Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4TMDKS7KY72ATT8Y1PES

Run Details

Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.000540
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bike’s tyres crunched over frost-bitten gravel as Rory killed the engine. The silence that followed wasn’t natural—it pressed against her eardrums, thick as wet wool. She swung a leg over the saddle and stood, stretching her back. The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park at midnight. She unclipped the helmet and shook out her hair, the cold biting at her scalp. The pendant around her neck pulsed once, a faint warmth against her skin. She ignored it. The Heartstone had been acting up all evening, but she’d come too far to turn back now. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled roots twisting like fingers into the earth. Ancient oaks, their bark blackened with age, marked the boundary of the grove. Rory exhaled, her breath curling in the air. She’d read the stories—everyone in London had heard whispers about the Fae Grove—but she hadn’t expected the weight of it. The way the air hummed, just below hearing. She stepped forward, boots sinking slightly into the damp ground. The stones were taller than her, their surfaces carved with symbols that made her eyes ache if she stared too long. She reached out, fingers brushing the cold, rough surface of the nearest one. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound had come from behind her, but when she turned, the path was empty. Just the bike, its frame glinting under the sickly glow of the park’s distant lamps. She exhaled sharply, her breath fogging in front of her. *Probably a fox.* She turned back to the stones, but the pendant burned against her skin now, insistent. She pulled it free from her jacket, the crimson gem catching the dim light. The glow inside it flickered, like a heartbeat. “Right,” she muttered. “Let’s get this over with.” She stepped between the stones. The world didn’t shift so much as *tilt*. One moment, she was standing in the park, the next, the air thickened, pressing against her skin like wet silk. The trees stretched taller, their branches knitting together overhead into a canopy that blotted out the stars. The ground beneath her feet was softer, spongy with moss. The scent of wildflowers—sweet, almost cloying—filled her nose. Rory swallowed. *Okay. Still just a grove. Still just a place.* She took another step. The pendant flared, searing hot against her palm. She hissed, dropping it back against her chest. The gem pulsed, casting jagged shadows across the trees. The glow wasn’t steady—it flickered, like a dying lightbulb. Then the whispers started. Not words. Not quite. Just sounds, low and murmuring, slipping between the trees. Rory’s fingers twitched toward the knife in her boot, but she forced herself to still. *Panicking won’t help.* She moved forward, her boots silent on the moss. The whispers followed, never quite loud enough to make out, always just at the edge of hearing. Her pulse thudded in her throat. A shape shifted in the corner of her eye. Rory spun, her hand flying to the knife. Nothing. Just the trees, their bark glistening with something that wasn’t sap. She exhaled through her nose, forcing her breathing to slow. Then she saw it. A figure stood between the trees, motionless. Tall, too tall, its limbs too long, its silhouette jagged against the dark. Rory’s breath hitched. The pendant burned against her skin, the glow now a steady, sickly crimson. The figure didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. Just *stood*, watching her. Rory’s fingers closed around the knife’s hilt. “Who’s there?” The whispers stopped. The figure tilted its head. Just slightly. Just enough. Then it smiled. Its mouth split too wide, too many teeth glinting in the dim light. Rory’s stomach lurched. She took a step back, her boot sinking into the moss. The figure took a step forward. The pendant’s glow flared, casting long, twisting shadows across the ground. Rory’s grip tightened on the knife. She didn’t run. Running would be worse. The figure’s voice slithered into the air, a sound like dry leaves scraping stone. *“You shouldn’t be here, little thief.”* Rory’s blood turned to ice. “I’m not a thief.” The figure tilted its head the other way. *“Then why do you carry what isn’t yours?”* The pendant pulsed again, hot enough to brand her skin. Rory didn’t look down. She didn’t take her eyes off the figure. “I was given it,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. The figure laughed. The sound was wrong, too many notes at once, like a broken instrument. *“Given? Or taken?”* Rory’s fingers ached around the knife. “Does it matter?” The figure took another step. The air between them thickened, pressing against her skin. *“It matters,”* it said, *“because you don’t know what you hold.”* The pendant burned brighter. Rory’s vision swam, the edges of the grove blurring. The figure’s form wavered, its edges dissolving like smoke. Then the ground beneath her feet *moved*. Rory stumbled, her boot sinking into the moss. The earth shifted, rippling like water. She barely kept her balance, her heart hammering against her ribs. The figure was closer now. Too close. *“You feel it, don’t you?”* it murmured. *“The pull. The hunger.”* Rory’s breath came in short, sharp gasps. The pendant’s glow was blinding now, casting the grove in a hellish red light. The trees seemed to lean in, their branches twisting like grasping fingers. She didn’t wait for it to speak again. She lunged. The knife flashed in the crimson light, but the figure was faster. It twisted, its form dissolving into smoke, reforming just out of reach. Rory’s strike met only air. The figure laughed again, the sound echoing through the grove. *“You can’t hurt me, little thief. Not here.”* Rory’s chest heaved. The pendant’s heat was unbearable now, searing through her jacket. She gritted her teeth, forcing herself to think. The figure took another step. *“But I can hurt you.”* The ground beneath Rory’s feet *gave way*. She barely had time to gasp before she was falling, the moss swallowing her like quicksand. She thrashed, her fingers scrambling for purchase, but the earth was too soft, too hungry. The pendant’s glow flickered, dimming as the grove swallowed her whole. The last thing she saw was the figure, standing at the edge of the pit, its smile wide and gleaming. *“Sleep well,”* it whispered. Then the dark took her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count3
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"searing"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"glistening"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"lurched"
count1
13
word"wavered"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"the last thing"
count1
16
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"loomed"
4"weight"
5"glinting"
6"flickered"
7"silk"
8"searing"
9"pulse"
10"glistening"
11"stomach"
12"lurched"
13"wavered"
14"echoing"
15"the last thing"
16"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
68.05% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans17
markdownWords70
totalWords1061
ratio0.066
matches
0"Probably a fox."
1"tilt"
2"Okay. Still just a grove. Still just a place."
3"Panicking won’t help."
4"stood"
5"“You shouldn’t be here, little thief.”"
6"“Then why do you carry what isn’t yours?”"
7"“Given? Or taken?”"
8"“It matters,”"
9"“because you don’t know what you hold.”"
10"moved"
11"“You feel it, don’t you?”"
12"“The pull. The hunger.”"
13"“You can’t hurt me, little thief. Not here.”"
14"“But I can hurt you.”"
15"gave way"
16"“Sleep well,”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount992
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory19
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
London1
Fae1
Grove1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore0.542
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1061
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean19.65
std16.03
cv0.816
sampleLengths
056
148
263
344
43
545
637
78
85
963
1011
114
1234
134
1431
1532
169
1730
184
1936
2010
219
223
239
243
2527
266
2724
2814
296
309
3116
3222
3312
3419
359
3625
3722
387
3925
407
4111
4233
438
442
4529
4618
4721
4810
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was standing"
1"was falling"
54.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences130
ratio0.031
matches
0"The silence that followed wasn’t natural—it pressed against her eardrums, thick as wet wool."
1"She’d read the stories—everyone in London had heard whispers about the Fae Grove—but she hadn’t expected the weight of it."
2"The scent of wildflowers—sweet, almost cloying—filled her nose."
3"The glow wasn’t steady—it flickered, like a dying lightbulb."
80.83% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount999
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"over frost-bitten gravel"
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.055055055055055056
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009009009009009009
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean8.16
std4.78
cv0.586
sampleLengths
012
114
212
318
415
513
63
717
814
913
108
1120
128
1310
1421
1513
163
172
1815
1915
2010
213
2215
2314
248
253
265
275
288
2920
3017
3110
328
332
341
354
364
374
388
398
409
419
424
432
442
459
4615
473
489
4917
36.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.23076923076923078
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount10
totalSentences105
matches
0"Just the bike, its frame"
1"*Probably a fox.*"
2"Then the whispers started."
3"Just sounds, low and murmuring,"
4"Just the trees, their bark"
5"Then she saw it."
6"Just *stood*, watching her."
7"Then it smiled."
8"Then the ground beneath her"
9"Then the dark took her."
ratio0.095
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences105
matches
0"She swung a leg over"
1"She unclipped the helmet and"
2"She ignored it."
3"She’d read the stories—everyone in"
4"She stepped forward, boots sinking"
5"She reached out, fingers brushing"
6"She exhaled sharply, her breath"
7"She turned back to the"
8"She pulled it free from"
9"She stepped between the stones."
10"She took another step."
11"She hissed, dropping it back"
12"She moved forward, her boots"
13"Her pulse thudded in her"
14"She exhaled through her nose,"
15"Its mouth split too wide,"
16"She took a step back,"
17"She didn’t run."
18"She didn’t take her eyes"
19"she said, her voice steadier"
ratio0.248
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences105
matches
0"The bike’s tyres crunched over"
1"The silence that followed wasn’t"
2"She swung a leg over"
3"The air smelled of damp"
4"She unclipped the helmet and"
5"The pendant around her neck"
6"She ignored it."
7"The Heartstone had been acting"
8"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
9"Rory exhaled, her breath curling"
10"She’d read the stories—everyone in"
11"The way the air hummed,"
12"She stepped forward, boots sinking"
13"The stones were taller than"
14"She reached out, fingers brushing"
15"A twig snapped."
16"The sound had come from"
17"She exhaled sharply, her breath"
18"She turned back to the"
19"She pulled it free from"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The silence that followed wasn’t natural—it pressed against her eardrums, thick as wet wool."
1"The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park at midnight."
2"Just the trees, their bark glistening with something that wasn’t sap."
3"It twisted, its form dissolving into smoke, reforming just out of reach."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"it murmured (murmur)"
2"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.4
77.1035%