| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 938 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 938 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "porcelain" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "sentinel" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "grave" | | 12 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.62% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 14 | | markdownWords | 64 | | totalWords | 925 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "You don’t go poking holes in places that don’t let light through." | | 1 | "Come to the Grove. Midnight. You have something that belongs to her." | | 2 | "hum" | | 3 | "Hush now, don’t let them hear," | | 4 | "She’s coming back, and the trees will cheer." | | 5 | "You left me in the fire." | | 6 | "Folded" | | 7 | "watched" | | 8 | "Hanging." | | 9 | "clung" | | 10 | "You wore her face." | | 11 | "You wore it too long." | | 12 | "pulled" | | 13 | "You never let me go." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.44% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 890 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 9 | | Laila | 2 | | December | 1 | | Slumped | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.994 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like brushing against cold glass" |
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| 91.89% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.081 | | wordCount | 925 | | matches | | 0 | "not from one place but from everywhere" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 16.23 | | std | 16.13 | | cv | 0.994 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 46 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 152 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "A silence sat like a hand over the clearing—thick, deliberate." | | 1 | "They ringed the central glade in tight, perfect spirals—purple foxgloves, white starflowers, crimson poppies—none of which bloomed in December." | | 2 | "The crimson gem pulsed again—faster now, a soft throb of inner light." | | 3 | "Then—music." | | 4 | "But the stones—were they closer?" | | 5 | "Petals swivelled, stems twisting with soft, wet pops, all turning inward—toward her." | | 6 | "She tore at it—nothing there." | | 7 | "Beneath—darkness." | | 8 | "A voice, not from one place but from everywhere—the trees, the stones, the flowers, the buried thing beneath:" | | 9 | "The pendant jerked hard against her chest—*pulled*, like the chain was hooked to something inside the dark." | | 10 | "But the face—softer." | | 11 | "Then—movement." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 903 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03875968992248062 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0011074197120708748 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 152 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 152 | | mean | 6.09 | | std | 4.81 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 43.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.34210526315789475 | | totalSentences | 152 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Just handwriting like cracked porcelain:" | | 1 | "Then, one by one, they" | | 2 | "Only the pendant, now hot" | | 3 | "Then the light died." |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots left no imprint" | | 1 | "She checked the pendant." | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come alone." | | 3 | "You have something that belongs" | | 4 | "She hadn’t spoken the name" | | 5 | "They ringed the central glade" | | 6 | "They stood upright, uncrushed, untouched" | | 7 | "Her breath didn’t fog." | | 8 | "It came from behind her." | | 9 | "She stepped back." | | 10 | "It felt like brushing against" | | 11 | "She took a slow breath." | | 12 | "She’d handled worse than haunted" | | 13 | "*She’s coming back, and the" | | 14 | "She backed toward the center" | | 15 | "She hissed, almost dropped it." | | 16 | "Her heart hammered, but she" | | 17 | "She lashed out, elbow cracking" | | 18 | "She tore at it—nothing there." | | 19 | "She couldn’t tell if they" |
| | ratio | 0.215 | |
| 90.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in The Fae" | | 1 | "Rory stepped between the ancient" | | 2 | "Her boots left no imprint" | | 3 | "A silence sat like a" | | 4 | "She checked the pendant." | | 5 | "The Heartstone pulsed once, slow," | | 6 | "She shouldn’t have come alone." | | 7 | "Eva’s voice echoed in her" | | 8 | "You have something that belongs" | | 9 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the crescent" | | 10 | "She hadn’t spoken the name" | | 11 | "The wildflowers were wrong." | | 12 | "They ringed the central glade" | | 13 | "They stood upright, uncrushed, untouched" | | 14 | "Her breath didn’t fog." | | 15 | "A sound, then." | | 16 | "A *hum*, low and dissonant," | | 17 | "It came from behind her." | | 18 | "The oaks stood sentinel, their" | | 19 | "She stepped back." |
| | ratio | 0.738 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped between the ancient oaks, their bark split with veins of silver that caught no moonlight, though the sky above Richmond Park had been clear." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |