| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 72.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 908 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 908 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "testament" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "tapestry" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "familiar" | | 17 | "unravel" | | 18 | "gloom" | | 19 | "flicker" | | 20 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 903 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A trick of the wind, she told herself, but the reasoned explanation felt thin, unconvincing." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 902 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a different world entirely" | | 1 | "lament that seemed to wrap around her, pulling at her very soul" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 903 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 13 | | mean | 69.46 | | std | 7.67 | | cv | 0.11 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 93 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 70 | | 11 | 73 | | 12 | 74 |
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| 92.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "being watched" | | 1 | "was accompanied" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.61% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "Time moved differently here; an hour inside could be minutes or days outside." | | 1 | "The feeling of being watched intensified, morphing into a certainty; something was there, a presence unseen, unknowable, and utterly malevolent." |
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| 69.08% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 907 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "serene, sun-drenched patch" | | 2 | "small, crimson-colored Heartstone" |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.050716648291069456 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024255788313120176 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 57 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 81.63% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 57 | | mean | 15.84 | | std | 5.61 | | cv | 0.354 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 39.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2982456140350877 | | totalSentences | 57 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a faint, high-pitched keening" | | 1 | "Only the rustle of leaves" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 72.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 1 | "She had come for answers," | | 2 | "Her gaze darted through the" | | 3 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 4 | "Her hand instinctively went to" | | 5 | "It pulsed faintly, a warmth" | | 6 | "It had always done that" | | 7 | "It was the kind of" | | 8 | "It was a sound that" | | 9 | "It seemed to come from" | | 10 | "She took another step, then" | | 11 | "She couldn't shake the feeling" | | 12 | "She spun again, her phone" | | 13 | "Her voice, surprisingly steady, cracked" | | 14 | "She began to walk faster," | | 15 | "It smelled of damp earth" | | 16 | "It was accompanied now by" | | 17 | "She stumbled, catching herself before" | | 18 | "They dotted the trunks like" | | 19 | "She didn't dare look back." |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 21.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "Rory, her shoulder-length black hair" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 3 | "The faint light painted the" | | 4 | "A small crescent-shaped scar on" | | 5 | "She had come for answers," | | 6 | "The message spoke of a" | | 7 | "The air itself tasted metallic," | | 8 | "A branch snapped behind her," | | 9 | "Rory spun, her heart hammering" | | 10 | "Her gaze darted through the" | | 11 | "A trick of the wind," | | 12 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 13 | "Her hand instinctively went to" | | 14 | "It pulsed faintly, a warmth" | | 15 | "It had always done that" | | 16 | "The wildflowers, usually a vibrant" | | 17 | "Time moved differently here; an" | | 18 | "That thought, meant to be" | | 19 | "A low thrum vibrated through" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, under the moonless sky," |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "A low thrum vibrated through the ground, a resonance that went deeper than sound, shaking her bones with an unsettling frequency." | | 1 | "The thrum intensified, a rhythmic pulse that grew stronger, more insistent." | | 2 | "It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once, a haunting chorus that faded as quickly as it had begun, leaving only the sound of her own ragged breathi…" | | 3 | "The path, once familiar, seemed to unravel before her, the trees pressing in, their shadows thickening into menacing shapes." | | 4 | "A thick mist began to swirl around her ankles, crawling upwards, clinging to her trousers, damp and cloying." | | 5 | "The keening returned, closer this time, a sorrowful lament that seemed to wrap around her, pulling at her very soul." | | 6 | "Rory forced herself to keep moving, her eyes darting from side to side, straining to pierce the impenetrable darkness, the swirling mist." | | 7 | "She stumbled, catching herself before she fell, her heart leaping into her throat." | | 8 | "The clicks grew louder, interspersed with a rasping exhale, wet and heavy, as if some immense creature breathed just behind her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |