| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1318 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1318 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1310 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond, south side. By the old oaks." | | 1 | "on my way" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove" | | 3 | "Pulse." | | 4 | "this" | | 5 | "Click. Click. Hiss." | | 6 | "Shhhhhhhhh-krrr-click." | | 7 | "click" | | 8 | "Get out." | | 9 | "Click. Hiss. Shhhhhhh." | | 10 | "thwack" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1272 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Converse | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 9 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to lean inward, watching" | | 1 | "looked like scratches left by claws" | | 2 | "felt like holding a breath for too long" | | 3 | "seemed impossibly close" | | 4 | "felt like a hot coal now" | | 5 | "looked like an open mouth" | | 6 | "sounded like grinding stones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.763 | | wordCount | 1310 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the warm hum she felt when Eva visited her flat, but a sharp, invasive heat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 29.77 | | std | 21.42 | | cv | 0.719 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 43 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 46 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 45 | | 43 | 28 |
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| 97.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "been filled" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "was tilted" |
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| 81.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 225 | | matches | | 0 | "was vibrating" | | 1 | "was blazing" | | 2 | "was pulsing" | | 3 | "was pushing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just the absence of light; it was a shape." | | 1 | "She grabbed the heavy takeaway bag—the one with the ribs and noodles—and swung it with every ounce of strength she had in her right arm." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 996 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.035140562248995984 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01706827309236948 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 9.36 | | std | 6.05 | | cv | 0.647 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 37.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.2642857142857143 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 55.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere near the stone circle," | | 1 | "Just a heavy, oppressive gloom" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 58.02% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the lip" | | 1 | "They were jagged, erratic, and" | | 2 | "It felt like holding a" | | 3 | "It yielded with a wet," | | 4 | "She hugged her arms, the" | | 5 | "She spoke the mantra aloud." | | 6 | "It sounded hollow, bouncing off" | | 7 | "She blinked, and the canopy" | | 8 | "Her screen illuminated her face," | | 9 | "Her father’s old hunting knife" | | 10 | "She rubbed the scar unconsciously." | | 11 | "It was dry now, but" | | 12 | "She moved forward, her heel" | | 13 | "She shined the light around." | | 14 | "They were definitely blooming, but" | | 15 | "They swayed with a rhythmic," | | 16 | "Her hand instinctively moved to" | | 17 | "It was a reaction to" | | 18 | "She held the light steady," | | 19 | "They weren’t hers." |
| | ratio | 0.405 | |
| 5.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 110 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory tightened the grip on" | | 1 | "The zipper chafed her thumb." | | 2 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 3 | "Tonight, the scent was wrong." | | 4 | "She stood at the lip" | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 6 | "These weren’t the well-groomed ancient" | | 7 | "They were jagged, erratic, and" | | 8 | "*Richmond, south side." | | 9 | "The silence of the park" | | 10 | "It felt like holding a" | | 11 | "Rory stepped over the threshold." | | 12 | "The grass didn’t crunch." | | 13 | "It yielded with a wet," | | 14 | "The temperature plummeted instantly, a" | | 15 | "She hugged her arms, the" | | 16 | "She spoke the mantra aloud." | | 17 | "It sounded hollow, bouncing off" | | 18 | "She blinked, and the canopy" | | 19 | "Her screen illuminated her face," |
| | ratio | 0.909 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 14.05% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park usually smelled of damp earth and distant exhaust fumes, a gritty London ambiance that grounded her existence." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, roughly hewn from granite, their surfaces slick with condensation that had nothing to do with the heatwave gripping the city." | | 2 | "They were jagged, erratic, and marred with deep scores that looked like scratches left by claws." | | 3 | "The temperature plummeted instantly, a physical weight in her chest that made her shiver." | | 4 | "Just a heavy, oppressive gloom that swallowed the limited light from her phone." | | 5 | "She moved forward, her heel crunching on something that crumbled into dust under pressure." | | 6 | "Not the warm hum she felt when Eva visited her flat, but a sharp, invasive heat that radiated outward, searing through her layers of cotton." | | 7 | "They were large, clawed impressions in the soft earth that tapered to three distinct toes." | | 8 | "The prints headed deeper into the grove, curving around a massive root system that looked disturbingly like a severed leg." | | 9 | "Rory scrambled up, her fingers digging into the dirt, pushing herself upright." | | 10 | "She dodged, leaping over a hollow log that looked like an open mouth." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |