Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4KNZH3RC5PS1ECBT8709

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37.3s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The low hum of the Raven’s Nest was a familiar blanket. Aurora Carter, Rory to the few who still used the name, sat on her usual stool, the worn leather cool against her jeans. The air smelled of old wood, polished brass, and the faint, sharp scent of lemon from the cloth Silas Blackwood used on the glasses. Behind the bar, Silas moved with a quiet economy, his slight limp a barely perceptible rhythm in his step. He didn’t need to ask what she wanted. A short glass appeared before her, a measure of amber liquid glinting in the low light. He pushed it forward, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the green glow from the neon sign outside. The door swung open, a brief gust of Soho night air cutting through the warmth. A man stood in the doorway, his silhouette a momentary black hole against the streetlights before he stepped inside. He shook the rain from his coat, a fine mist settling on the floorboards. Silas glanced up, a quick, assessing look, then returned to his task. Rory paid him no mind, her focus on the map of old London taped to the wall behind the bar, its ink faded to a soft brown. The man approached the bar, settling a few stools down. His voice, when it came, was a stone dropped into the still pond of her memory. “A pint of whatever’s on tap. Please.” Rory’s head turned. The voice was deeper than she remembered, roughened by time, but the cadence was the same. He was looking at the rows of bottles, his profile sharp and unfamiliar. He had filled out, the softness of his university days replaced by a leaner, harder edge. But the way he pushed a hand through his hair, that was the same. Silas drew the pint, the foam a perfect white cap. The man took it, his fingers wrapping around the glass. He turned then, his eyes sweeping the room, and they landed on her. A flicker of confusion, then dawning recognition. “Rory Carter?” Her breath caught. She hadn’t heard that full name in years. Not from anyone here. “Liam.” The name felt foreign on her tongue. A relic from a life she had packed away in a box and stored in the attic of her mind. A grin spread across his face, wide and unguarded. It was the grin of the boy she knew, the one who used to steal chips from her plate in the student union. “I don’t believe it. What in God’s name are you doing in London?” She lifted her glass, the liquid a welcome tremor in her hand. “I live here.” “You live here? Since when? Last I heard, you were tearing it up at Cardiff Law, destined to be the next big thing in criminal defence. Your dad was so proud.” The mention of her father, of law school, was a pinprick in the carefully constructed bubble of her present. She took a sip of the whiskey, the burn a familiar distraction. “Things change.” Liam slid onto the stool next to her, the space between them suddenly charged with the voltage of a shared past. He looked around the bar, at the black-and-white photographs on the walls, at Silas who was now meticulously polishing a pint glass with an intensity that suggested he was listening to every word. “This place is… moody. I like it. Very you, actually. Always did have a thing for the shadows.” “That’s Silas’s place.” She gestured with her chin. “I live upstairs.” His eyebrows shot up. “You’re the mysterious upstairs tenant? He’s mentioned you. Said you were quiet.” “I’m not quiet.” “No, I suppose you’re not.” He took a long drink of his beer. “It’s been what, five, six years? You just vanished. Eva said you’d gone up to London, but then… nothing. We all figured you’d be too busy being a hotshot lawyer to call your old uni mates.” The unspoken accusation hung in the air. She hadn’t called. Not him, not Eva, not anyone from that life. She had cut the cord clean. “I’ve been busy.” The words were flat, a wall thrown up between them. “Yeah, I get it. London life.” He leaned forward, his elbows on the polished wood. The gesture brought his face closer, and she could see the faint lines around his eyes. “I’m up here for a conference. Boring corporate law stuff. Can’t believe I ran into you. Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world…” She didn’t smile at the classic line. Her gaze drifted to her left wrist, to the small, pale crescent-shaped scar that peeked out from under her sleeve. A childhood accident, she always said. A fall from a bike. A simpler explanation for a simpler time. “Are you happy, Rory?” The question was direct, disarming. It wasn’t what she expected. Not another query about her career or her parents. Just that. Are you happy. She looked at him, at the earnest, hopeful face of the boy who once helped her revise for tort law exams. Who she’d shared late-night pizzas with, dreaming of futures that now felt like they belonged to other people. “I have a job. I have a flat.” She paused. “I’m not in law, Liam.” He waited, his expression open. “I work for a restaurant. Deliveries.” The silence stretched. He didn’t look disgusted, or pitying. He looked… confused. As if she had started speaking a language he didn’t understand. “Deliveries? Like… on a bike?” “Sometimes. On foot mostly.” He nodded slowly, processing this. The brilliant Aurora Carter, who could argue anyone into a corner, who had a mind like a razor, was now walking other people’s food to their doors. “What about Evan? Are you two…?” The name was a slap. She felt her whole body tighten, the muscles in her back going rigid. Silas’s hand stilled for a fraction of a second on the glass he was holding. “That’s over.” The finality in her tone was a clear warning. He heard it. He backed off, his gaze dropping to his beer. “Right. Sorry. None of my business.” “It’s not.” Another silence, this one heavier, filled with all the things they couldn’t say. He was thinking of the girl he knew, the one with the bright future and the infectious laugh. She was thinking of the girl who had to learn how to disappear. “I just…” he began, his voice softer now. “I pictured you in a courtroom, you know? All sharp and brilliant. Taking down some witness. I was always so proud of you. We all were. You were the one who was actually going to do it. Get out.” Get out. The phrase echoed in the dimly lit bar. He meant get out of Cardiff, out of the expected trajectory of their small-town lives. He didn’t know she’d been trying to get out of something else entirely. “I did get out, Liam.” “Yeah.” He looked at her, really looked at her, and for the first time, he seemed to see the woman sitting next to him, not the ghost of the girl he remembered. The coolness in her bright blue eyes wasn’t aloofness. It was armor. The straight set of her shoulders wasn’t confidence. It was a burden borne well. “Yeah, you did.” He finished his beer in one long swallow. He placed the empty glass on the bar, the sound a dull, final thud. “It was good to see you, Rory.” “You too, Liam.” He slid off the stool, pulling his wallet from his pocket. He left a note on the bar, more than enough for the pint. “Take care of yourself.” “You too.” He walked to the door, his steps sure. He didn’t look back. The door swung shut, cutting him off from the room, plunging them back into the familiar quiet. Rory stared at the empty stool. The weight of six years settled on her in the space he had occupied. The regret wasn’t hers, she realised. It was his. The regret for a lost potential, for a story he’d invented in his head that hadn’t come true. Silas placed a fresh glass of whiskey beside her hand, without a word. He picked up Liam’s empty pint glass and the money, his movements slow, deliberate. “He from the before times?” Silas’s voice was low, a gravelly rumble that didn’t carry. Rory picked up the new glass, the coolness a shock against her palm. She looked at the green neon sign, its light painting the rain-streaked window in strokes of brilliant, artificial life. “Something like that.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"slowly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"constructed"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"glinting"
2"warmth"
3"perfect"
4"flicker"
5"constructed"
6"charged"
7"intensity"
8"unspoken"
9"silence"
10"echoed"
11"weight"
12"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences102
matches
0"A flicker of confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1444
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1145
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter2
Rory5
Silas8
Blackwood1
Soho1
London1
Eva1
Aurora2
Get1
Cardiff1
Liam2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Eva"
6"Aurora"
7"Get"
8"Liam"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like they belonged to other people"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1444
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean25.33
std23.24
cv0.917
sampleLengths
0122
187
226
37
462
540
62
715
828
945
1015
1131
1231
132
1454
1518
1611
1716
183
1949
2025
2113
2260
2345
244
2524
2639
2715
285
296
3023
315
324
3332
346
3533
362
3721
386
392
4044
4147
4238
435
4461
4522
467
473
4824
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was looking"
1"was listening"
2"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences131
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1151
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, pale crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.01998262380538662
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007819287576020852
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean11.02
std7.8
cv0.708
sampleLengths
011
123
224
319
48
516
621
715
819
914
1012
1127
1210
1316
147
153
1616
1713
1816
1914
2010
2110
2213
237
242
253
268
274
288
2920
309
3123
3213
3312
343
3531
3619
3712
382
3921
4033
4118
428
433
444
4512
463
4713
4836
497
39.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2595419847328244
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences97
matches
0"He didn’t need to ask"
1"He pushed it forward, the"
2"He shook the rain from"
3"His voice, when it came,"
4"He was looking at the"
5"He had filled out, the"
6"He turned then, his eyes"
7"Her breath caught."
8"She hadn’t heard that full"
9"It was the grin of"
10"She lifted her glass, the"
11"She took a sip of"
12"He looked around the bar,"
13"She gestured with her chin"
14"His eyebrows shot up."
15"He took a long drink"
16"She hadn’t called."
17"She had cut the cord"
18"He leaned forward, his elbows"
19"She didn’t smile at the"
ratio0.474
1.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences97
matches
0"The low hum of the"
1"Aurora Carter, Rory to the"
2"The air smelled of old"
3"He didn’t need to ask"
4"A short glass appeared before"
5"He pushed it forward, the"
6"The door swung open, a"
7"A man stood in the"
8"He shook the rain from"
9"Silas glanced up, a quick,"
10"Rory paid him no mind,"
11"The man approached the bar,"
12"His voice, when it came,"
13"Rory’s head turned."
14"The voice was deeper than"
15"He was looking at the"
16"He had filled out, the"
17"Silas drew the pint, the"
18"The man took it, his"
19"He turned then, his eyes"
ratio0.918
51.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"As if she had started"
ratio0.01
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"But the way he pushed a hand through his hair, that was the same."
1"He looked around the bar, at the black-and-white photographs on the walls, at Silas who was now meticulously polishing a pint glass with an intensity that sugge…"
2"Her gaze drifted to her left wrist, to the small, pale crescent-shaped scar that peeked out from under her sleeve."
3"The brilliant Aurora Carter, who could argue anyone into a corner, who had a mind like a razor, was now walking other people’s food to their doors."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he began, his voice softer now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.4386%