Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX49F9XMCP4BB8N9XSFAXG

Run Details

Duration:
2m 17s
Cost:
$0.002279
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk, a sound that usually signalled the end of a long day and the start of blessed silence. Rory pulled the door open, the lingering scent of turmeric and cumin from the curry house below clinging to her clothes. He filled the doorway, a stark silhouette against the garish neon sign of the kebab shop across the street. The dim light from the hall caught the slicked-back platinum of his hair and the severe line of his charcoal suit. Lucien Moreau. He hadn’t changed a bit. “You’re a difficult woman to find, Aurora Carter.” His voice was a low, familiar rumble, the French accent a subtle, expensive veneer over the words. It did things to her, that voice. Things she’d spent two years forgetting. Her hand tightened on the doorframe, the small crescent scar on her left wrist a pale, familiar mark against her skin. “I wasn’t hiding. Just selective about my company.” A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips. “A quality I’ve always admired. May I come in? The hallway lacks a certain… privacy.” She didn’t move. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound himself around her ankles, his tail twitching as he assessed the newcomer. “It’s late, Luc. And this isn’t your part of town.” “No,” he agreed, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—taking in the cramped, book-choked space behind her. “My part of town has better wine and fewer… rodents. But my business is with you.” He leaned forward slightly, not enough to cross the threshold, but enough for her to catch the scent of him—sandalwood and something colder, sharper, like ozone after a storm. His gaze dropped to the takeaway bag still in her hand, the Golden Empress logo glaringly obvious. “Still delivering for Yu-Fei, I see. A curious use of a Pre-Law mind.” “It pays the rent. Unlike some of your previous offers.” The retort was out before she could stop it, sharp and petty. She saw the flicker in his mismatched eyes, the slight tightening of his jaw. Good. Let him remember. Let him feel it, too. “Those offers,” he said softly, “were made under different circumstances. And they still stand. Though the terms may have… evolved.” He shifted his weight, and the movement drew her attention to the ivory-handled cane he carried. It was new. Or, rather, she’d never seen him with one before. It looked expensive, an extension of his impeccable tailoring. She knew it wasn’t just for show. Lucien Moreau didn’t do anything just for show. “Evolved how?” she asked, her voice tighter than she intended. “That,” he said, “is a conversation for behind a closed door. Unless you’d prefer to discuss the particulars of demonic contract law with your neighbour?” He gestured with the cane towards the stairwell, where the sound of heavy footsteps was indeed approaching. With a frustrated sigh, Rory stepped back. “Fine. Five minutes.” He moved past her into the flat with a fluid grace that made the small space seem even smaller. His presence was an intrusion, a wave of controlled power that disrupted the dusty, academic peace of Eva’s domain. He didn’t look at the stacks of books or the scrolls cascading off the kitchen table. His focus was entirely on her. “You look well, Rory.” “Don’t.” “Don’t what? Observe? Comment? It’s been two years. A simple observation of health is hardly a breach of protocol.” “Everything with you is a breach of something, Luc. Why are you here?” He set the cane down, leaning it carefully against a teetering pile of hardbacks on ancient Sumerian rituals. The ivory handle gleamed in the lamplight. “A mutual acquaintance is in trouble. The kind of trouble that requires your particular… talents.” “I don’t have talents. I have a bicycle and a part-time job.” “You have a mind that solves puzzles no one else can see. You see the connections others miss. You left a man like Evan Pryce not just broken, but dismantled, his entire operation unravelled with a few well-placed questions. Don’t sell yourself short with false modesty. It doesn’t suit you.” The mention of Evan was a low blow, a deliberate twist of the knife. She felt the old fear, cold and slick, coil in her stomach. “That was survival. This is different.” “Is it?” He took a step closer. The space between them crackled with unsaid things—the memory of his hands on her skin, the bitter taste of his betrayal, the electric pull that had never truly died. “This is survival, too. Just for someone else.” “Who?” “A client. His daughter has… disappeared. The conventional avenues have proven fruitless. He came to me. And I,” he said, his gaze intense, “immediately thought of you.” “Find another thinker. I’m out.” “There is no other. The girl was last seen near the old meat markets in Smithfield. There were… signs. Symbols. The kind you used to find in your father’s old legal texts, the ones he brought back from Dublin. The ones you found so fascinating.” Her blood ran cold. He wasn’t just here with a job offer. He was here with bait, and he knew exactly which hook would sink the deepest. “That’s a cheap shot, even for you.” “It’s the truth. This isn’t a simple missing person’s case, Rory. The things drawn on the walls… they weren’t graffiti. They were an invocation. And the language was… familial.” The air left her lungs. *Familial*. He might as well have slapped her. “You think this is connected to my-” “I think it’s a question that needs asking. And you’re the only person I know who can ask it without getting themselves killed in the process.” He reached into his breast pocket and withdrew a single, crisp photograph. He didn’t hand it to her, just held it up. It showed a rough brick wall, scrawled with intricate, jagged symbols drawn in what looked like black ash. One in the centre was unmistakable. A twisted, three-pointed knot she hadn’t seen since childhood, etched into the cover of a book locked in her father’s old study. Her father, the barrister, who had argued cases by day and poured over texts far older and darker than any legal precedent by night. “Where did you get this?” she whispered. “The client. His daughter sent it to him the night she vanished. A cry for help, I believe. Or a warning.” He finally offered her the photo. Her fingers trembled as she took it. The paper was cold. “I can’t,” she said, but the protest was weak, hollow. The symbol seemed to pulse on the photograph, a dark, familiar eye staring back at her. “You can. You’re the only one who can.” His voice dropped, losing its professional edge, becoming something more intimate, more dangerous. “I know what I asked of you before was… untenable. I know why you left. This is different. This is me asking you, not as a broker, but as a man who needs your help. A girl’s life is at stake. And whatever part of your past this drags up… I will be there. This time, I will be there.” The promise hung between them, thick and heavy. It was everything she’d wanted to hear two years ago. Everything she’d run from. Ptolemy hissed, arching his back at something outside the door. Lucien’s head snapped up, his body going preternaturally still. The casual elegance vanished, replaced by a predator’s alertness. His hand closed around the handle of his cane. “Rory,” he said, his voice a low, urgent command. “How many deadbolts did you lock behind you?” “Three. Why?” “Because,” he said, turning slowly to face the door, his body positioning itself between hers and the entrance. “I only heard two slide open.” The doorknob began to turn, slowly, silently, against the lock.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.65
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.05
77.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"carefully"
3"truly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"disrupted"
count1
7
word"cascading"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"fascinating"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stark"
2"familiar"
3"flicker"
4"weight"
5"footsteps"
6"disrupted"
7"cascading"
8"stomach"
9"electric"
10"fascinating"
11"intricate"
12"etched"
13"trembled"
14"pulse"
15"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
82.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1301
ratio0.001
matches
0"Familial"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount789
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.38
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Moreau"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
French1
Eva2
Golden1
Empress1
Rory2
Sumerian1
Evan1
Lucien3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like black ash"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.306
wordCount1301
matches
0"not enough to cross the threshold, but enough for her to catch the scent of him"
1"not just broken, but dismantled, his entire operation unravelled with a few well-"
2"not as a broker, but as a man who needs your help"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean28.28
std20.41
cv0.722
sampleLengths
047
147
28
330
429
523
629
732
859
945
1020
1152
1210
1342
1410
1560
164
171
1819
1913
2040
2112
2250
2332
2444
251
2627
275
2845
2934
3029
3113
327
3394
3424
357
3638
3726
3881
3922
4010
4127
4217
432
4424
4510
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
54.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences97
ratio0.031
matches
0"“No,” he agreed, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—taking in the cramped, book-choked space behind her."
1"He leaned forward slightly, not enough to cross the threshold, but enough for her to catch the scent of him—sandalwood and something colder, sharper, like ozone after a storm."
2"The space between them crackled with unsaid things—the memory of his hands on her skin, the bitter taste of his betrayal, the electric pull that had never truly died."
91.67% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount797
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cramped, book-choked space"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04265997490589712
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01631116687578419
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean13.41
std10.67
cv0.796
sampleLengths
026
121
219
321
42
55
68
717
87
96
1021
118
128
1315
143
1516
1610
1716
1816
1929
2017
2113
2222
2314
241
253
265
2720
2816
293
309
319
327
338
3410
3542
367
373
3819
3919
4016
416
424
431
4419
4513
4618
477
4815
4912
59.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.38144329896907214
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences67
matches
0"He filled the doorway, a"
1"He hadn’t changed a bit."
2"His voice was a low,"
3"It did things to her,"
4"Her hand tightened on the"
5"She didn’t move."
6"he agreed, his heterochromatic eyes—one"
7"He leaned forward slightly, not"
8"His gaze dropped to the"
9"She saw the flicker in"
10"he said softly"
11"He shifted his weight, and"
12"It was new."
13"It looked expensive, an extension"
14"She knew it wasn’t just"
15"she asked, her voice tighter"
16"he said, He gestured with"
17"He moved past her into"
18"His presence was an intrusion,"
19"He didn’t look at the"
ratio0.612
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences67
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"He filled the doorway, a"
3"The dim light from the"
4"He hadn’t changed a bit."
5"His voice was a low,"
6"It did things to her,"
7"Things she’d spent two years"
8"Her hand tightened on the"
9"A faint, almost imperceptible smile"
10"She didn’t move."
11"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound himself"
12"he agreed, his heterochromatic eyes—one"
13"He leaned forward slightly, not"
14"His gaze dropped to the"
15"The retort was out before"
16"She saw the flicker in"
17"he said softly"
18"He shifted his weight, and"
19"It was new."
ratio0.925
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Or, rather, she’d never seen"
ratio0.015
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He moved past her into the flat with a fluid grace that made the small space seem even smaller."
1"His presence was an intrusion, a wave of controlled power that disrupted the dusty, academic peace of Eva’s domain."
2"The space between them crackled with unsaid things—the memory of his hands on her skin, the bitter taste of his betrayal, the electric pull that had never truly…"
3"Her father, the barrister, who had argued cases by day and poured over texts far older and darker than any legal precedent by night."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she asked, her voice tighter than she intended"
1"he said, his gaze intense,"
2"she said, but the protest was weak, hollow"
3"he said, his voice a low, urgent command"
75.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"His voice (his voice)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.15
72.7770%