| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "Rory asked quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "he said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 80 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.075 | |
| 86.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1464 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1464 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "anticipation" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "carried the weight" | | 6 | "eyebrow" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "implication" | | 11 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 190 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1455 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest" | | 1 | "you" | | 2 | "was" | | 3 | "made" | | 4 | "you" | | 5 | "her" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1114 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.97 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Prague | 1 | | Silas | 22 | | Rory | 20 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Prague" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.513 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like to be *her*—the girl who’d be" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.687 | | wordCount | 1455 | | matches | | 0 | "Not exactly MI6, but it pays the bills" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 190 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 90 | | mean | 16.17 | | std | 15.56 | | cv | 0.963 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | |
| 97.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "weren’t saying" | | 1 | "was* running" | | 2 | "was, offering" |
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| 22.56% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 190 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been here a hundred times before—delivering takeaway orders, slipping in for a quick drink after a long shift—but tonight felt different." | | 1 | "He knew her order by now—whisky, neat, no ice." | | 2 | "She looked away, her gaze snagging on the old maps behind the bar—faded ink, crumbling edges." | | 3 | "The weight of it pressed down on her—the missions, the lies, the way they’d both walked away from that life and never looked back." | | 4 | "The hidden door behind the bookshelf creaked open, revealing the dimly lit back room—wooden panels, a single desk, a map of London pinned to the wall." | | 5 | "She’d spent years trying to outrun this—this life, this man, the person she’d been when she worked for him." | | 6 | "To remember what it felt like to be *her*—the girl who’d been sharp and fearless and untouchable." | | 7 | "Outside, the bar hummed with life—laughter, clinking glasses, the low murmur of conversation." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1122 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.0392156862745098 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00980392156862745 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 190 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 190 | | mean | 7.66 | | std | 5.78 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 43.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.29473684210526313 | | totalSentences | 190 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 57.97% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he moved to the" | | 1 | "Instead, she looked up at" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 80.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been here a hundred" | | 1 | "She slid onto a stool" | | 2 | "He knew her order by" | | 3 | "She traced the rim of" | | 4 | "She didn’t need to." | | 5 | "She’d know that voice anywhere." | | 6 | "His auburn hair, streaked with" | | 7 | "His hazel eyes were sharper" | | 8 | "She took a sip of" | | 9 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 10 | "His mouth twitched, but the" | | 11 | "She gestured vaguely at his" | | 12 | "She grinned, but it faded" | | 13 | "She looked away, her gaze" | | 14 | "She met his eyes, unblinking" | | 15 | "She exhaled, her breath shaky." | | 16 | "He’d kept the bar, kept" | | 17 | "he said again, softer this" | | 18 | "She traced the scar on" | | 19 | "He never had." |
| | ratio | 0.348 | |
| 12.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 103 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon green sign of" | | 1 | "Rory Carter pushed through the" | | 2 | "She’d been here a hundred" | | 3 | "The air hummed with something" | | 4 | "She slid onto a stool" | | 5 | "The bartender, a wiry man" | | 6 | "He knew her order by" | | 7 | "She traced the rim of" | | 8 | "The voice came from behind" | | 9 | "Rory didn’t turn." | | 10 | "She didn’t need to." | | 11 | "She’d know that voice anywhere." | | 12 | "Silas Blackwood limped into view," | | 13 | "His auburn hair, streaked with" | | 14 | "The silver signet ring on" | | 15 | "Rory said, finally glancing up" | | 16 | "His hazel eyes were sharper" | | 17 | "Time had carved him into" | | 18 | "The man who’d once been" | | 19 | "Silas exhaled through his nose," |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 86.96% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "To open it." | | 1 | "To remember what it felt" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hummed with something she couldn’t name, a low thrum of anticipation that prickled the back of her neck." | | 1 | "The man who’d once been her mentor, her protector, now carried the weight of years in the set of his shoulders." | | 2 | "She looked away, her gaze snagging on the old maps behind the bar—faded ink, crumbling edges." | | 3 | "To remember what it felt like to be *her*—the girl who’d been sharp and fearless and untouchable." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She took, the burn grounding her" | | 1 | "Rory swirled, the amber liquid catching the light" | | 2 | "She traced, the old wound aching like a memory" | | 3 | "she said, her voice shaking" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 80 | | tagDensity | 0.075 | | leniency | 0.15 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |