| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 89.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 990 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 990 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cacophony" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "glinting" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "down her spine" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "sentinel" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "tangible" | | 19 | "pulse" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "time stood still" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "Time seemed to slow" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 983 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Who’s there?" | | 1 | "Run." | | 2 | "was" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.14% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 983 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 10 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Aurora | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.991 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 32.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a lie the moment she crossed" | | 1 | "as if breathing" | | 2 | "seemed woven from shadows themselves" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.052 | | wordCount | 983 | | matches | | 0 | "not from cold, but from a prickle of awareness" | | 1 | "not of wind, but of fabric, soft" | | 2 | "not human, but twisted" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.52% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 10 | | mean | 98.3 | | std | 17.33 | | cv | 0.176 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 119 | | 1 | 95 | | 2 | 89 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 91 | | 5 | 83 | | 6 | 94 | | 7 | 94 | | 8 | 100 | | 9 | 140 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "being watched" | | 1 | "was obscured" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Grove thickened, heavywith the scent of damp earth and something else—sweet, almost sickly, like overripe berries." | | 1 | "The silence wasn’t peaceful; it was a vacuum, sucking sound into itself." | | 2 | "She’d read about the Grove’s time distortion—an hour inside could be minutes or days outside." | | 3 | "She heard it now—a faint, wet sound, like something dragging across stone, coming from deeper within the clearing." | | 4 | "This wasn’t just unease; this was presence." | | 5 | "The pendant flared, a bright crimson light cutting through the gloom, illuminating the figure’s face for a split second—a face devoid of eyes, just two deep, empty sockets staring into her soul." | | 6 | "The wrongness wasn’t just in the air anymore; it was inside her, a cold, creeping dread that whispered promises of oblivion." |
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| 98.76% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 990 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04141414141414142 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012121212121212121 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 11.7 | | std | 6.21 | | cv | 0.531 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 36.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.2261904761904762 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the hum, growing louder," | | 1 | "Just shadows coalescing around the" | | 2 | "Instead, she found herself facing" | | 3 | "Then, a whisper, not of" | | 4 | "Just the ancient oaks, their" | | 5 | "Then, its hand emerged from" |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 65.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come here, fleeing the" | | 1 | "She stopped, leaning against a" | | 2 | "She shivered, not from cold," | | 3 | "She listened harder, straining to" | | 4 | "She snapped her head around," | | 5 | "She’d read about the Grove’s" | | 6 | "She pulled the Heartstone pendant" | | 7 | "It felt warm, almost feverish." | | 8 | "She pressed it against her" | | 9 | "She tucked it away, the" | | 10 | "She needed to get out." | | 11 | "She needed to find the" | | 12 | "She turned, following the path" | | 13 | "She tried to backtrack, but" | | 14 | "She heard it now—a faint," | | 15 | "She froze, listening." | | 16 | "She spun around, heart pounding" | | 17 | "It was tall, impossibly so," | | 18 | "Its face was obscured, hidden" | | 19 | "It didn’t move towards her," |
| | ratio | 0.388 | |
| 35.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Grove" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, or Rory, as" | | 2 | "The path was narrow, barely" | | 3 | "She’d come here, fleeing the" | | 4 | "The birdsong, a cheerful cacophony" | | 5 | "She stopped, leaning against a" | | 6 | "The sky above was unnaturally" | | 7 | "A single, cold star pierced" | | 8 | "She shivered, not from cold," | | 9 | "Something was wrong." | | 10 | "The silence wasn’t peaceful; it" | | 11 | "She listened harder, straining to" | | 12 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 13 | "She snapped her head around," | | 14 | "The stones themselves seemed to" | | 15 | "A cold sweat broke out" | | 16 | "She’d read about the Grove’s" | | 17 | "She pulled the Heartstone pendant" | | 18 | "It felt warm, almost feverish." | | 19 | "She pressed it against her" |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come here, fleeing the suffocating familiarity of her flat above Silas’s bar, seeking the Grove’s rumored peace." | | 1 | "The sky above was unnaturally dark, thick with clouds that swallowed the moonlight." | | 2 | "The stones themselves seemed to shift, imperceptibly, as if breathing." | | 3 | "Instead, she found herself facing a wall of thick, impenetrable brambles, their thorns glinting with an unnatural sheen in the faint starlight." | | 4 | "It was tall, impossibly so, draped in a cloak that seemed woven from shadows themselves." | | 5 | "The figure’s presence was a tangible thing, a cold void that threatened to swallow her whole." | | 6 | "The wrongness wasn’t just in the air anymore; it was inside her, a cold, creeping dread that whispered promises of oblivion." | | 7 | "The thrum grew louder, a low, resonant pulse that vibrated through the earth, shaking the very foundations of her fear." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |