Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX5617H8KJ69S4YTACQ46X

Run Details

Duration:
22.3s
Cost:
$0.010603
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door handle turned with a click that was too smooth, too confident, for any delivery or pestering neighbour. Aurora Carter froze halfway through untying her boots, one foot bare, the other still crammed in worn leather. The deadbolts were undone—she must have forgotten to relock after bringing up the bin. A quiet curse slipped out. Then the door swung open. He stood there like he’d stepped from a dream she’d tried to forget—tall, immaculate, silhouetted by the dim corridor light. Lucien Moreau. His platinum hair slicked back as always, the sharp angles of his face softened by the amber glow from the hall lamp. His charcoal suit was pristine, the ivory handle of his cane catching the light like bone. For a heartbeat, there was nothing but silence, thick and charged. “You left the chain off,” he said. Not a greeting. Not a question. Just observation wrapped in that low, French-tinged voice that still curled something deep in her chest. Rory straightened slowly, pulling her boot back on with deliberate calm. “You broke in?” “No.” He stepped forward, easing the door shut behind him. “I knocked. Didn’t expect you to answer. You never do.” She crossed her arms, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light as she shifted her weight. “That doesn’t explain why you’re standing in Eva’s flat like you own it.” He glanced around, taking in the stacks of grimoires teetering on coffee tables, the half-burnt candle beside a bowl of cold noodles, the tabby cat—Ptolemy—eyeing him from the back of the sofa with slit-pupil suspicion. “Still living in chaos.” “I’m borrowing it. And I tidy.” “You hide in it.” He tapped his cane lightly against the floor—a soft *tap, tap*—like he was counting seconds. She exhaled sharply. “What do you want, Lucien?” His mismatched eyes locked onto hers. One gold, one black as a starless sky. “I wanted to see you. Simple as that.” “Simple?” She barked a dry laugh. “You ghosted me for eight months. No message. No signal. Just—vanishing. And now you just *want* to see me? At midnight?” “I didn’t ghost you.” He moved further in, setting his cane against the wall with care. “I was *gone*. There was a breach in the West Tower. Took me six months to seal it without starting a war. The Council doesn’t let you call home during containment.” She didn’t believe him. Not all of it. “You had other ways. A whisper through the Veil. A coded note. *Something*.” “I sent one.” He pulled a small envelope from his inner pocket—aged paper, sealed with a drop of dark wax stamped with a serpent coiled around a dagger. Her name, scrawled in his precise hand. Rory stared at it. “I never got it.” “It was intercepted.” He pocketed it again. “By someone who knew you’d read it. And act.” She frowned. “You think someone’s watching me?” “I *know* they are.” He reached into his coat again, this time pulling out a small brass disc etched with sigils. He placed it on the table. It hummed faintly, then flared with blue light before cracking down the middle. “Ward’s dead. Has been for weeks. You’ve been unprotected.” “You put a ward on Eva’s flat?” “For *you*.” His voice dropped. “Six months ago. Didn’t think you’d stay this long.” She looked away, jaw tight. “It’s safe here.” “Nothing is safe when you’ve crossed the Crimson Hand.” He stepped closer. “You know that better than most.” Her breath caught. She turned, eyes blazing. “Don’t use *him* as an excuse. Don’t you *dare*.” “I’m not. I’m using *sense*.” He leaned in, just enough that she caught the scent of sandalwood and something older, deeper—sulphur and rain. “Evan is out. Released under a false name. And he’s asking questions.” Her blood turned cold. “About me?” “About *us*. About the night you vanished. About the man with mismatched eyes who pulled you out of that warehouse in Croydon.” She remembered that night—rain slashing sideways, her ribs cracked, Lucien stepping over bodies like they were litter. The way he’d carried her out, his coat wrapped around her shaking frame. The silence on the drive. The way he’d looked at her afterward—like she’d shattered something in him. “You never told me what happened to them,” she whispered. “I buried them where the sun doesn’t reach.” He held her gaze. “I’d do it again.” She swallowed. “That’s not the point.” “Then what is? That I kept things from you? That I protected you even when you hated me for it?” “You didn’t *protect* me. You *controlled* me. You decided what I should know. Where I should go. Who I could see.” Her voice cracked. “I’m not a piece on your damn board, Lucien.” “I know.” For the first time, his mask slipped. The amber eye flickered with something raw—regret, maybe. “I was afraid.” “Of what?” “That if I told you everything, you’d run. And if you ran, he’d find you. Or worse—someone else would.” “And now?” “Now I’m standing here. Uninvited. Unwanted. Possibly unwelcome.” A ghost of a smile. “But here.” She stared at him, pulse hammering. The air between them hummed, not with magic, but with everything they hadn’t said. The late-night conversations over gin and salt circles. The brush of his fingers when he passed her a dagger. The way he’d once traced the scar on her wrist and said, *This is where you began.* “You think showing up like this fixes anything?” she asked. “No. But it’s a start.” “You don’t get to decide that.” “I don’t. You do.” He stepped back. “I’m not here to command. Or manipulate. Or protect you from shadows you’re already strong enough to face. I’m here because I missed you. Because I wake up and reach for a phone that hasn’t rung. Because I hear a laugh in a crowded room and turn, hoping—*praying*—it’s yours.” Silence. Ptolemy leapt from the sofa and wound around Lucien’s leg, purring. Rory let out a shaky breath. “He hates everyone.” “Not everyone.” Lucien bent slowly, offering his hand. The cat sniffed, then butted his head against Lucien’s fingers. “He knows when someone’s sincere.” She looked away, throat tight. “You can’t just waltz in and—” “I know.” He straightened. “You don’t have to forgive me. Or trust me. Or even speak to me again after tonight. But I needed you to know the truth. That I chose you. Even when I walked away, I chose you.” Her eyes stung. She blinked hard. “You should go,” she said, voice low. He nodded, retrieving his cane. “I will.” But he didn’t move. And neither did she. The distance between them narrowed, not by steps, but by breath, by the tilt of a chin, by the way her fingers twitched at her side. Then she reached out. Not all the way. Just enough. Lucien stared at her half-open hand. Then, slowly, he took it. His skin was warm. Calloused. Real. And when he lifted it to his lips, pressing a kiss to her knuckles just above the scar, she didn’t pull away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He moved further [further]"
1"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.633
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.067
79.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1197
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"lightly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1197
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"tinged"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"coded"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"silence"
2"charged"
3"tinged"
4"weight"
5"whisper"
6"coded"
7"etched"
8"shattered"
9"flickered"
10"pulse"
11"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords19
totalWords1180
ratio0.016
matches
0"tap, tap"
1"want"
2"gone"
3"Something"
4"know"
5"you"
6"him"
7"dare"
8"sense"
9"us"
10"protect"
11"controlled"
12"This is where you began."
13"praying"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount684
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
French-tinged1
Ptolemy2
Lucien6
Silence1
Rory3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
30.51% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.695
wordCount1180
matches
0"not with magic, but with everything they hadn’t said"
1"not by steps, but by breath, by the tilt of a chin, by the way her fingers twi"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean18.73
std15.61
cv0.833
sampleLengths
056
15
260
311
429
514
620
733
839
96
1019
118
1222
1327
1447
1521
1635
178
1816
197
2049
217
2214
238
2418
2516
2635
276
2822
2947
3010
3116
326
3320
3433
3520
362
3719
382
3915
4056
4110
425
436
4456
451
4611
479
4823
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"were undone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was counting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences121
ratio0.074
matches
0"The deadbolts were undone—she must have forgotten to relock after bringing up the bin."
1"He stood there like he’d stepped from a dream she’d tried to forget—tall, immaculate, silhouetted by the dim corridor light."
2"He glanced around, taking in the stacks of grimoires teetering on coffee tables, the half-burnt candle beside a bowl of cold noodles, the tabby cat—Ptolemy—eyeing him from the back of the sofa with slit-pupil suspicion."
3"“You hide in it.” He tapped his cane lightly against the floor—a soft *tap, tap*—like he was counting seconds."
4"“I sent one.” He pulled a small envelope from his inner pocket—aged paper, sealed with a drop of dark wax stamped with a serpent coiled around a dagger."
5"“I’m not. I’m using *sense*.” He leaned in, just enough that she caught the scent of sandalwood and something older, deeper—sulphur and rain."
6"She remembered that night—rain slashing sideways, her ribs cracked, Lucien stepping over bodies like they were litter."
7"The way he’d looked at her afterward—like she’d shattered something in him."
8"The amber eye flickered with something raw—regret, maybe."
79.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount699
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"low, French-tinged voice"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.05007153075822604
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008583690987124463
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean9.75
std8.25
cv0.846
sampleLengths
019
118
214
35
45
520
62
722
816
911
107
113
123
1316
1411
153
1610
1710
1820
1913
2035
214
226
2319
243
255
266
278
288
296
3021
3116
3231
334
344
3513
3628
377
384
394
407
419
422
435
4421
456
4613
479
487
495
41.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.30578512396694213
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then the door swung open."
1"Just observation wrapped in that"
2"Then she reached out."
3"Then, slowly, he took it."
ratio0.056
17.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences71
matches
0"He stood there like he’d"
1"His platinum hair slicked back"
2"His charcoal suit was pristine,"
3"He stepped forward, easing the"
4"She crossed her arms, the"
5"He glanced around, taking in"
6"He tapped his cane lightly"
7"She exhaled sharply."
8"His mismatched eyes locked onto"
9"She barked a dry laugh"
10"He moved further in, setting"
11"She didn’t believe him."
12"He pulled a small envelope"
13"Her name, scrawled in his"
14"He pocketed it again"
15"He reached into his coat"
16"He placed it on the"
17"It hummed faintly, then flared"
18"His voice dropped"
19"She looked away, jaw tight."
ratio0.507
58.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences71
matches
0"The door handle turned with"
1"Aurora Carter froze halfway through"
2"The deadbolts were undone—she must"
3"A quiet curse slipped out."
4"He stood there like he’d"
5"His platinum hair slicked back"
6"His charcoal suit was pristine,"
7"Rory straightened slowly, pulling her"
8"He stepped forward, easing the"
9"She crossed her arms, the"
10"He glanced around, taking in"
11"He tapped his cane lightly"
12"She exhaled sharply."
13"His mismatched eyes locked onto"
14"She barked a dry laugh"
15"He moved further in, setting"
16"She didn’t believe him."
17"He pulled a small envelope"
18"Her name, scrawled in his"
19"Rory stared at it."
ratio0.803
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The door handle turned with a click that was too smooth, too confident, for any delivery or pestering neighbour."
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She barked (bark)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.067
81.5279%