| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1227 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1227 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "lurched" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "glistening" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "maw" | | 13 | "structure" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 31 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 1208 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "shuddered" | | 1 | "peeled" | | 2 | "hungry" | | 3 | "alive" | | 4 | "flesh" | | 5 | "breathed" | | 6 | "split" | | 7 | "parted" | | 8 | "danger" | | 9 | "screamed" | | 10 | "human" | | 11 | "hell" | | 12 | "laughed" | | 13 | "Now." | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "thing" | | 16 | "feeds" | | 17 | "hungry" | | 18 | "part" | | 19 | "always" | | 20 | "clicking" | | 21 | "moved" | | 22 | "can" | | 23 | "Breath" | | 24 | "rotten" | | 25 | "mouth" | | 26 | "consumed" | | 27 | "sound" | | 28 | "thump" | | 29 | "part" | | 30 | "digested" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1027 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 16 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.721 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite Earth" | | 1 | "looked like skin—pale, veined, stretching" | | 2 | "looked like strands of licorice" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.483 | | wordCount | 1208 | | matches | | 0 | "not with wind, but with something deeper, something" | | 1 | "not the familiar tangle of Richmond Park’s undergrowth, but something else" | | 2 | "Not the dry, brittle heat of a London summer, but something thick, *alive*, pressing against her skin like a l" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 23.23 | | std | 21.19 | | cv | 0.912 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 79 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 79 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 43 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 65 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 87.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "being devoured" | | 1 | "was attached" | | 2 | "was stretched" | | 3 | "was built" | | 4 | "being *consumed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.132 | | matches | | 0 | "A crack spiderwebbed through the carved runes, and the air *shuddered*—not with wind, but with something deeper, something that hummed in the bones." | | 1 | "The standing stones of the Fae Grove had always been there—ancient, unyielding, the boundary markers of a place that wasn’t quite Earth." | | 2 | "One moment, she was standing in the damp chill of an English winter, the next—heat." | | 3 | "A vast, undulating plain of something that looked like skin—pale, veined, stretching endlessly in every direction." | | 4 | "Tiny, delicate flowers—petals the colour of fresh bruises—bloomed in clusters, their stems buried in the flesh like parasites." | | 5 | "A sound cut through the thick air—a wet, tearing noise, like fabric rending." | | 6 | "From its depths rose a scent—rich, intoxicating, the kind of smell that made her mouth water even as her instincts screamed *danger*." | | 7 | "She twisted, driving the Fae blade down—" | | 8 | "The air hummed with the distant sound of feasting—laughter, the clink of glasses, the wet sounds of something being devoured." | | 9 | "Rory glanced up just in time to see a *thing* swoop past—a massive, bat-like creature with a body like a swollen tick, its wings stretched taut over a frame of jagged bone." | | 10 | "The hand was attached to an arm, then a shoulder, then—" | | 11 | "A sound escaped his sewn lips—a muffled, desperate *clicking*, like a starving dog begging for scraps." | | 12 | "A gust of wind—no, not wind." | | 13 | "*Breath*—swept over them, carrying the scent of roasting meat and something sweeter, something *rotten*." | | 14 | "And from its depths came the sound of a feast—laughter, the clatter of cutlery, the wet, tearing sounds of something being *consumed*." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1047 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, *alive*, pressing against her" | | 1 | "honey-thick liquid cut" | | 2 | "deep, angry red, like" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.021967526265520534 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0009551098376313276 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 10.59 | | std | 7.48 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 45.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.30701754385964913 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she stepped forward, into" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice threading through" | | 1 | "She stepped through." | | 2 | "She forced herself to look" | | 3 | "It was *flesh*." | | 4 | "She twisted, driving the Fae" | | 5 | "She turned and ran." | | 6 | "It let out a shriek," | | 7 | "she gasped, dodging another lashing" | | 8 | "She looked down." | | 9 | "She dropped to her knees," | | 10 | "His skin was stretched too" | | 11 | "His eyes were open, wide," | | 12 | "It was glowing now, a" | | 13 | "Their voice dropped to a" |
| | ratio | 0.163 | |
| 53.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The blade’s edge bit into" | | 1 | "A crack spiderwebbed through the" | | 2 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 3 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 4 | "Nyx materialised beside her, their" | | 5 | "they whispered, voice threading through" | | 6 | "The standing stones of the" | | 7 | "Rory didn’t hesitate." | | 8 | "She stepped through." | | 9 | "The world tilted." | | 10 | "The air smelled of crushed" | | 11 | "Nyx breathed, their form solidifying" | | 12 | "Rory’s stomach lurched." | | 13 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 14 | "She forced herself to look" | | 15 | "The earth beneath her feet" | | 16 | "It was *flesh*." | | 17 | "A vast, undulating plain of" | | 18 | "Rory said, but her voice" | | 19 | "Nyx’s violet eyes gleamed." |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "A crack spiderwebbed through the carved runes, and the air *shuddered*—not with wind, but with something deeper, something that hummed in the bones." | | 1 | "A vast, undulating plain of something that looked like skin—pale, veined, stretching endlessly in every direction." | | 2 | "Slow, deep inhalations that made the ground rise and fall in waves, like the chest of some slumbering giant." | | 3 | "From its depths rose a scent—rich, intoxicating, the kind of smell that made her mouth water even as her instincts screamed *danger*." | | 4 | "Towering trees with bark like polished mahogany bore fruit that *pulsed*, their skins splitting open to reveal glistening, blood-red flesh." | | 5 | "Rivers of honey-thick liquid cut through the flesh-plains, their surfaces dotted with floating islands of bread and cheese, as if some mad baker had dumped an e…" | | 6 | "Pale, half-buried in the flesh-ground, fingers curled as if in supplication." | | 7 | "Rory recoiled, but not before she saw the way his ribs *moved*, expanding and contracting as if something inside him were still breathing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice threading through the sudden stillness" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed, their form solidifying beside her" | | 2 | "Rory said, but her voice came out thin, swallowed by the vastness" | | 3 | "Nyx lunged, but the vine yanked her off balance, dragging her toward the chasm’s edge" | | 4 | "Nyx said, their voice tight" | | 5 | "Nyx said, their voice gentle but firm" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 4 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.385 | |