Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4KRQ1VBDJ5X69V3Y8GX2

Run Details

Duration:
14.6s
Cost:
$0.001085
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora’s collarbone, warm as a second heartbeat. She clutched it between her fingers as she stepped through the ring of ancient oaks, their gnarled roots twisting like sleeping serpents in the moonlight. The Fae Grove should have been beautiful at night—silver-washed leaves, flowers glowing faintly underfoot—but the air clung thick and heavy, tasting of damp earth and something metallic. Her boots sank into the moss as she walked deeper in. She'd come to meet Eva, same as always. This was their place. But Eva wasn’t here. Rory checked her phone. No new messages. The screen flickered once before going dark. She tapped it. Nothing. The wind twisted through the trees, carrying whispers that weren’t words. She turned sharply, scanning the shadows between the standing stones. Nothing moved. A rustle. Not wind this time. Something brushing through the undergrowth. "Eva?" Her voice didn’t echo. The grove swallowed sound. Silence. She exhaled and forced herself to keep walking, toward the heart of the clearing where they usually sat. The flowers here bloomed unnaturally bright, petals edged in moonlight, but tonight they curled inward, as if hiding. The Heartstone hissed against her skin. Rory froze. Something was behind her. She didn’t turn. Didn’t breathe. The weight of eyes on her neck prickled like ice. The grove had gone utterly still—no wind, no rustle of leaves, just the slow, creeping certainty that she wasn’t alone. A whisper. "Aurora." Not Eva’s voice. She spun. Empty darkness. Her pulse hammered in her throat. The pendant burned now, its crimson glow seeping between her fingers. Near a Hel portal, it pulsed like this. But there weren’t supposed to be any here. Not in the grove. A breath brushed the back of her neck. She whipped around—still nothing. The standing stones loomed, their shadows too long, too sharp against the ground. "Show yourself." Her voice shook. Laughter, light and broken, skittered between the trees. She took a step back. The moss squelched beneath her boot. Another step. Something cracked behind her. A branch snapping. Run. She bolted, veering between the oaks, their branches clawing at her arms. The grove had never felt this big—trees stretched endlessly, paths twisting where they shouldn’t. The Heartstone’s chain bit into her skin, the pendant blazing hot now, casting jagged crimson streaks across the bark. A shape darted between the trunks ahead. Not Eva. Taller. Limbs too long. Rory skidded to a stop, mud splattering her legs. The thing stopped too. It didn’t turn. Her breath came in ragged gasps. Move. Just move. She backed away, step by step, until her heel hit solid stone. One of the standing oaks. The figure tilted its head. Then stepped toward her. Rory pressed against the tree, fingers scraping bark. The pendant’s glow lit up the thing’s face—no face. Just darkness where features should have been. It reached out. Her hand closed around the stone. "No." The pendant flared. The thing recoiled with a hiss, melting into the shadows. The grove exhaled. Then the whispers started. Hundreds of them, circling, swelling. She clutched the Heartstone and ran. Eva’s voice cut through the din. "Rory!" There, by the edge of the clearing. Eva, real and solid, waved frantically. The exit. Rory didn’t look back. She sprinted, lungs burning, and crashed into Eva’s outstretched arms. The grove snapped shut behind them.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:14:03.037Z" 2/19/2026, 12:14:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount564
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount564
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"flickered"
2"scanning"
3"echo"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"whisper"
7"pulse"
8"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords557
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount551
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Aurora1
Fae1
Grove1
Eva7
Hel1
Laughter1
Rory5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Grove"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Hel"
globalScore0.865
windowScore1
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if hiding"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount557
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean12.38
std12.99
cv1.05
sampleLengths
063
127
218
323
411
59
61
736
86
92
104
1135
123
133
142
152
1637
178
1817
195
208
2111
222
237
241
2545
2613
279
284
293
309
3117
325
334
3424
353
367
373
3813
399
406
417
4215
4314
446
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences88
ratio0.057
matches
0"The Fae Grove should have been beautiful at night—silver-washed leaves, flowers glowing faintly underfoot—but the air clung thick and heavy, tasting of damp earth and something metallic."
1"The grove had gone utterly still—no wind, no rustle of leaves, just the slow, creeping certainty that she wasn’t alone."
2"She whipped around—still nothing."
3"The grove had never felt this big—trees stretched endlessly, paths twisting where they shouldn’t."
4"The pendant’s glow lit up the thing’s face—no face."
98.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount558
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.04121863799283154
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.012544802867383513
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean6.33
std5.18
cv0.819
sampleLengths
011
125
227
311
48
54
64
74
83
97
103
111
1211
1310
142
152
164
175
185
194
201
2118
2218
236
242
254
263
272
2810
2920
302
311
323
332
342
356
3611
378
388
394
408
414
4213
435
448
455
466
472
484
493
51.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3409090909090909
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then stepped toward her."
1"Just darkness where features should"
2"Then the whispers started."
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences69
matches
0"She clutched it between her"
1"Her boots sank into the"
2"She'd come to meet Eva,"
3"She tapped it."
4"She turned sharply, scanning the"
5"Her voice didn’t echo"
6"She exhaled and forced herself"
7"She didn’t turn."
8"Her pulse hammered in her"
9"She whipped around—still nothing."
10"Her voice shook"
11"She took a step back."
12"She bolted, veering between the"
13"It didn’t turn."
14"Her breath came in ragged"
15"She backed away, step by"
16"It reached out."
17"Her hand closed around the"
18"She clutched the Heartstone and"
19"She sprinted, lungs burning, and"
ratio0.29
39.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences69
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora’s"
1"She clutched it between her"
2"The Fae Grove should have"
3"Her boots sank into the"
4"She'd come to meet Eva,"
5"This was their place."
6"Rory checked her phone."
7"The screen flickered once before"
8"She tapped it."
9"The wind twisted through the"
10"She turned sharply, scanning the"
11"Something brushing through the undergrowth."
12"Her voice didn’t echo"
13"The grove swallowed sound."
14"She exhaled and forced herself"
15"The flowers here bloomed unnaturally"
16"The Heartstone hissed against her"
17"Something was behind her."
18"She didn’t turn."
19"The weight of eyes on"
ratio0.841
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The flowers here bloomed unnaturally bright, petals edged in moonlight, but tonight they curled inward, as if hiding."
1"She bolted, veering between the oaks, their branches clawing at her arms."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1148%