| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he asked again [again]" | | 1 | "He leaned back [back]" | | 2 | "He chuckled again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.525 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 82.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1113 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1113 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "symphony" | | 2 | "amidst" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "hulking" | | 11 | "tension" | | 12 | "eyebrow" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "unspoken" | | 15 | "chilling" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "etched" | | 19 | "weight" | | 20 | "tangible" | | 21 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 97.68% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a flush" | | 1 | "felt a prickle" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1112 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 824 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 5 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Empress" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite reach his eyes" | | 1 | "as if cataloging a specimen" | | 2 | "quite dispel the tension between them" | | 3 | "something akin to genuine regret flickered with" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.899 | | wordCount | 1112 | | matches | | 0 | "not with mockery, but with a sort of detached observation, as if cataloging a spec" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 35.87 | | std | 24.05 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 106 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 78 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 65 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 98 | | 30 | 35 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 121 | | matches | | |
| 68.65% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "Gone was the boyish eagerness; in its place sat the hard lines of a man who had known the world’s rough edges." | | 1 | "It wasn't just the years that separated them; it was the lives they had lived, the people they had become, or perhaps, the people they had been forced to become." |
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| 97.88% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 825 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.04242424242424243 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01090909090909091 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 14.44 | | std | 8.43 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 76.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4675324675324675 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her delivery uniform, a garish" | | 1 | "She nursed a lukewarm beer," | | 2 | "It had been years since" | | 3 | "Her own voice was a" | | 4 | "He stepped closer, his hazel" | | 5 | "He’d filled out, his shoulders" | | 6 | "he asked again, a hint" | | 7 | "She offered him a small," | | 8 | "He gestured to the empty" | | 9 | "She hesitated for a fraction" | | 10 | "He sat, his movements economical," | | 11 | "He ordered a whiskey, neat," | | 12 | "He’d always had a way" | | 13 | "He took a sip of" | | 14 | "She felt a flush creep" | | 15 | "He was probably still on" | | 16 | "He let the words hang" | | 17 | "Her attempt at humour fell" | | 18 | "She fixed her gaze on" | | 19 | "he agreed, his voice softer" |
| | ratio | 0.596 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The clatter of ice against" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, Rory to those" | | 2 | "Her delivery uniform, a garish" | | 3 | "She nursed a lukewarm beer," | | 4 | "The small crescent scar on" | | 5 | "A shadow fell across the" | | 6 | "Rory looked up, her bright" | | 7 | "The man who stood there" | | 8 | "the voice, deeper now, weathered" | | 9 | "It had been years since" | | 10 | "Her own voice was a" | | 11 | "He stepped closer, his hazel" | | 12 | "He’d filled out, his shoulders" | | 13 | "A faint stubble dusted his" | | 14 | "he asked again, a hint" | | 15 | "She offered him a small," | | 16 | "Evan’s lips curved into a" | | 17 | "He gestured to the empty" | | 18 | "She hesitated for a fraction" | | 19 | "Years of caution, of building" |
| | ratio | 0.947 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, here he was, dredging" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 68.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Gone was the boyish eagerness; in its place sat the hard lines of a man who had known the world’s rough edges." | | 1 | "The air crackled with unspoken words, with the memory of whispered arguments, of the chilling fear that had driven her from Cardiff, from Evan." | | 2 | "There was so much left unsaid, so many paths not taken, so many regrets that had solidified into the very fabric of their beings." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "he asked again, a hint of disbelief colouring his tone" | | 1 | "He took, his gaze steady on hers" | | 2 | "She felt, the indignity of it all" | | 3 | "he agreed, his voice softer" | | 4 | "she said, her voice low but clear" | | 5 | "she echoed, the words catching in her throat" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he agreed (agree)" | | 1 | "He chuckled again (chuckle)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |