Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4W857J3PPJ3KYZJD057W

Run Details

Duration:
6.8s
Cost:
$0.000498
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, the weight of the Heartstone pendant pressing against her sternum through her hoodie. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled roots twisting like fingers into the soil. They weren’t marked on any map, not even the ones tourists used to navigate the park’s trails. But she’d found them anyway, guided by the pendant’s faint, insistent pulse. She shouldn’t have come at night. The thought slithered in, unwelcome. The pendant had led her here, its crimson glow steady against her skin, warmer than it had any right to be. *Find the grove*, the note had said. *Before the next full moon.* No signature. No explanation. Just the pendant, left on her doorstep like an offering. Rory exhaled through her nose, her breath curling in the cold. The standing stones formed a rough semicircle, their bark blackened as if scorched by something that hadn’t been fire. She stepped between them. The world shifted. Not a sound. Not a breeze. Just a sudden, sickening lurch, like the ground had tilted beneath her feet. Rory’s stomach clenched. She reached out, her fingers brushing the rough bark of the nearest oak. It was warm. Too warm. Like flesh. She yanked her hand back. The grove stretched before her, a clearing bathed in silver moonlight that didn’t come from the sky. The trees here were wrong—too tall, their branches knotted into shapes that made her eyes ache. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours, their petals glowing faintly, pulsing like a slow heartbeat. The air hummed, a low vibration that thrummed in her bones. Rory swallowed. “Hello?” Her voice didn’t echo. It just… dissolved. She adjusted the strap of her backpack again, her fingers brushing the pendant. It burned now, a sharp, insistent heat. She pulled it free, the silver chain cool against her palm. The gemstone glowed, its crimson light casting jagged shadows across the ground. A twig snapped. Rory’s head snapped up. Nothing moved. The trees stood silent, their leaves still. But the sound had come from her left, from the edge of the clearing where the shadows pooled like ink. She took a step back. “Who’s there?” Silence. Then—a whisper. Not a voice. Not words. Just a sound, like wind through dead leaves, but wetter. Closer. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She turned slowly, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth. The pendant’s glow flickered, dimming for a second before flaring brighter. Something was wrong with the trees. Their bark wasn’t just blackened—it was *moving*. Not swaying. Not in the wind. The grooves in the wood shifted, twisting like living things. Rory’s breath hitched. She took another step back, her heel catching on a root. She stumbled, her free hand shooting out to steady herself. Her fingers sank into something soft. She jerked her hand away. A face stared up at her from the ground. Pale. Too pale. The skin stretched tight over sharp cheekbones, the eyes sunken and black. The mouth was a lipless slit, stretched into a grin that didn’t reach the hollows of its cheeks. It didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. Just *lay there*, half-buried in the earth, its fingers—long, too many of them—curled into the soil like it had been *planted*. Rory’s scream died in her throat. The thing’s fingers twitched. She scrambled back, her boots slipping in the damp earth. The pendant seared her palm, its light flaring so bright it hurt. She clutched it tighter, her knuckles white. The whispering came again, louder now. Not from the thing on the ground. From the trees. From the flowers. From the *air itself*. Rory turned and ran. The grove didn’t let her. The path ahead twisted, the trees shifting like a living maze. She skidded to a halt, her chest heaving. The standing stones were gone. The way out—*gone*. A branch creaked behind her. She didn’t look. She bolted left, her boots pounding against the earth. The pendant’s light flickered, casting wild shadows. The whispering grew louder, a chorus of voices that weren’t voices, a sound that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts. *Stay.* *Stay.* *Stay.* Rory gritted her teeth. “Fuck that.” She veered right, ducking under a low-hanging branch. The grove seemed to *breathe* around her, the trees leaning in, their leaves brushing her arms like skeletal fingers. She swatted at them, her heart hammering so hard she thought it might burst. A hand closed around her ankle. Rory screamed. She kicked out, her boot connecting with something solid. The grip loosened. She tore free, stumbling forward. The pendant’s light flared again, so bright it burned her eyes. She squinted, her vision swimming. The standing stones. They were there. Just ahead. The way out. Rory didn’t hesitate. She sprinted, her lungs burning. The whispering rose to a shriek, a sound that wasn’t sound, that *vibrated* in her skull. She didn’t look back. She didn’t stop. She crashed through the stones, her shoulder slamming into the rough bark. The world lurched again, that same sickening tilt. She gasped, her knees hitting the damp grass of Richmond Park. Silence. Real silence. The kind that came with the night, with the rustle of leaves and the distant hum of London traffic. Rory’s hands trembled. She clutched the pendant, its glow fading to a dull pulse. She was out. She was *out*. But as she pushed herself to her feet, her breath ragged, she realised two things. The pendant was colder than it had ever been. And the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—*the one she’d had since she was a child*—was gone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount963
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount963
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"navigate"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"lurch"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count2
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"lurched"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"navigate"
3"pulse"
4"lurch"
5"stomach"
6"echo"
7"silence"
8"whisper"
9"flickered"
10"pounding"
11"vibrated"
12"lurched"
13"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords30
totalWords954
ratio0.031
matches
0"Find the grove"
1"Before the next full moon."
2"moving"
3"lay there"
4"planted"
5"air itself"
6"gone"
7"Stay."
8"Stay."
9"Stay."
10"breathe"
11"vibrated"
12"out"
13"the one she’d had since she was a child"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.51% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount949
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory13
Heartstone1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.815
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount954
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean17.67
std19.25
cv1.089
sampleLengths
087
16
252
334
43
542
65
758
83
97
1043
113
1233
137
141
152
1616
1728
186
1947
206
215
229
2359
246
254
2629
2723
284
295
3027
315
323
3339
341
351
361
376
3841
396
402
4133
423
438
4428
453
4631
471
4835
493
99.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"been *planted"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences130
ratio0.054
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew."
1"The trees here were wrong—too tall, their branches knotted into shapes that made her eyes ache."
2"Then—a whisper."
3"Their bark wasn’t just blackened—it was *moving*."
4"Just *lay there*, half-buried in the earth, its fingers—long, too many of them—curled into the soil like it had been *planted*."
5"The way out—*gone*."
6"And the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—*the one she’d had since she was a child*—was gone."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount958
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tight over sharp cheekbones,"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.038622129436325675
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003131524008350731
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean7.34
std5.65
cv0.77
sampleLengths
024
120
214
317
412
56
65
721
87
97
102
1110
1211
1319
144
153
163
173
1813
193
2013
213
222
232
245
2517
2616
2714
2811
292
301
314
322
331
3413
357
3611
3712
383
394
402
417
4220
435
442
451
462
473
482
4910
35.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.24615384615384617
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"Just the pendant, left on"
1"Just a sudden, sickening lurch,"
2"Just a sound, like wind"
3"Just *lay there*, half-buried in"
ratio0.038
75.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences105
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"They weren’t marked on any"
2"She shouldn’t have come at"
3"She stepped between them."
4"She reached out, her fingers"
5"It was warm."
6"She yanked her hand back."
7"Her voice didn’t echo."
8"She adjusted the strap of"
9"It burned now, a sharp,"
10"She pulled it free, the"
11"She took a step back."
12"She turned slowly, her boots"
13"Their bark wasn’t just blackened—it"
14"She took another step back,"
15"She stumbled, her free hand"
16"Her fingers sank into something"
17"She jerked her hand away."
18"It didn’t move."
19"She scrambled back, her boots"
ratio0.362
45.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences105
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"They weren’t marked on any"
4"She shouldn’t have come at"
5"The thought slithered in, unwelcome."
6"The pendant had led her"
7"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
8"The standing stones formed a"
9"She stepped between them."
10"The world shifted."
11"Rory’s stomach clenched."
12"She reached out, her fingers"
13"It was warm."
14"She yanked her hand back."
15"The grove stretched before her,"
16"The trees here were wrong—too"
17"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours,"
18"The air hummed, a low"
19"Her voice didn’t echo."
ratio0.829
47.62% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"*Before the next full moon.*"
ratio0.01
57.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew."
1"The standing stones formed a rough semicircle, their bark blackened as if scorched by something that hadn’t been fire."
2"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours, their petals glowing faintly, pulsing like a slow heartbeat."
3"The grove seemed to *breathe* around her, the trees leaning in, their leaves brushing her arms like skeletal fingers."
4"The kind that came with the night, with the rustle of leaves and the distant hum of London traffic."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.2663%