Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4B73N9CV6T4JBPV7NCYJ

Run Details

Duration:
11.2s
Cost:
$0.000726
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly against the damp Soho evening. Rory Carter pushed through the door, the scent of stale beer and old wood wrapping around her like a familiar coat. She’d been here a hundred times before—delivering takeaway orders, slipping in for a quick drink after a long shift—but tonight felt different. The air hummed with something she couldn’t name, a low thrum of anticipation that prickled the back of her neck. She slid onto a stool at the bar, the worn leather creaking under her weight. The bartender, a wiry man with a shaved head and a tattoo of a raven on his forearm, nodded at her without a word. He knew her order by now—whisky, neat, no ice. She traced the rim of the glass with her thumb, the crescent scar on her left wrist catching the dim light. “You’re early.” The voice came from behind her, smooth and deep, like gravel underfoot. Rory didn’t turn. She didn’t need to. She’d know that voice anywhere. Silas Blackwood limped into view, his left leg dragging just slightly, the way it always had since Prague. His auburn hair, streaked with grey now, was still neatly combed, his beard trimmed with precision. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted as he set a glass down beside hers. “Or you’re late,” Rory said, finally glancing up. His hazel eyes were sharper than she remembered, the lines around them deeper. Time had carved him into something harder, more angular. The man who’d once been her mentor, her protector, now carried the weight of years in the set of his shoulders. Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that might’ve been a laugh if it hadn’t been so tired. “Still sharp as a blade, I see.” “And you’re still full of shit.” She took a sip of her whisky, the burn grounding her. “What are you doing here, Si? Last I heard, you’d retired to some cottage in the Cotswolds.” He leaned against the bar, his fingers tapping a slow rhythm against the wood. “Cottage burned down. Arson.” Rory raised an eyebrow. “Convenient.” “Not really.” His mouth twitched, but the smile didn’t reach his eyes. “You look different.” “So do you.” She gestured vaguely at his face. “Old.” That got a real laugh out of him, low and rough. “Cheeky bastard.” She grinned, but it faded quickly. The silence between them stretched, thick with all the things they weren’t saying. The years. The distance. The way they’d left things. Silas broke first. “Heard you’re working for Yu-Fei now.” “Delivery driver.” Rory swirled her glass, the amber liquid catching the light. “Not exactly MI6, but it pays the bills.” “You could’ve come back.” The words hung between them, heavy as a stone. Rory set her glass down with a click. “Could I?” Silas didn’t flinch. “You know you could.” She looked away, her gaze snagging on the old maps behind the bar—faded ink, crumbling edges. “I left for a reason, Si.” “Evan.” The name tasted bitter on her tongue. “Yeah. Evan.” Silas’s jaw tightened. “He’s still in London.” Rory’s fingers stilled. “I know.” “You’ve seen him?” “No.” She met his eyes, unblinking. “But I hear things.” Silas studied her for a long moment, then nodded. “You always did.” The bartender slid a fresh whisky toward Silas, who took it without looking. The ice clinked against the glass, the only sound in the sudden quiet. “You ever think about it?” Rory asked quietly. “What we did?” Silas didn’t pretend to misunderstand. “Every damn day.” She exhaled, her breath shaky. “Me too.” The weight of it pressed down on her—the missions, the lies, the way they’d both walked away from that life and never looked back. Or at least, she hadn’t. Silas had stayed. He’d kept the bar, kept the contacts, kept the game alive in his own way. “You could’ve come back,” he said again, softer this time. Rory shook her head. “I couldn’t.” “Because of him?” “Because of me.” She traced the scar on her wrist, the old wound aching like a memory. “I wasn’t the same after. Neither were you.” Silas didn’t deny it. He never had. The door to the bar swung open, letting in a gust of cold air and the distant hum of traffic. A group of laughing tourists stumbled in, their voices too loud, too bright. Rory watched them for a moment, then turned back to Silas. “You ever miss it?” she asked. “The old days?” Silas took a slow sip of his drink. “Miss the lying? The running? The way it ate at you until you didn’t recognise yourself in the mirror?” He set the glass down. “No.” Rory nodded, but she didn’t believe him. Not entirely. Silas must’ve seen it in her face. He leaned in, his voice dropping. “But I miss *you*.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She looked away, her throat tight. “Don’t.” “Why not?” “Because it’s not fair.” “Life’s not fair, Rory.” She laughed, sharp and humourless. “Tell me something I don’t know.” Silas studied her for a long moment, then sighed. “You’re still running.” “Aren’t we all?” “Not like you.” She didn’t have an answer for that. The truth was, she *was* running. From Evan. From the past. From the person she’d been when she worked for Silas, when she’d been sharp and fearless and untouchable. That girl was gone, and Rory wasn’t sure she wanted her back. Silas pushed off the bar, his limp more pronounced as he moved. “Come on.” Rory frowned. “Where?” “Back room.” He jerked his chin toward the bookshelf at the far end of the bar. “Unless you’re scared.” She scoffed. “Of you? Please.” But as she followed him, her pulse kicked up a notch. The hidden door behind the bookshelf creaked open, revealing the dimly lit back room—wooden panels, a single desk, a map of London pinned to the wall. The air smelled of old paper and leather. Silas shut the door behind them, the click of the lock loud in the quiet. Rory crossed her arms. “What’s this about?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he moved to the desk, pulling open a drawer. “I’ve got something for you.” Rory’s stomach twisted. “Si—” “Just look at it.” He slid a manila envelope across the desk. She didn’t touch it. “What is it?” “A job.” The word hung between them, heavy with implication. Rory stared at the envelope like it might bite her. “I’m not in the game anymore.” “You were born for it.” “No.” She shook her head. “I was *made* for it. There’s a difference.” Silas’s expression darkened. “You think I don’t know that?” She looked away, her fingers curling into fists. “Then why are you doing this?” “Because you’re wasting your life delivering noodles.” Rory’s head snapped up. “Excuse me?” “You heard me.” His voice was low, dangerous. “You’re better than this, Rory. You always were.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “Better than what? Better than *you*?” Silas didn’t flinch. “Yes.” The word cut deep. Rory turned away, her chest tight. The maps on the wall blurred as her vision swam. She’d spent years trying to outrun this—this life, this man, the person she’d been when she worked for him. And now here he was, offering it all back like it was nothing. “You don’t get to do this,” she said, her voice shaking. “You don’t get to waltz back into my life and act like you know what’s best for me.” Silas was quiet for a long moment. Then, softly: “I know what you’re capable of.” Rory swallowed hard. “That’s not the same thing.” “Isn’t it?” She didn’t answer. She couldn’t. Silas sighed, running a hand over his face. “Just look at the file, Rory. That’s all I’m asking.” She stared at the envelope, her fingers itching to reach for it. To open it. To remember what it felt like to be *her*—the girl who’d been sharp and fearless and untouchable. But that girl was gone. Wasn’t she? The silence stretched, thick and suffocating. Outside, the bar hummed with life—laughter, clinking glasses, the low murmur of conversation. But in here, it was just the two of them, and the weight of everything unsaid. Rory reached for the envelope. Her fingers brushed the paper, the texture rough under her skin. She hesitated, then pulled it toward her. Silas watched her, his hazel eyes unreadable. She didn’t open it. Not yet. Instead, she looked up at him, her bright blue eyes sharp with something he hadn’t seen in years. Defiance. “You owe me an explanation,” she said. “And I’m not leaving until I get it.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Rory asked quietly [quietly]"
2"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.075
86.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1464
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1464
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"anticipation"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"carried the weight"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"implication"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"anticipation"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"carried the weight"
6"eyebrow"
7"silence"
8"pulse"
9"stomach"
10"implication"
11"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords8
totalWords1455
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"you"
2"was"
3"made"
4"you"
5"her"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1114
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Soho1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Prague1
Silas22
Rory20
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"London"
globalScore0.513
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like to be *her*—the girl who’d be"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.687
wordCount1455
matches
0"Not exactly MI6, but it pays the bills"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences190
matches
0"know that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs90
mean16.17
std15.56
cv0.963
sampleLengths
081
169
22
324
451
551
625
734
818
95
1015
1110
1213
1328
149
1520
164
1719
187
1922
201
219
227
235
243
2510
2612
2726
2811
298
307
3147
3210
336
343
3525
367
3744
389
3933
409
4117
4217
432
444
454
4611
4712
483
493
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences128
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
97.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs196
matches
0"weren’t saying"
1"was* running"
2"was, offering"
22.56% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences190
ratio0.042
matches
0"She’d been here a hundred times before—delivering takeaway orders, slipping in for a quick drink after a long shift—but tonight felt different."
1"He knew her order by now—whisky, neat, no ice."
2"She looked away, her gaze snagging on the old maps behind the bar—faded ink, crumbling edges."
3"The weight of it pressed down on her—the missions, the lies, the way they’d both walked away from that life and never looked back."
4"The hidden door behind the bookshelf creaked open, revealing the dimly lit back room—wooden panels, a single desk, a map of London pinned to the wall."
5"She’d spent years trying to outrun this—this life, this man, the person she’d been when she worked for him."
6"To remember what it felt like to be *her*—the girl who’d been sharp and fearless and untouchable."
7"Outside, the bar hummed with life—laughter, clinking glasses, the low murmur of conversation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1122
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.0392156862745098
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00980392156862745
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean7.66
std5.78
cv0.755
sampleLengths
018
121
222
320
415
524
69
721
82
912
103
114
125
1318
1416
1517
168
1713
189
1921
2018
217
2217
2317
2414
254
264
271
2812
293
309
311
3211
332
346
3513
362
372
385
393
406
4112
428
434
449
458
462
473
484
4916
43.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.29473684210526313
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners56
57.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"Instead, he moved to the"
1"Instead, she looked up at"
ratio0.017
80.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences115
matches
0"She’d been here a hundred"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"He knew her order by"
3"She traced the rim of"
4"She didn’t need to."
5"She’d know that voice anywhere."
6"His auburn hair, streaked with"
7"His hazel eyes were sharper"
8"She took a sip of"
9"He leaned against the bar,"
10"His mouth twitched, but the"
11"She gestured vaguely at his"
12"She grinned, but it faded"
13"She looked away, her gaze"
14"She met his eyes, unblinking"
15"She exhaled, her breath shaky."
16"He’d kept the bar, kept"
17"he said again, softer this"
18"She traced the scar on"
19"He never had."
ratio0.348
12.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences115
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"Rory Carter pushed through the"
2"She’d been here a hundred"
3"The air hummed with something"
4"She slid onto a stool"
5"The bartender, a wiry man"
6"He knew her order by"
7"She traced the rim of"
8"The voice came from behind"
9"Rory didn’t turn."
10"She didn’t need to."
11"She’d know that voice anywhere."
12"Silas Blackwood limped into view,"
13"His auburn hair, streaked with"
14"The silver signet ring on"
15"Rory said, finally glancing up"
16"His hazel eyes were sharper"
17"Time had carved him into"
18"The man who’d once been"
19"Silas exhaled through his nose,"
ratio0.896
86.96% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"To open it."
1"To remember what it felt"
ratio0.017
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air hummed with something she couldn’t name, a low thrum of anticipation that prickled the back of her neck."
1"The man who’d once been her mentor, her protector, now carried the weight of years in the set of his shoulders."
2"She looked away, her gaze snagging on the old maps behind the bar—faded ink, crumbling edges."
3"To remember what it felt like to be *her*—the girl who’d been sharp and fearless and untouchable."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She took, the burn grounding her"
1"Rory swirled, the amber liquid catching the light"
2"She traced, the old wound aching like a memory"
3"she said, her voice shaking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.15
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.4792%