| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The name curled like [like]" | | 1 | "she said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.45 | | leniency | 0.9 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1150 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1150 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "quivered" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 171 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 182 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1158 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "late" | | 1 | "The Fae Grove" | | 2 | "Near a Hel portal." | | 3 | "Stiller" | | 4 | "beneath" | | 5 | "ears" | | 6 | "itched" | | 7 | "moved" | | 8 | "shapes" | | 9 | "seen" | | 10 | "“You remember,”" | | 11 | "You are the delivery. You were always the delivery." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1062 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | August | 1 | | Warm | 1 | | English | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "August" | | 6 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 16.78 | | std | 16.09 | | cv | 0.959 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | |
| 80.24% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "was cloying" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was screaming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 182 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "Between their roots, something glinted — moss-covered standing stones, arranged in a near-perfect circle." | | 1 | "Her pendant stirred against her collarbone — the Heartstone, given by a woman who’d handed her a cup of tea in a Cardiff library and vanished before she could finish it." | | 2 | "Inside, the delivery — a lacquered bento box, sealed with red wax, still warm." | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters — snowdrops in August, foxgloves with violet streaks like lightning." | | 4 | "Beneath it, a flat stone slab — altar or tomb, it was hard to tell." | | 5 | "The standing stones — she counted them." | | 6 | "A bird shrieked — but not from above." | | 7 | "It spoke with two voices at once — a girl’s whisper and an old woman’s rasp." | | 8 | "She could feel it — a presence, tall and thin, standing just beyond the ring of stones." | | 9 | "But the contents — noodles, vegetables, something meaty — shifted." | | 10 | "And the tall one — the one with antlers — stepped forward." | | 11 | "But when it tilted its head, she saw her own reflection — younger." | | 12 | "Then the flute note came again — close this time." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 179 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.0335195530726257 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00558659217877095 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 182 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 182 | | mean | 6.36 | | std | 5.08 | | cv | 0.799 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 60.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.4065934065934066 | | totalSentences | 182 | | uniqueOpeners | 74 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "Just an address, a time," | | 1 | "Only Yu-Fei’s stamp, a coiled" | | 2 | "Always at the corner of" | | 3 | "Then, from the far side" | | 4 | "Then back to seven." | | 5 | "Too small for a man." | | 6 | "Then, a voice." | | 7 | "Too many joints in the" | | 8 | "Then a slow rotation, clockwise," | | 9 | "Just shadows folded into suggestion." | | 10 | "Then the flute note came" |
| | ratio | 0.082 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "It pressed in." | | 1 | "She hadn’t taken the job" | | 2 | "She also didn’t believe in" | | 3 | "She’d never seen them before," | | 4 | "Her pendant stirred against her" | | 5 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 6 | "She stepped into the clearing." | | 7 | "Her boots didn’t crunch on" | | 8 | "They sank into moss lush" | | 9 | "She didn’t look back." | | 10 | "She knew better than to" | | 11 | "Its branches twisted toward the" | | 12 | "She approached, scanning the edges" | | 13 | "She touched it, and the" | | 14 | "She set the bento box" | | 15 | "It didn’t stop when she" | | 16 | "She turned toward it." | | 17 | "Their trunks pulsed faintly, veins" | | 18 | "She didn’t remember dropping it." | | 19 | "She backed away, slow." |
| | ratio | 0.224 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory jammed the kickstand down" | | 1 | "The silence that followed wasn’t" | | 2 | "It pressed in." | | 3 | "She hadn’t taken the job" | | 4 | "Aurora Carter didn’t believe in" | | 5 | "She also didn’t believe in" | | 6 | "Oak trees loomed, their trunks" | | 7 | "She’d never seen them before," | | 8 | "*The Fae Grove*." | | 9 | "A place time forgot, and" | | 10 | "A breeze stirred, cold despite" | | 11 | "Her pendant stirred against her" | | 12 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed," | | 13 | "Rory exhaled, slow." | | 14 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 15 | "She stepped into the clearing." | | 16 | "The air changed." | | 17 | "Her boots didn’t crunch on" | | 18 | "They sank into moss lush" | | 19 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters" |
| | ratio | 0.612 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she stood at the" | | 1 | "As if the forest had" | | 2 | "As if something had walked" | | 3 | "Now she was older." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pendant stirred against her collarbone — the Heartstone, given by a woman who’d handed her a cup of tea in a Cardiff library and vanished before she could f…" | | 1 | "Then a slow rotation, clockwise, as if turned by invisible fingers." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, voice steady" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the voice sighed (sigh)" | | 1 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |