Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX55YJJ9SX57YG0SMNDVBM

Run Details

Duration:
21.9s
Cost:
$0.010838
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air changed before they saw the boundary. A hush, thick and sudden, like stepping into a cathedral after hours in the wind. The trees ended not in roots or underbrush but in a sharp, perfect line—trunks severed mid-curve, leaves caught mid-fall, frozen in time. Beyond it, wildflowers bloomed riotous in impossible colors: cerulean daisies, tulips the deep violet of a bruise, roses that pulsed like slow hearts. Rory stopped walking. Her breath fogged, though the air wasn’t cold. “You feel it?” Nyx’s voice came from behind her, soft as ash on stone. Not quite from one place—shifted, as if whispered through the gaps between things. She didn’t turn. “Like I’m being tasted.” “Not taste. Recognition.” Rory glanced at the pendant beneath her jacket. Crimson stone warm against her collarbone. Pulsing once, twice. They’d followed the Heartstone since it began glowing two nights ago—faint at first, like a dying ember. Now it throbbed beneath her skin, a second pulse. The Fae-Forged Blade sat cold at her hip, wrapped in cloth, but she could feel its weight like a counterbalance to the heat at her chest. Ahead, Isolde stepped across the threshold without pause. She didn’t cross so much as *appear* on the other side. One moment she stood before the dead treeline. The next, she was ten paces in, silver hair drifting as if underwater. No footprints in the moss. “You linger,” Isolde said, voice echoing slightly, though her mouth didn’t seem to move. “The Grove does not like hesitation.” Rory exhaled sharply. “You could’ve mentioned the whole ‘vanishing’ thing.” The corner of Isolde’s mouth twitched. “You did not ask.” Nyx passed Rory like smoke slipping under a door. Solid for only a second—tall, shadow-hewn, glowing violet eyes like distant stars—before dissolving into the air, reforming ten feet ahead, watching. Rory stepped forward. The moment her boot touched the moss, sound returned—but wrong. Not louder, just layered. Birdsong came in three octaves. Wind chimes, though there were no chimes, no wind. Beneath it all, a slow, deep hum, like the earth breathing. The flowers turned toward her. Not a trick of the light. Petals unfurled, stamens tilting like eyes. “What the hell?” “They know your name,” Nyx murmured. “They tasted it when you stepped over.” Isolde was already moving deeper, bare feet silent on the moss. “Names have weight here. Yours has been spoken before. By roots. By stone.” Rory tightened her grip on the pendant. “By who?” “You will know when the Grove allows it.” The standing stones came into view—a circle of ancient oaks, gnarled and thick as houses, bark etched with spirals and glyphs that shifted when not stared at directly. Between them, the air shimmered, faint as heat haze. The Veil. Rory stopped. “That’s a rift.” “The Veil breathes,” Isolde said. “This is one of its lungs.” Nyx drifted to the nearest stone, pressed a shadow-hand against it. The bark darkened where they touched, like ink soaking into paper. “Old magic. Fae, yes—but older than your Courts.” Isolde’s lavender eyes narrowed. “It is not *mine*. It is *before* mine.” Rory stepped forward, wary. The pendant flared—hot, insistent. She reached out, stopped short of the shimmer. Do not touch. The thought wasn’t hers. She jerked back. Nyx’s form flickered. “It sees you.” “That wasn’t a voice,” Rory whispered. “That was… inside.” “The Grove speaks in impressions,” Isolde said. “Truths that arrive before words.” “Charming.” A low chime resonated—single, pure. Then silence. The flowers folded in. Trees stilled. Even the hum faded. Then, ahead, a bloom opened—a lily, black as oil, petals edged in gold. At its center, a drop of light formed, rose, floated toward Rory. She didn’t move. The light brushed her wrist—her scar—and vanished. “Interesting,” Isolde murmured. “What was that?” “You were marked,” Nyx said, voice lower now. “Something in the Grove remembers your injury. Your beginning.” Rory rubbed the scar. “I fell off a bike when I was eight. Hardly apocalyptic.” “No,” Isolde said. “But the fall opened a door. Too small for most to see. But not for shadows.” Nyx turned fully to her. “You’ve always been half in two worlds, Rory. You just didn’t know it.” A rustle—like silk through reeds. A fox stepped into the clearing. Not red, but silver-white, with eyes like crushed pearls. It sat, regarded them with knowing stillness. Then it opened its mouth. And the Grove *sang*. Not from the fox. From the trees, the flowers, the stones. A harmony so vast and layered it made Rory’s bones vibrate. A language without words, full of memory and loss and hunger. She fell to one knee. Images flooded her: —*A hand placing the pendant around the neck of a child with black hair and bright blue eyes. A voice: “Keep it secret. Keep it safe.”* —*A boy with eyes like smoke, laughing as he taught her how to steal apples from Mr. Pengelly’s orchard. Then, years later, the same boy’s face, twisted with fury, a broken bottle in hand.* —*A city of spires and vine-choked towers, sky glowing amber. A woman in white robes, back turned, holding a knife over a stone altar. The same pendant in her hand.* —*A door opening. Darkness pouring out. A voice: “You called. I answered.”* Then silence. The fox blinked. The song stopped. Rory gasped, clutching her head. Her scar burned. Nyx was beside her, solid now, one cool hand on her shoulder. “You saw it, didn’t you? Not a memory. A *promise*.” Isolde stood before the central stone, where the shimmer had thickened. “The Heartstone was forged in Dymas. It is a key. And you, Aurora Carter, were always meant to carry it.” Rory swallowed. “By who?” The half-Fae turned. “The one who gave it to you. The one who died so you wouldn’t.” Nyx’s form flickered. “You’re not just fleeing an ex, Rory. You’re running toward something. Toward *him*.” “Who?” Isolde stepped aside. The rift in the Veil pulsed—and for a single second, it cleared. Through it, Rory saw a feast. Endless tables under an amber sky, laden with fruits that bled when cut, meats that pulsed like living things. Figures in ornate robes laughed, drank from goblets that refilled themselves. At the head of the hall, a man—tall, crowned with thorns of gold—lifted a glass toward the rift. His eyes locked with hers. Cold spread through her chest. She knew that face. Not from dreams. From the boy in the orchard. From her ex. From the bottle. But older. Crowned. Smiling like a man who’d just won a game no one else knew they were playing. Evan. And then the rift snapped shut.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.225
leniency0.45
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Lily"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count2
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"pulsed"
2"throbbed"
3"pulse"
4"could feel"
5"weight"
6"echoing"
7"etched"
8"shimmered"
9"flickered"
10"resonated"
11"silence"
12"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences119
matches
0"d with fury"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
4.35% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords108
totalWords1104
ratio0.098
matches
0"appear"
1"mine"
2"before"
3"sang"
4"A hand placing the pendant around the neck of a child with black hair and bright blue eyes. A voice: “Keep it secret. Keep it safe.”"
5"A boy with eyes like smoke, laughing as he taught her how to steal apples from Mr. Pengelly’s orchard. Then, years later, the same boy’s face, twisted with fury, a broken bottle in hand."
6"A city of spires and vine-choked towers, sky glowing amber. A woman in white robes, back turned, holding a knife over a stone altar. The same pendant in her hand."
7"A door opening. Darkness pouring out. A voice: “You called. I answered.”"
