Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX48CSBAV66ZD992410SGB

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25.1s
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$0.005192
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Novita

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead of Aurora as she pushed through the final thicket of brambles, her sleeves torn and stinging from the thorns. The Heartstone pendant beneath her jumper pulsed faintly against her skin, a steady warmth that contrasted sharply with the sudden chill in the air. She'd found the Grove's entrance after weeks of searching, following cryptic notes left by her benefactor. The pendant had grown warmer with each step closer to Richmond Park, as if guiding her path. Now, standing at the threshold, Aurora hesitated. The clearing looked innocent enough — wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours under the moonlight, their petals shimmering with an otherworldly glow. But something was wrong. The silence was too complete. No night insects chirped, no rustling of small creatures in the undergrowth. Even the wind seemed to avoid this space, leaving the air unnaturally still. Aurora tightened her grip on the torch in her hand, its beam cutting through the darkness as she stepped between the first pair of standing stones. The temperature dropped instantly, her breath fogging in front of her. The wildflowers bent away from her path as if repelled by her presence. This wasn't right. The notes had described the Grove as a place of sanctuary, a sanctuary between worlds. The pendant's heat intensified, almost burning now against her chest. "Hello?" Her voice sounded small in the oppressive quiet. "Is anyone here?" A whisper answered her, not from any specific direction but seeming to come from everywhere at once. The words were in a language she didn't recognize, yet somehow understood. *Not alone.* Aurora spun around, torch beam sweeping across the clearing. Nothing moved. The flowers remained perfectly still, their colours too bright for the limited moonlight. She took another step forward, deeper into the Grove, and the air grew heavier, pressing down on her like a physical weight. The Heartstone pendant was burning now, its crimson gemstone glowing visibly through her jumper. She pulled it out, watching as the light pulsed in time with a distant, rhythmic sound she hadn't noticed before. Thump-thump. Thump-thump. Like a giant heartbeat beneath the earth. She needed to leave. This had been a mistake. The pendant hadn't led her to sanctuary — it had led her into a trap. As Aurora turned back toward the standing stones, she froze. The path through the brambles had vanished. The entrance was gone, replaced by an impenetrable wall of thorns and twisted branches that hadn't been there moments before. The heartbeat sound grew louder, faster. The ground beneath her feet trembled slightly, the wildflowers flattening as if bowing to some invisible presence. Aurora's torch flickered, the beam dimming as if the very light was being absorbed by the Grove. A shadow detached itself from the darkness between two standing stones. It had no definite shape, shifting and flowing like smoke, but Aurora could sense intelligence in its movement. Purpose. Hunger. The pendant seared her skin, and she cried out, dropping to her knees. The shadow drifted closer, and she could see it more clearly now — not smoke at all, but hundreds of tiny creatures moving together as one, insect-like with too many legs and chittering mouths that formed a single, terrifying voice. *The Heartstone brought you to us.* The thought appeared directly in her mind, bypassing her ears entirely. *A gift.* Aurora scrambled backward, the torch forgotten as she clutched the pendant. Its heat was unbearable now, the silver chain branding her neck. The shadow-creature flowed toward her, the ground vibrating with its approach. The wildflowers in its path withered and turned black. "Stay away from me!" she shouted, her voice trembling. *Why? We've been waiting so long for a doorkeeper.* The creature's voice was silk over steel, deceptive and dangerous. *Someone to guard the threshold between worlds. Someone to stand watch while the rest of us... visit.* Aurora's blood ran cold as understanding dawned. The pendant hadn't been a gift at all. It was bait. A lure to bring her to this place, to trap her here as eternal guardian of whatever hellish portal lay within the Grove. The shadow-creature surged forward, breaking apart into hundreds of individual horrors that swarmed toward her. Aurora closed her eyes, gripping the pendant with both hands, and whispered the only words that came to mind — an old Celtic prayer her grandmother had taught her as a child. Light exploded from the Heartstone, blinding and brilliant. The creatures shrieked, a sound that tore at her eardrums and made her teeth ache. When the light faded, the clearing was empty. The shadow-creature had retreated, but Aurora knew it hadn't left. It was watching, waiting. She climbed slowly to her feet, the pendant now cool and dark against her palm. The standing stones seemed to lean inward, confining her. The heartbeat sound continued, slower now, as if the creature that made it had merely paused in its work. Aurora looked at the wall of thorns where the entrance had been, then at the impossible darkness beyond the farthest standing stones. Two choices, both equally deadly. Stay and face whatever was coming back for her, or venture deeper into the Grove, toward the source of that terrible, rhythmic heartbeat. The pendant warmed slightly in her hand, as if offering guidance. Aurora took a deep breath and stepped forward, away from the vanished entrance, toward the unknown darkness. The path ahead was narrow, flanked by stones that seemed to whisper secrets in a language she almost understood. Behind her, the shadow-creature began to stir once more, its many parts re-forming into the shape of a woman with hollow eyes and a smile too wide for her face. *Run, little doorkeeper,* it sang in her mind. *Run. The fun has just begun.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"otherworldly"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count3
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count2
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"chill"
4"otherworldly"
5"silence"
6"sanctuary"
7"oppressive"
8"whisper"
9"weight"
10"rhythmic"
11"trembled"
12"flickered"
13"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords45
totalWords963
ratio0.047
matches
0"Not alone."
1"The Heartstone brought you to us."
2"A gift."
3"Why? We've been waiting so long for a doorkeeper."
4"Someone to guard the threshold between worlds. Someone to stand watch while the rest of us... visit."
5"Run, little doorkeeper,"
6"Run. The fun has just begun."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount955
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Heartstone4
Grove6
Richmond1
Park1
Celtic1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.819
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"as if guiding her path"
1"mstone glowing visibly through her jumper"
2"as if bowing to some invisible presence"
3"as if offering guidance"
4"stones that seemed to whisper secrets in a language she almost understood"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.077
wordCount963
matches
0"not from any specific direction but seeming to come from everywhere at once"
1"not smoke at all, but hundreds of tiny creatures moving together as one, insect-li"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
86.77% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean35.67
std16.18
cv0.454
sampleLengths
050
161
24
356
452
512
629
72
846
943
1024
1137
1240
1331
1453
1519
1642
179
1836
1941
2047
2145
2243
2350
2447
2530
2614
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"was gone"
1"being absorbed"
80.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was burning"
1"was watching"
2"was coming"
1.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences81
ratio0.049
matches
0"The clearing looked innocent enough — wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours under the moonlight, their petals shimmering with an otherworldly glow."
1"The pendant hadn't led her to sanctuary — it had led her into a trap."
2"The shadow drifted closer, and she could see it more clearly now — not smoke at all, but hundreds of tiny creatures moving together as one, insect-like with too many legs and chittering mouths that formed a single, terrifying voice."
3"Aurora closed her eyes, gripping the pendant with both hands, and whispered the only words that came to mind — an old Celtic prayer her grandmother had taught her as a child."
94.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04597701149425287
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.017763845350052248
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean11.89
std7.98
cv0.671
sampleLengths
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913
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1415
1510
169
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202
219
222
2313
2422
2514
2620
271
281
297
304
315
3215
3310
347
3520
366
3717
3817
3911
4018
411
421
4313
4440
4517
462
4711
4811
4911
45.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.37037037037037035
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners30
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Even the wind seemed to"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences70
matches
0"She'd found the Grove's entrance"
1"Her voice sounded small in"
2"She took another step forward,"
3"She pulled it out, watching"
4"She needed to leave."
5"It had no definite shape,"
6"Its heat was unbearable now,"
7"she shouted, her voice trembling"
8"We've been waiting so long"
9"It was bait."
10"It was watching, waiting."
11"She climbed slowly to her"
ratio0.171
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences70
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
2"She'd found the Grove's entrance"
3"The pendant had grown warmer"
4"The clearing looked innocent enough"
5"The silence was too complete."
6"Aurora tightened her grip on"
7"The temperature dropped instantly, her"
8"The wildflowers bent away from"
9"This wasn't right."
10"The notes had described the"
11"The pendant's heat intensified, almost"
12"Her voice sounded small in"
13"A whisper answered her, not"
14"The words were in a"
15"Aurora spun around, torch beam"
16"The flowers remained perfectly still,"
17"She took another step forward,"
18"The Heartstone pendant was burning"
19"She pulled it out, watching"
ratio0.857
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Now, standing at the threshold,"
ratio0.014
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant beneath her jumper pulsed faintly against her skin, a steady warmth that contrasted sharply with the sudden chill in the air."
1"Aurora tightened her grip on the torch in her hand, its beam cutting through the darkness as she stepped between the first pair of standing stones."
2"The ground beneath her feet trembled slightly, the wildflowers flattening as if bowing to some invisible presence."
3"The shadow drifted closer, and she could see it more clearly now — not smoke at all, but hundreds of tiny creatures moving together as one, insect-like with too…"
4"The shadow-creature surged forward, breaking apart into hundreds of individual horrors that swarmed toward her."
5"Aurora closed her eyes, gripping the pendant with both hands, and whispered the only words that came to mind — an old Celtic prayer her grandmother had taught h…"
6"The heartbeat sound continued, slower now, as if the creature that made it had merely paused in its work."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she shouted, her voice trembling"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
67.0589%