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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4G2QXGCFS0JG5WVXQ13H
Run Details
Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.7 Flash
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 22s
Cost:
$0.002390
Provider:
Venice
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.11%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
30.02%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
51.45%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
72.46%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
3.48%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
54.35%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
75.89%
Technical jargon density
(details)
66.18%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
82.5756%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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The chain lock rattled. Heavy. Deliberate.
The deadbolt groaned as the
door pushed against it. No polite knocking. No hesitation.
Just the unmistakable weight of
boots on the worn floorboards above Yu-Fei Cheung’s curry house. I didn’t breathe.
My hand hovered over the
handle, fingers brushing the ice-cold brass. He shouldn’t be here.
The stone steps outside my
window felt empty, the air too still.
London’s invisible streets had stayed
quiet, but he had
shattered
the
silence
with his arrival.
The wood splintered inward, just
an inch. Enough room for a shoulder. Then a cane. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway.
He blocked out the dull
yellow light of the hallway.
He looked like a man
who had just stepped out of a picture in a vintage gallery, except for the dangerous
glint
in those heterochromatic eyes. One amber, the other black.
They held me in a
grip tighter than any physical chain.
I gripped the cold iron
handle until my
knuckles turned white
. "What are you doing here?" I asked.
My voice came out sharper
than I intended. Too defensive. "Checking the perimeter." He didn't blink.
His platinum blond hair was
slicked back,
glinting
under the ceiling bulb.
A charcoal suit tailored to
perfection hugged his tall frame.
He leaned on an ivory
cane, tapping it once on my threshold. "I thought you were in Marseille." "Decided to take the chunnel. Less humid."
He stepped inside without waiting
for an invitation.
His suit trousers brushed against
the dusty doormat. "And besides, I heard about the fire. Eva's shop." My
stomach
dropped. "It's under control." "Not the shop. Her building. Someone marked her territory, Rory."
He turned, assessing the cramped
space. Ptolemy the cat hissed from a stack of books, arching his back like a hairy ridge. Lucien ignored the feral noise. He looked at the ceiling, then the floorboards, then me. "A bit high for a wizard, wouldn't you agree?" "Did you just call me a wizard?" "Precursor to a warlock. Either way, you shouldn't be living above a fire hazard."
He gestured to the safety
chain still dangling from the doorframe. "I assume you use that." "I use it when I have visitors who think they can barge in." "And I assume you know I'm not a visitor." The accusation
hung in the air
, heavy and sour.
I dropped my hand from
the handle. The chain clinked uselessly against the frame. "I haven't heard from you in three months,"
I said, keeping my voice
level. "Consider that the visit." "I believe we ended things on a
slightly
more permanent note."
My heart hammered against my
ribs. I walked past him, too proud to retreat behind the sofa. I needed to put distance between us, even if I couldn't find any. The air in here smelled of old paper, takeout curry, and him. Expensive cologne mixed with something darker. Sulphur, maybe. The faint scent of a demon realm clinging to his expensive clothes. "I wanted you gone," I said. It wasn't a question. "You gave me every reason to believe you were safe." Lucien spun the ivory cane in his long, slender fingers. The tip struck the floor with a sharp *
tap
*. "Until you ran." "I didn't run. I left." "Same thing. You left a trail of blood because you were stubborn." He took a step closer. The temperature in the room dropped. My breath plumed in the cold air. "I was protecting myself." I crossed my arms over my chest, shielding the small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist. The one he’d kissed once, then
tried to
slice off with a jagged piece of glass during a moment of madness. "You get involved with a demon, Lucien. You get hurt." "That was one time. And I would have found you regardless of Evan." "Lucky Evan didn't kill me first." "If he touched you, I would have stripped the skin from his bones." The ferocity in his voice was terrifying. He moved again, closing the remaining gap between us. His proximity was overwhelming. I
could feel
the heat radiating from his frame, stealing the
warmth
from the flat. "You knew that, Rory. You knew what I was capable of." "I didn't know you were capable of disappearing." "Work happens." He stopped inches from my face. His amber eye captured my gaze, drilling into the
depths
until I felt stripped bare. "You know where I work. Call me." "No." He raised an
eyebrow
. The black one narrowed just a fraction. "No?" "If you're here because Eva's in trouble, I'll handle it." I stood my ground, meeting his stare. I refused to look at the
pulse
pounding
frantically in his throat. I refused to remember the nights we spent tangled in
silk
sheets, whispering promises that ended in ash and ash. "You can't handle this." Lucien reached out. His gloved hand hovered over the scar on my wrist. His fingers were long, elegant, and warm. He didn't touch me. He just let his presence linger on the air around my skin. "This isn't a neighbourhood dispute. This is something... worse. It involves your past." "You don't know anything about my past." "I know you left Cardiff without your keys. I know you change your number every six months. I know you have a preference for flat whites that aren't fit for human consumption." His voice dropped to a rumble. "I know you sleep with one eye open." "Get out, Lucien." He smirked. A crooked, dangerous thing that twisted his handsome features into something predatory. He finally let his hand drop. The absence of his touch left a cold phantom sensation on my skin. "You can't get rid of me that easily. I'm a permanent fixture in London's underworld." He stepped back, turning toward the window where the streetlights
flickered
on outside. "Someone is looking for the girl who used to deliver Chinese food for Yu-Fei. Someone who thinks you know more than you're saying." I stiffened. "It's just deliveries." "Lies have a nasty habit of getting tracked." "Then you're the one they should be asking." "Which is why I'm here."
Lucien turned back, the charcoal suit swallowing the dim light
. He rested his
weight
on the cane. The office fixer persona vanished, replaced by the
predator
beneath the expensive polish. "Stay here. Lock the door. Don't open it for anyone. Including me." "You're leaving?" "I have to stir the pot. I have to make sure they don't come here looking for you while I'm gone." He walked to the door, pausing with his hand on the brass knob. "But I'm coming back, Rory." "Don't bother." "Will do." He unlocked the deadbolt. The mechanism clicked loudly in the
silence
. Before he could step out, he turned. The amber eye blazed in the dim light. "If they find you first, you'll end up in Avaros." "I have a flatmate who knows magic,"
I shot back, trying to sound indomitable
. "She'll manage." "The cat doesn't count as an exorcist." He opened the door. A blast of cold night air rushed in, rustling the papers scattered on the coffee table. He didn't look back. He just walked down the stairs, his cane tapping the rhythm of a countdown against the wood. Ptolemy stopped hissing and padded over to the empty doorway, staring down at the darkness. I stood in the center of the room, alone again. The
silence
rushed back in, louder than before. I looked at the door. It was still cracked open, letting the cold wind in, and with it, the scent of him. Sulphur and expensive cologne. My phone buzzed on the coffee table. A text message from an unknown number. *Welcome back to London.*
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"He stepped back [back]"
1
"Lucien turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences
55
tagDensity
0.309
leniency
0.618
rawRatio
0.118
effectiveRatio
0.073
96.11%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1286
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
30.02%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1286
totalAiIsms
18
found
0
word
"weight"
count
2
1
word
"shattered"
count
1
2
word
"silence"
count
3
3
word
"glint"
count
1
4
word
"glinting"
count
1
5
word
"stomach"
count
1
6
word
"could feel"
count
1
7
word
"warmth"
count
1
8
word
"depths"
count
1
9
word
"eyebrow"
count
1
10
word
"pulse"
count
1
11
word
"pounding"
count
1
12
word
"silk"
count
1
13
word
"flickered"
count
1
14
word
"predator"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"shattered"
2
"silence"
3
"glint"
4
"glinting"
5
"stomach"
6
"could feel"
7
"warmth"
8
"depths"
9
"eyebrow"
10
"pulse"
11
"pounding"
12
"silk"
13
"flickered"
14
"predator"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"knuckles turned white"
count
1
1
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
2
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"knuckles turned white"
1
"stomach dropped"
2
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
101
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
101
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
138
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
38
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
2
markdownWords
5
totalWords
1282
ratio
0.004
matches
0
"tap"
1
"Welcome back to London."
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
8
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
10
wordCount
840
uniqueNames
5
maxNameDensity
0.6
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei
1
Cheung
1
Moreau
1
Ptolemy
2
Lucien
5
persons
0
"Yu-Fei"
1
"Cheung"
2
"Moreau"
3
"Ptolemy"
4
"Lucien"
places
(empty)
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
69
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"looked like a man who had just stepped ou"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1282
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
138
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
58
mean
22.1
std
18.15
cv
0.821
sampleLengths
0
35
1
45
2
15
3
57
4
11
5
17
6
3
7
37
8
6
9
32
10
6
11
47
12
9
13
7
14
30
15
13
16
9
17
23
18
18
19
11
20
62
21
10
22
32
23
5
24
30
25
51
26
13
27
6
28
59
29
8
30
30
31
1
32
11
33
1
34
49
35
53
36
7
37
46
38
3
39
33
40
51
41
5
42
8
43
8
44
47
45
2
46
39
47
2
48
2
49
26
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
101
matches
0
"was slicked"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
141
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
138
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
843
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
28
adverbRatio
0.033214709371293
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.004744958481613286
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
138
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
138
mean
9.29
std
6.44
cv
0.693
sampleLengths
0
4
1
1
2
1
3
9
4
3
5
2
6
15
7
3
8
11
9
4
10
12
11
15
12
7
13
5
14
3
15
5
16
10
17
26
18
5
19
11
20
11
21
7
22
8
23
2
24
3
25
3
26
12
27
10
28
12
29
6
30
15
31
8
32
9
33
3
34
3
35
16
36
16
37
5
38
10
39
9
40
7
41
25
42
5
43
13
44
9
45
9
46
7
47
7
48
14
49
4
51.45%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.34782608695652173
totalSentences
138
uniqueOpeners
48
72.46%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"Just the unmistakable weight of"
1
"Then a cane."
ratio
0.022
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
53
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"I didn’t breathe."
1
"My hand hovered over the"
2
"He shouldn’t be here."
3
"He blocked out the dull"
4
"He looked like a man"
5
"They held me in a"
6
"I gripped the cold iron"
7
"My voice came out sharper"
8
"He didn't blink."
9
"His platinum blond hair was"
10
"He leaned on an ivory"
11
"He stepped inside without waiting"
12
"His suit trousers brushed against"
13
"My stomach dropped."
14
"He turned, assessing the cramped"
15
"He looked at the ceiling,"
16
"He gestured to the safety"
17
"I dropped my hand from"
18
"I said, keeping my voice"
19
"My heart hammered against my"
ratio
0.576
3.48%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
84
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"The chain lock rattled."
1
"The deadbolt groaned as the"
2
"I didn’t breathe."
3
"My hand hovered over the"
4
"He shouldn’t be here."
5
"The stone steps outside my"
6
"London’s invisible streets had stayed"
7
"The wood splintered inward, just"
8
"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway."
9
"He blocked out the dull"
10
"He looked like a man"
11
"They held me in a"
12
"I gripped the cold iron"
13
"My voice came out sharper"
14
"He didn't blink."
15
"His platinum blond hair was"
16
"A charcoal suit tailored to"
17
"He leaned on an ivory"
18
"He stepped inside without waiting"
19
"His suit trousers brushed against"
ratio
0.913
54.35%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"Before he could step out,"
ratio
0.011
75.89%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
32
technicalSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"He looked like a man who had just stepped out of a picture in a vintage gallery, except for the dangerous glint in those heterochromatic eyes."
1
"I could feel the heat radiating from his frame, stealing the warmth from the flat."
2
"A crooked, dangerous thing that twisted his handsome features into something predatory."
66.18%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
17
uselessAdditionCount
2
matches
0
"Lucien turned back, the charcoal suit swallowing the dim light"
1
"I shot back, trying to sound indomitable"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
55
tagDensity
0.055
leniency
0.109
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
82.5756%