8"promise"
9"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount862
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde11
Rory15
Veil2
Nyx9
Grove1
Mr1
persons
0"Blade"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
4"Grove"
5"Mr"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.63
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Not quite from one place—shifted, as if whispered through the gaps between things"
18.84% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.812
wordCount1104
matches
0"not in roots or underbrush but in a sharp, perfect line"
1"Not red, but silver-white, with eyes like crushed pearls"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"knew that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean13.63
std12.9
cv0.947
sampleLengths
068
111
227
37
43
517
652
78
811
926
1020
1110
1210
1330
143
1539
165
1712
183
1913
2024
219
228
2339
245
2511
2630
2712
2816
293
304
313
326
339
3412
351
367
3710
3825
393
407
413
423
4317
4415
4519
4618
475
4822
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"were playing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences148
ratio0.115
matches
0"The trees ended not in roots or underbrush but in a sharp, perfect line—trunks severed mid-curve, leaves caught mid-fall, frozen in time."
1"Not quite from one place—shifted, as if whispered through the gaps between things."
2"They’d followed the Heartstone since it began glowing two nights ago—faint at first, like a dying ember."
3"Solid for only a second—tall, shadow-hewn, glowing violet eyes like distant stars—before dissolving into the air, reforming ten feet ahead, watching."
4"The moment her boot touched the moss, sound returned—but wrong."
5"The standing stones came into view—a circle of ancient oaks, gnarled and thick as houses, bark etched with spirals and glyphs that shifted when not stared at directly."
6"The pendant flared—hot, insistent."
7"A low chime resonated—single, pure."
8"Then, ahead, a bloom opened—a lily, black as oil, petals edged in gold."
9"The light brushed her wrist—her scar—and vanished."
10"A rustle—like silk through reeds."
11"—*A hand placing the pendant around the neck of a child with black hair and bright blue eyes."
12"—*A boy with eyes like smoke, laughing as he taught her how to steal apples from Mr."
13"—*A city of spires and vine-choked towers, sky glowing amber."
14"—*A door opening."
15"The rift in the Veil pulsed—and for a single second, it cleared."
16"At the head of the hall, a man—tall, crowned with thorns of gold—lifted a glass toward the rift."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount885
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02824858757062147
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006779661016949152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean7.46
std5.35
cv0.718
sampleLengths
08
115
222
323
43
58
614
713
83
94
103
118
126
133
1417
159
1626
178
1811
198
2013
215
2214
236
243
257
266
274
289
2921
303
3110
324
335
349
3511
365
376
386
393
406
417
4211
4313
447
452
468
4728
489
492
55.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3783783783783784
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners56
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences101
matches
0"Even the hum faded."
1"Then, ahead, a bloom opened—a"
2"Then it opened its mouth."
3"Then, years later, the same"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences101
matches
0"Her breath fogged, though the"
1"She didn’t turn."
2"They’d followed the Heartstone since"
3"She didn’t cross so much"
4"She reached out, stopped short"
5"She jerked back."
6"She didn’t move."
7"It sat, regarded them with"
8"She fell to one knee."
9"Her scar burned."
10"His eyes locked with hers."
11"She knew that face."
ratio0.119
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences101
matches
0"The air changed before they"
1"A hush, thick and sudden,"
2"The trees ended not in"
3"Rory stopped walking."
4"Her breath fogged, though the"
5"Nyx’s voice came from behind"
6"She didn’t turn."
7"Rory glanced at the pendant"
8"Crimson stone warm against her"
9"They’d followed the Heartstone since"
10"The Fae-Forged Blade sat cold"
11"She didn’t cross so much"
12"The next, she was ten"
13"Isolde said, voice echoing slightly,"
14"Rory exhaled sharply."
15"The corner of Isolde’s mouth"
16"Nyx passed Rory like smoke"
17"Rory stepped forward."
18"The moment her boot touched"
19"Birdsong came in three octaves."
ratio0.683
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now it throbbed beneath her"
ratio0.01
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The next, she was ten paces in, silver hair drifting as if underwater."
1"Endless tables under an amber sky, laden with fruits that bled when cut, meats that pulsed like living things."
2"Figures in ornate robes laughed, drank from goblets that refilled themselves."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx said, voice lower now"
75.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.15
80.1001%