Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX516BH05X119QN79V31VX

Run Details

Duration:
8.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak stones rose like jagged ribs from the moss‑laden earth, their bark etched with faint runes that shimmered only when the wind brushed them. Aurora stepped through the last stone, feeling the air thicken as if she’d entered a breath held in a chest. Wildflowers erupted in a riot of colors—blue, violet, gold—each petal trembling like a heartbeat. A low hum vibrated through the ground, resonating with the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident that still tingled when magic brushed her skin. Nyx slipped ahead, their silhouette a ripple of living shadow that stretched and folded around the stones. When they spoke, the words rode on a whisper that seemed to come from the leaves themselves. “The Veil thins here,” they said, their voice a rustle of dry leaves. “Listen.” Aurora lifted the Heartstone Pendant, its deep crimson gem catching a sliver of light. The pendant pulsed faintly, a warm thrum that matched the hum beneath her feet. She pressed it to her palm, feeling the heat spread through her fingers. “It’s near a portal,” she murmured, eyes narrowing at a faint distortion ahead. “I can feel it.” Isolde moved beside them, her silver hair spilling over the grass like liquid moonlight. She walked without leaving footprints, the ground seeming to bend around her steps. She lifted a hand, and the air rippled, revealing a hidden doorway of woven vines that pulsed with a faint violet glow. “When the moon drinks the sun, the path opens,” she said, her voice a riddle that folded into the wind. “Only those who see the unseen may pass.” The three of them paused at the threshold. Aurora’s heart raced, not from fear but from the thrill of the unknown. She slipped the Fae‑Forged Blade from its sheath, the cold metal biting her palm. The blade’s leaf‑shaped edge caught the moonlight that filtered through the canopy, casting a faint luminescence that seemed to dance on the vines. Nyx stretched their shadowed hand toward the doorway, the form of their fingers dissolving into mist. “Let’s go,” they urged, the whisper carrying an urgency that made the leaves shiver. Aurora stepped forward, the blade humming as it brushed against the vines. The vines recoiled, parting like curtains. Inside, the air grew denser, scented with incense and something metallic, like fresh blood mixed with honey. The walls of the cavern were not stone but living crystal, each facet reflecting impossible colors that shifted with every breath. A low, melodic chime echoed from somewhere deep within, resonating with the Heartstone’s pulse. Aurora felt the pendant’s glow intensify, casting a soft red light on the crystal walls. She turned to Nyx. “Do you feel it?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx’s form flickered, their eyes—faintly glowing violet—meeting hers. “The boundary is thin,” they replied, the wind‑carried whisper curling around her words. “The Veil is near.” Isolde stepped aside, her eyes scanning the crystal surfaces. She traced a fingertip along a seam where the crystal met shadow, and a ripple of pale lavender light spilled out, curling around the trio. “The answer lies within the mirror of the world,” she intoned, each syllable a puzzle piece. “Seek the reflection that does not belong.” Aurora lifted the blade, its cold edge slicing through the air, making the crystal crackle. A shard fell, shattering into a cascade of luminous dust that swirled around her. The dust settled, revealing a hidden alcove where a portal shimmered like a thin veil of mist, its edges flickering with amber light. “Looks like a doorway to Hel,” Nyx observed, the whisper curling like smoke. “Dymas. Gluttony.” Their words hung in the air, a reminder of the sin‑laden realm beyond. Aurora pressed the Heartstone against the portal’s surface. The pendant’s warmth surged, a pulse that matched the portal’s rhythm. The crystal walls trembled, and a scent of ripe fruit and charred meat rose, mingling with the faint perfume of wildflowers. She felt a tug on her mind, as if the portal tried to pull thoughts like threads. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the portal’s amber glow. “The Veil is a thin skin,” she said, each word a riddle that seemed to echo off the crystal. “Cross it, and the world will drink from the same cup.” She lifted her hand, and a blade of moonlight shot from her palm, striking the portal. The portal’s amber hue flared, and a ripple of violet light spilled outward, touching the crystal walls. The ripple turned into a wave of shadows that rolled across the floor, swallowing the wildflowers in its wake. Aurora’s scar throbbed, a reminder of the accident that once left her marked. She tightened her grip on the blade, the cold cutting through her palm but steadying her resolve. Nyx’s shadow elongated, stretching across the portal’s edge. “We must move fast,” they whispered, the wind carrying urgency. “The portal closes when the sun kisses the moon.” Aurora lunged, blade poised. She thrust the edge into the portal’s heart, the cold metal slicing through the amber veil. The portal shuddered, and a burst of crimson light erupted, the Heartstone Pendant flaring in response. The light washed over the crystal cavern, turning the walls into a kaleidoscope of colors—emerald, sapphire, amber—each hue pulsing like a living organism. Isolde’s voice rose, a chant that resonated with the crystal’s song. “Through the Veil, through the night, the path is hidden, the truth is bright.” Her words seemed to stitch the air, weaving a thread that pulled the portal open wider. The veil thinned, revealing a glimpse of a landscape unlike any she had known: rolling vineyards of black grapes, orchards heavy with fruit that glowed from within, and a distant feast where shadows dined on light. “Dymas,” Nyx said, the whisper now a low hum that reverberated through the cavern. “Gluttony’s realm. We are at the edge.” Aurora felt the pendant’s pulse slow, as if the portal’s heartbeat matched her own. She looked at the blade, its coldness seeping into her skin, an assurance that she could cut through any ward. She glanced at Isolde, whose eyes flickered with pale lavender, reflecting the portal’s strange light. The group pressed forward, stepping through the portal’s threshold. The transition was a rush of scent and sound: the clink of crystal, the rustle of vines, the distant roar of a feast. The air grew heavier, thick with the sweet perfume of overripe fruit and the metallic tang of blood. Aurora’s boots sank into a soft, spongy ground that seemed to pulse under each step. She caught sight of a massive banquet hall, its tables piled high with dishes that glimmered with an inner fire. Shadows moved around the tables, their forms shifting like smoke, feeding on the aroma. The sky above was a warm amber, casting a perpetual twilight that made everything appear both vivid and surreal. Nyx drifted ahead, their form merging with the shadows that fed at the banquet. “The feast is a lure,” they warned, their voice a rustle that carried the warning of a storm. “Gluttony feeds on desire.” Isolde raised her hands, the moon‑silver blade humming in resonance with the portal’s energy. “We must find the source,” she said, each word a riddle that seemed to unlock a hidden door in the hall. “Only the heart of the feast can close the veil.” Aurora’s eyes landed on a massive crystal chandelier suspended above the banquet, its facets catching the amber light and refracting it into a thousand shards that fell like rain. At its base, a stone pedestal cradled a ruby thesing like a heartbeat. She felt the Heartstone’s pulse sync with the ruby, a resonance that made her skin tingle. She stepped toward the pedestal, the blade’s edge grazing the floor, leaving a faint trail of cold light. The shadows recoiled, their forms wavering as if the blade’s presence threatened them. Aurora lifted the Heartstone, letting its crimson glow mingle with the ruby’s. The two lights intertwined, forming a vortex of red that pulsed like a living heart. Nyx’s whisper rose, echoing through the hall. “The Veil is a boundary, but hunger is a gate. Close it, or the world will drown in excess.” Isolde’s eyes narrowed, her silver hair catching the vortex’s light. She drew the Fae‑Forged Blade, its coldness biting her palm. “The blade cuts through wards,” she said, the words resonating with the crystal walls. “It will sever the feast’s hold.” Aurora pressed the Heartstone against the ruby, and a shudder ran through the hall. The crimson vortex expanded, swallowing the amber sky, the vineyards, the endless feast. Shadows screamed, their forms dissolving into ash that drifted to the ground like snow. The crystal chandelier shattered, its shards falling harmlessly, turning to dust as they touched the floor. The portal’s amber glow dimmed, the veil’s ripple smoothing into a calm surface. The air cleared, the scent of overripe fruit fading, replaced by the cool, fresh smell of rain on stone. Aurora felt the Heartstone’s pulse settle into a gentle rhythm, a steady beat that matched her own heartbeat. Nyx’s shadow reformed, the violet eyes flickering with a soft glow. “We have steadied the Veil,” they whispered, the wind carrying a note of relief. “The boundary holds, for now.” Isolde lowered the blade, its coldness still humming faintly. She turned to Aurora, a faint smile playing on her lips. “The answer was within the mirror that did not belong,” she said, her voice riddle‑like but now clear. “You have shown the world a path it could not see.” Aurora slipped the Heartstone back onto its silver chain, feeling its warmth settle into a steady glow. She looked at the shattered banquet hall, the remnants of the feast scattered like broken dreams. The violet walls glowed softly, the crystal surfaces now calm, reflecting the stars that began to appear in the amber sky outside. The group stood at the edge of the portal, the veil shimmering like a thin veil of mist. Aurora felt the scar on her wrist pulse once more, a reminder of the accident that had left her marked, but also of the strength that had carried her here. Nyx stepped forward, their shadow stretching across the threshold. “The Veil will weaken again,” they warned, the whisper carrying the weight of seasons. “But we have bought time.” Isolde turned toward the ancient oak stones that marked the grove’s boundary. “Time moves differently here,” she said, her voice a riddle that seemed to echo in the wind. “An hour inside may be minutes or days outside.” Aurora glanced back at the portal, the Heartstone’s glow dimming to a soft ember. She lifted the Fae‑Forged Blade, its coldness a comfort in her hand. “We will return,” she said, her voice steady, her eyes fixed on the path ahead. The three of them stepped through the last stone, the ancient oak standing stones sealing behind them as the veil settled once more. The wildflowers swayed, their colors bright under the newly revealed sky. The air felt lighter, as if the world had exhaled. Aurora’s heart steadied, the pulse of the Heartstone syncing with her own, a promise that the ancient, otherworldly place would remain a secret for those who dared to seek it.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:14:16.786Z" 2/19/2026, 12:14:16 PM
model"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
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generation_time7827
tokens_prompt1816
tokens_completion2965
native_tokens_prompt1656
native_tokens_completion2413
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0
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provider_responses(null)
api_type"completions"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.595
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1895
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1895
totalAiIsms69
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count2
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count4
4
word"whisper"
count8
5
word"pulsed"
count3
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count15
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count8
11
word"flickered"
count2
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count2
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"echo"
count2
17
word"throbbed"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
19
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
20
word"resonated"
count1
21
word"reverberated"
count1
22
word"surreal"
count1
23
word"desire"
count1
24
word"resonance"
count2
25
word"wavering"
count1
26
word"echoing"
count1
27
word"shattered"
count2
28
word"weight"
count1
29
word"otherworldly"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"shimmered"
2"vibrated"
3"reminder"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"raced"
7"dance"
8"crystal"
9"echoed"
10"pulse"
11"flickered"
12"scanning"
13"traced"
14"warmth"
15"trembled"
16"echo"
17"throbbed"
18"resolve"
19"kaleidoscope"
20"resonated"
21"reverberated"
22"surreal"
23"desire"
24"resonance"
25"wavering"
26"echoing"
27"shattered"
28"weight"
29"otherworldly"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences113
matches
0"felt a tug"
29.08% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1889
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1658
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora20
Heartstone11
Pendant2
Isolde9
Blade3
Nyx11
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Isolde"
4"Blade"
5"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.897
windowScore1
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences111
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"whisper that seemed to come from the leaves themselves"
1"luminescence that seemed to dance on the vines"
2"riddle that seemed to echo off the crystal"
3"ground that seemed to pulse under each step"
4"riddle that seemed to unlock a hidden door in the hall"
5"riddle that seemed to echo in the wind"
94.12% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.059
wordCount1889
matches
0"not from fear but from the thrill of the unknown"
1"not stone but living crystal, each facet reflecting impossible colors"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
50.34% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean49.71
std16.22
cv0.326
sampleLengths
091
148
258
377
458
530
656
745
825
957
1052
1128
1257
1374
1449
1527
1659
1777
1821
1949
2065
2153
2236
2345
2458
2558
2626
2740
2857
2950
3030
3149
3255
3348
3428
3538
3641
3774
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs293
matches(empty)
75.89% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences128
ratio0.023
matches
0"Wildflowers erupted in a riot of colors—blue, violet, gold—each petal trembling like a heartbeat."
1"Nyx’s form flickered, their eyes—faintly glowing violet—meeting hers."
2"The light washed over the crystal cavern, turning the walls into a kaleidoscope of colors—emerald, sapphire, amber—each hue pulsing like a living organism."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1664
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.021634615384615384
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005408653846153846
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean14.76
std6.18
cv0.419
sampleLengths
026
120
214
331
417
517
613
71
814
914
1013
1113
124
1314
1413
1522
1620
178
188
1913
2014
2123
2216
2314
2412
256
2617
2721
2814
2915
304
3112
328
3313
344
359
3625
3716
387
3915
4014
4123
4213
4315
448
4511
4621
4717
4811
4919
39.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.21875
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.49% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences113
matches
0"they said, their voice a"
1"She pressed it to her"
2"she murmured, eyes narrowing at"
3"She walked without leaving footprints,"
4"She lifted a hand, and"
5"she said, her voice a"
6"She slipped the Fae‑Forged Blade"
7"they urged, the whisper carrying"
8"She turned to Nyx."
9"she asked, her voice barely"
10"they replied, the wind‑carried whisper"
11"She traced a fingertip along"
12"she intoned, each syllable a"
13"Their words hung in the"
14"She felt a tug on"
15"she said, each word a"
16"She lifted her hand, and"
17"She tightened her grip on"
18"they whispered, the wind carrying"
19"She thrust the edge into"
ratio0.336
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences113
matches
0"The ancient oak stones rose"
1"Aurora stepped through the last"
2"Wildflowers erupted in a riot"
3"A low hum vibrated through"
4"Nyx slipped ahead, their silhouette"
5"they said, their voice a"
6"Aurora lifted the Heartstone Pendant,"
7"The pendant pulsed faintly, a"
8"She pressed it to her"
9"she murmured, eyes narrowing at"
10"Isolde moved beside them, her"
11"She walked without leaving footprints,"
12"She lifted a hand, and"
13"she said, her voice a"
14"The three of them paused"
15"Aurora’s heart raced, not from"
16"She slipped the Fae‑Forged Blade"
17"The blade’s leaf‑shaped edge caught"
18"Nyx stretched their shadowed hand"
19"they urged, the whisper carrying"
ratio0.973
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount18
matches
0"Nyx slipped ahead, their silhouette a ripple of living shadow that stretched and folded around the stones."
1"The pendant pulsed faintly, a warm thrum that matched the hum beneath her feet."
2"The blade’s leaf‑shaped edge caught the moonlight that filtered through the canopy, casting a faint luminescence that seemed to dance on the vines."
3"The walls of the cavern were not stone but living crystal, each facet reflecting impossible colors that shifted with every breath."
4"The dust settled, revealing a hidden alcove where a portal shimmered like a thin veil of mist, its edges flickering with amber light."
5"The pendant’s warmth surged, a pulse that matched the portal’s rhythm."
6"Isolde’s voice rose, a chant that resonated with the crystal’s song."
7"The veil thinned, revealing a glimpse of a landscape unlike any she had known: rolling vineyards of black grapes, orchards heavy with fruit that glowed from wit…"
8"Aurora felt the pendant’s pulse slow, as if the portal’s heartbeat matched her own."
9"She caught sight of a massive banquet hall, its tables piled high with dishes that glimmered with an inner fire."
10"The sky above was a warm amber, casting a perpetual twilight that made everything appear both vivid and surreal."
11"Aurora’s eyes landed on a massive crystal chandelier suspended above the banquet, its facets catching the amber light and refracting it into a thousand shards t…"
12"She felt the Heartstone’s pulse sync with the ruby, a resonance that made her skin tingle."
13"She stepped toward the pedestal, the blade’s edge grazing the floor, leaving a faint trail of cold light."
14"The shadows recoiled, their forms wavering as if the blade’s presence threatened them."
15"Shadows screamed, their forms dissolving into ash that drifted to the ground like snow."
16"The crystal chandelier shattered, its shards falling harmlessly, turning to dust as they touched the floor."
17"Aurora felt the Heartstone’s pulse settle into a gentle rhythm, a steady beat that matched her own heartbeat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"they said, their voice a rustle of dry leaves"
1"she murmured, eyes narrowing at a faint distortion ahead"
2"she said, her voice a riddle that folded into the wind"
3"they urged, the whisper carrying an urgency that made the leaves shiver"
4"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she intoned, each syllable a puzzle piece"
6"Their words hung, a reminder of the sin‑laden realm beyond"
7"they whispered, the wind carrying urgency"
8"she said, the words resonating with the crystal walls"
9"they whispered, the wind carrying a note of relief"
10"they warned, the whisper carrying the weight of seasons"
11"she said, her voice steady, her eyes fixed on the path ahead"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"they urged (urge)"
2"Nyx observed (observe)"
3"they whispered (whisper)"
4"they warned (warn)"
5"they whispered (whisper)"
6"they warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.973
rawRatio0.389
effectiveRatio0.378
64.6642%