Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX573S5PRN4KFRJZ83Z2KW

Run Details

Duration:
45.5s
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$0.004817
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon glow of the raven sign cut through the London fog, casting an ethereal light on the wet pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung thick with the scent of aged whiskey and wood polish. Black-and-white photographs of forgotten conflicts and yellowed maps of continents redrawn by history adorned the walls, their corners curling with time. Aurora Carter traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, her bright blue eyes fixed on the amber liquid in her glass. The ice cubes clinked as she swirled them, the sound echoing in the quiet afternoon bar. 'Another?' Silas Blackwood leaned against the polished mahogany, his silver signet ring catching the low light as he gestured to her nearly empty glass. The grey streaks in his auburn hair seemed more prominent today, framing a face that had seen more secrets than most would ever know. 'I should get going. Yu-Fei needs me back by six for the dinner rush.' 'Delivery work waits for no one, eh?' 'Exactly.' Rory smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. 'Though I doubt anyone would complain if their crispy duck was a few minutes late.' Silas poured a measure of whiskey into her glass anyway, the liquid flowing in a steady stream. 'One more. On the house.' 'I'm not going to win this argument, am I?' 'Rarely do where alcohol is concerned.' His limp was barely noticeable as he moved down the bar to serve a new customer, his presence commanding even in the empty room. The bell above the door chimed, a sharp sound that made Rory turn. A woman stood in the doorway, shaking rain from her designer coat. Her blonde hair was cut into an asymmetrical bob, a stark contrast to the wild curls Rory remembered. Her clothes screamed money - tailored and impractical. 'Welcome to The Raven's Nest,' Silas called out. 'What can I get you?' The woman approached the bar, her heels clicking on the wooden floor. Her gaze swept the room, lingering on the maps, the photographs, the shadows in the corners. Then it landed on Rory. Recognition flickered in her eyes, followed by something else - surprise, perhaps, or embarrassment. 'Rory? Aurora Carter?' Rory straightened, her fingers tightening around her glass. 'Eva?' The years had carved new lines around Eva's eyes, but her voice remained the same - precise, clipped, carrying the weight of private education and unspoken expectations. 'God, it's been what, five years? Six?' 'Something like that.' Rory took a sip of her whiskey, the burn familiar and comforting. 'What brings you to Soho?' 'Business meeting nearby.' Eva slid onto the stool next to Rory, removing her gloves finger by finger. 'I didn't expect to find you here. Last I heard, you were still in Cardiff.' 'People move.' 'So they do.' Eva signaled to Silas. 'Gin and tonic, please. With a lime.' Silas nodded, already reaching for the gin bottle. His eyes met Rory's for a fraction of a second, a question in them. 'Eva and I go way back,' Rory explained, though her explanation was unnecessary. Silas understood more than he let on. 'Since we were seven,' Eva added. 'Remember when we tried to run away to London?' 'I remember we made it to the end of the street before your mother found us.' 'And she made pink lemonade and told us London would always be there tomorrow.' Eva laughed, but the sound was hollow. 'She was right, I suppose.' Silas placed the drink in front of Eva, his movements economical and precise. 'On the house for friends of Rory.' 'Thank you.' Eva took a sip, her eyes never leaving Rory's face. 'You look different.' 'Do I?' 'Not bad different. Just... settled. More yourself, maybe.' Eva touched her own blonde bob. 'Unlike me, apparently.' 'Change isn't bad.' 'No, but some changes are more permanent than others.' Eva's gaze drifted to the photograph above the bar - a faded image of men in military uniforms standing before a Prague street scene. 'You still in touch with anyone from university?' 'Not really.' 'Me neither. Well, except for Robert from law school, but that's business.' Eva swirled her glass, the ice cubes clicking against the sides. 'I heard about Evan.' Rory's hand instinctively went to her wrist, fingers finding the crescent scar. 'Word travels fast.' 'Cardiff is a small city.' 'And your family is well-connected.' Eva set down her glass with a soft thud. 'I called. After it happened. Your mother told me you'd left.' 'I needed space.' 'I understand.' Eva's voice softened. 'I just wish you'd called me.' 'I couldn't face anyone.' 'Not even me?' Eva's eyes held a hurt that had been buried for years. 'After everything?' The silence stretched between them, filled with all the words they hadn't said, all the messages that had gone unanswered. Silas moved to the other end of the bar, giving them privacy that was both necessary and suffocating. 'I'm sorry.' The words tasted foreign in Rory's mouth. 'You were right about London, though. About everything.' 'Being right isn't as satisfying as people think.' Eva finished her drink. 'I should go. My meeting.' 'Of course.' Eva stood, adjusting her coat. 'Maybe we could—' 'I'm here most evenings,' Rory interrupted. 'After work.' 'Good.' Eva smiled, a genuine expression that transformed her face. 'It was good to see you, Rory.' 'You too.' Eva left as abruptly as she had arrived, the bell above the door chiming her exit. Rory stared at the empty stool beside her, at the condensation ring on the bar where Eva's glass had been. 'Someone from your past?' Silas asked, returning to her end of the bar. 'My oldest friend,' Rory replied. 'Before everything changed.' 'Time does that. Changes people.' 'Some more than others.' Rory finished her whiskey in one gulp. 'I'll take that delivery job now.'
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount970
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount970
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"echoing"
2"stark"
3"flickered"
4"weight"
5"unspoken"
6"familiar"
7"comforting"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords969
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount481
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas6
Rory7
Eva6
Well1
Robert1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Robert"
places
0"London"
1"Raven"
globalScore0.772
windowScore0.667
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed more prominent today, framing a face that had seen more secrets than most would ever know"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount969
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean17.3
std13.33
cv0.77
sampleLengths
059
138
21
347
414
57
624
722
89
930
1051
1113
1233
1314
143
159
1627
177
1820
1932
202
2114
2222
2320
2415
2516
2626
2720
2815
292
3017
313
3241
332
3427
3515
365
375
3820
393
4011
414
4216
4338
4417
4517
462
478
488
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs77
matches(empty)
64.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences109
ratio0.028
matches
0"Her clothes screamed money - tailored and impractical."
1"Recognition flickered in her eyes, followed by something else - surprise, perhaps, or embarrassment."
2"The years had carved new lines around Eva's eyes, but her voice remained the same - precise, clipped, carrying the weight of private education and unspoken expectations."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount100
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.01
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean8.89
std7.06
cv0.794
sampleLengths
021
117
221
322
416
51
623
724
84
910
107
119
1215
1317
142
153
169
1730
1813
1912
2018
218
228
235
2412
2516
265
2714
281
292
308
311
3227
336
341
3515
365
3717
387
398
402
417
424
433
448
4514
4613
477
486
499
94.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5871559633027523
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners64
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences34
matches
0"Then it landed on Rory."
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences34
matches
0"Her blonde hair was cut"
1"Her clothes screamed money -"
2"Her gaze swept the room,"
3"His eyes met Rory's for"
4"Your mother told me you'd"
ratio0.147
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences34
matches
0"The green neon glow of"
1"Aurora Carter traced the crescent-shaped"
2"The ice cubes clinked as"
3"Silas Blackwood leaned against the"
4"The grey streaks in his"
5"Yu-Fei needs me back by"
6"Silas poured a measure of"
7"The bell above the door"
8"A woman stood in the"
9"Her blonde hair was cut"
10"Her clothes screamed money -"
11"The woman approached the bar,"
12"Her gaze swept the room,"
13"Recognition flickered in her eyes,"
14"Rory straightened, her fingers tightening"
15"The years had carved new"
16"Silas nodded, already reaching for"
17"His eyes met Rory's for"
18"Silas understood more than he"
19"Silas placed the drink in"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The grey streaks in his auburn hair seemed more prominent today, framing a face that had seen more secrets than most would ever know."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.5490%