Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX42TVP692YDTK031X36K3

Run Details

Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.000717
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The clatter of ice against glass was a familiar symphony, a backdrop to the low murmur of Soho patrons unwinding after dark. Aurora Carter, Rory to those who knew her well enough, leaned against the polished oak of The Raven's Nest. Her delivery uniform, a garish splash of red and gold from the Golden Empress, felt out of place amidst the muted tones and strategically placed shadows of Silas’s establishment. She nursed a lukewarm beer, the chill a welcome contrast to the oppressive London heat lingering outside. The small crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed faintly, a phantom echo of scraped knees and childish tumbles. A shadow fell across the table, detaching itself from the general dimness. Rory looked up, her bright blue eyes widening with an involuntary gasp. The man who stood there was a ghost from another life, a life she’d meticulously packed away. “Laila?” the voice, deeper now, weathered but unmistakable, questioned. Rory blinked. Laila. It had been years since anyone had called her that. “Evan?” Her own voice was a breath, barely audible. He stepped closer, his hazel eyes, once full of a familiar warmth, now held a guarded curiosity. Gone was the boyish eagerness; in its place sat the hard lines of a man who had known the world’s rough edges. He’d filled out, his shoulders broader, bis frame more solid than she remembered. A faint stubble dusted his jaw, a stark contrast to the clean-shaven face of her youth. “You’re Laila?” he asked again, a hint of disbelief colouring his tone. “Aurora. Aurora Carter.” She offered him a small, tight smile. “Rory.” Evan’s lips curved into a slow smile, one that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “Rory. Right. I forgot. Laila was… well, a long time ago.” He gestured to the empty stool beside her. “Mind if I join you?” She hesitated for a fraction of a second. Years of caution, of building walls, warred with a flicker of the old bond. “Not at all.” He sat, his movements economical, almost practiced. The same silver signet ring flashed on his right hand, though now it seemed to gleam with a harder, colder light. He ordered a whiskey, neat, the bartender a hulking man with a slightly crooked smile, his presence a quiet anchor in the room. “So,” Evan began, swirling the amber liquid in his glass, the ice cubes clinking softly, “what brings you to this corner of the world? Last I heard, you were headed to some distant land to find yourself.” Rory’s grip tightened on her beer bottle. Distant land. He’d always had a way of twisting her words, of making her dreams sound like an excuse. “Just London, Evan. Working.” “Working? And for who?” He took a sip of his whiskey, his gaze steady on hers. “A restaurant. Deliveries.” She felt a flush creep up her neck, the indignity of it all. He was probably still on his upward trajectory, the law degree a stepping stone to something significant. “A delivery person.” He let the words hang in the air, not with mockery, but with a sort of detached observation, as if cataloging a specimen. “You always were full of surprises, Laila.” “And you always did have a knack for seeing the less flattering angles.” Her attempt at humour fell flat, the old banter replaced by a brittle politeness. Evan chuckled, a low rumble that didn’t quite dispel the tension between them. “I remembered you as someone who aimed higher. Pre-Law, wasn’t it? Cardiff University’s finest.” “Circumstances change.” She fixed her gaze on the swirling patterns on the bar top. “People change.” “Indeed,” he agreed, his voice softer. “People certainly do.” He shifted on his stool, the slight limp in his left leg more pronounced as he adjusted himself. “This place is… different. Cosy.” “Silas’s place. He’s a friend.” Rory offered. “He owns the flat above the bar. I live there.” “The Spymaster’s humble abode.” Evan’s eyebrow arched. “Always knew you’d gravitate towards shadows, Laila. Or should I say, Rory.” “They’re just… contacts. Information.” She smoothed down the fabric of her uniform shorts. “It’s not as dramatic as all that.” “Isn’t it?” He leaned back, a thoughtful expression on his face. “I used to think your life was going to be all grand pronouncements, courtroom battles, a fierce advocate for justice. You had that spark, that fire in your belly.” He met her eyes again, and this time, something akin to genuine regret flickered within them. “I remember when you told me you were leaving. You wouldn’t say why. Just that you had to. That you couldn’t stay.” The air crackled with unspoken words, with the memory of whispered arguments, of the chilling fear that had driven her from Cardiff, from Evan. He remembered the *leaving*, but not the *why*. “It was for the best, Evan.” Her voice was firm, a deliberate shield. “For both of us.” “Perhaps.” He drained his whiskey, signaling the bartender for another. “I often wondered, though. If I’d been different. If I’d seen… things earlier. If I could have made a difference.” The confession hung in the air, heavy and unexpected. Rory felt a prickle of movement beneath her skin, a sensation akin to the tremor of an approaching storm. She’d spent so many years burying the pain, the confusion, the sheer terror of those last months with him. Now, here he was, dredging it all up, softened by time, shrouded in a regret she hadn’t anticipated. “You didn’t know, Evan,” she said, her voice low but clear. “How could you have?” “That’s the thing, isn’t it?” He chuckled again, a dry, humourless sound. “We never do. Not until it’s all over. Not until the echoes start to fade and all that’s left is the silence.” He gestured with his glass. “This is a far cry from the life we planned, isn’t it, Rory?” She watched the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest cast a faint, ethereal glow across his face, highlighting the new lines etched around his eyes. It wasn't just the years that separated them; it was the lives they had lived, the people they had become, or perhaps, the people they had been forced to become. The weight of time settled heavily between them, a tangible thing in the smoky air of the bar. There was so much left unsaid, so many paths not taken, so many regrets that had solidified into the very fabric of their beings. “A far cry,” she echoed, the words catching in her throat. The beer in her hand suddenly felt stale, the night stretching out before her, long and filled with the ghosts of a shared past.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he asked again [again]"
1"He leaned back [back]"
2"He chuckled again [again]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.525
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
82.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1113
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1113
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"symphony"
count1
2
word"amidst"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"hulking"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"eyebrow"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
15
word"chilling"
count1
16
word"echoes"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"etched"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
20
word"tangible"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"symphony"
2"amidst"
3"chill"
4"oppressive"
5"throbbed"
6"echo"
7"warmth"
8"stark"
9"flicker"
10"hulking"
11"tension"
12"eyebrow"
13"flickered"
14"unspoken"
15"chilling"
16"echoes"
17"silence"
18"etched"
19"weight"
20"tangible"
21"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
97.68% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences61
matches
0"felt a flush"
1"felt a prickle"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1112
ratio0.002
matches
0"leaving"
1"why"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount824
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Carter1
Rory6
Raven2
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
Silas1
London1
Evan5
Cardiff1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Empress"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"as if cataloging a specimen"
2"quite dispel the tension between them"
3"something akin to genuine regret flickered with"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.899
wordCount1112
matches
0"not with mockery, but with a sort of detached observation, as if cataloging a spec"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean35.87
std24.05
cv0.67
sampleLengths
0106
141
29
322
468
512
611
738
825
951
1037
1130
1216
1333
1433
1527
1627
1716
1832
1917
2019
2120
2278
2332
2417
2530
2665
2715
2852
2998
3035
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"been forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs121
matches
0"was, dredging"
68.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences77
ratio0.026
matches
0"Gone was the boyish eagerness; in its place sat the hard lines of a man who had known the world’s rough edges."
1"It wasn't just the years that separated them; it was the lives they had lived, the people they had become, or perhaps, the people they had been forced to become."
97.88% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount825
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.04242424242424243
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01090909090909091
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean14.44
std8.43
cv0.584
sampleLengths
022
119
229
317
419
512
612
717
89
92
101
1110
129
1317
1422
1513
1616
1712
1810
191
2014
2119
225
238
2414
253
267
2721
2823
2937
307
312
3217
334
3416
3516
3617
3726
387
3927
4013
4114
4214
432
446
4521
465
477
4810
497
76.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4675324675324675
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences57
matches
0"Her delivery uniform, a garish"
1"She nursed a lukewarm beer,"
2"It had been years since"
3"Her own voice was a"
4"He stepped closer, his hazel"
5"He’d filled out, his shoulders"
6"he asked again, a hint"
7"She offered him a small,"
8"He gestured to the empty"
9"She hesitated for a fraction"
10"He sat, his movements economical,"
11"He ordered a whiskey, neat,"
12"He’d always had a way"
13"He took a sip of"
14"She felt a flush creep"
15"He was probably still on"
16"He let the words hang"
17"Her attempt at humour fell"
18"She fixed her gaze on"
19"he agreed, his voice softer"
ratio0.596
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences57
matches
0"The clatter of ice against"
1"Aurora Carter, Rory to those"
2"Her delivery uniform, a garish"
3"She nursed a lukewarm beer,"
4"The small crescent scar on"
5"A shadow fell across the"
6"Rory looked up, her bright"
7"The man who stood there"
8"the voice, deeper now, weathered"
9"It had been years since"
10"Her own voice was a"
11"He stepped closer, his hazel"
12"He’d filled out, his shoulders"
13"A faint stubble dusted his"
14"he asked again, a hint"
15"She offered him a small,"
16"Evan’s lips curved into a"
17"He gestured to the empty"
18"She hesitated for a fraction"
19"Years of caution, of building"
ratio0.947
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Now, here he was, dredging"
ratio0.018
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Gone was the boyish eagerness; in its place sat the hard lines of a man who had known the world’s rough edges."
1"The air crackled with unspoken words, with the memory of whispered arguments, of the chilling fear that had driven her from Cardiff, from Evan."
2"There was so much left unsaid, so many paths not taken, so many regrets that had solidified into the very fabric of their beings."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he asked again, a hint of disbelief colouring his tone"
1"He took, his gaze steady on hers"
2"She felt, the indignity of it all"
3"he agreed, his voice softer"
4"she said, her voice low but clear"
5"she echoed, the words catching in her throat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"He chuckled again (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.1
74.5398%