Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4ATNF9AQZ6Z8ZP4W8CKX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.056024
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the asphalt of Camden High Street, turning the neon reflections of the shops into smeared, bleeding watercolors. Detective Harlow Quinn didn't feel the cold. The burn in her lungs provided all the heat she needed. Her boots hammered the pavement, splashing through puddles deep enough to soak her socks, eyes locked on the grey hoodie weaving through the late-night throngs. The suspect, a wiry kid who moved with the frantic energy of a cornered rat, shoved a pair of tourists aside. They sprawled onto the wet concrete, shouting obscenities that were instantly swallowed by the roar of a passing double-decker bus. Quinn didn't slow down. She hurdled a dropped umbrella, her movement precise, economized by eighteen years on the force. The leather watch on her left wrist felt heavy, a grounding weight against the chaotic pulse jumping in her neck. "Police! Stop!" Her voice cracked like a whip over the din of traffic. The kid didn't look back. He vaulted a low brick wall separating the sidewalk from a construction site, his sneakers slipping on the mossy top before he recovered and vanished into the shadows of the scaffolding. Quinn cursed, her breath pluming in the frigid air. She hit the wall a second later, planting a hand on the rough brick to vault over. She landed in mud, the suction tugging at her boots. The construction site was a maze of steel beams and stacked pallets, illuminated only by the strobe-light flicker of lightning tearing through the clouds above. She drew her service weapon, leveling it at the darkness. "Nowhere to go, kid. Hands where I can see them." Something clattered to her left. A loose pipe rolling over stone. Quinn pivoted, twisting her torso with the rigid discipline of a soldier. A shadow detached itself from a pile of cinder blocks and sprinted toward the far end of the lot, toward the rusted corrugated fence that boarded up the old access tunnels. She holstered the gun and broke into a sprint. The mud slicked underfoot, threatening to send her sprawling, but she kept her center of gravity low. The suspect reached the fence, fingers scrabbling against the metal. There was no gate. No gap. Just a solid wall of iron and rust. "End of the line." Quinn slowed, closing the distance with measured steps, chest heaving. "Turn around." The kid ignored her. He jammed a hand into his pocket, trembling fingers retrieving something small and white. He pressed the object against the corrugated steel. Quinn stopped ten feet away, rain dripping from her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair into her eyes. She blinked the water away, certain the darkness was playing tricks on her. Where the object touched the metal, the rust didn't just flake away. It rippled. The steel groaned, a sound like a dying animal, and the solid surface warped, twisting inward as if sucked by a vacuum. "What the hell..." The kid shoved his body through the impossible opening, the metal stretching like taffy around him. Quinn lunged. She hit the wet ground, sliding the last few feet, her hand shooting out to grab the heel of his sneaker. Her fingers brushed wet canvas. He kicked back, a sharp, desperate blow that connected with her shoulder. She grunted, grip slipping. The kid wriggled free, tumbling into the darkness beyond the fence. The metal began to snap back into place, the hole stitching itself shut with unnatural speed. Quinn scrambled upright, throwing her weight against the fence. Solid. Cold. Unyielding. She pounded a fist against it, the vibration jarring her arm all the way to the socket. "Open up!" Silence answered her, save for the relentless drumming of the rain. She looked down. In the mud, half-buried by her own boot print, lay the object the kid had used. She crouched, retrieving it. It was a piece of bone, yellowed with age, carved into a rough circular token. Intricate symbols were etched into the surface, dark with dirt and grease. It felt warm, throbbing with a faint, rhythmic pulse that matched her own heartbeat. *Supernatural origins.* The phrase from the internal report on DS Morris’s death flashed in her mind. Unexplained circumstances. Quinn stood, clutching the bone token. The rain plastered her coat to her frame. She looked back toward the street. Backup was minutes away. Protocol dictated she secure the perimeter, call it in, wait for a tactical team. A tactical team that would see a rusted fence and laugh at her report of a melting wall. She looked back at the metal barrier. Morris hadn't waited for backup three years ago. He’d chased a lead into a warehouse in East London and came out in a body bag, his face frozen in a scream caused by something the coroner couldn't identify. Quinn clenched her jaw. She pressed the bone token against the wet steel, right where the kid had. For a second, nothing happened. Then, the warmth in the bone spiked, searing her palm. The metal beneath it shuddered. The groan of bending steel returned, louder this time, vibrating through her chest. The barrier softened, the atoms seemingly unbinding, creating a swirling vortex of grey and rust. She didn't hesitate. She stepped through. The sensation was akin to walking through a waterfall of ice water. The air pressure dropped instantly, popping her ears. The noise of the storm—the thunder, the traffic, the rain—vanished, severed as if by a knife. Quinn stumbled forward, nearly losing her footing on tiled flooring heavily layered with dust. The metal wall sealed behind her with a final, wet slap. She stood in darkness, the only light coming from the faint bioluminescent moss growing in patches along the curved ceiling. She recognized the architecture immediately. The curved tiled walls, the stagnant air, the distinct smell of ozone and old dust. An abandoned Tube station. She pulled her flashlight from her belt, the beam cutting a stark white cone through the gloom. Dust motes danced in the light. Advertising posters from the nineties peeled from the walls, faces of long-forgotten models smiling grotesquely in the decay. "Focus, Quinn." Her voice sounded too loud in the confined space. She swept the beam across the floor. Wet footprints, smaller than hers, led toward the escalators. The machinery was still, rusted solid, descending into a black throat of the earth. She moved toward them, gun drawn again. The silence down here was heavy, oppressive. It felt like the air itself was watching her. She descended the stationary escalator steps, each footfall crunching on grit and broken glass. As she went deeper, the temperature rose. The damp chill of the London rain was replaced by a humid, cloying warmth, smelling of sulfur, exotic spices, and something coppery like blood. At the bottom of the escalator, a gated entrance awaited. The heavy iron shutters were rolled up. Beyond them, the platform opened up, but it wasn't empty. The station shouldn't have been active. It was supposed to be a tomb of concrete and rats. Instead, lanterns strung along the old power lines bathed the platform in a hazy, amber glow. Quinn killed her flashlight and hugged the wall, peering around the corner. The platform had been transformed. Makeshift stalls constructed from scavenged wood and metal lined the edge where eager commuters would once have waited for the Northern Line. The yellow line on the floor was barely visible beneath rugs and crates. Creatures moved between the stalls. She blinked, wiping her eyes with her free hand, certain the stress was inducing hallucinations. A figure taller than any human, wrapped in voluminous grey rags, bartered with a woman whose skin shimmered with iridescent scales. Another vendor, a man with too many joints in his fingers, arranged jars of glowing liquid on a folding table. The Veil Market. The name surfaced from the ramblings of a snitch she’d interviewed months ago, a junkie she’d dismissed as high on hallucinogens. He’d talked about a place that moved with the moon, where you needed a piece of death to enter. She gripped the bone token in her pocket. A piece of death. Movement near a stall selling dried herbs caught her eye. The grey hoodie. The kid was arguing with a vendor, gesturing wildly back toward the escalator, toward her. Quinn stepped out from the cover of the tiled archway, the military precision returning to her posture. She raised her weapon, the matte black steel stark against the warm, flickering lantern light. The crowd went silent. The hum of conversation, the clinking of glass, the shuffling of feet—it all died instantly. Dozens of eyes turned toward her. Some were human. Some were vertical slits of gold. Some were hollow pits of shadow. The kid spun around, his face draining of color. "Badge," a voice rasped from her left. Quinn pivoted slightly, keeping the gun trained on the general mass but checking her flank. A massive figure hulked by the entrance, skin like granite, leaning on a club made from a rebar-reinforced concrete pillar. "You don't belong here, Lawkeeper." The granite man didn't move his lips, the sound grinding out from his chest. "Police," Quinn projected, her voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding her system. "I'm here for the suspect. Nobody else needs to get involved." A low, chittering laughter rippled through the market. The kid backed away, bumping into a table of amulets. "She followed me! I locked the gate, I swear!" "You led a wolf to the flock, boy," the vendor with the extra joints hissed, sweeping the glowing jars into a protectively lined box. Quinn took a step forward, the leather of her jacket creaking. "I am walking out of here with him. Either in handcuffs or in a bag. Your choice." She locked eyes with the kid. He looked ready to bolt again, aiming for the dark tunnel where the train tracks ran deeper into the underground network. "Don't even think about it," she warned him, shifting her aim to center mass. "Detective Quinn," a smooth, melodic voice drifted from the shadows of the platform edge. Quinn froze. The name hung in the air, heavy and intimate. A woman stepped into the amber light. She wore a tailored suit that cost more than Quinn made in a year, her eyes entirely black, no whites, no irises. She held a cigarette in a long holder, the smoke curling in shapes that defied physics. "We rarely see the Metropolitan Police this deep," the woman said, smiling to reveal teeth that were slightly too sharp. "Especially not the famous Harlow Quinn. We heard you were looking into... specialized matters." "You know me." Quinn didn't lower the gun. "That puts you at a disadvantage." "Does it?" The woman took a drag, the smoke forming a skull before dissipating. "You stand in the belly of the beast, Detective. Your radio waves don't reach here. Your laws are ink on paper, dissolving in the damp." "I have a gun," Quinn said flatly. "And we have magic," the woman countered, gesturing to the silent, watching crowd. "But please, let’s not be uncivilized. You want the boy. We want to know how a mundane detective opened a sealed Veil Gate without being vaporized." The granite bouncer took a heavy step forward. The floor cracked under his weight. Quinn calculated the distance to the escalator. Twenty yards. Uphill. Against a crowd of freaks and monsters. She tightened her grip on the pistol. This was for Morris. Every dead end, every redacted report, every sleepless night led to this platform. "Legally," Quinn said, her finger resting on the trigger guard, "I'm arresting him for obstruction of justice and fleeing a crime scene. But seeing as we're off the map..." She shifted her stance, widening her feet. "I'm keeping the suspect. And I'm asking the questions." The woman with the black eyes laughed, a sound like glass breaking. "Ambition. I like it. But the Veil Market extracts a high tax on curiosity, Detective." The kid took his chance. He bolted for the tracks, jumping off the platform edge into the darkness of the tunnel. Quinn swore and broke into a run, ignoring the devastating array of threats flanking her. She shoved past the granite guard, ducking under the swing of his club—the wind of it ruffling her hair—and sprinted to the edge of the platform. "Get her!" the woman commanded. The market erupted. Quinn vaulted off the platform, landing in the gravel of the track bed. She didn't look back at the chaos descending from the station lights. She ran into the dark, following the echoes of the terrified footsteps ahead.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
1"Quinn said flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
95.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2118
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2118
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"searing"
count1
11
word"stark"
count2
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"oppressive"
count1
14
word"footfall"
count1
15
word"chill"
count1
16
word"constructed"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"calculated"
count1
19
word"echoes"
count1
20
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chaotic"
2"pulse"
3"flicker"
4"measured"
5"silence"
6"intricate"
7"etched"
8"rhythmic"
9"warmth"
10"searing"
11"stark"
12"gloom"
13"oppressive"
14"footfall"
15"chill"
16"constructed"
17"shimmered"
18"calculated"
19"echoes"
20"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences173
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords2105
ratio0.001
matches
0"Supernatural origins."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1883
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn24
Morris3
East1
London2
Tube1
Northern1
Line1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"East"
4"London"
globalScore0.863
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences133
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"ned, the atoms seemingly unbinding, creating"
1"felt like the air itself was watching h"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2105
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean24.76
std15.08
cv0.609
sampleLengths
063
141
239
32
411
536
661
710
810
911
1043
1150
1216
1326
1429
1536
163
1716
1840
1915
2016
2129
222
2311
2419
2545
2618
2756
2845
2918
3048
316
3236
3314
3411
3544
3641
3711
3830
3923
4045
4127
4233
4312
4440
455
4615
4741
483
4940
95.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences173
matches
0"were etched"
1"was replaced"
2"were rolled"
3"was supposed"
4"been transformed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs333
matches
0"was playing"
1"was watching"
2"was inducing"
3"was arguing"
97.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences187
ratio0.016
matches
0"The noise of the storm—the thunder, the traffic, the rain—vanished, severed as if by a knife."
1"The hum of conversation, the clinking of glass, the shuffling of feet—it all died instantly."
2"She shoved past the granite guard, ducking under the swing of his club—the wind of it ruffling her hair—and sprinted to the edge of the platform."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1896
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.023206751054852322
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.00949367088607595
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean11.26
std6.71
cv0.597
sampleLengths
020
17
211
325
421
520
64
715
820
92
1011
115
1231
139
1417
1510
1625
1710
1810
195
206
2112
2231
239
2417
2510
264
272
288
2914
302
314
3214
338
3416
3513
3612
372
3822
393
4016
412
4221
435
4412
454
4611
4716
489
491
50.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3582887700534759
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners67
61.35% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences163
matches
0"Just a solid wall of"
1"Then, the warmth in the"
2"Instead, lanterns strung along the"
ratio0.018
94.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences163
matches
0"Her boots hammered the pavement,"
1"They sprawled onto the wet"
2"She hurdled a dropped umbrella,"
3"Her voice cracked like a"
4"He vaulted a low brick"
5"She hit the wall a"
6"She landed in mud, the"
7"She drew her service weapon,"
8"She holstered the gun and"
9"He jammed a hand into"
10"He pressed the object against"
11"She blinked the water away,"
12"She hit the wet ground,"
13"Her fingers brushed wet canvas."
14"He kicked back, a sharp,"
15"She grunted, grip slipping."
16"She pounded a fist against"
17"She looked down."
18"She crouched, retrieving it."
19"It was a piece of"
ratio0.313
9.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount147
totalSentences163
matches
0"Rain lashed against the asphalt"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn didn't feel"
2"The burn in her lungs"
3"Her boots hammered the pavement,"
4"The suspect, a wiry kid"
5"They sprawled onto the wet"
6"Quinn didn't slow down."
7"She hurdled a dropped umbrella,"
8"The leather watch on her"
9"Her voice cracked like a"
10"The kid didn't look back."
11"He vaulted a low brick"
12"Quinn cursed, her breath pluming"
13"She hit the wall a"
14"She landed in mud, the"
15"The construction site was a"
16"She drew her service weapon,"
17"Something clattered to her left."
18"A loose pipe rolling over"
19"Quinn pivoted, twisting her torso"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences84
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"They sprawled onto the wet concrete, shouting obscenities that were instantly swallowed by the roar of a passing double-decker bus."
1"He vaulted a low brick wall separating the sidewalk from a construction site, his sneakers slipping on the mossy top before he recovered and vanished into the s…"
2"The steel groaned, a sound like a dying animal, and the solid surface warped, twisting inward as if sucked by a vacuum."
3"She hit the wet ground, sliding the last few feet, her hand shooting out to grab the heel of his sneaker."
4"He kicked back, a sharp, desperate blow that connected with her shoulder."
5"It felt warm, throbbing with a faint, rhythmic pulse that matched her own heartbeat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"The granite man didn't, the sound grinding out from his chest"
1"Quinn projected, her voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding her system"
2"The woman took, the smoke forming a skull before dissipating"
3"Quinn said, her finger resting on the trigger guard,"
81.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the extra joints hissed (hiss)"
1"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.172
leniency0.345
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.138
81.5084%