| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "unraveling" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "wavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 25 | | markdownWords | 44 | | totalWords | 1035 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "Not now. Not here." | | 1 | "wet" | | 2 | "Hel portal." | | 3 | "Stupid." | | 4 | "behind" | | 5 | "No signal." | | 6 | "Just a trick of the eyes." | | 7 | "In. Out." | | 8 | "anything" | | 9 | "it" | | 10 | "wet" | | 11 | "a branch? a hand?" | | 12 | "snap" | | 13 | "changed" | | 14 | "laughed" | | 15 | "unraveling" | | 16 | "Had to be." | | 17 | "exploded" | | 18 | "wrong" | | 19 | "feel" | | 20 | "No. No, no, no." | | 21 | "melting" | | 22 | "lunged" | | 23 | "erupted" | | 24 | "screamed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1030 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | October | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 9 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reacting to her fear" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1035 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 21.12 | | std | 17.79 | | cv | 0.842 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 38 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "been meant" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong—too thick, too sweet, like rotting fruit left in the sun." | | 1 | "The sound had come from the trees—no, from *behind* the trees." | | 2 | "Then the light caught it—a shape, half-hidden behind the nearest stone." | | 3 | "The thing—*it*—hadn’t moved." | | 4 | "She stumbled, arms windmilling, and the pendant’s chain snagged on something—*a branch?" | | 5 | "a hand?*—and *snap*." | | 6 | "The pendant’s glow pulsed once, twice—then went dark." | | 7 | "She could hear it—*feel* it—gaining." | | 8 | "Its eyes—if they were eyes—were hollow pits, deeper than the night." | | 9 | "And then—" |
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| 91.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 202 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.04950495049504951 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0049504950495049506 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 7.84 | | std | 4.84 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 30.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 26 | | diversityRatio | 0.22727272727272727 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Too deliberate to be the" | | 1 | "Too close to be an" | | 2 | "Just the whisper of leaves," | | 3 | "*Just a trick of the" | | 4 | "Then the light caught it—a" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She tasted copper." | | 1 | "She pushed herself up, fingers" | | 2 | "Her breath came in short" | | 3 | "She hadn’t come here for" | | 4 | "She’d come for answers." | | 5 | "She’d taken the backroads to" | | 6 | "She turned slowly." | | 7 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 8 | "She reached for her phone." | | 9 | "She thumbed to the flashlight" | | 10 | "Its limbs were too long," | | 11 | "It didn’t move like a" | | 12 | "It didn’t move like *anything*" | | 13 | "She could still see the" | | 14 | "Her voice cracked" | | 15 | "She took a step back." | | 16 | "Her heel caught on a" | | 17 | "She stumbled, arms windmilling, and" | | 18 | "It was the noise of" | | 19 | "She lashed out blindly, her" |
| | ratio | 0.265 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The bike chain snapped with" | | 1 | "Rory hit the ground hard," | | 2 | "The impact jarred her teeth" | | 3 | "She tasted copper." | | 4 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 5 | "She pushed herself up, fingers" | | 6 | "The air smelled wrong—too thick," | | 7 | "Richmond Park stretched around her," | | 8 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 9 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 10 | "Her breath came in short" | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 12 | "*Hel portal.* The thought slithered" | | 13 | "She hadn’t come here for" | | 14 | "She’d come for answers." | | 15 | "The bike lay twisted in" | | 16 | "She’d taken the backroads to" | | 17 | "A twig snapped." | | 18 | "The sound had come from" | | 19 | "She turned slowly." |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that should have been dormant in October bloomed in unnatural profusion, their petals too bright, too *wet*." | | 1 | "She’d taken the backroads to avoid the main gates, the ones with the CCTV and the park rangers who asked too many questions." | | 2 | "Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 3 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, dimmed, then flared brighter, as if reacting to her fear." | | 4 | "It was the noise of something *unraveling*, of stitches popping one by one, of a voice that had never been meant to speak." | | 5 | "The moment her skin touched the heartstone, light *exploded* from it, a crimson flare that seared her eyes." | | 6 | "The only thing that remained was the pendant, its crimson light casting long, wavering shadows across the earth." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |