Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX58796P0NMGF0W0SJB657

Run Details

Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.013655
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rainwater sluiced off the brim of Harlow Quinn’s cap, blurring the neon smear of Soho into a watercolor nightmare. Her lungs burned with the metallic tang of urban grit and exhaust. Ahead, a silhouette darted between a parked sedan and a stack of overflowing rubbish bins. The figure moved with a fluid, desperate grace that defied the slick pavement. Quinn’s boots hammered against the asphalt. She ignored the protest in her knees, the dull ache reminding her she hadn't been twenty-five for a long time. She adjusted her grip on the heavy Maglite in her right hand. “Police! Stand down!” The suspect didn't flinch. He vaulted over a low brick wall, his dark curls catching a flash of green light from the sign hanging over The Raven’s Nest. Quinn followed, her gaze locking onto the back of his jacket. Tomás Herrera. The man was a ghost in the system, a disgraced paramedic who vanished from the NHS rosters only to reappear in the blood-spattered margins of her open files. Tomás skidded around the corner of a narrow alleyway, his boots throwing up sprays of oily puddle water. Quinn rounded the bend seconds later. The alley dead-ended into a corrugated steel fence, but the suspect was gone. A heavy iron grate shifted in the shadows near the base of a soot-stained brick building. Quinn stopped, her chest heaving. She wiped moisture from her eyes and checked the worn leather strap on her left wrist. Three minutes since the chase started. Silence settled over the alley, broken only by the rhythmic drip of a leaky gutter. She moved toward the grate. The scent of ozone and rotting vegetation wafted from the black square in the pavement. She knelt, her sharp jaw tight as she peered into the dark. A ladder of rusted iron rungs descended into a throat of brick and slime. Down there, the city’s roar dampened to a low, rhythmic thrum—the heartbeat of the subterranean. Her mind flickered to Morris. Three years ago, they’d chased a shadow into a basement in Lambeth. She’d stayed by the door to call for backup. Morris went in alone. When she found him, the room was locked from the inside, and his throat had been opened by something that didn't leave fingerprints. The coroner called it a jagged blade. Quinn knew it looked more like a claw. She wouldn't stay by the door this time. Quinn swung her legs into the opening. The rungs felt greasy under her palms. She climbed down, counting the steps until her boots hit soft, damp earth. The Maglite’s beam cut through the gloom, reflecting off walls layered with centuries of soot. This wasn't a standard sewer line. The architecture shifted from Victorian brickwork to the smooth, industrial curves of an abandoned Tube station. The air here felt thick, vibrating with a frequency that made the fillings in her teeth ache. She moved forward, the light dancing over discarded rail ties and shattered ceramic insulators. A scrap of fabric caught on a jagged bolt—blue polyester, scorched at the edges. Herrera’s sleeve. Quinn transitioned to a tactical walk, her weight centered. The tunnel opened into a vast, cavernous platform where the tracks had been ripped out and replaced with a sprawling shanty town of stalls and silk-draped tents. The Veil Market. The air tasted of cinnamon, burnt hair, and something sweet like rotting peaches. Quinn lowered her beam, shielding the light. Even in the dimness, the place hummed with illicit life. Hooded figures traded glass vials filled with swirling, iridescent smoke. A woman with fingers too long to be human sorted through a pile of silver trinkets that seemed to twitch under her touch. She spotted Herrera near a stall draped in heavy furs. He stood with a tall, slender man whose back was turned to Quinn. Tomás looked frantic, gesturing toward the tunnel she’d just exited. He clutched a Saint Christopher medallion, his thumb rubbing the metal in a rapid, nervous rhythm. Quinn didn't call out. She slipped behind a stack of wooden crates that smelled of old parchment and formaldehyde. “You were followed, Tomás.” The voice belonged to the man in the furs. It was smooth, devoid of any local inflection, carrying a weight that made the hair on Quinn’s neck bristle. “She’s a dog, Silas. She won’t stop. I told you, she saw the kit in the back of the van. She knows about the marrow treatments.” Herrera’s voice shook. He pulled back his sleeve, revealing the long, jagged scar on his forearm. Under the flickering torchlight of the market, the scar seemed to glow with a faint, sickly amber light. “Detective Quinn is persistent,” Silas said. He turned slightly, the profile of a sharp nose and a high forehead catching the light. “But persistence is a terminal condition in the Market.” Quinn reached for her hip, her fingers brushing the cold grip of her sidearm. Her badge meant nothing down here. This was a realm of bone tokens and blood debts. She watched Herrera hand over a small, velvet pouch. “I need the stabilization salts,” Herrera whispered. “The girl is fading. If her blood turns, the whole borough goes dark.” Silas took the pouch and replaced it with a heavy glass jar filled with grey powder. “Go. Use the service shaft by the Northern line. It’s dry this time of month.” Herrera turned to leave, his eyes darting toward the shadows where Quinn hid. She flattened herself against the crates, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. A beetle the size of a fist crawled over her boot. She didn't move. As Herrera disappeared into a side tunnel, Quinn stepped out. She didn't go after the paramedic. She leveled her gaze at Silas. The man didn't look surprised. He stood behind his stall, his hands resting on a counter made of polished obsidian. “Detective. You’re a long way from the precinct.” Quinn kept her hand near her weapon. She scanned the market. Features shifted in the periphery—eyes that glinted too bright, shadows that moved against the wind. “Tomás Herrera is wanted for questioning in connection to three homicides,” Quinn’s voice remained steady, a product of nearly two decades of staring down the worst London had to offer. “And you’re operating an unregistered market on Crown property.” Silas laughed. The sound was dry, like dead leaves skittering over pavement. “The Crown has no claim to what lies beneath the roots. You’re looking for a killer, Detective? You won’t find him in Herrera. He’s the one trying to keep the bodies from piling up.” “Is that what you told Morris?” The name hung in the damp air like a physical weight. Silas’s expression didn't change, but his eyes narrowed. He leaned forward, the shadows cast by the market’s torches deepening the hollows of his cheeks. “DS Morris was a man who looked too closely at the sun. He found exactly what he was searching for. Just like you.” Quinn took a step forward, her military bearing tense. She ignored the way the air seemed to thicken around her, making हर match of breath a chore. “Give me a reason not to bring a tactical unit down here and burn this rat’s nest to the ground.” Silas reached into the folds of his cloak and produced a small, carved piece of ivory—a bone token. He slid it across the obsidian counter toward her. “Because you want to know why his blood was black when he died. And because Herrera is the only one who can explain why yours is starting to change, too.” Quinn looked down at her left hand. The skin around her nails looked bruised, a deep, dusky violet she’d attributed to the cold and the rain. She felt a sudden, sharp throb in her forearm, mirroring the location of the scar she’d seen on Herrera. A scream echoed from the tunnel Herrera had entered. It wasn't human. It was a high, undulating screech that tore through the ambient noise of the market, silencing the hushed bartering of the stalls. The hooded figures in the market dissolved into the shadows with practiced speed. Stalls were shuttered in heartbeats. Silas began to pull a heavy iron shutter down over his obsidian counter. “The gate is open, Detective,” Silas said, his voice dropping to a hiss. “The things Herrera treats don't always want to be cured.” Quinn looked at the bone token, then at the dark mouth of the tunnel where Herrera had vanished. The rain from the surface was a distant memory. The weight of the earth above felt like a crushing hand. She grabbed the token and lunged toward the screeching tunnel. Her boots hit the wet stone. She didn't look back as the light from the market began to fail, swallowed by the shifting architecture of the deep. Herrera’s flashlight flickered a hundred yards ahead, a dying star in the gloom. He was cornered against a collapsed section of the ceiling. In front of him, a shape detached itself from the darkness of the rafters. It moved with a disjointed, twitching gait, its limbs too long for the narrow passage. Quinn raised her Maglite. The beam hit the creature. It looked like a man stretched on a rack, the skin translucent and pulled taut over a frame of obsidian bone. It had no eyes, only a wide, lipless mouth filled with rows of needle-teeth. “Tomás! Get down!” Herrera dived into the muck as Quinn pulled her service weapon. The report of the pistol was deafening in the confined space. The muzzle flash illuminated the creature’s face for a fraction of a second—a mask of agony and hunger. The bullet struck the creature’s chest, but there was no spray of blood. Instead, a thick, black vapor hissed from the wound. The thing didn't fall. It screeched again, a sound that vibrated in Quinn’s skull until her vision blurred. She fired again. The creature lunged, covering the distance with a speed that defied physics. Quinn swung her heavy flashlight, the metal casing connecting with the thing’s skull with a sickening crunch. It felt like hitting a block of frozen meat. The creature staggered back, its head lolling at an unnatural angle. It hissed, a wet, bubbling sound, before melting back into the shadows of the ceiling. Herrera scrambled to his feet, his olive skin pale, the Saint Christopher medallion swinging wildly against his chest. He looked at Quinn, his eyes wide with a mix of terror and recognition. “You shouldn't have come down here,” he gasped, clutching the glass jar of salts to his chest. “You’ve marked yourself.” Quinn didn't lower her gun. Her hand shook, just a fraction. The bruise under her fingernails seemed darker now, a pulsing violet that matched the rhythm of her racing heart. “What was that thing?” “A consequence,” Herrera said. He looked up at the ceiling where the shadows seemed to be thickening. “And it’s not alone. This station… it wasn’t abandoned. It was sealed.” A low growl rumbled through the floorboards. Across the tracks, in the pitch-black mouth of another tunnel, more eyes began to open. Dozens of them. They glowed with a faint, predatory amber light. Quinn stepped back, her boot splashing in a pool of black ichor. She was a detective of the Metropolitan Police, a woman of facts and forensic evidence. But as the things in the dark began to chatter, their voices a discordant mimicry of human speech, she realized the rules of the surface no longer applied. “Which way?” Quinn asked, her voice tight. Herrera pointed deeper into the dark, toward a rusted maintenance door marked with a faded red cross. “If we go back to the market, they’ll trap us against the gates. We have to go through the marrow-works.” “Is that where you’re taking the medicine?” Herrera nodded. “There are children down here, Detective. They aren't all like that thing.” Quinn looked back toward the market. The way was silent, the light she had followed now extinguished. She looked at the bone token in her pocket, then at the paramedic who was her only lead to a partner’s death and a sickness she couldn't name. She holstered her weapon and gripped her flashlight. The light flickered, the battery struggling against the oppressive dampness. “Lead the way, Herrera. But if you blink wrong, I’m putting a hole in you.” Tomás didn't argue. He turned and ran toward the maintenance door, his footsteps splashing in the dark. Quinn followed, leaving the world of law and sunlight behind. The door groaned as they forced it open, revealing a spiral staircase that descended even further. The air here was colder, smelling of salt and ancient stone. As they descended, the sounds of the creatures above faded, replaced by a low, rhythmic chanting that seemed to pulse from the very walls. They reached a landing where the walls were lined with rows of glass jars, each containing a preserved organ that pulsated with a faint, inner light. Quinn stopped, her light illuminating a jar that held a human heart. It was wrapped in silver wire, the muscle twitching in a slow, agonizing beat. “This is where they harvest the stabilization,” Herrera whispered, his voice echoing in the small space. “It’s not just medicine. It’s a trade.” Quinn moved to the next jar. Inside, a severed hand gripped a small, leaden box. The skin was grey and waxy, but the fingers were perfectly preserved. “Whose are these?” Quinn asked, her voice barely a whisper. “The ones who couldn't pay,” Herrera said. He moved to a heavy wooden door at the end of the hall. He didn't use a key. Instead, he pressed his scarred forearm against a recessed plate in the wood. The door clicked open. Inside, the room was filled with low cots. Small figures lay under tattered blankets, their breathing shallow and labored. In the center of the room, a woman in a tattered nurse’s uniform moved between the beds, her hands glowing with a soft, green light. She looked up as they entered, her eyes reflecting the emerald glow of Quinn’s flashlight. “You’re late, Tomás,” the woman said. Her voice was like gravel. “The youngest has already started to turn.” Herrera rushed to one of the cots, unscrewing the jar of salts. Quinn stayed by the door, her hand resting on the hilt of her gun. She watched as Herrera began to sprinkle the powder over a small boy whose skin was turning the same bruised violet as her own. The boy’s eyes snapped open. They were entirely black, void of any white or iris. He grabbed Herrera’s wrist with a strength that made the paramedic cry out. “The dog is here,” the boy hissed, his voice a cacophony of multiple tones. “The dog from the surface.” The other children on the cots began to stir, their movements synchronized and jerky. They sat up, their black eyes fixing on Quinn. The woman in the nurse’s uniform stood, the green light in her hands flaring. She looked at Quinn not with hostility, but with a cold, clinical curiosity. “She carries the mark of the Morris-debt,” the woman said. “She is not a visitor. She is a replacement.” Quinn backed toward the door, but it slammed shut before she could reach the handle. The light in her hand flickered once, twice, and then died, plunging the room into the sickly green glow of the nurse’s hands. “I’m taking Herrera back,” Quinn said, her voice echoing in the small room. “And I’m closing this place down.” The woman laughed, a sound that was echoed by the children on the beds. “You can’t close what you’ve already entered, Harlow Quinn. The Market doesn't let go of its own.” Tomás looked back at Quinn, his face a mask of grief. “I tried to warn you. On the street, I tried to lead you away.” “You led me exactly where I needed to go,” Quinn said, her voice hardening. She reached for the bone token in her pocket. It felt warm against her skin, vibrating with the same frequency as the chanting she’d heard in the walls. She pulled it out and held it up. The green light in the nurse’s hands dimmed. The children shrank back into their blankets, their black eyes narrowing. “Where did you get that?” the nurse demanded. “A gift from Silas,” Quinn said. “He said persistence is a terminal condition. I’m here to see who dies first.” The floor beneath them shivered. A deep, resonant bell tolled somewhere in the distance—the sound of the Market moving. The ceiling groaned as the abandoned Tube station began to shift its physical location, the supernatural gears of the Veil grinding against the reality of London. Dust rained down from the rafters. Quinn braced herself against the door, her eyes locked on the children and the woman who looked like a ghost. “Give him the salts, Herrera,” Quinn commanded. “And then we’re leaving.” “There is no leaving,” the boy on the cot said, his voice now a singular, chilling whisper. “The full moon has risen. The Market is on the move.” Quinn felt a sudden lurch in her stomach, the sensation of falling without moving. The green glow in the room was replaced by a blinding, white pressure. When her vision cleared, the room was different. The cots were gone. The children were gone. She stood in a vast, empty hall made of white marble, the air smelling of ozone and fresh water. Herrera was still beside her, clutching the empty jar. He looked around, his face pale. “We aren't in Camden anymore,” he whispered. Quinn looked at her left hand. The violet bruising was gone, replaced by a thin, silver line that danced under her skin like a vein of mercury. She looked at the bone token in her hand. It had changed shape, now resembling a small, ivory key. “Where are we?” “The white market,” Herrera said, his voice trembling. “The place where they trade the souls Silas doesn't want.” A door at the far end of the hall opened. A man stepped out, wearing a suit that looked like it was woven from moonlight. He looked at Quinn and smiled. “Detective Quinn. We’ve been expecting a representative from the Metropolitan Police for some time.” Quinn raised her gun, but the weight of it felt wrong. It felt like a toy in a place that didn't understand the concept of lead and gunpowder. “I’m here for Herrera. And for the truth about DS Morris.” The man in the suit nodded. “Of course. But first, we have to discuss your entrance fee. The token Silas gave you… it wasn't a gift. It was a contract.” Quinn looked at Herrera, who was slowly backing away toward the shadows of the marble pillars. “What contract?” Quinn asked. “The one that ensures you never have to worry about the rain again,” the man said. He gestured to the walls, where black-and-white photographs began to appear in ornate silver frames. Quinn walked toward the nearest one. It was a photo of her and Morris, taken at the precinct Christmas party four years ago. Morris was laughing, his arm around her shoulder. In the photo, his eyes were black. Quinn felt the cold weight of the ivory key in her hand. The silver vein in her wrist pulsed, a rhythmic thrum that matched the heartbeat of the hall. “Herrera, what did you do?” Quinn whispered. But when she turned, the paramedic was gone. In his place stood the creature from the tunnel, its needle-teeth bared in a silent snarl. “The hunt is over, Detective,” the man in the suit said. “Welcome to the permanence.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.397
leniency0.794
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3308
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3308
totalAiIsms43
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count4
2
word"flickered"
count4
3
word"gloom"
count2
4
word"standard"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"weight"
count6
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"throb"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count2
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"oppressive"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
17
word"pulse"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count2
19
word"whisper"
count2
20
word"cacophony"
count1
21
word"synchronized"
count1
22
word"chilling"
count1
23
word"lurch"
count1
24
word"stomach"
count1
25
word"marble"
count2
26
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"rhythmic"
2"flickered"
3"gloom"
4"standard"
5"dancing"
6"shattered"
7"weight"
8"silk"
9"velvet"
10"scanned"
11"throb"
12"echoed"
13"vibrated"
14"racing"
15"oppressive"
16"footsteps"
17"pulse"
18"echoing"
19"whisper"
20"cacophony"
21"synchronized"
22"chilling"
23"lurch"
24"stomach"
25"marble"
26"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences243
matches(empty)
66.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount13
narrationSentences243
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences281
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3290
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions119
wordCount2716
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn53
Soho1
Maglite3
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera25
Morris4
Lambeth1
Victorian1
Tube2
Veil2
Market2
Saint2
Christopher2
Silas8
London2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Christmas1
Tomás5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Maglite"
3"Raven"
4"Herrera"
5"Morris"
6"Veil"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
9"Silas"
10"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Lambeth"
2"Victorian"
3"London"
globalScore0.524
windowScore0.5
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences196
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"trinkets that seemed to twitch under her touch"
1"felt like a crushing hand"
2"looked like a man stretched on a rack, th"
3"felt like hitting a block of frozen mea"
4"chanting that seemed to pulse from the very walls"
5"looked like a ghost"
6"looked like it was woven from moonlight"
7"felt like a toy in a place that didn't"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.304
wordCount3290
matches
0"not with hostility, but with a cold, clinical curiosity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences281
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs122
mean26.97
std15.39
cv0.571
sampleLengths
059
138
23
369
453
562
641
768
88
964
1031
1116
1236
133
1463
1549
1619
174
1828
1926
2034
2131
2239
2320
2416
2515
2642
2742
288
2926
3039
3112
3234
336
3435
3523
3627
3720
3827
3930
4045
4134
4231
4323
4438
4537
4652
4744
483
4940
82.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount16
totalSentences243
matches
0"was gone"
1"been opened"
2"been ripped"
3"was turned"
4"were shuttered"
5"was cornered"
6"were lined"
7"was wrapped"
8"was filled"
9"was echoed"
10"was replaced"
11"were gone"
12"were gone"
13"was gone"
14"was woven"
15"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs449
matches
0"was deafening"
1"was turning"
2"was laughing"
81.85% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences281
ratio0.021
matches
0"Down there, the city’s roar dampened to a low, rhythmic thrum—the heartbeat of the subterranean."
1"A scrap of fabric caught on a jagged bolt—blue polyester, scorched at the edges."
2"Features shifted in the periphery—eyes that glinted too bright, shadows that moved against the wind."
3"Silas reached into the folds of his cloak and produced a small, carved piece of ivory—a bone token."
4"The muzzle flash illuminated the creature’s face for a fraction of a second—a mask of agony and hunger."
5"A deep, resonant bell tolled somewhere in the distance—the sound of the Market moving."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2732
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.018301610541727673
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.005124450951683748
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences281
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences281
mean11.71
std6.06
cv0.518
sampleLengths
019
112
215
313
46
520
612
73
84
924
1011
112
1228
1318
146
1513
1616
175
1816
196
2015
215
2215
2312
2414
2515
265
2712
289
294
3023
317
328
338
347
357
3613
3715
386
3916
4017
4114
4214
432
449
4527
463
4713
487
4910
41.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.18861209964412812
totalSentences281
uniqueOpeners53
28.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences230
matches
0"Instead, a thick, black vapor"
1"Instead, he pressed his scarred"
ratio0.009
89.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount75
totalSentences230
matches
0"Her lungs burned with the"
1"She ignored the protest in"
2"She adjusted her grip on"
3"He vaulted over a low"
4"She wiped moisture from her"
5"She moved toward the grate."
6"She knelt, her sharp jaw"
7"Her mind flickered to Morris."
8"She’d stayed by the door"
9"She wouldn't stay by the"
10"She climbed down, counting the"
11"She moved forward, the light"
12"She spotted Herrera near a"
13"He stood with a tall,"
14"He clutched a Saint Christopher"
15"She slipped behind a stack"
16"It was smooth, devoid of"
17"He pulled back his sleeve,"
18"He turned slightly, the profile"
19"Her badge meant nothing down"
ratio0.326
12.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount206
totalSentences230
matches
0"Rainwater sluiced off the brim"
1"Her lungs burned with the"
2"The figure moved with a"
3"Quinn’s boots hammered against the"
4"She ignored the protest in"
5"She adjusted her grip on"
6"The suspect didn't flinch."
7"He vaulted over a low"
8"Quinn followed, her gaze locking"
9"The man was a ghost"
10"Tomás skidded around the corner"
11"Quinn rounded the bend seconds"
12"The alley dead-ended into a"
13"A heavy iron grate shifted"
14"Quinn stopped, her chest heaving."
15"She wiped moisture from her"
16"She moved toward the grate."
17"The scent of ozone and"
18"She knelt, her sharp jaw"
19"A ladder of rusted iron"
ratio0.896
21.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences230
matches
0"Even in the dimness, the"
ratio0.004
90.34% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences136
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The figure moved with a fluid, desperate grace that defied the slick pavement."
1"When she found him, the room was locked from the inside, and his throat had been opened by something that didn't leave fingerprints."
2"It was smooth, devoid of any local inflection, carrying a weight that made the hair on Quinn’s neck bristle."
3"It screeched again, a sound that vibrated in Quinn’s skull until her vision blurred."
4"The bruise under her fingernails seemed darker now, a pulsing violet that matched the rhythm of her racing heart."
5"The door groaned as they forced it open, revealing a spiral staircase that descended even further."
6"As they descended, the sounds of the creatures above faded, replaced by a low, rhythmic chanting that seemed to pulse from the very walls."
7"They reached a landing where the walls were lined with rows of glass jars, each containing a preserved organ that pulsated with a faint, inner light."
8"Quinn stopped, her light illuminating a jar that held a human heart."
9"He grabbed Herrera’s wrist with a strength that made the paramedic cry out."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Silas said, his voice dropping to a hiss"
1"Quinn asked, her voice tight"
2"Herrera whispered, his voice echoing in the small space"
3"Quinn asked, her voice barely a whisper"
4"the boy hissed, his voice a cacophony of multiple tones"
5"Quinn said, her voice echoing in the small room"
6"Quinn said, her voice hardening"
7"Herrera said, his voice trembling"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Herrera whispered (whisper)"
1"he gasped (gasp)"
2"Herrera whispered (whisper)"
3"the boy hissed (hiss)"
4"the nurse demanded (demand)"
5"he whispered (whisper)"
6"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.365
leniency0.73
rawRatio0.304
effectiveRatio0.222
76.0170%