Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4EQ899BBXEWJG2HKQXDJ

Run Details

Duration:
9.6s
Cost:
$0.002293

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their weathered surfaces casting jagged shadows in the moonlight. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter, the silver chain of her Heartstone pendant catching a glint of pale light against her black shirt. Richmond Park stretched around her, but this wasn't the park anyone would recognize. The Fae Grove existed in that liminal space between reality and something else entirely. Wildflowers bloomed impossibly in the depths of night, their petals shimming with an unnatural luminescence that seemed to pulse with an internal rhythm. She'd come here looking for answers. About Eva. About the strange disappearance that had haunted her for weeks. A soft rustle broke the silence. Not wind. Something deliberate. Aurora froze, her bright blue eyes scanning the edge of the clearing. The standing stones created a perfect circle around her, their ancient oak surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them. Another sound. Like fabric dragging against bark. Soft. Precise. "Hello?" Her voice came out steadier than she felt. Silence answered. But not the peaceful silence of an empty forest. This was a silence that listened. A silence with breath. The wildflowers closest to her began to lean. Not from wind. As if something unseen moved through them, bending their stems with careful, measured movements. Her hand instinctively touched the Heartstone pendant. It felt warm against her skin, pulsing with a faint inner glow that seemed to respond to something she couldn't see. Something was definitely here with her. And it was getting closer.
total_cost0.0022928000000000002

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount259
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount259
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"depths"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"silence"
count5
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"glint"
3"depths"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"scanning"
7"perfect"
8"etched"
9"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences29
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences29
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences29
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords259
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount258
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
Eva1
Silence1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Silence"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences18
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"luminescence that seemed to pulse with an internal rhythm"
1"symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them"
2"glow that seemed to respond to something she couldn't see"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount259
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean21.58
std14.29
cv0.662
sampleLengths
039
150
218
310
439
59
69
721
825
928
106
115
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs41
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was getting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount258
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.03488372093023256
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.01937984496124031
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences29
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences29
mean8.93
std7.14
cv0.8
sampleLengths
017
122
213
314
423
56
62
710
86
92
102
1112
1227
132
145
151
161
179
182
199
206
214
228
233
2414
257
2621
276
285
96.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.7241379310344828
totalSentences29
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences22
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences22
matches
0"She'd come here looking for"
1"Her voice came out steadier"
2"Her hand instinctively touched the"
3"It felt warm against her"
ratio0.182
96.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount16
totalSentences22
matches
0"The ancient standing stones loomed"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"Richmond Park stretched around her,"
3"The Fae Grove existed in"
4"Wildflowers bloomed impossibly in the"
5"She'd come here looking for"
6"A soft rustle broke the"
7"Aurora froze, her bright blue"
8"The standing stones created a"
9"Her voice came out steadier"
10"This was a silence that"
11"A silence with breath."
12"The wildflowers closest to her"
13"Her hand instinctively touched the"
14"It felt warm against her"
15"Something was definitely here with"
ratio0.727
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences22
matches
0"As if something unseen moved"
ratio0.045
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed impossibly in the depths of night, their petals shimming with an unnatural luminescence that seemed to pulse with an internal rhythm."
1"The standing stones created a perfect circle around her, their ancient oak surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at…"
2"As if something unseen moved through them, bending their stems with careful, measured movements."
3"It felt warm against her skin, pulsing with a faint inner glow that seemed to respond to something she couldn't see."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.7638%