Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX3R29PJQHWF3PWGB0B918

Run Details

Duration:
18.1s
Cost:
$0.009028
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in The Fae Grove didn’t move. Rory stepped between the ancient oaks, their bark split with veins of silver that caught no moonlight, though the sky above Richmond Park had been clear. Her boots left no imprint in the moss. A silence sat like a hand over the clearing—thick, deliberate. She checked the pendant. The Heartstone pulsed once, slow, like something breathing beneath the earth. She shouldn’t have come alone. Eva’s voice echoed in her head: *You don’t go poking holes in places that don’t let light through.* But the note had been specific. Left folded in her delivery bag, tucked under a bundle of bok choy. No signature. Just handwriting like cracked porcelain: *Come to the Grove. Midnight. You have something that belongs to her.* Rory’s fingers brushed the crescent scar on her wrist. She hadn’t spoken the name Laila in two years. Not since the fire. Not since the hospital, where the doctors said she should have died, and the nurses crossed themselves when she woke. The wildflowers were wrong. They ringed the central glade in tight, perfect spirals—purple foxgloves, white starflowers, crimson poppies—none of which bloomed in December. They stood upright, uncrushed, untouched by winter. No frost. No decay. And they didn’t smell of anything. She exhaled. Her breath didn’t fog. A sound, then. Not a snap or a rustle. A *hum*, low and dissonant, like a cello string vibrating underwater. It came from behind her. She turned. Nothing. The oaks stood sentinel, their moss dangling too straight, too still. She stepped back. The moss didn’t yield. It felt like brushing against cold glass. The pendant warmed. Rory unclipped it from her coat, holding it in her palm. The crimson gem pulsed again—faster now, a soft throb of inner light. Shadows between the trees seemed to deepen. She took a slow breath. Focus. Assess. She’d handled worse than haunted woods. Worse than silence. Worse than ghosts. Then—music. A child’s music box. Faint. Distant. A lullaby her mother used to sing, warped into something hollow. *Hush now, don’t let them hear,* the tune slurred. *She’s coming back, and the trees will cheer.* Rory whirled, scanning the ring of standing stones. Nothing. No movement. No figure. But the stones—were they closer? No. Impossible. She backed toward the center of the clearing, where the flowers clustered thickest. The hum deepened. The air tasted of copper and wet stone. The pendant burned now, searing against her skin. She hissed, almost dropped it. When she looked down, the gem was brighter, its glow spreading like blood in water. A whisper, right against her ear: “*You left me in the fire.*” Rory stumbled forward, gasping. She spun. No one. Nothing but the perfect spiral of flowers, the silent oaks, the unblinking stones. Her heart hammered, but she kept her breath steady. Panic wouldn’t help. Panic got you killed. “Laila?” she said. The name broke the silence like glass. The music box stopped. The flowers trembled. Then, one by one, they turned. Petals swivelled, stems twisting with soft, wet pops, all turning inward—toward her. Dozens of faces made of bloom and thorn, all fixing on her chest, on the pendant. The air thickened. The silence pressed down, heavier than before. Rory clutched the chain. “I didn't leave you. I tried to—” A hand, cold as grave soil, brushed her neck. She lashed out, elbow cracking through empty air. Spun. Nothing. But the cold remained, coiled around her throat like a noose. She tore at it—nothing there. Only the pendant, now hot enough to blister, its light flaring like a failing bulb. “Stop,” she said. “I’m not your enemy.” The ground split with a sound like tearing parchment. At the center of the flower spiral, the moss peeled back. Not torn. Not uprooted. *Folded*, like fabric drawn aside. Beneath—darkness. Not soil. Not void. Something that *watched*. The pendant flared once, blinding. In that flash, she saw them. Figures, just at the edge of the trees. Not standing. *Hanging.* Slumped, limp, suspended from the oaks by thin silver threads, their faces hidden by drooping moss. Still. Silent. She couldn’t tell if they breathed. Then the light died. The clearing plunged into deeper dark. Not night. Not shadow. A dark that *clung*. A voice, not from one place but from everywhere—the trees, the stones, the flowers, the buried thing beneath: “*You wore her face.*” Rory backed away, boots scraping on unyielding moss. “I was protecting her. They were coming—” “*You wore it too long.*” The pendant jerked hard against her chest—*pulled*, like the chain was hooked to something inside the dark. She gripped it, fingers burning. The silver chain seared into her skin. The gem flared again, and in that pulse, she saw her reflection in the nearest standing stone. But it wasn’t her. Black hair, yes. Blue eyes, yes. But the face—softer. Younger. Smiling. A face she hadn’t seen in years. Laila. The reflection mouthed words: *You never let me go.* Rory tore the pendant off. The chain snapped. The Heartstone arced through the air and landed in the spiral of flowers. Silence. Then—movement. Every flower bent toward the stone. The petals stretched, elongating into thin, grasping fingers. The stems twisted, knitting together into sinew. The spiral writhed, rising like a vine-woven creature, pulling the pendant into its center. And from the dark beneath the moss, something exhaled. Rory didn’t wait. She ran. She didn’t look back. She didn’t need to. Behind her, the oaks groaned. The music box began again. And above Richmond Park, the moon blinked out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount938
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount938
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"silence"
count5
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count2
5
word"sentinel"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"grave"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulsed"
2"echoed"
3"porcelain"
4"perfect"
5"sentinel"
6"throb"
7"scanning"
8"searing"
9"whisper"
10"trembled"
11"grave"
12"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences146
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
61.62% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords64
totalWords925
ratio0.069
matches
0"You don’t go poking holes in places that don’t let light through."
1"Come to the Grove. Midnight. You have something that belongs to her."
2"hum"
3"Hush now, don’t let them hear,"
4"She’s coming back, and the trees will cheer."
5"You left me in the fire."
6"Folded"
7"watched"
8"Hanging."
9"clung"
10"You wore her face."
11"You wore it too long."
12"pulled"
13"You never let me go."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount890
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove2
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Rory9
Laila2
December1
Slumped1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Laila"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"December"
globalScore0.994
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like brushing against cold glass"
91.89% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.081
wordCount925
matches
0"not from one place but from everywhere"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean16.23
std16.13
cv0.994
sampleLengths
08
159
25
344
412
542
64
736
86
953
103
1149
121
1317
1417
1518
162
1752
186
196
2037
213
227
234
243
256
2638
2711
289
2941
307
319
3228
335
346
3535
364
3714
3818
394
4015
415
4246
434
4419
459
465
4716
481
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"was hooked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences152
ratio0.079
matches
0"A silence sat like a hand over the clearing—thick, deliberate."
1"They ringed the central glade in tight, perfect spirals—purple foxgloves, white starflowers, crimson poppies—none of which bloomed in December."
2"The crimson gem pulsed again—faster now, a soft throb of inner light."
3"Then—music."
4"But the stones—were they closer?"
5"Petals swivelled, stems twisting with soft, wet pops, all turning inward—toward her."
6"She tore at it—nothing there."
7"Beneath—darkness."
8"A voice, not from one place but from everywhere—the trees, the stones, the flowers, the buried thing beneath:"
9"The pendant jerked hard against her chest—*pulled*, like the chain was hooked to something inside the dark."
10"But the face—softer."
11"Then—movement."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount903
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03875968992248062
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011074197120708748
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean6.09
std4.81
cv0.791
sampleLengths
08
126
28
310
44
511
65
724
813
92
105
114
121
137
149
159
164
1720
184
1919
207
212
222
236
242
254
263
276
2811
295
302
311
3211
333
344
357
363
3711
3812
397
405
411
421
436
443
453
461
474
481
491
43.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.34210526315789475
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"Just handwriting like cracked porcelain:"
1"Then, one by one, they"
2"Only the pendant, now hot"
3"Then the light died."
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences107
matches
0"Her boots left no imprint"
1"She checked the pendant."
2"She shouldn’t have come alone."
3"You have something that belongs"
4"She hadn’t spoken the name"
5"They ringed the central glade"
6"They stood upright, uncrushed, untouched"
7"Her breath didn’t fog."
8"It came from behind her."
9"She stepped back."
10"It felt like brushing against"
11"She took a slow breath."
12"She’d handled worse than haunted"
13"*She’s coming back, and the"
14"She backed toward the center"
15"She hissed, almost dropped it."
16"Her heart hammered, but she"
17"She lashed out, elbow cracking"
18"She tore at it—nothing there."
19"She couldn’t tell if they"
ratio0.215
90.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences107
matches
0"The air in The Fae"
1"Rory stepped between the ancient"
2"Her boots left no imprint"
3"A silence sat like a"
4"She checked the pendant."
5"The Heartstone pulsed once, slow,"
6"She shouldn’t have come alone."
7"Eva’s voice echoed in her"
8"You have something that belongs"
9"Rory’s fingers brushed the crescent"
10"She hadn’t spoken the name"
11"The wildflowers were wrong."
12"They ringed the central glade"
13"They stood upright, uncrushed, untouched"
14"Her breath didn’t fog."
15"A sound, then."
16"A *hum*, low and dissonant,"
17"It came from behind her."
18"The oaks stood sentinel, their"
19"She stepped back."
ratio0.738
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory stepped between the ancient oaks, their bark split with veins of silver that caught no moonlight, though the sky above Richmond Park had been clear."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.2332%