| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1339 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1339 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "wavering" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "cacophony" | | 15 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 23 | | markdownWords | 43 | | totalWords | 1324 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Like a warning." | | 1 | "part" | | 2 | "right." | | 3 | "wrong," | | 4 | "shouldn’t exist." | | 5 | "ground." | | 6 | "trees." | | 7 | "understood." | | 8 | "meaning." | | 9 | "You want something. We can give it to you." | | 10 | "heart." | | 11 | "You’re alone. We see you." | | 12 | "behind" | | 13 | "felt" | | 14 | "understanding." | | 15 | "You don’t belong here." | | 16 | "But you could." | | 17 | "Stay." | | 18 | "thud." | | 19 | "ran." | | 20 | "real" | | 21 | "safe." | | 22 | "think" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1324 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.21 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Yu | 1 | | Fei | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 16 | | Branches | 1 | | Light | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Fei" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Branches" | | 3 | "Light" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.896 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.755 | | wordCount | 1324 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the usual damp earth and pine, but something older, sharper" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 29.42 | | std | 29.2 | | cv | 0.993 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 92 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 79 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 76 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 73 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 51 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 62 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was blackened" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 227 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 146 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "She hissed, shaking her hand, and the bike—Yu-Fei’s ancient, rattling delivery bike—wobbled violently before crashing sideways into the undergrowth." | | 1 | "Not the usual damp earth and pine, but something older, sharper—like ozone after a storm, or the metallic tang of blood left too long in the sun." | | 2 | "She hadn’t worn it in weeks—not since the last time it had glowed like a dying ember in the dead of night, waking her from a dream she couldn’t remember." | | 3 | "The moment the pendant left her skin, the pain vanished—but the warmth didn’t." | | 4 | "Not the park itself—she’d cycled through Richmond enough times to know its paths, its hidden clearings, the way the trees bent like old men over the trails." | | 5 | "She hadn’t noticed them at first—they blended too seamlessly into the darkness, their surfaces worn smooth by time and weather." | | 6 | "They were shorter than she expected—no taller than her waist—but their presence was *wrong,* a violation of the natural order." | | 7 | "From the *ground.* From the *trees.* It slithered into her ears, coiled around her thoughts, and for a moment, she *understood.* Not the words—there were no words—but the *meaning.* A promise." | | 8 | "The sound had come from the trees—no, from *behind* her." | | 9 | "And then—" | | 10 | "She kicked out, her boot connecting with something solid—a leg, a torso, she didn’t know, didn’t care." | | 11 | "And then—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1339 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.029873039581777446 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0074682598954443615 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 146 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 146 | | mean | 9.07 | | std | 7.26 | | cv | 0.801 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 34.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.23972602739726026 | | totalSentences | 146 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the trees." | | 1 | "Then she heard it." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "She hissed, shaking her hand," | | 1 | "She should have known better" | | 2 | "She straightened, rolling her shoulders" | | 3 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 4 | "She hadn’t worn it in" | | 5 | "She barely kept her balance," | | 6 | "She fumbled with the clasp," | | 7 | "It lingered in the air," | | 8 | "She stared at the Heartstone." | | 9 | "She knew this place." | | 10 | "she’d never been here before." | | 11 | "It had led her here." | | 12 | "She turned in a slow" | | 13 | "Their bark was blackened, as" | | 14 | "She hadn’t noticed them at" | | 15 | "They were shorter than she" | | 16 | "They shouldn’t be here." | | 17 | "They *shouldn’t exist.*" | | 18 | "She should leave." | | 19 | "It came from the stones." |
| | ratio | 0.295 | |
| 78.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The bike chain snapped with" | | 1 | "Rory’s fingers slipped on the" | | 2 | "She hissed, shaking her hand," | | 3 | "The front wheel spun lazily," | | 4 | "She should have known better" | | 5 | "The air smelled wrong." | | 6 | "Rory wiped her palm on" | | 7 | "The chain had sheared clean" | | 8 | "She straightened, rolling her shoulders" | | 9 | "The park was supposed to" | | 10 | "The last of the dog" | | 11 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 12 | "Rory reached into her jacket" | | 13 | "The gem pulsed faintly against" | | 14 | "She hadn’t worn it in" | | 15 | "The pendant’s heat flared, sudden" | | 16 | "Rory gasped, stumbling back, her" | | 17 | "She barely kept her balance," | | 18 | "The gem burned through the" | | 19 | "She fumbled with the clasp," |
| | ratio | 0.762 | |
| 40.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 85.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory gasped, stumbling back, her boot catching on a root." | | 1 | "Their bark was blackened, as if scorched by fire, and their branches twisted into shapes that made her stomach clench." | | 2 | "The grip was ice-cold, the fingers long and bony, the skin stretched too tight over knuckles that didn’t bend right." | | 3 | "She twisted, scrambling backward, but the hand held fast, its touch burning like dry ice." | | 4 | "Rory burst from the treeline, her lungs burning, her heart hammering against her ribs." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |