| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 68.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 965 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 965 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "sanctuary" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 45 | | totalWords | 963 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "Not alone." | | 1 | "The Heartstone brought you to us." | | 2 | "A gift." | | 3 | "Why? We've been waiting so long for a doorkeeper." | | 4 | "Someone to guard the threshold between worlds. Someone to stand watch while the rest of us... visit." | | 5 | "Run, little doorkeeper," | | 6 | "Run. The fun has just begun." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 955 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Grove | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Celtic | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.819 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as if guiding her path" | | 1 | "mstone glowing visibly through her jumper" | | 2 | "as if bowing to some invisible presence" | | 3 | "as if offering guidance" | | 4 | "stones that seemed to whisper secrets in a language she almost understood" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.077 | | wordCount | 963 | | matches | | 0 | "not from any specific direction but seeming to come from everywhere at once" | | 1 | "not smoke at all, but hundreds of tiny creatures moving together as one, insect-li" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.77% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 35.67 | | std | 16.18 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 14 |
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| 96.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "being absorbed" |
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| 80.24% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "was burning" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was coming" |
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| 1.76% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "The clearing looked innocent enough — wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours under the moonlight, their petals shimmering with an otherworldly glow." | | 1 | "The pendant hadn't led her to sanctuary — it had led her into a trap." | | 2 | "The shadow drifted closer, and she could see it more clearly now — not smoke at all, but hundreds of tiny creatures moving together as one, insect-like with too many legs and chittering mouths that formed a single, terrifying voice." | | 3 | "Aurora closed her eyes, gripping the pendant with both hands, and whispered the only words that came to mind — an old Celtic prayer her grandmother had taught her as a child." |
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| 94.77% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 957 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.04597701149425287 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017763845350052248 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 11.89 | | std | 7.98 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 45.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.37037037037037035 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 47.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd found the Grove's entrance" | | 1 | "Her voice sounded small in" | | 2 | "She took another step forward," | | 3 | "She pulled it out, watching" | | 4 | "She needed to leave." | | 5 | "It had no definite shape," | | 6 | "Its heat was unbearable now," | | 7 | "she shouted, her voice trembling" | | 8 | "We've been waiting so long" | | 9 | "It was bait." | | 10 | "It was watching, waiting." | | 11 | "She climbed slowly to her" |
| | ratio | 0.171 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 2 | "She'd found the Grove's entrance" | | 3 | "The pendant had grown warmer" | | 4 | "The clearing looked innocent enough" | | 5 | "The silence was too complete." | | 6 | "Aurora tightened her grip on" | | 7 | "The temperature dropped instantly, her" | | 8 | "The wildflowers bent away from" | | 9 | "This wasn't right." | | 10 | "The notes had described the" | | 11 | "The pendant's heat intensified, almost" | | 12 | "Her voice sounded small in" | | 13 | "A whisper answered her, not" | | 14 | "The words were in a" | | 15 | "Aurora spun around, torch beam" | | 16 | "The flowers remained perfectly still," | | 17 | "She took another step forward," | | 18 | "The Heartstone pendant was burning" | | 19 | "She pulled it out, watching" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the threshold," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 31.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her jumper pulsed faintly against her skin, a steady warmth that contrasted sharply with the sudden chill in the air." | | 1 | "Aurora tightened her grip on the torch in her hand, its beam cutting through the darkness as she stepped between the first pair of standing stones." | | 2 | "The ground beneath her feet trembled slightly, the wildflowers flattening as if bowing to some invisible presence." | | 3 | "The shadow drifted closer, and she could see it more clearly now — not smoke at all, but hundreds of tiny creatures moving together as one, insect-like with too…" | | 4 | "The shadow-creature surged forward, breaking apart into hundreds of individual horrors that swarmed toward her." | | 5 | "Aurora closed her eyes, gripping the pendant with both hands, and whispered the only words that came to mind — an old Celtic prayer her grandmother had taught h…" | | 6 | "The heartbeat sound continued, slower now, as if the creature that made it had merely paused in its work." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she shouted, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |