Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX47N77J7FK8RX5N1WR178

Run Details

Duration:
14.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stood at the edge of the Richmond Park, staring into the darkness between the trees. The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her chest, pulsing with a faint warmth that seemed to beckon her forward. She'd come here on a whim, following an inexplicable pull that had woken her in the middle of the night. Now, standing at the threshold of the ancient grove, doubt crept in. "You're being ridiculous," she muttered to herself, taking a tentative step forward. The grass beneath her feet felt unnaturally soft, almost spongy, and the air carried a sweet, cloying scent that reminded her of rotting flowers. As she ventured deeper, the trees seemed to close in around her, their branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. The pendant grew warmer with each step, until it felt like a brand against her skin. Rory's heart raced, but she pressed on, driven by a need she couldn't quite explain. Suddenly, a twig snapped behind her. Rory whirled around, her pulse pounding in her ears. Nothing. Just the endless expanse of trees and shadows. She laughed nervously, trying to shake off the feeling of being watched. "You're losing it, Rory," she whispered, turning back to continue her journey. But then she saw it. A flicker of movement between the trees, too quick to make out. Her breath caught in her throat as she strained to see more. There it was again, a dark shape darting between the trunks, always at the edge of her vision. "Who's there?" Rory called out, her voice trembling. "Show yourself!" Silence. The grove seemed to hold its breath, waiting. Rory's hand instinctively moved to the pendant, its warmth now bordering on painful. She took a step back, then another, her eyes never leaving the spot where she'd seen the movement. That's when she heard it. A soft, melodic humming, like a lullaby sung by a voice not quite human. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once, wrapping around her like a suffocating blanket. Rory's skin crawled as the hairs on the back of her neck stood on end. She turned to run, but her feet wouldn't move. It was as if the very ground had become quicksand, pulling her down into its embrace. The humming grew louder, more insistent, and Rory felt a presence behind her. A cold breath on the back of her neck. "Don't be afraid," a voice whispered, close enough that she could feel the words against her skin. "We've been waiting for you." Rory's scream caught in her throat as strong hands gripped her shoulders, spinning her around. She found herself face to face with a figure cloaked in shadows, its features obscured but for two glowing eyes that seemed to pierce her very soul. "What do you want?" Rory managed to choke out, her voice barely audible over the pounding of her heart. The figure leaned in closer, its breath icy against her cheek. "You have something that belongs to us," it hissed. "The Heartstone. Give it to us, and perhaps we'll let you leave this place alive." Rory's hand flew to the pendant, her fingers closing around it protectively. "I don't know what you're talking about," she lied, her mind racing for an escape. The figure laughed, a sound like shattering glass. "Oh, but you do. And we'll have it, one way or another." With a sudden movement, the figure reached out and grabbed the pendant. Rory screamed as a searing pain shot through her body, the warmth of the stone turning to white-hot agony. She felt herself being pulled forward, into the waiting arms of the shadowy figure. As consciousness began to slip away, Rory caught one last glimpse of the grove around her. The trees were no longer still, but writhing like living things, their branches reaching out to embrace her. And in the center of it all, a swirling vortex of darkness, pulsing with the same crimson glow as the Heartstone. "Welcome home," the figure whispered as Rory fell into the abyss, the last thing she saw before the darkness claimed her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount683
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"nervously"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount683
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"raced"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count2
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"raced"
2"pulse"
3"pounding"
4"flicker"
5"silence"
6"could feel"
7"racing"
8"searing"
9"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords682
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount616
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Silence1
Rory13
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.445
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"warmth that seemed to beckon her forward"
1"felt like a brand against her skin"
2"quite explain"
3"not quite human"
4"It was as if the very ground had become quicksand, pulling her down into its embrace"
5"eyes that seemed to pierce her very soul"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount682
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
78.52% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean35.89
std15.25
cv0.425
sampleLengths
067
136
250
336
412
547
610
740
851
947
1022
1142
1219
1335
1427
1520
1645
1755
1821
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs110
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences52
ratio0
matches(empty)
85.36% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount617
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.05672609400324149
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009724473257698542
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean13.12
std5.6
cv0.427
sampleLengths
016
119
220
312
412
524
619
716
815
96
109
111
128
1312
1412
155
1612
1712
1818
198
202
211
228
2313
2418
255
2614
2717
2815
299
3016
3113
329
3317
345
3515
3627
3719
3811
399
4015
4112
4215
438
4412
4512
4619
4714
4816
4918
83.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences45
matches
0"Suddenly, a twig snapped behind"
1"Just the endless expanse of"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences45
matches
0"She'd come here on a"
1"she muttered to herself, taking"
2"She laughed nervously, trying to"
3"she whispered, turning back to"
4"Her breath caught in her"
5"She took a step back,"
6"It seemed to come from"
7"She turned to run, but"
8"It was as if the"
9"She found herself face to"
10"she lied, her mind racing"
11"She felt herself being pulled"
ratio0.267
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences45
matches
0"Rory stood at the edge"
1"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy"
2"She'd come here on a"
3"she muttered to herself, taking"
4"The grass beneath her feet"
5"The pendant grew warmer with"
6"Rory's heart raced, but she"
7"Rory whirled around, her pulse"
8"She laughed nervously, trying to"
9"she whispered, turning back to"
10"A flicker of movement between"
11"Her breath caught in her"
12"Rory called out, her voice"
13"The grove seemed to hold"
14"Rory's hand instinctively moved to"
15"She took a step back,"
16"That's when she heard it."
17"A soft, melodic humming, like"
18"It seemed to come from"
19"Rory's skin crawled as the"
ratio0.8
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Now, standing at the threshold"
ratio0.022
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her chest, pulsing with a faint warmth that seemed to beckon her forward."
1"She'd come here on a whim, following an inexplicable pull that had woken her in the middle of the night."
2"The grass beneath her feet felt unnaturally soft, almost spongy, and the air carried a sweet, cloying scent that reminded her of rotting flowers."
3"The trees were no longer still, but writhing like living things, their branches reaching out to embrace her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory called out, her voice trembling"
1"Rory managed, her voice barely audible over the pounding of her heart"
2"she lied, her mind racing for an escape"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory called out (call out)"
3"a voice whispered (whisper)"
4"it hissed (hiss)"
5"she lied (lie)"
6"the figure whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
75.6511%