| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 89.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 963 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 963 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "navigate" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "lurch" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "lurched" | | 13 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 14 | | markdownWords | 30 | | totalWords | 954 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the grove" | | 1 | "Before the next full moon." | | 2 | "moving" | | 3 | "lay there" | | 4 | "planted" | | 5 | "air itself" | | 6 | "gone" | | 7 | "Stay." | | 8 | "Stay." | | 9 | "Stay." | | 10 | "breathe" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "out" | | 13 | "the one she’d had since she was a child" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 949 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.815 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 954 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 17.67 | | std | 19.25 | | cv | 1.089 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 35 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 99.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "been *planted" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew." | | 1 | "The trees here were wrong—too tall, their branches knotted into shapes that made her eyes ache." | | 2 | "Then—a whisper." | | 3 | "Their bark wasn’t just blackened—it was *moving*." | | 4 | "Just *lay there*, half-buried in the earth, its fingers—long, too many of them—curled into the soil like it had been *planted*." | | 5 | "The way out—*gone*." | | 6 | "And the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—*the one she’d had since she was a child*—was gone." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 958 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tight over sharp cheekbones," |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.038622129436325675 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003131524008350731 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 7.34 | | std | 5.65 | | cv | 0.77 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 35.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.24615384615384617 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pendant, left on" | | 1 | "Just a sudden, sickening lurch," | | 2 | "Just a sound, like wind" | | 3 | "Just *lay there*, half-buried in" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 75.24% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "They weren’t marked on any" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 3 | "She stepped between them." | | 4 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 5 | "It was warm." | | 6 | "She yanked her hand back." | | 7 | "Her voice didn’t echo." | | 8 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 9 | "It burned now, a sharp," | | 10 | "She pulled it free, the" | | 11 | "She took a step back." | | 12 | "She turned slowly, her boots" | | 13 | "Their bark wasn’t just blackened—it" | | 14 | "She took another step back," | | 15 | "She stumbled, her free hand" | | 16 | "Her fingers sank into something" | | 17 | "She jerked her hand away." | | 18 | "It didn’t move." | | 19 | "She scrambled back, her boots" |
| | ratio | 0.362 | |
| 45.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "They weren’t marked on any" | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 5 | "The thought slithered in, unwelcome." | | 6 | "The pendant had led her" | | 7 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 8 | "The standing stones formed a" | | 9 | "She stepped between them." | | 10 | "The world shifted." | | 11 | "Rory’s stomach clenched." | | 12 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 13 | "It was warm." | | 14 | "She yanked her hand back." | | 15 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 16 | "The trees here were wrong—too" | | 17 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours," | | 18 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 19 | "Her voice didn’t echo." |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 47.62% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "*Before the next full moon.*" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong to the world Rory knew." | | 1 | "The standing stones formed a rough semicircle, their bark blackened as if scorched by something that hadn’t been fire." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours, their petals glowing faintly, pulsing like a slow heartbeat." | | 3 | "The grove seemed to *breathe* around her, the trees leaning in, their leaves brushing her arms like skeletal fingers." | | 4 | "The kind that came with the night, with the rustle of leaves and the distant hum of London traffic." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |