| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1057 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1057 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "calloused fingers" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "calloused fingers" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "quivered" | | 11 | "charm" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "glint" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 189 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 194 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 25 | | markdownWords | 39 | | totalWords | 1038 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "snick" | | 1 | "grown" | | 2 | "watched" | | 3 | "\"Only go if you feel the weight,\"" | | 4 | "\"If it pulls, follow. If it burns—run.\"" | | 5 | "Dymas script." | | 6 | "seen" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "quivered" | | 9 | "teeth" | | 10 | "depth" | | 11 | "up" | | 12 | "moved" | | 13 | "—lai—" | | 14 | "expecting" | | 15 | "spasm" | | 16 | "smiling" | | 17 | "Actual teeth." | | 18 | "surged" | | 19 | "reached" | | 20 | "distraction" | | 21 | "hissed" | | 22 | "human" | | 23 | "twisted" | | 24 | "Scorching" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 992 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.81 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Pre-language | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Milk-white | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.963 | | wordCount | 1038 | | matches | | 0 | "not like heat haze, but like something breathing just out of phase" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 113 | | mean | 9.19 | | std | 12.58 | | cv | 1.369 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 44 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "been touched" | | 1 | "were wilted" | | 2 | "were changed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulling" | | 1 | "was climbing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 194 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "She stared at the grove gate—twisted oak beams bound in iron that looked less forged than *grown*, like teeth from some long-buried jaw." | | 1 | "The air changed before her feet crossed the threshold—thick with the scent of damp moss and something older, like crushed violets left too long in a sealed jar." | | 2 | "She’d seen them before—in the margins of her mother’s old folklore books." | | 3 | "Then—from the left—a rustle." | | 4 | "The standing stones came into view—seven of them, arranged in a broken circle." | | 5 | "And in the centre—a basin." | | 6 | "And then—ripples." | | 7 | "*—lai—*" | | 8 | "The gate—gone." | | 9 | "And then—laughter." | | 10 | "But the flowers there—*smiling*." | | 11 | "Yu-Fei’s parting gift—a pinch of salt mixed with crushed rowan berry and ash from a burnt charm." | | 12 | "The creature *hissed*—a sound like steam escaping a corpse." | | 13 | "Then—" | | 14 | "And in that smile—" | | 15 | "—the faintest glint of thorn." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1011 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.02967359050445104 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004945598417408506 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 194 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 194 | | mean | 5.35 | | std | 4.77 | | cv | 0.892 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 51.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.37628865979381443 | | totalSentences | 194 | | uniqueOpeners | 73 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a soft, wet *snick*" | | 1 | "Just a steady, insistent throb" | | 2 | "Too long, too low." | | 3 | "Then—from the left—a rustle." | | 4 | "Too long fingers." |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "She stared at the grove" | | 1 | "She hadn’t expected it to" | | 2 | "She stepped inside." | | 3 | "Her pendant warmed against her" | | 4 | "She hadn’t worn it out" | | 5 | "She wore it because Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "It was pulling now." | | 7 | "She’d seen them before—in the" | | 8 | "She turned slowly." | | 9 | "She kept walking." | | 10 | "She took three steps forward." | | 11 | "She crouched by the basin." | | 12 | "It was *depth*." | | 13 | "She leaned closer." | | 14 | "Her breath fogged the surface." | | 15 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 16 | "She knew it in her" | | 17 | "She gasped, fingers flying to" | | 18 | "It gripped the edge of" | | 19 | "She didn’t scream." |
| | ratio | 0.209 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "The latch clicked open on" | | 1 | "Rory froze mid-step, keys still" | | 2 | "The chain hadn’t been touched." | | 3 | "She stared at the grove" | | 4 | "She hadn’t expected it to" | | 5 | "Aurora Carter didn’t believe in" | | 6 | "Every boundary had teeth." | | 7 | "Every entrance demanded a price." | | 8 | "She stepped inside." | | 9 | "The air changed before her" | | 10 | "The wildflowers lining the path" | | 11 | "Petals turned just enough to" | | 12 | "A silver that pulsed in" | | 13 | "Her pendant warmed against her" | | 14 | "The crimson stone within glowed" | | 15 | "She hadn’t worn it out" | | 16 | "She wore it because Yu-Fei" | | 17 | "It was pulling now." | | 18 | "The path narrowed." | | 19 | "Trees leaned inward, their bark" |
| | ratio | 0.659 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it burned." | | 1 | "As if something was climbing" | | 2 | "To the pouch at her" | | 3 | "Before the abuse." | | 4 | "Before the scars that weren’t" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 60.44% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She stared at the grove gate—twisted oak beams bound in iron that looked less forged than *grown*, like teeth from some long-buried jaw." | | 1 | "A hum that made her molars ache and her eyes water." | | 2 | "The kind of dark that pulled at the edges of sight, promising something down there that had never known light." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |