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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4B75C80DNNB9JCGFJ4J3
Run Details
Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.6
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
2m 12s
Cost:
$0.006795
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
93.75%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
6.19%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
30.95%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
74.45%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
93.87%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
87.48%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
29.87%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
92.59%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
86.67%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
64.17%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
34.72%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
39.47%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
80.7395%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The city was a living
thing, and tonight it had a fever. Sirens wailed a constant, distant counterpoint to the bass thumping from the bar below her flat. Rory couldn’t take it anymore.
Her head throbbed in time
with the music, a dull, persistent ache that no amount of paracetamol could touch. She needed quiet. Real quiet.
Not the dead silence of a locked room, but the breathing, living quiet of a place untouched by concrete
and exhaust fumes.
She’d found the Grove by
accident a month ago, on one of her long, meandering delivery routes for the Golden Empress.
A gap in the ancient
park wall, almost
completely
overgrown with ivy, had led her into a part of Richmond Park she didn’t recognise. And then she’d seen them. The standing stones. Seven massive oaks, stripped and weathered to the colour of bone, arranged in a
perfect
circle.
Eva had called them a
fairy tale, a local legend.
A place where the world
was thin.
Rory parked her bike against
a moss-covered oak well outside the park's official closing time, locking it with a practised flick of her wrist. The walk was
familiar
now, but the night made it different.
The path was a ribbon
of grey under a sliver of moon, the surrounding darkness a physical presence.
The air grew cooler as
she approached the clearing, carrying the scent of damp earth and something else.
Something sweet and cloying, like
decaying flowers.
She ducked under a low-hanging
branch and stepped past the first of the standing stones. The change was immediate.
The faint, ever-present hum of
the M4 motorway vanished. The wind died.
The air, which had been
stirring the leaves a moment ago, became still and heavy.
It was a silence so
complete it felt like a pressure against her eardrums. Inside the circle, the wildflowers were a riot of impossible colour, their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight. Blues and purples and whites, all blooming as if it were the peak of summer, not the tail end of autumn. Rory pulled her jacket tighter. The cold was sharper in here. She found her usual spot, a patch of soft grass in the centre of the circle, and sat down, drawing her knees to her chest. This was why she came.
To sit in the profound
quiet and let the noise in her head settle. A twig snapped somewhere in the darkness beyond the stones. Rory’s head lifted.
Her body went still, a
reflex honed by years of
navigating
London’s streets after dark. Just a fox. Or a badger. The park was full of them.
She listened, her breath held
tight in her chest. Nothing. No scuttling, no foraging.
Just that profound, heavy silence
again.
She let out a slow
breath and relaxed her shoulders. See? Nothing. The city
was making
her jumpy. Another sound. A soft, dry rustling.
Not the crisp shuffle of leaves in the wind, but the sound of something being dragged through them
. A long, slow, scraping
whisper
. It came from her left, from the dense wall of bracken and hawthorn that bordered the Grove. She stared into the
gloom
, her eyes struggling to pick out shapes. The darkness
seemed to
deepen there, to thicken into a solid mass. “Just a branch,”
she whispered to the empty
air. The words sounded small and foolish. A prickle of
warmth
bloomed on her chest, right over her heart. Rory frowned, her fingers finding the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. The crimson gem was cool to the touch, as it always was. Must be her own body heat, trapped against her skin by the wool of her jumper.
She let it drop and
wrapped her arms around her legs again. But the
warmth
didn’t fade.
It grew, a gentle, insistent
heat that spread through the silver chain and against her skin.
It wasn’t unpleasant, but it
was wrong.
It was a feeling that
didn't belong. Then it
began to
pulse
. A slow,
rhythmic
beat, faint but unmistakable. A
warmth
that bloomed and faded in
perfect
time with a silent, second heartbeat. Rory scrambled to her feet, her cool-headed composure finally fracturing.
Her eyes darted around the
clearing,
scanning
the spaces between the ancient oaks. The flowers. They were still. Not a single petal stirred in the dead air, yet she could have sworn they were all turned towards her, a silent, watchful audience. A
flicker
of movement at the edge of her vision. She spun to her right. Nothing.
Just the gnarled bark of
a standing stone, its surface like a withered face. But there had been something. A shape, darker than the shadows, that had moved and then
was gone
. The pendant’s
pulse
quickened
, matching the frantic thumping of her own heart. The
warmth
was no longer gentle; it was an intense, focused heat, beginning to feel uncomfortable against her skin. She had to leave. Now. The thought was a jolt of pure adrenaline. She turned back the way she came, towards the gap in the stones she had entered through. It looked different. The stones seemed taller, more menacing. The gap between them appeared narrower, shrouded in a deeper shadow than before. A low sound began then. It wasn't a rustle or a snap. It was a hum. A discordant, tuneless
melody that seemed to come from everywhere at once
. It
vibrated
in the soles of her boots and hummed in her teeth, a single, droning note that promised nothing but emptiness. Rory fumbled in her pocket for her phone, her fingers clumsy with panic. The screen lit up, a harsh, blue-white glare that made her flinch. The battery icon, which had been full when she left the flat, was now red. A sliver of power remaining. And the time. She’d been here for twenty minutes. It felt like hours. The humming grew louder,
resolving
into two, then three clashing notes that scraped against each other like nails on glass. She looked up, her phone held
loosely
in her hand. And she saw it. Between two of the standing stones, a figure stood. It was tall and impossibly thin, its limbs too long for its body, its joints bent at angles that made no sense. It was a silhouette cut from the absolute blackness of the grove’s edge, a thing of jagged lines and wrong proportions. It had no face she could see, only a smooth, featureless oval of shadow that
was tilted
in her direction. It wasn't a trick of the light. It wasn't an animal. It
was watching
her. The pendant grew hot, searingly so, a brand against her skin. Through the thin fabric of her shirt, she saw a faint crimson glow
begin to
emanate from it. The figure took a step. Its movement was a horrifying, stuttering
lurch
, like a broken puppet
being pulled
by unseen strings. It didn't walk into the clearing so much as it unfolded, one long, disjointed limb at a time, into the space between the stones. Rory didn't scream. Her throat was locked tight, all the air frozen in her lungs. Her mind, the quick, clever part of her that always found an answer, was a blank wall of white-hot terror. There was no reasoning with this. No out-of-the-box solution. There was only the wrongness, the humming, the heat on her chest, and the thing that was now standing at the edge of the circle of wildflowers. She ran. Not thinking, just reacting. She spun away from the figure, away from the humming, and sprinted towards the nearest gap in the stones. The one she thought was the exit. The ground beneath her feet felt soft and
treacherous
, as if it
were trying
to hold her back. The humming rose to a piercing shriek that filled her entire head, a sound that
felt like it was drilling directly into
her skull. She stumbled, her boot catching on an unseen root, and went down hard. The impact drove the air from her lungs. She landed in a bed of the impossible flowers, their soft petals brushing against her cheek. For a terrifying second, she lay there, paralysed. The heat from the pendant was now an agony. Get up. The thought cut through the panic. She pushed herself up, her palms scraping against dirt and stone, and scrambled forward on her hands and knees. She didn't dare look back. She
could feel
it behind her, a cold, heavy presence that sucked all the
warmth
from the air. Her outstretched fingers touched the rough, weathered surface of a standing stone. She hauled herself towards the gap, a dark rectangle of promise. She threw herself through it, tumbling onto the other side. The world rushed back in. The sudden
chill
of a real night breeze. The distant hum of traffic. The hoot of an owl. The sounds were so normal, so mundane, they were a physical blow. Rory lay on the damp ground, gasping for breath, her chest heaving. The screaming hum in her head
was gone
. The pendant against her skin was already cooling, its angry red glow fading to nothing. She pushed herself onto her elbows and looked back. The Grove was just a clearing in a park. The standing stones were just ancient, weathered trees. There was no figure. There was no impossible darkness. There was only the moonlight and the silent, sleeping woods. But as she stared, a single,
perfect
blue wildflower that grew right on the boundary line wilted, its petals turning to black dust before her eyes.
created_at
"2026-02-19T12:13:54.285Z"
2/19/2026, 12:13:54 PM
model
"z-ai/glm-4.6"
4/6/2001, 12:00:00 AM
app_id
182717
external_user
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streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
576
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
131475
tokens_prompt
1038
tokens_completion
4155
native_tokens_prompt
926
native_tokens_completion
3728
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
1845
native_tokens_cached
256
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.006795299
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"c8607edc-8577-4199-b03d-1213da4743dc"
id
"chatcmpl-RrZxPMB7dgw5oIa1pMWTjAeL"
is_byok
false
latency
96
model_permaslug
"z-ai/glm-4.6"
4/6/2001, 12:00:00 AM
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771503234-YhigFpSuuwGJNM7MmEUU"
upstream_id
"chatcmpl-RrZxPMB7dgw5oIa1pMWTjAeL"
total_cost
0.006795299
cache_discount
0.0000896
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
1
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
93.75%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1599
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"completely"
count
1
1
adverb
"loosely"
count
1
highlights
0
"completely"
1
"loosely"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
6.19%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1599
totalAiIsms
30
found
0
word
"throbbed"
count
1
1
word
"silence"
count
3
2
word
"perfect"
count
3
3
word
"familiar"
count
1
4
word
"profound"
count
2
5
word
"navigating"
count
1
6
word
"whisper"
count
1
7
word
"gloom"
count
1
8
word
"warmth"
count
5
9
word
"pulse"
count
2
10
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
11
word
"scanning"
count
1
12
word
"flicker"
count
1
13
word
"quickened"
count
1
14
word
"vibrated"
count
1
15
word
"resolving"
count
1
16
word
"lurch"
count
1
17
word
"treacherous"
count
1
18
word
"could feel"
count
1
19
word
"chill"
count
1
highlights
0
"throbbed"
1
"silence"
2
"perfect"
3
"familiar"
4
"profound"
5
"navigating"
6
"whisper"
7
"gloom"
8
"warmth"
9
"pulse"
10
"rhythmic"
11
"scanning"
12
"flicker"
13
"quickened"
14
"vibrated"
15
"resolving"
16
"lurch"
17
"treacherous"
18
"could feel"
19
"chill"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
154
matches
0
"y with panic"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
154
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
2
"begin to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
154
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1593
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
2
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
18
wordCount
1590
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
0.57
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove
3
Golden
1
Empress
1
Richmond
1
Park
1
London
1
Heartstone
1
Rory
9
persons
0
"Rory"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
2
"London"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
30.95%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
105
glossingSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"felt like a pressure against her eardru"
1
"seemed taller more menacing"
2
"appeared narrower shrouded in a deeper shadow than before"
3
"melody that seemed to come from everywhere at once"
4
"felt like it was drilling directly into"
74.45%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
2
per1kWords
1.255
wordCount
1593
matches
0
"Not the dead silence of a locked room, but the breathing, living quiet of a place untouched by concrete"
1
"Not the crisp shuffle of leaves in the wind, but the sound of something being dragged through them"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
154
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
40
mean
39.83
std
25.69
cv
0.645
sampleLengths
0
79
1
86
2
78
3
15
4
84
5
55
6
10
7
50
8
18
9
70
10
15
11
63
12
35
13
5
14
21
15
52
16
48
17
31
18
5
19
47
20
50
21
58
22
20
23
10
24
4
25
72
26
15
27
29
28
45
29
71
30
2
31
72
32
54
33
2
34
48
35
33
36
5
37
30
38
44
39
62
93.87%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
5
totalSentences
154
matches
0
"being dragged"
1
"was gone"
2
"was tilted"
3
"being pulled"
4
"was gone"
87.48%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
237
matches
0
"was making"
1
"was watching"
2
"were trying"
3
"was drilling"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
1
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
154
ratio
0.006
matches
0
"The warmth was no longer gentle; it was an intense, focused heat, beginning to feel uncomfortable against her skin."
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1596
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"harsh, blue-white glare"
1
"single, perfect blue wildflower"
adverbCount
54
adverbRatio
0.03383458646616541
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.006265664160401002
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
154
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
154
mean
10.34
std
6.51
cv
0.63
sampleLengths
0
12
1
16
2
5
3
19
4
3
5
2
6
22
7
21
8
24
9
5
10
3
11
16
12
10
13
7
14
24
15
11
16
18
17
18
18
7
19
15
20
4
21
9
22
3
23
15
24
14
25
18
26
21
27
5
28
6
29
25
30
5
31
14
32
10
33
3
34
15
35
3
36
3
37
6
38
9
39
1
40
4
41
6
42
10
43
1
44
1
45
6
46
2
47
4
48
18
49
5
29.87%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
31
diversityRatio
0.22077922077922077
totalSentences
154
uniqueOpeners
34
92.59%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
4
totalSentences
144
matches
0
"Just a fox."
1
"Just that profound, heavy silence"
2
"Then it began to pulse."
3
"Just the gnarled bark of"
ratio
0.028
86.67%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
48
totalSentences
144
matches
0
"Her head throbbed in time"
1
"She needed quiet."
2
"She’d found the Grove by"
3
"She ducked under a low-hanging"
4
"It was a silence so"
5
"She found her usual spot,"
6
"Her body went still, a"
7
"She listened, her breath held"
8
"She let out a slow"
9
"It came from her left,"
10
"She stared into the gloom,"
11
"she whispered to the empty"
12
"She let it drop and"
13
"It grew, a gentle, insistent"
14
"It wasn’t unpleasant, but it"
15
"It was a feeling that"
16
"Her eyes darted around the"
17
"They were still."
18
"She spun to her right."
19
"She had to leave."
ratio
0.333
64.17%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
114
totalSentences
144
matches
0
"The city was a living"
1
"Rory couldn’t take it anymore."
2
"Her head throbbed in time"
3
"She needed quiet."
4
"She’d found the Grove by"
5
"A gap in the ancient"
6
"The standing stones."
7
"Eva had called them a"
8
"A place where the world"
9
"Rory parked her bike against"
10
"The walk was familiar now,"
11
"The path was a ribbon"
12
"The air grew cooler as"
13
"Something sweet and cloying, like"
14
"She ducked under a low-hanging"
15
"The change was immediate."
16
"The faint, ever-present hum of"
17
"The wind died."
18
"The air, which had been"
19
"It was a silence so"
ratio
0.792
34.72%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
144
matches
0
"To sit in the profound"
ratio
0.007
39.47%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
76
technicalSentenceCount
11
matches
0
"Blues and purples and whites, all blooming as if it were the peak of summer, not the tail end of autumn."
1
"It vibrated in the soles of her boots and hummed in her teeth, a single, droning note that promised nothing but emptiness."
2
"The screen lit up, a harsh, blue-white glare that made her flinch."
3
"The humming grew louder, resolving into two, then three clashing notes that scraped against each other like nails on glass."
4
"It was tall and impossibly thin, its limbs too long for its body, its joints bent at angles that made no sense."
5
"It had no face she could see, only a smooth, featureless oval of shadow that was tilted in her direction."
6
"There was only the wrongness, the humming, the heat on her chest, and the thing that was now standing at the edge of the circle of wildflowers."
7
"The ground beneath her feet felt soft and treacherous, as if it were trying to hold her back."
8
"The humming rose to a piercing shriek that filled her entire head, a sound that felt like it was drilling directly into her skull."
9
"Rory lay on the damp ground, gasping for breath, her chest heaving."
10
"But as she stared, a single, perfect blue wildflower that grew right on the boundary line wilted, its petals turning to black dust before her eyes."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
1
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
1
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
1
80.7395%