Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX50MYMG58WZXRW4NQ5AE1

Run Details

Duration:
40.7s
Cost:
$0.036996
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sharp crack of billiard balls colliding echoed through The Raven's Nest as Rory stepped inside, shaking rain from her leather jacket. Tuesday nights were usually quiet, which suited her fine. She'd spent the last three hours navigating London's flooded streets on her moped, delivering crispy duck and chow mein to customers who couldn't be arsed to venture outside themselves. She peeled off the jacket and draped it over her usual stool at the bar's far end, away from the handful of regulars nursing their drinks in contemplative silence. The overhead lights cast amber pools across scarred wood, and the walls—plastered with faded maps of Prague, Istanbul, Beirut—absorbed what little remained of the day's grey light filtering through rain-streaked windows. "Rough shift?" Silas emerged from the back room, his slight limp barely noticeable after all these years. He'd already poured her usual—a proper whisky, none of that blended rubbish. "I've had worse." She wrapped both hands around the glass, letting the warmth seep into her frozen fingers. "Mrs. Patterson tipped me five quid because I climbed four flights of stairs." "The woman's a saint." "The woman's lonely and I reminded her of her granddaughter." The door swung open behind them. Cold air rushed in, carrying the smell of wet pavement and exhaust fumes. Rory didn't turn—not until Silas' expression shifted, his features arranging themselves into something carefully neutral. That particular mask meant complications. She swiveled on her stool. Eva Thornton stood in the doorway, frozen like she'd walked into the wrong film. Her blonde hair—once a choppy, rebellious cut they'd done together in Eva's mum's bathroom—now fell in expensive layers past her shoulders. She wore a charcoal peacoat that probably cost more than Rory's monthly rent, and her boots looked like they'd never met an actual puddle. "Rory?" The name landed between them like a stone in water. "Eva." Seven years. Seven bloody years since Eva had stood in their Cardiff flat, mascara streaking down her face, begging Rory to come to London. Since she'd promised they'd get through everything together. Since Rory had finally agreed, packed her life into three suitcases, and taken the train east. Eva moved forward, tentative. "I didn't know you—I mean, I didn't know this place was yours." "It's not. I just drink here." "Right. Of course." Eva's fingers worried the strap of her leather handbag. Designer, naturally. "You look good. Different." Rory resisted the urge to touch her hair. She'd cut it short after the first month in London, after Eva had stopped returning her calls. Black instead of the auburn it used to be, easier to maintain when you spent half your life on a moped in the rain. "You look successful." The word came out sharper than intended. Eva flinched, barely, but Rory caught it. Seven years of friendship before the silence—you didn't forget someone's tells. Silas cleared his throat. "What can I get you, miss?" "Gin and tonic, please. Hendrick's, if you have it." "We have it." Of course they had it. Silas kept a fully stocked bar despite the Nest's deliberately shabby exterior. Eva perched on a stool two down from Rory's—close enough for conversation, far enough to maintain distance. Safe distance. Rain hammered against the windows. Someone fed coins into the ancient jukebox in the corner, and Leonard Cohen's gravelly voice filled the spaces between them. "I work around the corner," Eva said. "At Pemberton & Ross. The solicitors? I made junior partner last month." "Congratulations." "Thanks. It's—yeah. Busy. Lots of late nights." Rory sipped her whisky and said nothing. Eva had always filled silences, uncomfortable with the gaps in conversation. Some things hadn't changed. "What about you? What are you doing these days?" "Delivering Chinese food." Eva's face did something complicated. "That's—are you enjoying it?" "It pays the rent." "But you were going to finish your law degree. You were brilliant at it, Rory. Better than me, and I barely scraped through." "Plans change." Silas set Eva's drink in front of her with more force than necessary, the ice cubes rattling. He caught Rory's eye for just a moment—a question. She gave the smallest shake of her head. Not now. Eva took a long pull from her gin. "I'm sorry." "For what?" "Don't do that. Don't make me spell it out." Rory turned to face her fully for the first time. Eva's makeup was immaculate, her nails perfectly manicured, but she had new lines around her eyes. Worry lines. The kind you earned through sleepless nights and stress. "You told me to come to London. You said you'd help me get settled, find a solicitor for the restraining order. You said we'd get through it together." "I know." "You stopped answering my calls after two weeks." Eva's knuckles whitened around her glass. "My father found out." The words dropped like lead. Rory felt something cold and familiar settle in her chest—the same feeling she'd had that first month alone in London, sleeping on Silas' couch because she couldn't afford a deposit, jumping every time someone knocked. "Found out what?" "That I'd helped you leave. Evan's father and mine belong to the same club. Do business together." Eva laughed, bitter. "Turns out loyalty to old university friends doesn't supersede potential merger opportunities." "So you just cut me off." "He threatened to pull funding for my articles. I was three years into my training contract, Rory. I couldn't—" She stopped, scrubbed a hand across her face. The gesture ruined her foundation, left a streak across her cheekbone. "I should have chosen differently. I know that." Silas moved away, busying himself at the far end of the bar. Giving them space. "I needed you." Rory's voice came out rough. "I was terrified. I had no money, no job prospects, no idea if Evan would find me. And you just vanished." "I'm sorry." "You keep saying that." "Because I mean it." Eva's eyes shone in the amber light. "Every day for seven years, I've meant it. I wrote you letters I never sent. Looked for you on social media, but you'd deleted everything. I thought about coming to Cardiff, but I didn't know if you'd even stayed in London." "I stayed." "I can see that." The jukebox shifted to something instrumental, all mournful saxophone and brushed drums. One of the regulars coughed wetly in the corner. "You got what you wanted though," Rory said. "Junior partner at twenty-seven. That's impressive." "Is it? I defend corporations that dodge taxes and exploit workers. I work eighty-hour weeks. I can't remember the last time I had a conversation with someone that wasn't about billable hours or case precedent." Eva drained her gin. "I sold out before I was old enough to know what I was selling." "At least you're warm and dry." "At least you can look at yourself in the mirror." The words hung between them—sharp, honest. Eva signaled Silas for another drink. He poured it in silence, and this time added one for himself. "I was angry," Rory admitted. "For a long time. Thought about all the things I'd say if I saw you again. Practiced the perfect cutting remarks." "I deserve them." "Maybe. But I'm tired, Eva. I'm so bloody tired of carrying it all." Eva's second gin sat untouched. "I could help now. If you wanted to finish your degree. I have connections at several universities. I could write references, help with costs—" "I don't want your guilt money." "It's not—" Eva stopped. "No. You're right. That's exactly what it is." Outside, the rain intensified. Water streamed down the windows, distorting the sodium glow of street lamps into abstract smears of light. "I like my life," Rory said quietly. "It's simple. I work, I come here, I sleep. No ambitions eating me alive. No compromises that cost pieces of my soul." "No old friends either." "No. No old friends." Eva's phone buzzed. She glanced at it, grimaced. "That's work. Client emergency." She pulled out a business card, set it on the bar between them. "My direct line. If you ever—I mean, you probably won't, but. Just in case." Rory picked up the card. Thick stock, embossed lettering. Eva Thornton, Junior Partner. She slipped it into her pocket without comment. Eva stood, left two twenties on the bar. "Keep the change," she told Silas. Then, to Rory, "I really am sorry. About all of it." "I know." That seemed to surprise Eva. She hesitated, opened her mouth, closed it again. Finally, she turned and walked out into the rain, the door swinging shut behind her with a quiet click. Silas waited a full minute before speaking. "You alright?" Rory stared at the door, at the green neon sign reflected in wet glass. "Yeah. I think I am."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.239
leniency0.479
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.028
86.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1473
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"deliberately"
2"perfectly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1473
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"potential"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"navigating"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"familiar"
5"potential"
6"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1455
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount851
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.94
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Rory19
London4
Prague1
Istanbul1
Beirut1
Thornton2
Eva25
Cardiff1
Designer1
Leonard1
Cohen1
Silas8
Junior1
Partner1
Seven3
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Thornton"
3"Eva"
4"Leonard"
5"Cohen"
6"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Prague"
3"Istanbul"
4"Beirut"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.031
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like they'd never met an actual pu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1455
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean18.65
std16.25
cv0.871
sampleLengths
060
160
229
331
44
510
639
75
859
91
1010
111
1248
1316
146
1518
1649
173
1825
1910
209
213
2236
2325
2419
251
267
2722
289
293
309
314
3223
332
3436
3510
362
379
3837
3928
402
418
4210
4340
443
4532
466
4746
4815
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences144
ratio0.063
matches
0"The overhead lights cast amber pools across scarred wood, and the walls—plastered with faded maps of Prague, Istanbul, Beirut—absorbed what little remained of the day's grey light filtering through rain-streaked windows."
1"He'd already poured her usual—a proper whisky, none of that blended rubbish."
2"Rory didn't turn—not until Silas' expression shifted, his features arranging themselves into something carefully neutral."
3"Her blonde hair—once a choppy, rebellious cut they'd done together in Eva's mum's bathroom—now fell in expensive layers past her shoulders."
4"Seven years of friendship before the silence—you didn't forget someone's tells."
5"Eva perched on a stool two down from Rory's—close enough for conversation, far enough to maintain distance."
6"He caught Rory's eye for just a moment—a question."
7"Rory felt something cold and familiar settle in her chest—the same feeling she'd had that first month alone in London, sleeping on Silas' couch because she couldn't afford a deposit, jumping every time someone knocked."
8"The words hung between them—sharp, honest."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount615
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02926829268292683
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011382113821138212
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean10.1
std8
cv0.791
sampleLengths
022
19
229
329
431
517
612
718
813
94
1010
116
1213
1315
145
155
1614
1721
1824
191
2010
211
222
2322
248
2516
264
2712
286
2912
302
314
328
3317
3424
353
367
377
3811
394
406
419
423
435
4412
4517
462
475
4820
497
58.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3958333333333333
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Of course they had it."
1"Then, to Rory,"
2"Finally, she turned and walked"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences80
matches
0"She'd spent the last three"
1"She peeled off the jacket"
2"He'd already poured her usual—a"
3"She wrapped both hands around"
4"She swiveled on her stool."
5"Her blonde hair—once a choppy,"
6"She wore a charcoal peacoat"
7"She'd cut it short after"
8"He caught Rory's eye for"
9"She gave the smallest shake"
10"She stopped, scrubbed a hand"
11"He poured it in silence,"
12"She glanced at it, grimaced."
13"She pulled out a business"
14"She slipped it into her"
15"she told Silas"
16"She hesitated, opened her mouth,"
ratio0.213
47.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences80
matches
0"The sharp crack of billiard"
1"Tuesday nights were usually quiet,"
2"She'd spent the last three"
3"She peeled off the jacket"
4"The overhead lights cast amber"
5"Silas emerged from the back"
6"He'd already poured her usual—a"
7"She wrapped both hands around"
8"The door swung open behind"
9"Rory didn't turn—not until"
10"That particular mask meant complications."
11"She swiveled on her stool."
12"Eva Thornton stood in the"
13"Her blonde hair—once a choppy,"
14"She wore a charcoal peacoat"
15"The name landed between them"
16"Eva moved forward, tentative."
17"Eva's fingers worried the strap"
18"Rory resisted the urge to"
19"She'd cut it short after"
ratio0.825
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She'd spent the last three hours navigating London's flooded streets on her moped, delivering crispy duck and chow mein to customers who couldn't be arsed to ve…"
1"Seven bloody years since Eva had stood in their Cardiff flat, mascara streaking down her face, begging Rory to come to London."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory didn't, his features arranging themselves into something carefully neutral"
1"Eva laughed, bitter"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva laughed (laugh)"
1"Rory admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.169
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.056
84.1040%