Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX47KVM1TWSX8AYZYVX1PQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.001473
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory tightened the grip on the heavy canvas takeaway bag against her hip. The zipper chafed her thumb. The air in Richmond Park usually smelled of damp earth and distant exhaust fumes, a gritty London ambiance that grounded her existence. Tonight, the scent was wrong. Sweet. Cloying. Like decaying fruit left out in the sun. She stood at the lip of the clearing, the ancient oaks of the park heavy with shadows that seemed to lean inward, watching. The standing stones loomed ahead, roughly hewn from granite, their surfaces slick with condensation that had nothing to do with the heatwave gripping the city. These weren’t the well-groomed ancient stones she’d read about in history books. They were jagged, erratic, and marred with deep scores that looked like scratches left by claws. Somewhere near the stone circle, she’d misread the text message from Eva. *Richmond, south side. By the old oaks.* It had been an hour since she texted back *on my way*. The silence of the park should have been filled with the chirp of crickets or the distant drone of traffic, but here, the silence was absolute. It felt like holding a breath for too long. Rory stepped over the threshold. The grass didn’t crunch. It yielded with a wet, sucking sound, pulling at her ankle high-top Converse. The temperature plummeted instantly, a physical weight in her chest that made her shiver. She hugged her arms, the black hair at her nape prickling against her skin. "Okay. Just get the keys. Get the keys, leave the food, and go." She spoke the mantra aloud. It sounded hollow, bouncing off the trees that seemed impossibly close. She blinked, and the canopy above opened up into a dark, bruised purple sky. There were no stars. Just a heavy, oppressive gloom that swallowed the limited light from her phone. Her screen illuminated her face, the blue light revealing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Her father’s old hunting knife had slipped when she was twelve. She rubbed the scar unconsciously. It was dry now, but the phantom itch of the memory remained. She moved forward, her heel crunching on something that crumbled into dust under pressure. She shined the light around. Wildflowers. The codex called this place *The Fae Grove*, a pocket dimension where the flora grew unchecked. The description said they bloomed year-round. They were definitely blooming, but the colors were wrong. Intense, vibrating neon pinks and electric yellows that hurt to look at. They swayed with a rhythmic, jerky motion, like puppets on strings. There were no bees. The flowers remained perfectly still and silent. *Pulse.* Her hand instinctively moved to her chest, where the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant rested against her skin beneath her shirt. The crimson gem, the size of a thumbnail, flared briefly. Not the warm hum she felt when Eva visited her flat, but a sharp, invasive heat that radiated outward, searing through her layers of cotton. It was a reaction to *this* place. A physical defense mechanism triggered by something unnatural. Rory stopped walking. She held the light steady, aiming it at the ground. Footprints. They weren’t hers. They were large, clawed impressions in the soft earth that tapered to three distinct toes. The prints headed deeper into the grove, curving around a massive root system that looked disturbingly like a severed leg. She turned back the way she came. The stones were gone. "I'm joking. This isn't funny, Eva." The words barely left her lips before the wind picked up, carrying a sound. A low, wet clicking that echoed between her ribs. *Click. Click. Hiss.* The light on her phone flickered and died. The screen turned a solid, unbroken white, then black. Darkness rushed in to fill the void, pressing against her eyes. Rory fumbled for her pocket. The pendant felt like a hot coal now. It was vibrating against her collarbone. She gripped the silver chain with both hands, yanking it out from under her shirt. Deep crimson light bathed the immediate area, revealing a circle of ten feet around her. The darkness outside the light seemed to hold its breath. She strained her eyes into the gloom. Shadows separated from trees, detached themselves from the brush, and slithered along the ground. They were amorphous, darker than black, smelling of ozone and old rot. "Hello?" She waited. The silence stretched, ticking by like a second turned into a minute, a minute into an hour. A sound came from directly behind her. Not a rustle of leaves. It was the sound of wet fabric dragging on concrete. *Shhhhhhhhh-krrr-click.* Rory spun around. The pendant light swung wildly, catching movement in the tree line five feet away. There, on a low-hanging branch, was a figure. Or what was left of one. It wore the tattered remnants of a black suit jacket, stained with dark blotches. Its head was tilted unnaturally, the neck creaking audibly. A large, wet beak snapped shut with a hollow *click*. It blinked at her. The eyes were entirely black, devoid of whites or irises, like glass marbles set deep in a skull. Rory took a step back, her heel catching on a root. She stumbled, the takeaway bag slipping from her hand. The heavy box hit the dirt, spraying noodles and gravy. The scent of the food, spicy and savory, clashed horribly with the metallic tang of fear filling her nose. The thing in the tree didn't strike. It watched. Rory scrambled up, her fingers digging into the dirt, pushing herself upright. She needed to run. She needed to find the stones, find the boundary. Eva said it was safe. Eva said Dymas kept this place stable. *Get out.* She turned and sprinted. Her lungs burned. The pendant hammered against her chest, the crimson glow pulsing in time with her frantic heartbeat. She ran past the electric pinks and purple stalks. The trees whispered around her, their branches extending to snag at her clothes. She dodged, leaping over a hollow log that looked like an open mouth. She heard the 'thing' drop from the branch behind her, landing with a heavy thud that shook the earth. *Click. Hiss. Shhhhhhh.* "Go away!" The darkness swallowed the trees. It wasn't just the absence of light; it was a shape. A shape that wanted her inside it. The air grew cold enough to freeze her lungs. She stopped, gasping for air, doubling over, hands on her knees. She looked up. The Heartstone pendant was blazing. The crimson gem was pulsing so hard she could see the beat reflected in her own eyes. It was pushing out a wave of red light, pushing back the encroaching black. The light hit something in the bushes. A shape stood there, emerging from the undergrowth. It was tall, spindly, with skin the color of parchment. It held its hands out, long fingers curling like talons, whispering to itself in a tongue that sounded like grinding stones. The figure saw the pendant. It hissed, a sound like steam escaping a valve, and lunged. Rory didn't think. She grabbed the heavy takeaway bag—the one with the ribs and noodles—and swung it with every ounce of strength she had in her right arm. The cardboard box connected solidly with the creature's shoulder with a wet *thwack*. It staggered back, clutching its shoulder, and vanished into the shadows, cackling. The sound was jagged, high-pitched, and terrifyingly human. Rory dropped the bag and backed away, her back hitting a tree trunk. The light from the pendant was the only thing anchoring her to reality. She looked at the path behind her. The strange, vibrating flowers. The distorted trees. The distinct lack of stars. The silence returned, but now it was heavy, heavy with the knowledge that the boundary was not a door she could walk back through. It was a trap.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"electric"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"oppressive"
4"gloom"
5"electric"
6"rhythmic"
7"pulse"
8"searing"
9"echoed"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences136
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords26
totalWords1310
ratio0.02
matches
0"Richmond, south side. By the old oaks."
1"on my way"
2"The Fae Grove"
3"Pulse."
4"this"
5"Click. Click. Hiss."
6"Shhhhhhhhh-krrr-click."
7"click"
8"Get out."
9"Click. Hiss. Shhhhhhh."
10"thwack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1272
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
London1
Eva4
Converse1
Fae1
Heartstone2
Rory9
Dymas1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Dymas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"shadows that seemed to lean inward, watching"
1"looked like scratches left by claws"
2"felt like holding a breath for too long"
3"seemed impossibly close"
4"felt like a hot coal now"
5"looked like an open mouth"
6"sounded like grinding stones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.763
wordCount1310
matches
0"Not the warm hum she felt when Eva visited her flat, but a sharp, invasive heat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.77
std21.42
cv0.719
sampleLengths
055
176
266
350
413
547
644
719
866
91
1072
1113
121
1338
1411
156
1626
1728
1834
1958
201
2119
2222
231
2417
2547
2622
2749
289
2937
302
3123
3254
333
342
3543
363
3736
3846
3916
4041
4120
4245
4328
97.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences136
matches
0"been filled"
1"were gone"
2"was tilted"
81.48% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was vibrating"
1"was blazing"
2"was pulsing"
3"was pushing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences140
ratio0.014
matches
0"It wasn't just the absence of light; it was a shape."
1"She grabbed the heavy takeaway bag—the one with the ribs and noodles—and swung it with every ounce of strength she had in her right arm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount996
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.035140562248995984
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01706827309236948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean9.36
std6.05
cv0.647
sampleLengths
013
15
222
35
41
51
68
723
825
912
1016
1112
123
1316
1426
159
165
174
1813
1914
2014
2113
225
2311
2414
254
2613
2716
2811
295
3012
3114
325
331
3416
356
369
3712
3811
394
407
411
4222
4310
4425
457
468
473
4810
491
37.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2642857142857143
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners37
55.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"Somewhere near the stone circle,"
1"Just a heavy, oppressive gloom"
ratio0.017
58.02% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences121
matches
0"She stood at the lip"
1"They were jagged, erratic, and"
2"It felt like holding a"
3"It yielded with a wet,"
4"She hugged her arms, the"
5"She spoke the mantra aloud."
6"It sounded hollow, bouncing off"
7"She blinked, and the canopy"
8"Her screen illuminated her face,"
9"Her father’s old hunting knife"
10"She rubbed the scar unconsciously."
11"It was dry now, but"
12"She moved forward, her heel"
13"She shined the light around."
14"They were definitely blooming, but"
15"They swayed with a rhythmic,"
16"Her hand instinctively moved to"
17"It was a reaction to"
18"She held the light steady,"
19"They weren’t hers."
ratio0.405
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences121
matches
0"Rory tightened the grip on"
1"The zipper chafed her thumb."
2"The air in Richmond Park"
3"Tonight, the scent was wrong."
4"She stood at the lip"
5"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
6"These weren’t the well-groomed ancient"
7"They were jagged, erratic, and"
8"*Richmond, south side."
9"The silence of the park"
10"It felt like holding a"
11"Rory stepped over the threshold."
12"The grass didn’t crunch."
13"It yielded with a wet,"
14"The temperature plummeted instantly, a"
15"She hugged her arms, the"
16"She spoke the mantra aloud."
17"It sounded hollow, bouncing off"
18"She blinked, and the canopy"
19"Her screen illuminated her face,"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.05% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park usually smelled of damp earth and distant exhaust fumes, a gritty London ambiance that grounded her existence."
1"The standing stones loomed ahead, roughly hewn from granite, their surfaces slick with condensation that had nothing to do with the heatwave gripping the city."
2"They were jagged, erratic, and marred with deep scores that looked like scratches left by claws."
3"The temperature plummeted instantly, a physical weight in her chest that made her shiver."
4"Just a heavy, oppressive gloom that swallowed the limited light from her phone."
5"She moved forward, her heel crunching on something that crumbled into dust under pressure."
6"Not the warm hum she felt when Eva visited her flat, but a sharp, invasive heat that radiated outward, searing through her layers of cotton."
7"They were large, clawed impressions in the soft earth that tapered to three distinct toes."
8"The prints headed deeper into the grove, curving around a massive root system that looked disturbingly like a severed leg."
9"Rory scrambled up, her fingers digging into the dirt, pushing herself upright."
10"She dodged, leaping over a hollow log that looked like an open mouth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.4758%