| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1068 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1068 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "lurched" | | 13 | "wavered" | | 14 | "echoing" | | 15 | "the last thing" | | 16 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.05% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 70 | | totalWords | 1061 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "Probably a fox." | | 1 | "tilt" | | 2 | "Okay. Still just a grove. Still just a place." | | 3 | "Panicking won’t help." | | 4 | "stood" | | 5 | "“You shouldn’t be here, little thief.”" | | 6 | "“Then why do you carry what isn’t yours?”" | | 7 | "“Given? Or taken?”" | | 8 | "“It matters,”" | | 9 | "“because you don’t know what you hold.”" | | 10 | "moved" | | 11 | "“You feel it, don’t you?”" | | 12 | "“The pull. The hunger.”" | | 13 | "“You can’t hurt me, little thief. Not here.”" | | 14 | "“But I can hurt you.”" | | 15 | "gave way" | | 16 | "“Sleep well,”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 992 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 19 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.542 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1061 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 19.65 | | std | 16.03 | | cv | 0.816 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was falling" |
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| 54.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence that followed wasn’t natural—it pressed against her eardrums, thick as wet wool." | | 1 | "She’d read the stories—everyone in London had heard whispers about the Fae Grove—but she hadn’t expected the weight of it." | | 2 | "The scent of wildflowers—sweet, almost cloying—filled her nose." | | 3 | "The glow wasn’t steady—it flickered, like a dying lightbulb." |
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| 80.83% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 999 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "over frost-bitten gravel" |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.055055055055055056 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009009009009009009 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 8.16 | | std | 4.78 | | cv | 0.586 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 36.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.23076923076923078 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the bike, its frame" | | 1 | "*Probably a fox.*" | | 2 | "Then the whispers started." | | 3 | "Just sounds, low and murmuring," | | 4 | "Just the trees, their bark" | | 5 | "Then she saw it." | | 6 | "Just *stood*, watching her." | | 7 | "Then it smiled." | | 8 | "Then the ground beneath her" | | 9 | "Then the dark took her." |
| | ratio | 0.095 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She swung a leg over" | | 1 | "She unclipped the helmet and" | | 2 | "She ignored it." | | 3 | "She’d read the stories—everyone in" | | 4 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 5 | "She reached out, fingers brushing" | | 6 | "She exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 7 | "She turned back to the" | | 8 | "She pulled it free from" | | 9 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 10 | "She took another step." | | 11 | "She hissed, dropping it back" | | 12 | "She moved forward, her boots" | | 13 | "Her pulse thudded in her" | | 14 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 15 | "Its mouth split too wide," | | 16 | "She took a step back," | | 17 | "She didn’t run." | | 18 | "She didn’t take her eyes" | | 19 | "she said, her voice steadier" |
| | ratio | 0.248 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The bike’s tyres crunched over" | | 1 | "The silence that followed wasn’t" | | 2 | "She swung a leg over" | | 3 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 4 | "She unclipped the helmet and" | | 5 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 6 | "She ignored it." | | 7 | "The Heartstone had been acting" | | 8 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 9 | "Rory exhaled, her breath curling" | | 10 | "She’d read the stories—everyone in" | | 11 | "The way the air hummed," | | 12 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 13 | "The stones were taller than" | | 14 | "She reached out, fingers brushing" | | 15 | "A twig snapped." | | 16 | "The sound had come from" | | 17 | "She exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 18 | "She turned back to the" | | 19 | "She pulled it free from" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence that followed wasn’t natural—it pressed against her eardrums, thick as wet wool." | | 1 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park at midnight." | | 2 | "Just the trees, their bark glistening with something that wasn’t sap." | | 3 | "It twisted, its form dissolving into smoke, reforming just out of reach." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "it murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |