Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX4ZJ6AXGAGH181PH67HM8

Run Details

Duration:
15.3s
Cost:
$0.000308
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Grove thickened, heavywith the scent of damp earth and something else—sweet, almost sickly, like overripe berries. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as her friends called her, pushed through the ancient oaks, their gnarled roots twisting like grasping fingers beneath the moss-carpeted ground. The path was narrow, barely wide enough for one person, winding deeper into the heart of Richmond Park. She’d come here, fleeing the suffocating familiarity of her flat above Silas’s bar, seeking the Grove’s rumored peace. But peace felt like a lie the moment she crossed the invisible threshold. The birdsong, a cheerful cacophony outside, vanished. In its place, a low, resonant hum vibrated in her bones, like distant thunder trapped beneath the earth. She stopped, leaning against a massive oak, its bark rough under her palm. The sky above was unnaturally dark, thick with clouds that swallowed the moonlight. A single, cold star pierced the gloom, watching her. She shivered, not from cold, but from a prickle of awareness that crawled up her spine. Something was wrong. The silence wasn’t peaceful; it was a vacuum, sucking sound into itself. She listened harder, straining to hear the rustle of leaves, the cry of an owl. Nothing. Just the hum, growing louder, a low thrum that made her teeth ache. A flicker of movement caught her eye at the edge of the clearing. She snapped her head around, heart hammering against her ribs. Nothing. Just shadows coalescing around the ancient standing stones, their moss-draped forms silhouetted against the gloom. The stones themselves seemed to shift, imperceptibly, as if breathing. A cold sweat broke out on her forehead. She’d read about the Grove’s time distortion—an hour inside could be minutes or days outside. But that didn’t explain the feeling of being watched, the oppressive weight pressing down on her chest. She pulled the Heartstone pendant from beneath her shirt, its deep crimson gem pulsing faintly against her skin. It felt warm, almost feverish. She pressed it against her wrist, where the small crescent scar from childhood lay. The pendant’s glow intensified, a tiny, insistent beacon in the oppressive dark. She tucked it away, the warmth a small comfort against the creeping dread. She needed to get out. She needed to find the exit before the Grove claimed her. She turned, following the path back the way she’d come. But the path wasn’t there. Instead, she found herself facing a wall of thick, impenetrable brambles, their thorns glinting with an unnatural sheen in the faint starlight. Panic clawed at her throat. She tried to backtrack, but the Grove seemed to shift, the trees rearranging themselves, the stones moving. The hum swelled into a low, rhythmic thrum, like a heartbeat not her own. She heard it now—a faint, wet sound, like something dragging across stone, coming from deeper within the clearing. She froze, listening. The sound stopped. Silence descended again, heavier than before. Then, a whisper, not of wind, but of fabric, soft and deliberate, coming from her left. She spun around, heart pounding a frantic tattoo against her ribs. Nothing. Just the ancient oaks, their branches swaying slightly in a non-existent breeze. The whisper came again, closer this time, a sibilant hiss that sent a shiver down her spine. *Who’s there?* she breathed, her voice tiny and lost in the vast, silent Grove. The brambles shifted, parting silently. A figure emerged from the shadows near the standing stones. It was tall, impossibly so, draped in a cloak that seemed woven from shadows themselves. Its face was obscured, hidden beneath a hood. It didn’t move towards her, just stood there, watching. Aurora felt the cold grip of terror tighten. This wasn’t just unease; this was presence. A wrongness that seeped into her bones, colder than the night air. The Heartstone pulsed violently against her skin, a frantic warning. *Run.* The word echoed in her mind, sharp and clear. She didn’t move. She couldn’t. The figure stepped forward, the sound of its boots crunching on the dead leaves unnaturally loud in the sudden silence. It stopped a few feet away, its hood casting its face in deep shadow. Aurora saw nothing but darkness. Then, its hand emerged from the cloak, not human, but twisted and elongated, ending in sharp, claw-like fingers. The pendant flared, a bright crimson light cutting through the gloom, illuminating the figure’s face for a split second—a face devoid of eyes, just two deep, empty sockets staring into her soul. The figure didn’t speak. It didn’t move. It just *was*, a silent sentinel of the Grove’s darkness. Aurora felt the air crackle with static, the hum vibrating through her teeth. Time seemed to slow. She could feel the weight of its gaze, a physical pressure on her back. The Heartstone’s glow dimmed, then went out, leaving her in utter blackness. The figure’s presence was a tangible thing, a cold void that threatened to swallow her whole. She took a step back, her foot catching on a root. She stumbled, falling hard onto the moss, the breath knocked from her lungs. The figure didn’t advance. It just stood there, in the darkness, its hood casting its face in impenetrable shadow. Aurora lay there, heart hammering against her ribs, the only sound her ragged breathing and the distant, insistent thrum of the Grove’s heartbeat. The wrongness wasn’t just in the air anymore; it was inside her, a cold, creeping dread that whispered promises of oblivion. She knew she had to move, to run, but her body refused. The figure remained, a silent, watchful guardian of the Grove’s deepest secrets, its empty sockets holding her captive in the suffocating darkness. The thrum grew louder, a low, resonant pulse that vibrated through the earth, shaking the very foundations of her fear. She was not alone. She was never alone. The Grove had claimed her, and the only escape was through the darkness it offered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount990
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount990
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"cacophony"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count3
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count2
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"beacon"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"glinting"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"pounding"
count1
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"sentinel"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"tangible"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"cacophony"
1"vibrated"
2"gloom"
3"silence"
4"flicker"
5"oppressive"
6"weight"
7"beacon"
8"warmth"
9"glinting"
10"rhythmic"
11"whisper"
12"pounding"
13"down her spine"
14"pulsed"
15"echoed"
16"sentinel"
17"could feel"
18"tangible"
19"pulse"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"time stood still"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"Time seemed to slow"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords983
ratio0.004
matches
0"Who’s there?"
1"Run."
2"was"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount983
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Grove10
Carter1
Rory1
Richmond1
Park1
Silas1
Heartstone3
Aurora5
persons
0"Grove"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Heartstone"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.991
windowScore1
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a lie the moment she crossed"
1"as if breathing"
2"seemed woven from shadows themselves"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.052
wordCount983
matches
0"not from cold, but from a prickle of awareness"
1"not of wind, but of fabric, soft"
2"not human, but twisted"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
7.52% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean98.3
std17.33
cv0.176
sampleLengths
0119
195
289
378
491
583
694
794
8100
9140
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"being watched"
1"was obscured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences84
ratio0.083
matches
0"The air in the Grove thickened, heavywith the scent of damp earth and something else—sweet, almost sickly, like overripe berries."
1"The silence wasn’t peaceful; it was a vacuum, sucking sound into itself."
2"She’d read about the Grove’s time distortion—an hour inside could be minutes or days outside."
3"She heard it now—a faint, wet sound, like something dragging across stone, coming from deeper within the clearing."
4"This wasn’t just unease; this was presence."
5"The pendant flared, a bright crimson light cutting through the gloom, illuminating the figure’s face for a split second—a face devoid of eyes, just two deep, empty sockets staring into her soul."
6"The wrongness wasn’t just in the air anymore; it was inside her, a cold, creeping dread that whispered promises of oblivion."
98.76% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount990
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04141414141414142
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012121212121212121
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.7
std6.21
cv0.531
sampleLengths
020
125
218
318
413
57
618
713
813
99
1016
113
1212
1315
141
1513
1613
1710
181
1915
2010
218
2215
2317
2418
255
2614
2712
2813
295
3011
3110
325
3322
345
3517
3614
3718
383
393
406
4116
4211
431
4412
4517
4614
475
4810
4915
36.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2261904761904762
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners19
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences80
matches
0"Just the hum, growing louder,"
1"Just shadows coalescing around the"
2"Instead, she found herself facing"
3"Then, a whisper, not of"
4"Just the ancient oaks, their"
5"Then, its hand emerged from"
ratio0.075
65.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences80
matches
0"She’d come here, fleeing the"
1"She stopped, leaning against a"
2"She shivered, not from cold,"
3"She listened harder, straining to"
4"She snapped her head around,"
5"She’d read about the Grove’s"
6"She pulled the Heartstone pendant"
7"It felt warm, almost feverish."
8"She pressed it against her"
9"She tucked it away, the"
10"She needed to get out."
11"She needed to find the"
12"She turned, following the path"
13"She tried to backtrack, but"
14"She heard it now—a faint,"
15"She froze, listening."
16"She spun around, heart pounding"
17"It was tall, impossibly so,"
18"Its face was obscured, hidden"
19"It didn’t move towards her,"
ratio0.388
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences80
matches
0"The air in the Grove"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"The path was narrow, barely"
3"She’d come here, fleeing the"
4"The birdsong, a cheerful cacophony"
5"She stopped, leaning against a"
6"The sky above was unnaturally"
7"A single, cold star pierced"
8"She shivered, not from cold,"
9"Something was wrong."
10"The silence wasn’t peaceful; it"
11"She listened harder, straining to"
12"A flicker of movement caught"
13"She snapped her head around,"
14"The stones themselves seemed to"
15"A cold sweat broke out"
16"She’d read about the Grove’s"
17"She pulled the Heartstone pendant"
18"It felt warm, almost feverish."
19"She pressed it against her"
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She’d come here, fleeing the suffocating familiarity of her flat above Silas’s bar, seeking the Grove’s rumored peace."
1"The sky above was unnaturally dark, thick with clouds that swallowed the moonlight."
2"The stones themselves seemed to shift, imperceptibly, as if breathing."
3"Instead, she found herself facing a wall of thick, impenetrable brambles, their thorns glinting with an unnatural sheen in the faint starlight."
4"It was tall, impossibly so, draped in a cloak that seemed woven from shadows themselves."
5"The figure’s presence was a tangible thing, a cold void that threatened to swallow her whole."
6"The wrongness wasn’t just in the air anymore; it was inside her, a cold, creeping dread that whispered promises of oblivion."
7"The thrum grew louder, a low, resonant pulse that vibrated through the earth, shaking the very foundations of her fear."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
71.4752%