.” He chuckled, low and dry. “Wisdom’s overrated.” She swirled her whisky, watching the liquid cling to the sides of the glass. “You always did have a way with words.” “And you always had a way of showing up when I least expected it.” She met his eyes then. “Is that a problem?” “Depends.” He leaned back slightly, the stool creaking under his weight. “You here for a drink, or for something else?” She took another sip, let the silence stretch. The bar hummed around them, the clink of glasses, the murmur of voices. It was the kind of place where people came to disappear. Or to be found. “I needed a drink,” she said finally. “But I didn’t expect to find you here.” “No?” He raised an eyebrow. “Where did you think I’d be?” “Somewhere with better lighting.” That got a real laugh out of him, deep and warm. For a second, it was like no time had passed at all. Then his expression sobered. “You’ve been gone a while, Rory.” She set her glass down. “I had my reasons.” “Evan?” The name hit her like a punch to the gut. She didn’t flinch, but her fingers tightened around the glass. “You know about that?” “London’s a small town when you know the right people.” She exhaled through her nose. “Then you know why I left.” “I know what the papers said.” His voice was careful, measured. “But I also know you. And you don’t run unless you’ve got no other choice.” She looked away, her gaze landing on the old maps behind the bar. One of them was of Wales, the edges curled with age. Her mother’s homeland. “I didn’t have a choice.” Silas didn’t push. He never had. That was the thing about him—he let people come to him in their own time. It was what made him good at his job. And what made him dangerous. She finished her whisky in one swift motion, the burn sharp and clean. “I’m not here to talk about the past.” “No?” He signalled the bartender for another round. “Then what are you here for?” She hesitated. The truth was, she didn’t know. She’d walked into The Raven’s Nest on instinct, the way she used to when she was younger, when this place had been her refuge. But she wasn’t that girl anymore. And Silas wasn’t just the man who’d given her a place to hide. He was the man who’d taught her how to fight. The bartender set two fresh glasses in front of them. Silas slid one toward her. “You’re not still delivering takeaway, are you?” She almost laughed. “No. That was just… temporary.” “And now?” She wrapped her fingers around the glass, the cold seeping into her skin. “Now I’m figuring things out.” He studied her for a long moment. Then he reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a key. He set it on the bar between them, the metal glinting under the dim light. “There’s a room upstairs,” he said. “Second door on the left. It’s yours if you want it.” She stared at the key. “Why?” “Because you look like you could use a place to stay.” “I didn’t ask for your help.” “No,” he said. “But you’re here.” She picked up the key, turned it over in her fingers. It was heavy, solid. Like a promise. Or a trap. “What’s the catch?” He took a slow sip of his whisky. “No catch. Just a room. And a job, if you want it.” She raised an eyebrow. “What kind of job?” “The kind that pays well and doesn’t ask questions.” She should’ve known. Silas didn’t do anything without a reason. And he sure as hell didn’t hand out favours for free. She set the key down. “I’m not getting involved in your games, Silas.” “It’s not a game.” His voice was quiet, serious. “It’s a job. Simple. Clean. No strings.” She almost believed him. Almost. “Why me?” He leaned in slightly, his voice dropping. “Because you’re the only one I trust.” The words hung between them, heavy with unspoken meaning. She looked at him—really looked at him—and saw the lines around his eyes, the way his jaw tightened when he thought no one was watching. He was older. Wiser. But he was still Silas. Still the man who’d pulled her out of more scrapes than she could count. And still the man who’d let her walk away without a word. She picked up the key again, turned it over in her palm. “No strings?” “None.” She exhaled, slow and steady. “Fine. But I’m not making any promises.” He smiled, just a little. “I wouldn’t expect you to.” She pocketed the key, the metal warm against her thigh. The bar hummed around them, the weight of the past pressing in like a storm on the horizon. But for now, there was just this—two old friends, a half-empty glass, and the quiet understanding that some things never really changed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.281
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.07
79.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count2
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"chill"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
6"measured"
7"glinting"
8"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1203
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount906
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
London1
Evan1
Blackwood1
Silas7
Wales1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Evan"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Wales"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared in front of her, amber liquid catching the light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1203
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean18.23
std16
cv0.878
sampleLengths
084
142
22
339
48
57
615
752
811
948
109
118
1225
133
1411
156
167
1722
1814
199
2020
2136
2215
2311
244
2533
269
271
2824
2910
3011
3126
3232
3335
3421
3514
3651
3710
3822
398
402
4118
4234
4317
446
4511
466
476
4821
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was matching"
1"was watching"
48.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences152
ratio0.033
matches
0"The place hadn’t changed—same dim lighting, same maps yellowing on the walls, same hum of quiet conversation that made it feel like a secret."
1"Then a voice—deep, rough, familiar—cut through the murmur."
2"That was the thing about him—he let people come to him in their own time."
3"She looked at him—really looked at him—and saw the lines around his eyes, the way his jaw tightened when he thought no one was watching."
4"But for now, there was just this—two old friends, a half-empty glass, and the quiet understanding that some things never really changed."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount914
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"deep, rough, familiar—cut"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.038293216630196934
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009846827133479213
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean7.91
std5.21
cv0.659
sampleLengths
020
119
221
324
415
515
64
71
87
92
1012
1111
1212
134
148
157
163
177
185
1919
2014
2115
222
232
246
255
265
2720
2815
294
304
317
322
333
345
3512
3610
373
383
398
403
416
425
432
4414
458
4614
475
484
4911
51.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences96
matches
0"Then a voice—deep, rough, familiar—cut"
1"Just studied her, like he"
2"Then he slid onto the"
3"Then his expression sobered."
4"Then he reached into his"
ratio0.052
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences96
matches
0"She hadn’t set foot in"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"She didn’t recognise him."
3"She took a sip, let"
4"She didn’t look up."
5"Her fingers stilled."
6"She turned her head slowly."
7"He wore a dark wool"
8"His hazel eyes locked onto"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"He didn’t answer right away."
11"She remembered that, too."
12"She didn’t ask."
13"He took a slow sip,"
14"He chuckled, low and dry."
15"She swirled her whisky, watching"
16"She met his eyes then."
17"He leaned back slightly, the"
18"She took another sip, let"
19"It was the kind of"
ratio0.563
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences96
matches
0"The neon sign above The"
1"Rory Carter pushed through the"
2"She hadn’t set foot in"
3"The place hadn’t changed—same dim"
4"She slid onto a stool"
5"The bartender, a wiry man"
6"She didn’t recognise him."
7"That meant he didn’t recognise"
8"The glass appeared in front"
9"She took a sip, let"
10"The door swung open again,"
11"She didn’t look up."
12"Her fingers stilled."
13"The glass hovered halfway to"
14"She turned her head slowly."
15"Silas Blackwood stood there, taller"
16"He wore a dark wool"
17"His hazel eyes locked onto"
18"she said, her voice steady"
19"He didn’t answer right away."
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The place hadn’t changed—same dim lighting, same maps yellowing on the walls, same hum of quiet conversation that made it feel like a secret."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice steady"
1"He leaned back, the stool creaking under his weight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.175
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.7512%